Βyakuya Posted October 9, 2010 Report Share Posted October 9, 2010 [img]http://www.pocketmonsters.net/images/pages/96/Isshu.png[/img] [size="5"][u][b]The Isshu Region FF![/b][/u][/size] Basically, this is a version of Pokemon Black/White based on the Pokemon, and what is learned so far. The info of which I am writing about is thanks to spoilers of Pokemon Black/White videos on Youtube. So this is pretty much a Fan-Fic summary of the whole Pokemon Black/White game. Chapters will come out pretty much soon! So enjoy! [spoiler=Volume 1: Begin the Story!] [spoiler=Chapter 1: Voyage Begins! Michael!] Michael walked home down a brisk route all the way from high school. Michael was an average 14 year old teen who went to school. He always loved pokemon. Every day, a wild flock of Mamepato [img]http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/0/00/519.png[/img] pass by, and Michael feeds them some leftover snacks he had for lunch. Ever since he was a kid, he loved pokemon a lot. He bought books, and studied all about them after school when there was nothing to do. Finally, Mike decided he was going to be a Pokemon trainer and master. At night, Michael sat with his mom, in a small, quaint house in Kanoko Town. It wasn't that big, it was just a small neighborhood with little shops, restaurants, stores, and more. It was a great place for small pokemon to live in. As the dusk settled, Michael sat down. "So, what did you want to tell me?", said Michael's mom. She was petting a small Choroneko[img]http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/f/fd/509.png[/img] in her lap. Michael's mom worked for a daycare center nearby, for kids and pokemon. "Nothing..it's just that...there is something I wanted to tell you for some time...", said Michael, nervously. He was gripping the table. "Well, what is it?", said Michael's mom. "I...wanna become a Pokemon Trainer" The room was filled with silence and thoughts. The Choroneko was the only thing that made noise, purring and growling. Finally, a response. "Do you really want to become something like that?", said Michael's mom. "Yes. I have been thinking about it for a while, and I think I may be able to take things on my own", said Michael. "Well, something like that is a big responsibility, and that you may never know what's out there" "I'm prepared, Mom" Michael's mom sighed. "So, you plan to become a Pokemon master eh?", said Michael's mom with a grin on her face. "Well, if you're that willing, I think you're already a good kid", she said. "Well yeah, but I want to have my own adventure!", said Michael eagerly. "Then............I'll stop by Profesor Araragi's place tomorrow", said Michael's mom, and she gave a wink. Michael sighed in relief, but on the inside, was cheer. "Thank you, mom", he said, and went straight to bed. Mom sipped a glass of tea, while the Choroneko went to sleep peacefully. "Heh...my son.......I just wonder what crazy things he will do....." [/spoiler] [spoiler=Chapter 2: Prepare for Adventure!] Michael woke up in the brisk morning. Light crawled from his window into the room, gleaming, as it was a new day. Michael got up, and brushed his teeth. He then got into his clothes, and went downstairs. His mom was at the table, with the little Choroneko [img]http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/f/fd/509.png[/img] still napping. "So, tomorrow, I guess your journey begins!", said Mom in sort of a cheerful mood. "Yes, and I am very excited", said Michael, eating some cereal. "I was preparing for your trip, so I brought you this!", said Mom. She handed over to Michael a journal with a pencil. It was embroidered with small blue cloth, with plain white pages, and it came with a black tip pen. "If you're at least gonna go out, please, write down a memo or make a letter and mail it off to me", said Mom. Michael stared at it for a moment, and finally said, "I will of course", in a proud manner. His mom hugged him. "Oh just know I'll miss you so much", said Mom. As she let go, she went back to cooking. Michael put his journal in his bag, and went for the door. "I'm gonna meet Cheren now", said Michael". His mom nodded, as a sign of admittance. He went out of the door, as he saw a pack of Minezumi [img]http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/0/0b/504.png[/img] pass by, being aware of their surroundings. Michael walked next door, to a big house. He knocked on the door, waiting for a response. Finally, a teenager with red glasses, short black hair, a blue jacket, and jack jeans came out. [img]http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/4/4d/BW_Cheren_Sprite.png[/img] "Hey there Michael", said the person. "Hi there Cheren!", said Michael. Cheren welcomed in Michael in his house, and sat down. "So, it looks like you're gonna start your pokemon journey?", said Cheren. "Yup, gonna get my starter tomorrow, and it will all begin", said Michael. Cheren looked out of the window with the children playing with the Mamepato. [img]http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/0/00/519.png[/img] "You know, I've always wanted to become a pokemon trainer, as well as being a master as it as well", said Cheren". "Yes, I know. Are you still reading those Pokemon books?", said Michael. "Uh-huh...And, I am going to be a trainer" Michael was joyful. "Great! So you can go with me!", he said. "It won't be