iCherry Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 And we all know this'll fail miserably. Regardless, I'm going to try to stick to this fanfic because I'm really liking how most of it is coming out. Credit to Clair for helping me edit. I'm trying to do most of this on my own, so if it looks worse than my other fics, you know why. xD I dunno if I'll be accepting characters. If I do, I'll put an app up here. Also, don't be harsh with criticism please, I'm kinda sensitive to it. >< Anyway, enjoy: [spoiler=Awful Prologue][i]Duel Monsters A simple game at first glance. Innocent people playing card games. Eventually evolving to using these cards to battle one another as holograms with advanced technology known as a Duel Disk. And later, evolving into the world of speed with card games on motorbikes as Riding Duels. Using D-Wheels for this type of duel. Monsters... Spells... Traps... At first glance. It is a simple game. However, a simple second glance can prove you completely wrong. This is more than just a simple game. Innocent bystanders have no idea, but these Duel Monsters are used for much more than entertainment. In the past, these monsters have been used in Ancient Egypt to destroy one another and to show proof of higher authority. In this time, legendary monsters - no - Gods appeared. At the second glance, the past is what completely destroyed the peace of this game. This is what one would believe. But what of the future? The future also holds reasons to why this happened. Why this game took a turn for the worse. And, at the same time, see how the future of this game also affected the lives of people wanting to obtain glory like no other. Step into this machine with me, and allow me to share a tale with you. A tale, of innocent duelists who desired glory.[/i] [center]Yu-Gi-Oh! Future Legends[/center][/spoiler] [spoiler=Chapter 1 - This was originally a test, which is why it's short and doesn't explain much][center]Chapter 1: The Beginning[/center] "Even if..." [i]Riding at this speed, all you can hear is your heart beat...[/i] "Even if..." [i]... the roar of your ever-accelerating D-Wheel...[/i] "Even if I die..." [i]But... this is what you wanted...[/i] "Even if I die... I want to shine..." [i]This is exactly how you wanted to go... isn't it?[/i] "Even if I die, I want to shine. At full speed!" [i]So, how bright are you shining? ...Violet?[/i] "So, let's go now! Clear Mind!" - [i]One year from now, this girl will shine at her brightest while chasing her dream: following the footsteps of that woman... ... Follow me. We shall go back in time to see how radiantly that single girl lit up the life of Neo Domino, before her absolute shining moment... ... Shall we?[/i] - Saturday, December 31, 20XX 11:58 PM Inside of a lone house in the city... every room was dark. The lights were all switched off, yet one room was illuminated by a blue light. In this dim, glowing room, one could see the total mess within it. There were discarded boxes of pizza, wrappers, and even a bra laying upon the floor. At first glance, one could only think that the resident of this house was a lazy, dirty bum who couldn't take care of him or herself. "Ugh..." a female voice moaned in pain. Located in the corner of the untidy quarters, a computer emitted a soft glow. This obscure light gave one the ability to somewhat clearly see the contents of the chamber. In the front side of the abode, was a large television. Facing the receiver was a large desk with paper and leftover food scattered all over it. To the left was a simple bed with a blue blanket laying upon it, completely wrinkled up with a smashed pillow sitting on the sheet. There were three empty boxes of pizza left on the covers as well. "Ow..." complained the voice from before. "I told them not to go overboard with all the party crap..." a girl mumbled on, laying next to the mattress with three empty bottles of beer near her. She grabbed onto a part of the bed trying to get up, struggling while doing so. The woman rubbed her head, trying to nurse a headache that felt like seven jackhammers ramming into her skull. "Oh, what the hell..." "Those bastards didn't even clean up after themselves! They probably went home to their warm and loving families... those dirtbags would stick me with clean-up duty, wouldn't they? Argh..." the girl whined. One would deduce that she had a New Year's Eve party and went overboard. Furthermore, everyone had left the dirty work to the host once they were all worn out. "They even left these Skittles on my desk..." she went on, looking towards her desk, which had colored candy scattered upon it. She nonchalantly grabbed a red piece of candy from the table and threw it into her mouth. The woman searched around her bed and found a black remote. She picked it up and pushed a red button on the top of the device, aiming at the large TV. The lady plopped down into a black, computer armchair as she picked up a full beer bottle on the small desk beside the seat with her right hand. The female turned around in the chair to face the TV. In the light of the computer