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Shalltear Bloodfallen Newbie

Shalltear Bloodfallen

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The Big Chill have posted a thread for his RP somewhere in the Fan-Fic section.

I have also posted my first attempt ever at an RP of my own.

[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/227692-yu-gi-oh-5d%c2%b4s-the-nexus-brotherhood-not-startedacceptingooc/"]Yu-Gi-Oh 5D´s: The Nexus Brotherhood[/url]

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Blake Newbie

Blake

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[quote name='Lazaruz' timestamp='1288811865' post='4759372']
The Big Chill have posted a thread for his RP somewhere in the Fan-Fic section.

I have also posted my first attempt ever at an RP of my own.

[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/227692-yu-gi-oh-5d%c2%b4s-the-nexus-brotherhood-not-startedacceptingooc/"]Yu-Gi-Oh 5D´s: The Nexus Brotherhood[/url]

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I am reading/critiquing your RP as I speak. I will tell you how you have done.
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Blake Newbie

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Alright, here's what I've got:
Plot is a bit Cliche, and I think you included too many sides
Your Grammar needs help in general
Your app is not bad.
No, do not allow sub-plots, unless discussed with you first. Change that rule.
Overall: 5.5/10

And, guess what? A 5.5/10 for a beginner is... GREAT. =D I've given experienced RPer's RPs a 6/10 before!

I'm definitely going to be joining, to see how this all goes ^-^ Nexus for me!
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Shalltear Bloodfallen Newbie

Shalltear Bloodfallen

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[quote name='Fading Black' timestamp='1288812320' post='4759394']
Alright, here's what I've got:
Plot is a bit Cliche, and I think you included too many sides
Your Grammar needs help in general
Your app is not bad.
No, do not allow sub-plots, unless discussed with you first. Change that rule.
Overall: 5.5/10

And, guess what? A 5.5/10 for a beginner is... GREAT. =D I've given experienced RPer's RPs a 6/10 before!

I'm definitely going to be joining, to see how this all goes ^-^ Nexus for me!
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Thanks :)

I was a little bit unsecure about adding Dark Signers and mainly added them due to the Signer side, so Dark Signers have been removed
(I just hope that you didn´t plan to apply as one :P)

Also, changed the rule regarding sub-plot.

I´m Swedish so I almost expected there to be grammar problems + due to me lacking a good spellchecker.



Now, lets just hope this thing wont sink to fast :).

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[quote name='Fading Black' timestamp='1288812320' post='4759394']
No, do not allow sub-plots, unless discussed with you first. Change that rule.
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If I'm getting Stardust and his variants, I'll need a Kiryu/Godwin for Savior Star, a Dark Glass to introduce Accel Synchro to me, and a Placido. You know exactly why I need him.

So, yeah. No sub-plots for me is a bit of a problem.
As it is for anyone using Scar-Red Nova Dragon.
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[quote name='^_^AxManBoy^_^' timestamp='1288832184' post='4760192']
Well, I know they are about Yugioh and stuff, but I wanna talk about something that has with Yugioh episodes to do
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The next episode is airing next week...
Actually, we know what's going to happen in next 5 episodes. We don't [b]ALWAYS [/b]have to talk about Yugioh. There are other interesting topics...

Never RP'd before. I would like to, but I'm afraid that I'm going to screw up something (I mean something in the story...or something like that). Maybe I'll read some RPs to see how to do it =D...
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