sketchpad Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Hey guys this is a little story I wrote when I was bored, but then decided to extend it into a proper story, I'm posting chapter 1 to see how it goes! [spoiler=Chapter 1: The Griffins as Griffins and Jason]Disclaimer: I don't own Family Guy, a Seth MacFarlane does. He's used to be from Fox Network now patiently waiting to return. I also got permission from my friend Chris (Not Chris Griffin!) to write my version of this story. Author's notes-This will be the first Family Guy Story in a novel form, instead of a script. So please enjoy! "But Dad I don't want to go to a camping trip!" Meg groaned inside the dining room. "I'm invited to a party and a chance to be popular." "Come on Meg it's going to be fun," Peter persuaded. "Don't you remember the fun times we had camping together last time?" Flashback, The Griffin family was inside the cabin minding their own business. Suddenly a doorbell rings... "Hey the pizza's here!" Peter exclaimed as he rushed towards the door. Peter opens the door and reveals Jason from Friday the 13th movie, he growls to Peter. "Oh, you're looking for the kids? They're across the lake." Peter pointed to the direction. Jason nods and waves goodbye to Peter as he walks away. "Wow, what a nice guy." He said to himself as he closes the door. Back today... "Well, do you remember the day after we met him?" Meg asked. Flashback, Jason chases the Griffin family with a machete with everybody screaming. "Okay, I'm sorry I called your mother a whore!" Back today... "Well, the popular kids are just going to talk trash about you again," Peter protested. Meg stared at him, then burst into tears "My god you're right!" She cried leaving the room. "Another failed attempt being a father?" Brian asked. "I had worse Brian," He replied. "Besides I know worse fathers." "Why you little!" Homer strangles Bart. "Peter I'm concerned about your weight," Lois said as she sat next to him. "Lois, you can't blame me for being fat," He said with a smile. "You have to blame the damn Jews." "Peter don't say such terrible things to the Jews," She scolded. "Remember Max Weinstein?" "Who the hell is Max Weinstein?" Peter asked with rudeness and stupidity. "The man who helped us getting our money back," Lois replied. "Just take a look at this thought bubble." Memories of Peter's mind haunts as he saw in his own though bubble, from the day he chased Max and all the way to Las Vegas where Nuns spanked him to the Bar Mitzvah. "Oh..." Peter remembered as the bubble disappears. "So?" "So you should be nice to the Jewish people," Peter just stared at Lois, got up and walked back slowly, then runs off. Lois sighed of frustration as she looked towards to Brian who's reading a newspaper and drinking his second glass of Martini. "What am I going to do?" She asked to Brian. "I don't know, I'm still haven't shooked off when you, Peter, and the kids turned to real griffins last week." Flashback, the whole Griffin family showed up as real griffins and the whole house as a cave with Lois nuzzling Stewie, Chris and Meg flying, and Peter had just entered the cave. "How's work honey?" Lois asked as she flew towards him. "Huh, well same old story," He replied as he nuzzled with Lois squawking with each other. "Guarding the treasure, killing thieves, and block the entrance." "Mom! Meg won't stop chasing me!" Chris squawked. "Well if you haven't stop crapping in my room, I wouldn't have to chase you!" She squawked back. "But the evil flying monkey is in my room!" The evil flying monkey from the Wizard Of Oz pointed evilly towards Chris, pretends to slit his throat, and flew off. "Hah! Yes I have now grown talons and claws," Stewie said to himself. "With these new mutations I could...ach! Hairball!" He starts coughing and hacking. "Peter are you trying to eat Brian again?" Lois scolded towards Peter with Brian in his mouth with him screaming for his dear life. "Spit him out..." Peter obeyed Lois and spits Brian out, his fur was torn to shreds, and had cuts and bruises. "Thank you Lois!" Brian said gasping for air. "You know he's tonight's dinner for ALL of us," She says as all the Griffin family surrounded him with smiles on their beaks. "You...Y-You bastards!" Brian said walking back slowly, and then everybody tackles Brian with him screaming. Back today... "I'll talk to you later, b****." Brian said walking off angirly. To be continued... Author's notes: This is my first Family Guy story so please be easy with me, I hope you like this. Please review after reading! [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 not bad, seems a little forced though, dunno how to describe it it's not bad but doesn't reveal much of the episodes scenario Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 I can tell it begins in the Griffin house. I'm already laughing at it for some of the stuff you wrote. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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