and the television, one could see her appearance more clearly. She wore a red black-striped vest on a black shirt, with black pants. The damsel's long purple hair was pressed down on the chair by her head and the girl's bangs in front of her face were messily out of place. She looked so bad, her large bosom was really the only noteworthy attraction about her at the moment. "In just a minute and thirty seconds, the ball will drop and we can say goodbye to this year!" a man announced on the TV. He stood in front of a camera that was with him in a bright city, lit up by several hundred lights behind him. Behind this man was an excited crowd of people, awaiting the end of the year. "...Dropping that huge ball? Who does that anymore...?" the lady questioned uncaringly as she finally popped the top off of the bottle that she held with her thumb. "Here'z to a crappy new yearz..." the girl lazily and drunkenly spoke. Before the damsel took a drink, however, she began coughing. "Oh god... I need to stop drinkin' so much of this... this... crap..." The damsel ran her hand through the long hair she had, while massaging her head. The woman put the beer down when she did this. She felt the pain hammering into her skull get worse. "Only thirty more seconds!" "No one cares," she replied bluntly to the man's announcement. Then, the girl's eyes widened. Her complexion turning a sickly shade of green, the girl quickly slapped a hand to her mouth. She was going to be sick. However, her face quickly returned to its normal color and the girl held her stomach in pain. A few seconds after nearly puking, she launched a red skittle out of her mouth. After moaning in agony for a moment, she lifted up one of her arms and reached for her beer bottle again. "I need another drink..." Holding the bottle up with her right hand again, she turned to the TV and saw "10" on a large sign in the part of the city shown on the broadcast. "Bleh." "Ten!" The man began the countdown as the crowd on the channel counted with him. "Nine!" "Eight!" "Seven!" "Six!" "Five!" "Four!" "Three!" "Two!" "One." The girl joined in at the last second, taking a drink of her alcoholic beverage. [i]Zero.[/i] "Eh?" The girl turned to her window, thinking that she had heard a voice speak "Zero" directly to her. She immediately heard an explosion of fireworks take place, and she dropped her liquor. The girl fell out of her chair, surprised by the explosive noise as she shielded her ears. "Christ!" she cried out in anger, getting up and picking up an empty beer bottle. "Stop with the damn fireworks!" she shouted, throwing the bottle of out of the open window, hoping to hit the idiot who started with the bursts of sparklers into the sky. However, the woman didn't hear anybody cry out in pain or even an "Ouch!", so the lady assumed that she didn't hit anything. "Damn idiots," the angered female cursed as she resumed nursing her headache that was throbbing in even more pain than before. "Ow, ow, ow..." the damsel began to cry as the pain in her head was strengthened by the fireworks. She was mentally begging for everyone to just go back inside and be quiet. "Oh, if only my headache would go away..." the lady sobbed. The woman just let her body fall onto the floor like it originally was moments before she awakened. She wished that she could just pass out already. The beleaguered girl crawled over to her spilled liquor and grabbed the bottle. There was still a good amount left and she began drinking more of it. [i]Tomorrow, I'm going to kick someone's ass... even if it's with children's trading card games...[/i] The girl stopped drinking for several seconds. Then, she dropped the bottle and lost consciousness. Suddenly, a computerized voice spoke. "Download Completed." - [i]Um... professor? Yes, my boy? What the heck does some drunk girl have to do with anything? Now now, just be patient. All shall be revealed in due time. I want to you pay attention to that object on the computer desk. The... deck right there?[/i][/spoiler] [spoiler=Chapter 2 - since Chapter 1 is short, I decided to post this one with it.][center]Chapter 2: Menace[/center] Sunday, January 1, 20XX 8:13 AM Morning had come and shined down upon a rough-looking town with many grey houses and nicely mowed lawns. Birds flew down onto trees with fellow feathered creatures as they began chirping harmoniously. In a house, the sun was brightly shining into a room. This was the same chamber from before, with all of the trash and such still laying around. The purple haired damsel's eyes opened as the blazing light from the sky caused her eyes to open. The woman shielded her oculus from the glow outside. "Argh... damn it..." The girl slowly got back up on her feet. Her back felt stale, so she used her hand to brace it as she began to stretch, hearing bones crack several times. "How long have I been out...?" the woman asked, rubbing her head, which was still throbbing in pain from yesterday. The damsel turned to her window and looked out, seeing the bright light from the ball of fire in the sky again. [i]My name is Violet Vega. I'm your average lazy alcoholic at first glance. I have these bastards in this town to blame for that habit. I mean, they made me try this stuff. ...That isn't the point, though. I live in an unnamed neighborhood. The town exists in a "section" of Neo Domino City. This is the "Menace" section, for all of your gangsters, idiots, drop-outs, and whatever other type of bad person's lounging. I live here because I didn't have enough money to live in one of those stupid fancier sections, like those fancy Tops houses. So, due to the fact that I'm a lazy bum, I belong here. Mind you, this is no place you want to live, if you're all alone.