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MortalKombatSmoke Newbie

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Try something along the lines of this:

Name:Sage
Age:18
Gender:Male
Appearance: http://t0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:Gx4QEHNPuvLDsM:http://s.bebo.com/app-image/7925422736/5411656627/PROFILE/i.quizzaz.com/img/q/u/08/03/30/foxdemon2.jpg&t=1 (Image Extension would not work)
Personality:Sage is a well round, smart young man. Though he doesn't make friends very easily as he is shy and cannot talk to girls his own age or else he shuts down, He loves to duel and believes in his deck and has a "fiery" personality when it comes to dueling
Deck Type: Fire attribute monsters(mostly).
Bio Example for this character: As a young boy, Sage was ruthlessly beaten by his Uncle, his parents had left him to move on with their own lives while Sage was a young boy, his uncle did not want Sage around. Over the years, Sage has become slightly deaf and very shy. His uncle was eventually arrested for child abuse and lived with his other Aunt from then on, who was very kind and sympathetic to him. The only thing now that really gets his blood pumping is dueling.
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The White Wolf Newbie

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[spoiler=Yes, i'm partly insane]
[spoiler=DANCING BANANA!]
[quote=strategist14]You thought i was going to post a dancing banana here, didn't you?[/quote]
[spoiler=REAL App]
Username: MMSF (Will change back to SSD once it's been 90 days :D)
Name: [color=red]Akarui[/color] (No family name O.O)
Age: 18
Gender: M
[spoiler=Appearance] Akarui is 6'3 feet tall. He has a marker under his right eye which is shaped like a lightning bolt. Strangely enough, his eyes change color according to his mood. He has short blonde hair, he always wears a dark-blue hoodie with a black shirt underneath. He always wears a pendant that looks like the Black Rose Dragon's head, but darker..... He also wears blue, ragged jeans.[/spoiler]
Personality: Akarui is usually kind, but during a duel he becomes very intense. (My old line :D) He will do anything for a friend, even if it costs him his life.
[spoiler=Bio] Akarui lived on the streets. He taught himself to duel and had to steal to survive. He was put in the facility when he was 14 and got out on his 16th birthday. After his 2 year field trip to the facility, he got a job at a card shop. That's when he got his deck, one of a kind archype. At that same time, a rich-looking dude walked into the shop and said he was looking for a successor to his company. Someone who was good at dueling. Akarui was put to the test, he easily won the duel within the first 5 rounds. The man took him in and had him trained in the world of business, but he was always a duelist at heart. He does not believe in Dark Synchros and has never used his. On his 18th birthday he was gifted a Duel Runner and abbandoned his "father". He then taught himself to Turbo Duel. During a very intense Turbo Duel, it was discovered that Akarui was the signer of the Front Claw, but no one at the stadium noticed.....[/spoiler]
Deck Type: Metal (that's right, the long lost Metal set that we all know and love)[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler]

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Sander

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[quote name='Trimage' timestamp='1287885927' post='4730403']Zandaa Roaisu, you got in,YAY!!!!!! Do you want to be a signer???[/quote]

Sure I guess. I guess I'll take Hind Claw. Oh yeah, and you should fix the username of Marcelle Ferguson application in post 6, since Saiba Aisu didn't make that application =p
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[quote name='Zandaa Roaisu' timestamp='1287913966' post='4731441']
Sure I guess. I guess I'll take Hind Claw. Oh yeah, and you should fix the username of Marcelle Ferguson application in post 6, since Saiba Aisu didn't make that application =p
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Yeah, my character's name is Adrienne Guadiacco.
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Blackstone Dresden

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Well, IDK about Trimage, but MY main gripe with your app is that it's just so short. I mean, I don't like doing histories for my characters, but I make up for that by making their personality and appearance sections longer. You copped out on your appearance, didn't give a bio, and then did the bare minimum for your personality. Plus, you made him a walking contradiction. He has a fiery personality but can't talk to girls? Sounds like it would be a decent character in a comedy/action anime, but this is, as far as I can tell, not comedic in nature. I recommend either picking a facet of his personality, either his hotheadedness or his shyness, doing away with the facet, and then elaborating on it more. Also, this is just me, but I personally like Archetype driven decks more than Attribute or Type driven decks because Archetypes are better at showing a characters personality, ESPECIALLY the FIRE ones. For your character's brazen hotheadedness, I'd recommend the straight forward burn/beatdown style that Flamvells have to offer.

