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Yes, for those who remember, before the server change, I used to have a fiction called Awakening of Deception, But due to lack of interest from both parts it died. I now shall try to revive it. I adapted this fiction to American reader since Rinne doesn't like the way I write.

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No matter how much strong you are, there will be always someone, or something stronger than you. The only exception is a being, only know as "Deus". He appeared on Earth about 25 years ago, and it only took 4 years to change the world completely. Violence, misery, corruption, all over, the perfect utopia couldn't be made by man's hands, but by something more powerful.

Year: 2015; N.U.S.A. (New United States of America), Dark House

At the build where the most powerful being, a human-like being was staring at the Dark House's window, using a casual suit, with 8 feet of height, and with only 1 red left eye. With a black hole where should be his right eye. He was "Deus".



- “Damn” Deus said to himself “I never thought that being the most powerful "men" in a utopian world would be so... boring.”



“What is the matter, Deus?” Isabella, Deus’s secretary, asked.



“ Well, I arrived in your planet about 25 years ago, and it only took me 4 years to do everything that your kind tried in the last 3000 years, now the world is a utopia, your people think I'm God and they elect me the World's Leader. It would be something really good if I had something to do.”



“But you do have. Without you, Deus, people would fight against each other again, you are respected by those who are good, and feared by those who just want the worst for the world!”



Deus opened a smile and look at Isabella



“ So... If I left my position to any other human, the world would return to the chaos?”



“Well, yeah, I guess you can say that. Isabella said in a worried tone.”



Deus turned around and started to stare at the window again, but now, with a smile on his face.



“ Interesting.”



Deus picked up his things and left the Dark House



“Where are you going sir? “ Isabella asked



“I’m going to visit a friend! “ Deus answered as he gets inside of his car.



Deus drove quickly to an ordinary NUSA's Hospital, he left the car outside, he was looking for a doctor called Mr. H., who at that moment was with a patient.



“Hello, Mr. H. - Deus said”



“If it isn't the 'President' - the doctor said - what are you doing here?”



“ I'm just passing by; by the way, do you know when did the Utopian War ended?”



“Probably about 3 years ago, when you decided stop the mankind’s natural circle. Also, why are you talking with me about war? For real? You just pop up here to talk about war with a doctor? If you wanna talk about war, just ask any kid who plays Call of Duty.”



“I'm asking you because you are the only one with the sadist mind and intelligent enough to have a good conversation with me, but if don't wanna talk, never mind then.”



Deus sat in the nearest chair and looked at Mr. H's patient.



“What does she has?“ Deus asked



“Some neurological problem, unfortunately, it doesn't have a cure, because it is the combination of a virus with several new kinds of bacteria. The only thing I can do is give her Death Sentence.”



“Everything has a cure H., you just need to use the "Basic Logic".”



“ "Basic Logic"? House asked "What the hell is that?”



“I will show you... for example, what kills a virus?”



“An Antivírus.”



“And what kills a bacteria?”



“An antibiotic.”



“Then you just need to create an Anti-"virutic". - Deus said touching the patient forehead with his finger, curing her from her desease.”



“See? " Mr. H grumbled "That is exactly what I meant with stopping the mankind natural circle!”



“So you wanted her to die H? You? The doctor?”



“With her death, we could analyze her body, searching for the... "virutic" and starting searching a cure! But thanks to you, we are going to have to wait for another patient with the same symptoms so we get a chance to find the cure!”



“Oh... well, you shouldn't being worried H, people die all the time.”



“But from different reasons.”



“Details.... Since you don't want to talk about war, I don't have reason to stay here so I might have to find someone else.”



“Try the republicans! They like war!” said Mr. H. joking.

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