[/i] After awhile, Violet approached a grey door with a beer bottle in hand. She knocked on the door three times and awaited for someone to open it. "Who is it~?" a male voice sang from the inside. "James, open the damn door," Violet responded as she heard the male laugh inside. "If I don't?" "You'll wind up bleeding in a couple of seconds." "Fu- alright!" The voice quickly gave in at Violet's threat. The grey door opened as the rusty, yellow doorknob turned. A man with messy black hair that extended down past his neck appeared before her. He wore a sleeveless black shirt that had skull and cross-bones on the center of it. The male also wore white socks and blue pants that were sagging. "Morning, Violet. Still violent as yesterday, eh?" "Shut up. I wouldn't be so violent if you jackasses hadn't left me with the cleaning job for last night." Violet responded, walking into the house with beige colored carpet. She saw a white couch sitting against the green wall inside. The damsel made her way inside to the couch with the beer bottle. "Oh, you brought your own?" James asked the girl as she sat down while referring to the alcohol. "No, this is my cousin Earl's." Violet sarcastically replied, taking a drink from the bottle. "Never met Earl before..." James mumbled, scratching his head. "Where's Kyle and Ray?" Violet asked, sitting the liquor down on a table next to her. "Kyle should be out in a minute. Ray said that he'd be here early, but it looks like he lied. Again." James answered as he walked into a hallway, out of the room. He came back out a few moments later with a bottle of liquor that was the same brand as Violet's. "I'm gonna call that idiot. Tell him to pick up Aqua on the way," the damsel replied to the fellow, taking out a red cell phone from her pocket. She quickly dialed a number and put the device to her ear. James took a drink as the phone rang. "You do that, I'm gonna see what's taking Kyle so long." James walked back into the hallway after he told her this, not leaving his beer behind. "Yello. You got Ray," a voice spoke on Violet's cell phone. "Where the hell are you?" "Gettin' dressed." "What do you mean 'gettin' dressed'? James said you'd be here early. I came here expecting to see Aqua." "Look. My alarm clock didn't go off, alright? I forgot to set it because I passed out on the floor in here after I left the party." "Who's fault is that?" "Look, give me about an hour. Maybe half an hour. I'll be there soon, so quit yer bitchin'." "Just get Aqua and come over here. And please look like you have some damn sense on the way." "All right [i]Mom[/i]. Christ." Violet's phone gave off a quick 'beep' as the voice on the other end hung up. The girl put the phone onto the table by her and then took another drink out of the beer bottle. [i]I've been dealing with this moron like this since last year...[/i] "Damn it James, I'll be out in a minute!" Another male voice yelled. It was loud enough for Violet to hear, so she curiously got up from the couch and looked into the hallway. "Hurry it up then! And sorry for that!" James replied as he walked out of a room in the hallway. His attention turned to a confused Violet. "The hell did you do?" "Don't worry about it." James walked past the curious woman, sitting down in a white chair that was a distance away from the couch. Violet sat back down and turned to James. "Where's the remote?" "Over here!" James pressed a button on a black remote as a large television was turned on. "What do you wanna watch?" "Anything good. Pick something before Kyle comes in here and changes it to another boring mechanic show." "Hey, those are educational. Aqua likes those." "No, she doesn't. She asks why you two like those things." "...I knew that." James quickly denied being wrong about Aqua's opinion. He leaned back in the chair and started pushing a button repeatedly on the remote, flipping through channels. "Well, we're mechanics. We're just happy to like anything that can feed us more info about tools and crap." "It's boring. We can watch a game or something." "Like what? 