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Here's my submission for the first challenge. I hope it's what you meant by "make it better".

 

 

 

 

 

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Once a peaceful man, living in a peaceful village. One day the peaceful man found a sword making an eerie sound and having a purple glow. He approached the sword calmly and grasped it firmly. Once he touched the dark sword, his entire body was suddenly engulfed by a dark cloud and a dark armor was fused with his soul and his body. The once peaceful man has become intertwined with the cursed sword and has plans for total domination of his realm.

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Here's my submission for the first challenge. I hope it's what you meant by "make it better".

 

 

 

 

 

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Once a peaceful man, living in a peaceful village. One day the peaceful man found a sword making an eerie sound and having a purple glow. He approached the sword calmly and grasped it firmly. Once he touched the dark sword, his entire body was suddenly engulfed by a dark cloud and a dark armor was fused with his soul and his body. The once peaceful man has become intertwined with the cursed sword and has plans for total domination of his realm.

 

yes! omg it is epic! hope it gets good ratings!

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