Nukyasu Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 [u][center][b][size="4"]Original Image[/size][/b][/center][/u] [img]http://www.bsckids.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/07/Demi-Lovato.jpg[/img] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/xf15kz.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2hxq3hj.png[/IMG] [size="4"][u][b]Newest Version:[/b][/u][/size] [img]http://i54.tinypic.com/2dt4rj7.png[/img] [right][u][b][size="4"]C'n'C? Also, should I open a shop? I wanted to, but, eh.[/size][/b][/u][/right] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 Is it my laptop or do I see scanlines? <.< You might have had good lighting but it was killed when you made the HUGE blur on the BG combined with the HUGE sharpen of the focal. It contrast too much. You almost have floating head syndrome so watch that. =/ Colors are fine but my eye keeps going to the bottom left of the focal to were the C4Ds are too sharpened. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nukyasu Posted September 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 It's just your laptop. I know. I'll fix that like tomorrow or something. (The sharpening and blurring) EDIT: UPDATED!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 Good lightning but I think the BG is too blured...and empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 I like it, Her Smile scares me a bit though D: Anyways, the fractals seem abit over sharpened, Youve got good lighting, Depth is ok, i feel BG's blurred a bit much. And really listen to LZ about that floating head syndrome Overall, its appealing and could be better, but good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nukyasu Posted October 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 I have updated it once again. It doesn't look much difference, but it is a tiny bit better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 bg is way too blurred. I m liking ur lighting and the colors are pretty good. the updated version is a pretty solid improvment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadius Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 You made the stock worse..... learn not to spam effects and your lighting is rubbish. Lighting should be strong and natural, it also shouldnt be all over your piece, it should focus on your focal point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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