'Family Feud'?" "Hell, no. Not one of those game shows." "Then we can watch another mechanic showcase if you can't find anything." The voice from earlier spoke as a man with yellow, spiky hair walked in from out of the hallway. He wore a red shirt with a wrench in the center. The newcomer also sported white socks and dark blue pants. "About damn time, Kyle," Violet greeted, before taking another drink of her liquor. "Sorry. I was busy." "Doing?" "You don't wanna know," James answered her before Kyle said anything. The yellow haired man sat down next to Violet. The other male kept changing channels. He was doing it so quickly, the other two couldn't even catch a glimpse of what was on. "Hey, dumbass, let us see what's on," Violet ordered and insulted as James started flipping through the channels a bit more slowly. "Sorry, princess. It's just that I've gone through most of these about five minutes ago." "We could always-" Kyle was immediately cut off. "Shut up. We're not watching another mechanic showcase," Violet silenced Kyle before he suggested exactly what she thought he would. "But-" "No buts. Do what the woman says. She's not in a good mood today." James said to Kyle, warning him about the cranky Violet. "It's your faults. You idiots are helping me clean up later," came a snarling reply. "Aw. Why?" James moaned, dragging his hand down from his face. "Because you morons helped make the mess. I'm not your mother, so I'm not cleaning up after you. Especially if it's my own damn house!" "Alright! Just don't hit me!" James cried out for mercy when Violet raised the volume of her voice. "Baby," Violet spat. Kyle groaned. Honestly, why couldn't those two just play nice? Rather, why couldn't Violet go a day without threatening to hit someone or insult them? Before Kyle started thinking more deeply about it, they all heard someone knocking on the door. "Who is it?" James yelled out. "Yo momma," A voice replied outside. "Go away mom! I left the house ages ago! If you want someone back, take Kyle." James responded, laughing. "Open the thing!" shouted the voice. Kyle stood up and walked to the door. Violet took a drink of her alcohol and then put it down on the table when Kyle opened it. A taller man was at the door with a white t-shirt and sagging black pants on. He also wore black shoes. His hair was similar to Kyle's. Spiky, but his hair was black with less, yet sharper, points. Next to him stood a little girl. The young child had somewhat messy blue hair with a red shirt and blue shorts. She had white tennis shoes. "Aqua. Come here. Get away from idiot boy." Violet called towards the girl as the child did as told and walked inside, away from the other man. "Wait, what? You ask me to bring her here and then you insult me while luring her away? You sick bi[b][/b]tch. Why must you hate me?" the man wanted an answer. He was basically used to fetching Aqua because Violet was too lazy to do it himself. So, while using vulgar language in front of the little girl, he insulted Violet while asking his question. "Because you're a dumbass who deserves nothing but hardships and feet up his ass." "Haha," James chuckled at Violet's response. Kyle sighed, as did the man behind him. "Why, god? Why did you send her?" the stocky male asked. "Because he agrees." Violet ended the argument with a smirk. "Ray got burned again! It's funny when you do it!" the young girl happily said, laughing at the insulted man. "I just got used and insulted by a woman and then a little girl starts laughing at my failure..." "Dude. You suck," James told him, taking a drink. Ray walked over to the couch and took a seat. Kyle closed the door, locked it, and did the same. "Good morning, Aqua." Violet turned to Aqua and smiled after assaulting Ray vocally. "Good morning." Aqua replied as Violet picked her up and sat the girl in her lap. "Sorry we had to leave early yesterday. I wanted to help clean up..." "Aw, it's okay. You don't have to clean up anything." "What?" James asked with a surprised expression. "What?" Violet questioned James' reaction. "Oh, so we're in trouble because we left, but she gets off the hook? That's bull." "Unlike you jackasses, Aqua appreciates me and what I do around this place." Violet hugged the little girl in her lap. Aqua returned the hug with a warm smile on her face. "I appreciate you." Kyle spoke. "Quit kissing up to her!" Ray yelled at Kyle, who was just trying to avoid any further conflict. "Violet is a nice person. You don't have to kiss up to her." Aqua defended Violet. James scoffed in disbelief. "Aww... see?" "See what? How did you brainwash her?" Ray asked Violet. The purple-haired girl frowned at Ray's words. "I am not brainwashed! Violet is a good person!" Aqua further defended her elderly sister figure as Ray looked over at her. "Quiet damn it! We're going to have to separate you from that witch!" "You take Aqua from me and you'll be stabbed faster than you can say 'Sorry'." Violet darkly threatened as Ray had a look of fear printed on his face. "Er, sorry. Never mind. Aqua, stay with Violet." Ray gave in before it got ugly. James didn't bother to help him, even though he was on his side. Kyle just wanted them all to act like the friends they were. Instead of them all acting like enemies and Violet the main antagonist that Ray and James must defeat, they should all be on the same side. [i]... Yeah. These are my idiot friends. Well, all of the guys are idiots. The first one is James. He's one of your