the Snakey Wolf Lord Posted January 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 Characters: Slimyan (You know who you are): Age 17. Deck: Overpowered Deck. Snakon: Age 17. Deck: Venom Deck. Kita: Age 17. Deck: Armaggedon`s Reign Armaggedon - Chapter 1: Confrontment My name is Kita. Kita Reign. I have an ambition... I need to find Armaggedon... I`ve heard it as a religious place somewhere on the east coast of the world. I live in Korea. Where I have suffered the loss of family, friends, and all I held dear. If I were to find Armaggedon, I would be able to change everything. I was walking on a sidewalk close to my college. Alot of kids were running around. It was so annoying. I put my hood over my head to try to hide the expression on my face. Unfortunately, I hate everything, that is why I am annoyed. My gray and red sweatshirt was torn the day my closest friends died; Slimyan, and Snakon. They were murdered by a German army who tried to look for Armaggedon. They later explained to me that they killed my friends because they were going to kill anything in their way to get the Armaggedon and get everything they pleased. I was mad, I clenched my fist, but I let it go. As I walked into class, I noticed a kid with a strange frown on his face. Like he was beat up, and was mad. I asked him what was wrong. He said the exact words; "Are you by any chance... Kita Riian?" "That was my last name a long time ago. I decided to change it to Rein." I told him. He asked me if he has met anyone named Slimyan. I told him that I have, but he was murdered. "I AM Slimyan. They took my body to Armaggedon. And I came back to life reincarnated. But for some reason I could remember everything. Porbably because Armaggedon was too great." "I-i-f... You`re... Slimyan, wheres Snakon?" I asked him. "Unfotrunately, I have no clue" he sadly announced. I ignored him for the rest of the day. While he kept looking at me. The next day I woke up, and he was awake, right there on the sidewalk of where I slept. He was smiling. And I noticed his pointy ears, and cap. They were alot like Sacriel`s; a class known for its strength and vitality. He gave me a case. A plastic case. "You might like this" He said. I opened it, and looked at the deck of cards. There were very strange creatures in the pictures. "What are these?" I asked him. "Yu-Gi-Oh cards. They are legendary cards used for fighting other Yu-Gi-Oh card players, and killing them; From the Armaggedon temple." I smiled at him. An hour later, I was getting ready to go to Armaggedon. I didn`t really care if I missed school. When I get to Armaggedon, I wont get in trouble for it. I noticed one of my cards had the name "Armaggedon" I supposed that that was why he thought I might like them. He had a set of cards hisself. He told me they were Sacriel Tormentor cards; Overpowered Monsters. I noticed along the way alot of graves. They were 6x the size of a brick. EXACTLY that size. Slimyan explained to me they were meant for dueling. Whomevers name was on the grave they dueled on, the winner would keep that person as their apprentice. 5 hours later, we both got tired. We took a rest for 4 hours. Then we kept going. I noticed his staff. "Where did you get such a staff?" I asked. "Armaggedon... You want one?" "Yeah" I said. "Then lets go to Armaggedon" He said. I was a little dissapointed... All I had was a gun in my pocket. "I FOUND IT!!!" I repeated over and over again. "I FOUND IT!!! I FOUND IT!!!!!" "What?" Slimyan asked. This isn`t the best chapter - It will get better. Promise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the Snakey Wolf Lord Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 Characters: Slimyan (You know who you are): Age 17. Deck: Overpowered Deck. Snakon: Age 17. Deck: Venom Deck. Kita: Age 17. Deck: Armaggedon`s Reign Armaggedon - Chapter 1: Confrontment My name is Kita. Kita Reign. I have an ambition... I need to find Armaggedon... I`ve heard it as a religious place somewhere on the east coast of the world. I live in Korea. Where I have suffered the loss of family, friends, and all I held dear. If I were to find Armaggedon, I would be able to change everything. I was walking on a sidewalk close to my college. Alot of kids were running around. It was so annoying. I put my hood over my head to try to hide the expression on my face. Unfortunately, I hate everything, that is why I am annoyed. My gray and red sweatshirt was torn the day my closest friends died; Slimyan, and Snakon. They were murdered by a German army who tried to look for Armaggedon. They later explained to me that they killed my friends because they were going to kill anything in their way to get the Armaggedon and get everything they pleased. I was mad, I clenched my fist, but I let it go. As I walked into class, I noticed a kid with a strange frown on his face. Like he was beat up, and was mad. I asked him what was wrong. He said the exact words; "Are you by any chance... Kita Riian?" "That was my last name a long time ago. I decided to change it to Rein." I told him. He asked me if he has met anyone named Slimyan. I told him that I have, but he was murdered. "I AM Slimyan. They took my body to Armaggedon. And I came back to life reincarnated. But for some reason I could remember everything. Porbably because Armaggedon was too great." "I-i-f... You`re... Slimyan, wheres Snakon?" I asked him. "Unfotrunately, I have no clue" he sadly announced. I ignored him for the rest of the day. While he kept looking at me. The next day I woke up, and he was awake, right there on the sidewalk of where I slept. He was smiling. And I noticed his pointy ears, and cap. They were alot like Sacriel`s; a class known for its strength and vitality. He gave me a case. A plastic case. "You might like this" He said. I opened it, and looked at the deck of cards. There were very strange creatures in the pictures. "What are these?" I asked him. "Yu-Gi-Oh cards. They are legendary cards used for fighting other Yu-Gi-Oh card players, and killing them; From the Armaggedon temple." I smiled at him. An hour later, I was getting ready to go to Armaggedon. I didn`t really care if I missed school. When I get to Armaggedon, I wont get in trouble for it. I noticed one of my cards had the name "Armaggedon" I supposed that that was why he thought I might like them. He had a set of cards hisself. He told me they were Sacriel Tormentor cards; Overpowered Monsters. I noticed along the way alot of graves. They were 6x the size of a brick. EXACTLY that size. Slimyan explained to me they were meant for dueling. Whomevers name was on the grave they dueled on, the winner would keep that person as their apprentice. 5 hours later, we both got tired. We took a rest for 4 hours. Then we kept going. I noticed his staff. "Where did you get such a staff?" I asked. "Armaggedon... You want one?" "Yeah" I said. "Then lets go to Armaggedon" He said. I was a little dissapointed... All I had was a gun in my pocket. "I FOUND IT!!!" I repeated over and over again. "I FOUND IT!!! I FOUND IT!!!!!" "What?" Slimyan asked. This isn`t the best chapter - It will get better. Promise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ixigo Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 Uh, first of all - a Clare avatar - Claymore fan, and I still haven't talked to you? Seriously, wth. Second - it's Confrontation, not Confrontment. Third, I'll be reading and commenting on the rest of the chapter once I get some time. Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ixigo Posted January 20, 2008 Report Share Posted January 20, 2008 Uh, first of all - a Clare avatar - Claymore fan, and I still haven't talked to you? Seriously, wth. Second - it's Confrontation, not Confrontment. Third, I'll be reading and commenting on the rest of the chapter once I get some time. Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sythcaris Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 its ok, kinda emo, but good story plot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sythcaris Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 its ok, kinda emo, but good story plot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the Snakey Wolf Lord Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 "Second - it's Confrontation, not Confrontment." I used another word. God... I`m getting sick of people dissing me here... :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the Snakey Wolf Lord Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 "Second - it's Confrontation, not Confrontment." I used another word. God... I`m getting sick of people dissing me here... :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Man u took my idea... JK but i was going to start a fanfic soon, good first chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Man u took my idea... JK but i was going to start a fanfic soon, good first chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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