easy. I think it's best to go by myself", said Cheren. "Well, why not?", said Michael. "Well, I always wanted to become strong, but not only that, but to make myself stronger. And, just to prove it, we'll always meet, and we can always have them ol' battles", said Cheren in a serious manner. "Well, are you sure about doing this?" "Sure, I promise I can take care of myself. If I want to be what I want, it's best to do it by yourself" Michael was silent for a moment, and finally, he looked towards Cheren. "Okay then, but remember to stop by for a battle", said Michael, holding out his hand. "Heh, but you'll regret it", said Cheren as they shook hands. A sudden knock came on the door all of a sudden. "It's me! Belle!" "I'll get it, said Michael, opening the door" As the door opened, a teenage girl with a little green hat, with a white dress and an orange vest, and blond hair came through the door. [img]http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/e/e9/BW_Bel_Sprite.png[/img] "Hi Guys! I just was wondering wha-", said Belle as she tripped over a pile of books. Belle was in a state of dizziness for a short period of time, while Michael picked her up. "Oh, sorry Belle. I was meaning to clean up today. I'll get them", said Cheren, picking up the tripped pile of books. Belle finally got up. "Thanks guys! I was just wondering what you were doing cause I was bored!", said Belle. "Oh, we're gonna become Pokemon trainers soon", said Michael. Belle stood there in envy, and becoming jealous of the two being able to become trainers. "You guys too? My dad won't let me be a trainer! And you guys are so lucky!", said Belle, while rolling on the floor in a tantrum. "Wow, it looks like your dad really doesn't let you do anything", said Cheren. Belle finally got up. "Well, it was my dream to, but I guess I have to stay home...." Michael felt bad for Belle for a moment. Finally, he had an idea. "Why won't you talk to your dad again? And maybe with the professor?", said Michael. "Well, I never tried that. I heard Miss Araragi was on a trip", said Belle. "Well just do it now, and we'll see. I can't go alone", said Michael. Belle bowed down towards Michael. "Thank you very much for the advice!", she said as she bended over. "Well it's not like I'll be missing form the action!" Belle went out the door and left. "Well, it looks like everything shall start off tomorrow!", said Cheren. Michael then nodded. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Chapter 3: Beginning of a New Dawn] Today was the day. Summer vacation started, and the day of the journey began. Michael woke up with a burst out of his bed, and put his clothes on, but misplacing where they would be normally worn. He ran down the stairs, without brushing his teeth, and tripped down 13 steps. "Michael, what's the big rush?", said Mom as she was in her robes. "Look at you! you haven't brushed your teeth, you're wearing your clothes wrong, and you feel down the stairs!" Mom helped up Michael up from being hurt. "I guess I was in too much of a rush...", said Michael. "Well, if you're gonna start today, might as well clean yourself up. Now take a shower", said Mom. "Okay..." As Michael ascended the stairs, a knock came on the door. As Mom headed towards the door and opened it, a young lady with red earrings, a lab coat, green skirt, light brown hair came through the doorway, with a big green present. A Chillarmy [img]http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/7/7a/572.png[/img] was next to her, looking up to the lady as if it were her pokemon. "Hello There! You must be Michael's mom. I am Professor Araragi of Isshu", said Professor Araragi. "What a surprise! You can come in!", siad Mom, as she began to feel a little nervous, but cheerful on the outside. "Oh no need, I won't stay for long. Since you've all registered as trainers, please give this to Michael and his friends", said Araragi as she handed over the big present. "If you have any questions, please, visit my lab!", she said as she went off with the Chillarmy. Mom stared at the box for a moment, feeling a tense mood in letting Michael go out on a journey. Finally, she went upstairs, and placed it in Michael's room alongside his things. When Michael finally came out of the shower, eaten breakfast, and gotten his clothes back on, he went to his room, as a request from Mom. When he went to the room, he saw the present on his desktop. "What could this be?", said Michael. After his sense of curiousness, Belle and Cheren and came up the stairs to his room. "Hi there Mikey! It looks like we're gonna go start the journey today!", said Belle in a cheerful mood. "Yup. We've been told to choose our starters from here since we're all friends.", said Cheren. "Well, since we're all here, I guess it's time to pick our starters!", said Michael. Michael looked at a note attached to the ribbon of the present. It said: [i]Dear Trainer/s, Congratulations on registering and becoming a Pokemon trainer! Before you go all out, you must pick your starter pokemon, which all trainers must pick as there own pokemon for their journey to accompany them, as many new adventures await you. Inside this package is 3 rare starter pokemon picked out for you! They are a Tsutaja [img]http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/c/c6/495.png[/img], a Pokabu [img]http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/6/69/498.png[/img], and a Mijumaru [img]http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/5/55/501.png[/img]. Please, pick wisely! Wehn you are done, please report to me, and I will give you all you need and prepare you! I hope you have lots of adventures while on your way to becoming a master Pokemon trainer! -Professor Araragi [/i] "Well, it looks like it's time to pick our pokemon!", said Michael excitedly as he unwrapped the present, and in the present were 3 pokeballs kept tightly and safely. "Well, since I'm not sure what to pick, I'm gonna let you pick first Michael", said Cheren. "Yeah, you can go first", said Belle. Michael pondered for moments, until finally, he came up with the pokemon he wanted. "I'll have this Tsutaja!", said Michael, excitedly, as he grabbed Tsutaja's pokeball and raised it up as if it were very special. "Cool Choice!", said Belle. Belle looked at the remaining pokemon, and finally made a decision. "Okay! I got it!", she said. She picked up a pokeball and threw it and Michael's TV by accident. The glass had shattered all over. "MY TV!", said Michael. "No wonder you throw like a girl", said Cheren, chuckling. The pokeball finally opened, to be a Mijumaru. It squealed in joy. "He's so cute! I want him!", said Belle as she hugged it tightly. The Mijumaru choked a little, but squealed in admiration. "Well, it looks like this Pokabu is mine", said Cheren. He picked up the Pokeball, and out came the Pokabu. It snorted, and looked around Michael's room. "Well, looks like we're gonna be partners!", said Cheren, petting the Pokabu. After being frustrated, Michael calmed down. "*sigh*...at least it's kinda old and I don't watch much channels with it..But forget that, I have this Tsutaja!" Michael threw out the pokeball and out came the Tsutaja. "Hi there! I'm Michael!", he said as he shown his hand. The Tsutaja turned away, as if it didn't listen. "Hey! Aren't you gonna greet me?", said Michael, as he tried to get Tsutaja's attention. The Tsutaja used Grass Mixer at Michael, leaving him cut up and full of leaves. "Awww...what was that for???", he said. "The Tsujara smiled, and went a little close to Michael. "It's gonna be a long adventure", said Cheren" "You bet", said Belle, petting her Mijumaru. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [color="#FF0000"][b]Looking for more helpful information and references to this FF?[/b][/color] [url="http://serebii.net/blackwhite/"]http://serebii.net/blackwhite/[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gleek Posted October 9, 2010 Report Share Posted October 9, 2010 [font="Comic Sans MS"]Im okay with this, as long as you steal nothing from mine >.> sorry your comment didn't make much sense with that part. Anyway I wish you good luck with your Fan fiction[/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted October 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2010 Of course not. I only got the idea. I got it all planned out form myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted October 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 Updated Chapter 2 of my Isshu storyline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted October 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2010 Bump. Chapter 3 is up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted October 16, 2010 Report Share Posted October 16, 2010 It's generic, lacks good grammar use and the main character seems to be a total Mary Sue. There is nothing original about this, really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted October 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2010 [quote name='Älfred-Kün' timestamp='1287261364' post='4710132'] It's generic, lacks good grammar use and the main character seems to be a total Mary Sue. There is nothing original about this, really. [/quote] Thanks, but I suck at typing, the main character seems..wel yeah, and it's supposed to be based on the game, while some parts are filled in as my own. But thank you for the update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 Byakuya? IN TEH FANFIC SECTION?! >GASP< Lol, sorry. I have to agree with Alfred-kun. Very bland, very unexcitable. There are some noticable spelling errors. Plus, redundancy at the part where Michael fails at getting ready: Narrator: Michael fell down the stairs. Mom: You fell down the stairs! Michael: Oops, I fell down the stairs. Yea.... not to mention Tsujara has some bipolar problems. -.- If youre gunna continue this, your seriously gunna have to spice it up a [s]little lot huge amount couple hundred decibles few peppers[/s] little. [Does not recieve Atman's Seal of Approval] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted October 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 I do somewhat agree. But I suck at typing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 You should get someone to proofread your work. >smiles broadly and point to self< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted October 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 *shoves out Atman* This is one of my horrible attempts at FFs, so let me try some, and I;ll improve later. Until then, I want more comments and advice, including criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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