everyday neighborhood sleazebags. Also, he's one of the first friends I made when I moved in here. James Covington is Kyle's older cousin by three years. They're both mechanics who hated the fancy life. They decided to move somewhere that had people who needed help. Too bad those morons picked the wrong place. James is more laid back than Kyle, hell, he's cooler too. Kyle Nex is the next one. Instead of turning out laid-back and cool like his cousin, Kyle decided to study so he could be a mechanic when he grew up. He got his wish too. He's even smarter than James with this stuff and usually goes on about it for too long. Kyle behaves better than us, I'll give him that. He tries to break up our fights, but always falls. Ray Typhool is number three and the first friend I received when I moved in. He has got to be the dumbest man I have ever met. His stupidity and ignorance knows no limits. His happy and cocky attitude is going to eventually get him killed out here. Sadly, I fell for this act when I got here and he became my friend. Ray always told me that: "If you want to survive, having friends is the best way to go.". Aqua Seraphim is the last one. She's a little innocent girl who has lived here in Menace for a couple of years. Unfortunately, she also grew up with all of the crap that goes around here. Thankfully, all the alcohol and violence never really bothered her. I'm still trying to help out her parents take care of Aqua so she doesn't wind up like us. I took Ray's words to heart because he was right. These guys are the only reason I'm still here.[/i] "Why, oh why, is there never anything on Sunday? It's New Year's Day! Where's the movies?" Ray complained as James kept flipping through channels. "It's still a Sunday. There's nothing on, regardless if it's a holiday or not." James replied to Ray. This is one time where he didn't want to be right though. "We can wa-" "I refuse to watch a kid's show. That crap on Disney in the morning is bad for you." James interrupted Aqua, before could finish. Violet gave James the evil eye as he just looked at her. "What?" "Change to the damn Disney Channel. Unless you got somethin' better." "Actually, I do." James stood up and sat the remote down. "We can get active, like that one commercial keeps telling us." "You mean... get exercise?" Ray asked for confirmation, and then looked over at Violet. "You know what? Let's do that. Violet looks like she needs it." "Ohshi-" James moved away from Ray. Ray immediately ducked as a beer bottle hit the wall and the destroyed glass fell behind the couch. "You callin' me fat, jackass?!" "No! No! Um, not fat, but rather... big-boned." "Dude, shut up!" James tried to stop Ray, as he was only making this much worse. But it was too late! He was in too deep! "You son of a-" "Hey! Aqua! Let's go outside and get some exercise!" Ray tried to get Aqua's attention and make an excuse to run out where more witnesses were. "Okay!" Aqua said as she got up and ran over towards Ray, who quickly made his way out the door with the little girl. Kyle could only facepalm. "Phew! He barely got out alive this time." a relieved James sighed, plopping down onto the couch. "Big-boned... that ass..." Violet was angrily mumbling to herself. "Sure, I ate alot of that pizza yesterday, but big-boned? I oughta-" "Hey, Vi, could you go get the broom so I can sweep this up back here?" Kyle asked Violet, trying to get her mind off of Ray. "Huh? Oh, sure." Violet got up and walked in the hallway. Outside, Ray and Aqua were playing catch with a blue ball Ray had brought with him in his pocket. That ball was probably a precaution, just in case he pissed off Violet. The coward could run outside and play catch so he would live. Violet wouldn't kill him because there are too many witnesses. After some time, Aqua caught the ball, and then heard something in the distance. The sound was loud and it sounded like it was getting louder. A man on a sidewalk across from the house looked up in the direction Aqua heard it from. "Aw sh[b][/b]it. Anti-Security!" the man yelled, quickly taking off and running into his house. Kyle and James heard the man from inside of the house and immediately turned to the windows. Violet ran back inside of the living room with them and looked out. "Oh great. Anti-Security." James groaned. "Get down..." "But what about-" "Get down, woman!" James grabbed Violet and pulled her down, below the window. Kyle got down with down. "The hell is Ray doing?" "Oh no..." Violet moaned, knowing why Ray hasn't run inside yet. "Oi! Where the hell y'all goin'?!" a voice shouted. Several black D-Wheels rode into the streets between the houses. Aqua ran next to Ray, who was fearless standing before the hostile D-Wheelers. [i]... To add on to the awful things about this place. We have our own special police force because Sector Security is too scared to do it themselves. Team Anti-Security is the name they go by. They're nothing but a bunch of control freaks and thugs who do anything to get what they want.