If, on the other hand, you decide to go for the shy route (though, I really don't think you will) then Silent Swordsman and Silent Magician would work, though, honestly, they seem to fit my character Jack a lot better since he actually CAN'T talk, but I digress.
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Warriorboy13 Newbie

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are you guys taking about me when you said that about the Celestial Emperor plus you can pull of a Kaiba?

UserName:Warriorboy13
Name:Sage
Age:18
Gender:Male
Appearance:[attachment=29823:boy.jpeg]
Personality:An intelligent, funny person. Sage is always pumped with hot blood in the thought of a duel and is very optimistic and over-dramatic. In the midst of a duel all he can think about is the heat burning inside him and the intensity of the current duel. He loves to make friends and hates to do nothing.he is also a passionate person.
Bio:When he was 7 years old he witnessed the death of his mom. The necklace he wears is a symbol that his mom is looking out for him.His dad gave him his first duel monsters card at age 9. The card he was given was FireKnight. He keeps this card with him as a reminder that his dad and mom are there with him even though there not. He loves fire attribute monsters so its only natural that he has a deck with mostly fire monsters. The FireKnight card he was given is his favorite monster and is always getting him out of tough situations.
Deck Type:Fire attribute monsters(mostly).
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Blackstone Dresden Newbie

Blackstone Dresden

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[quote name='MortalKombatSmoke' timestamp='1287963183' post='4733694']
I'm working on the app with Warriorboy. It's his first one ever so i'm making sure it's right ;)
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[quote name='Trimage' timestamp='1287963562' post='4733726']
Cool and with your guys connections getting a Celestial Emperor shouldn't be a problem, you can always pull a Kaiba.
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[quote name='Warriorboy13' timestamp='1287969390' post='4734141']
are you guys taking about me when you said that about the Celestial Emperor plus you can pull of a Kaiba?
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I'm talking about this little exchange

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Barian Warlord Newbie

Barian Warlord

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Okay, I gave you 1 more chance and it looks like you did the right things and got accepted.
but I'll be watching you, just to make sure you don't make mistakes.

pulling a Kaiba is when you use money to get cards even if their original owner didn't want to let them go.
Also there are Celestial Seed cards that let you add a Celestial Emperor to your hand at the cost of after it goes to your and you destroy the Celestial Seed thus letting you summon the emperor.
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The White Wolf Newbie

The White Wolf

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lol XD
[quote name='Mega Man SF' timestamp='1287895877' post='4730936']
[spoiler=Yes, i'm partly insane]
[spoiler=DANCING BANANA!]

[spoiler=REAL App]
Username: MMSF (Will change back to SSD once it's been 90 days :D)
Name: [color=red]Akarui[/color] (No family name O.O)
Age: 18
Gender: M
[spoiler=Appearance] Akarui is 6'3 feet tall. He has a marker under his right eye which is shaped like a lightning bolt. Strangely enough, his eyes change color according to his mood. He has short blonde hair, he always wears a dark-blue hoodie with a black shirt underneath. He always wears a pendant that looks like the Black Rose Dragon's head, but darker..... He also wears blue, ragged jeans.[/spoiler]
Personality: Akarui is usually kind, but during a duel he becomes very intense. (My old line :D) He will do anything for a friend, even if it costs him his life.
[spoiler=Bio] Akarui lived on the streets. He taught himself to duel and had to steal to survive. He was put in the facility when he was 14 and got out on his 16th birthday. After his 2 year field trip to the facility, he got a job at a card shop. That's when he got his deck, one of a kind archype. At that same time, a rich-looking dude walked into the shop and said he was looking for a successor to his company. Someone who was good at dueling. Akarui was put to the test, he easily won the duel within the first 5 rounds. The man took him in and had him trained in the world of business, but he was always a duelist at heart. He does not believe in Dark Synchros and has never used his. On his 18th birthday he was gifted a Duel Runner and abbandoned his "father". He then taught himself to Turbo Duel. During a very intense Turbo Duel, it was discovered that Akarui was the signer of the Front Claw, but no one at the stadium noticed.....[/spoiler]
Deck Type: Metal (that's right, the long lost Metal set that we all know and love)[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler]
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