[/i] "Alright, we've come for payment! So you pansies need to get out here and pay up out in front!" a man yelled. All of the members of Team Anti-Security wore completely black clothes: shirts, pants, and jackets. You can't think of these people unless you think of the color black first. "And if we don't?" Ray asked the man. They all turned their attention to the foolish idiot. Aqua began slowly walking backwards towards the door. "What'd you say, chump?" one of them said, getting up. He walked over to Ray and got up in his face. "What? You deaf? Maybe you should change your name to Team Anti-Hearing. Because it fits you better." Ray jeered, just asking to get hit. "Oh god no!" Kyle yelled. Violet was looking at Aqua, focused on what could happen to her. The man turned his attention to the little girl. He pushed Ray down to the ground and out of his way. "Watch your ass, son..." the violent thug warned him. "Hey! You! Your parents still haven't paid us from last time!" "S-sorry... but we don't..." Aqua started to titter nervously, the tears coming to her eyes. "Wonder how they'd feel if I took you for payment..." he threatened as Aqua took a step back in fear. "Pick on someone your own size, you ass!" Ray shouted. "Shut it! Or..." the thug pulled a pistol out of his pocket and spun it around with his finger. "Or I'll just bust a cap in yer ass." "You don't have the guts." Ray challenged as the gunman smirked. "Don't have the guts? I got enough to... let's say... take our payment." he replied, pointing the gun towards Aqua, ready to pull the trigger. "W-Wait a damn minute you coward! This is between you and me! Don't go for a little girl!" Ray pleaded for the man to turn his attention back to him, but it was hopeless. The man only laughed at Ray. "Coward? Pffft. I'm just here for the money. Now..." the door flew open as Violet ran out to Aqua. The man fired at the child as the woman covered her. A strange force made the bullet change course and fly away from Violet and Aqua. Ray looked at both of them, wondering if they were all right, since he didn't see the bullet go by. "Are you okay, Aqua?" Violet asked the terrified Aqua, who couldn't answer because she was still frightened just by the sound of the gunshot. "Go inside." Aqua quickly ran inside of the house as told. Kyle and James stood in the doorway after she was safely inside. "Why the hell are you getting in the way again?" screamed the thug. [i]I had a couple of run-ins with these guys. Usually getting in the way of their "Payments". They would always come and take money from people because they "Protected" them and the town. I'm usually getting in the way because I'm protecting those who don't need these idiots doing anything for them. I couldn't protect everyone, so I protected whoever was in danger of their payment being a long dirt nap. But Aqua? Now they've done it.[/i] "You tried to shoot Aqua." Violet began, speaking with a lethal tone. "You scum have gone way too far." "Aw, I made the damsel upset cuz' I almost shot her wittle fwiend." the gunman mocked. He was about to fire another round, this time taking Violet's life once and for all. However, Ray kicked his hand and the gun flew into the air, clattering harmlessly on the walkway. "Damn it!" he yelled. At this, other D-Wheelers from the team began getting up and loading pistols. "Oh crap..." Ray said, backing away. Violet looked up at all of them, prepared for the gunfire, when suddenly: "Hold yer fire, boys!" a voice commanded. "Chief Russell!" they all responded as a shirtless, black-skinned man walked out. He wore the casual Team Anti-Security outfit. He added a personal touch to his although: a black hat. Yep. That's special. "Violet Vega. Good to see ya." "... The hell do you want?" "Now now! No need to be hostile! I just wanna talk..." "Just wanna talk?! Those guys were about to make this house swiss cheese!" Ray shouted at the Chief. "Relax. My boys wouldn't fire without my order." the chief assured. Ray looked somewhat dumbfounded at this. [i]They could've killed them all but wouldn't unless he said so?[/i] "One of your men tried to shoot Aqua." Violet informed Russell. "Eh? Which one?" "The one in front of you." Violet referred to the man who had his hand kicked by Ray. He glared at Violet, but her piercing glare completely shattered his stance and he became frightened. "You and me are gonna have a nice talk later." "But chief!" "Get on yer damn bike!" Russell ordered as the member of the group quickly submitted and ran over to his black D-Wheel. "Now, Violet, this payment thing can be dropped if you just do what I keep asking." "Here it comes." James moaned, predicting what Russell was about to say. "Just gimme yer hand in marriage, and I'll leave ya friends and you alone." Russell offered. He had always been in love with Violet, ever since she first moved in. But Violet would always turn him down. "Listen here Russell, Violet would soon rather marry a dead tree than commit herself to your sorry ass!" Ray spoke for Violet, however, Russell only looked at his direction. "Quiet boy, before I shut you up." "Don't need to. The answer is no." Violet folded her arms when she gave her answer. Russell growled in anger. This woman was testing her patience. He would not have this... "Argh..." "But I've had about enough of your bullshit. Especially since you thought having one of your men go for Aqua would be a good idea." "I didn't tell him to do that!" Russell denied everything. If he said that he wanted Aqua dead, his chances with Violet would disappear forever, especially since Violet valued Aqua's life over her own. "Of course. Regardless, I have a proposition, a bet." Violet began. Aqua curiously looked on while hiding behind James' leg. James and Kyle were curious about this bet themselves. Ray looked at Violet, interested in what she was about say next. "I'm listening." "We settle this the old fashioned way, with a game of cards." Violet continued. "A duel?" "Yes, a duel. A duel without guns or weapons..." "...Go on." "You win, I marry you and you have to leave the town along with the rest of your team." "W-What?!" Ray asked, surprised at this part of the bet. "Violet! What the hell are you thinking?! He'll just-" "If I win, you idiots don't bother the town with your payment and protection bull. Oh, and you'll all have to answer to me." Violet finished. Some of the members of Team Anti-Security flinched a bit at this. "Ch-Chief... if you lose... w-we'll have to make her the chief?!" a member asked Russell, who was grinning about her end of the bargin. "Haha! Fine! Deal!" "WHAT?!" The entire team shouted. What the hell was he thinking?! "Chief!" "Buuuuut..." "But what?" "I get to choose the duelist on our end." Russell added. James felt like speaking at this point. "The hell you talkin' about? That's not the deal-" "Who?" Violet asked. James and the others looked at her after he was interrupted. "Hey, Violet." Ray tried to get her attention. "I know what I'm doing." "But..." "Our representative will be... Marcus Tyrant." Russell answered. "Marcus? You mean that crazy badass who barely loses? If he has lost at all?!" Ray asked him. Russell nodded with the most evil grin possible. "Your best player against Violet? Is this fair?" Kyle questioned. Russell looked towards him. "She's your best player, isn't she? It's only fair right?" "...I suppose, but-" "Oh, and this'll be a Ground Duel. So your little D-Wheel nerds can't help out." Russell added. James was angered by this. "Hey! Sure, Kyle might be one, but I sure as hell ain't no D-Wheel nerd!" "Hey!" Kyle responded to the insult as James let out with his defense. "Fine." Violet agreed to the terms. Aqua looked at Violet, incredibly worried. "See you at sunset," Russell crowed. Violet nodded as Russell whistled. A large black D-Wheel drove itself behind him with his special carriage. He got onto it and drove off, the rest of Team Anti-Security followed. After no one could see them or the dust they left behind, James and Kyle ran towards Violet, as did Ray. "Are you crazy?! Marcus is a beast!" Ray had to make sure that Violet hadn't lost her mind. Even though it would've been too late if she did. "Girl, you're gonna get your ass handed to you on a platter." James said to her, knowing that she would lose. "H-Have faith, Violet! ...Faith... haha..." Kyle nervously laughed, trying to make the situation not look so bad. She was just going to face Team Anti-Security's strongest player. It wouldn't be that bad. ...Oh who was he kidding? "V-Violet..." Aqua called out to her, still standing at the doorway. Violet ignored the others and walked over to the young girl. She got down on her knees in front of the child. "T-Thank you..." "I'm not going to let them get anyway with this..." Violet spoke to Aqua while the others walked over to them, listening. "I'm gonna make the bad people stop. Okay?" "B-but..." "I can't do that if you don't believe in me, Aqua." "Oh christ. Believing, this girl must be as smart as bricks." James was not only disgusted with the cliche, but he was angry at the fact that Violet thought she could win an impossible battle in a couple of hours. But Violet wanted to know if Aqua trusted her, regardless. "I-I believe in you..." "Good. Now go home. Make sure you don't leave your parents' sight." Violet instructed as Aqua nodded and ran past them all. "Violet... you sure a little girl's belief is enough to help you win?" Ray asked Violet. "You guys, who am I?" "What kind of question is that?" James questioned. "Just answer." "You're Violet Vega. The shining hope." Kyle answered. "Oh yeah, that name people started giving you when you started defying Anti-Security.." Ray remembered. "Time for the 'Shining Hope' to do something for a change, right?" [i]I received the title 'Shining Hope' the first time I dare defied Team Anti-Security I honestly didn't know why people started calling me that. I thought it was really stupid. But... deep down... I loved the title. I want to be known as someone special, but I haven't done anything to be special in any way. ...Here's a good place to start.[/i][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 LOL Jerk with heart of gold trope FTW? Unfortunatly we all know the only reason you made a new fic is so you can get away with never having to actually use Caffenia. >.> But I'll subscribe anyway, it doesn't have any canon characters so it's cooler than last one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iCherry Posted October 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 I wanted to use Caffenia. Shut up. >< Thanks, Nexev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 I guess you CAN use him, but you'd have to pm me an app or make him yourself. That is, if this FF gets that far before you stop for some reason. I'm going to probbaly do something pointless now, pm me if you want some help, can't do grammar or names though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 I expect TAIYO! *Shot* No, not really, but I'm onlyp osting to make it show up in my content! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 Interesting start to the story there Cherry. Anyway, I'll be reading waiting to see how you write your card games, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 APPEARANCE! I decided to humor you and get my splits to review too. [color="#FF00FF"]LOL bewbs. So like, the other characters seem like they are going to be a bit... worthless? <3[/color] [color="#FF0000"]Okay, this is nice and all that s***, you can have a nice lunch of satisfaction and all that s*** buut it's kinda icky with the villains. I mean, god is it any more f***ing obvious the Anti-Security is evil? The name's evil, they act evil? What the f*** happened to subtlety?[/color] [color="#006400"]Let me take a wild guess. She wins? Wow, I'm shocked, who would have thought? Really?[/color] [color="#483D8B"]Why do I have a feeling Russel is going to make a heel face turn? That'll be swell bro.[/color] [color="#00FF00"]I hate this! IT LACKS MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE![/color] [color="#A0522D"]Dude, can't you be bothered to make it so we have the slightest idea what kinda cards people use? Cause we barely know much about the characters as it is besides a few tropes for the main and exactly one trope for everyone else.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iCherry Posted October 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 [quote name='Nevert' timestamp='1286569248' post='4688713'] I guess you CAN use him, but you'd have to pm me an app or make him yourself. That is, if this FF gets that far before you stop for some reason. I'm going to probbaly do something pointless now, pm me if you want some help, can't do grammar or names though. [/quote] I dunno if I will. I hope I don't stop. >< Thanks, again. [quote name='Tainted Black' timestamp='1286575966' post='4689084'] I expect TAIYO! *Shot* No, not really, but I'm onlyp osting to make it show up in my content! XD [/quote] xD Thanks? [quote name='Andx' timestamp='1286578576' post='4689227'] Interesting start to the story there Cherry. Anyway, I'll be reading waiting to see how you write your card games, lol. [/quote] My card games shall be quite... adequate. Thanks Andx. [quote name='Nevert' timestamp='1286580043' post='4689297'] APPEARANCE! I decided to humor you and get my splits to review too. [color="#FF00FF"]LOL bewbs. So like, the other characters seem like they are going to be a bit... worthless? <3[/color] [color="#FF0000"]Okay, this is nice and all that s***, you can have a nice lunch of satisfaction and all that s*** buut it's kinda icky with the villains. I mean, god is it any more f***ing obvious the Anti-Security is evil? The name's evil, they act evil? What the f*** happened to subtlety?[/color] [color="#006400"]Let me take a wild guess. She wins? Wow, I'm shocked, who would have thought? Really?[/color] [color="#483D8B"]Why do I have a feeling Russel is going to make a heel face turn? That'll be swell bro.[/color] [color="#00FF00"]I hate this! IT LACKS MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE![/color] [color="#A0522D"]Dude, can't you be bothered to make it so we have the slightest idea what kinda cards people use? Cause we barely know much about the characters as it is besides a few tropes for the main and exactly one trope for everyone else.[/color] [/quote] Since I've forgotten their names... @Pink: The other characters are going to have major parts in the story later on. @Red: JUST WAIT. SHHHH. @Green: Quiet you. @Purple: Shhh. @Light Green: Lol. @Brown: That's why we have more chapters to use for explaining. Character's decks will be revealed during the chapter they duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted October 9, 2010 Report Share Posted October 9, 2010 Not bad Cherry, although your protagonist needs to treat the D-Wheel nerd better. I will keep an eye on this, this is just a My Content post honestly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted October 9, 2010 Report Share Posted October 9, 2010 As I said your writing is VERY good, and I like that the main character is not the generic "Hi friends! Friendship!" type of guy/gal. Keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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