Brinolovania Posted October 21, 2010 Report Share Posted October 21, 2010 Oh, oh! I want to make an unnecisarily dramatic statement! IC:And then...something happened. Cyber Kirin felt the touch of the Swordsman's soul, a living soul. he was bombarded by the pure emotion, alien to his computer brain. And he...changed. He grew taller, more humanoid, with his robotic strenth and the warrior prowress of the Swordsman. He gained power beyond belief. He had...life. And it was over. A man in green and silver stood where the Kirin had once been. "I..am Sasuke...the Ninja Grandmaster..." He whispered. He smiled. His knives lashed out, and two strands of webbing securing the sructure to the edge of the fissure fell into the void, taking a small spider with them. "Now, spider-beast. Bring it on." OOC:I love doing that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mythcaptor Posted October 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2010 lol nicely written The underground arachnid rears up, enraged at being called spider beast, and leaps towards you, landing on a web uncomfortably close to your person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted October 21, 2010 Report Share Posted October 21, 2010 "Hmph...so I get a good, head on fight. This will be fun." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted October 21, 2010 Report Share Posted October 21, 2010 "must.....drink......water...." i pant heavily, tired after an entire day of walking. I drop to the ground, taking a seat beside the enormous spider web, and start gulping down my bottle of water greedily. Satisfied, I walk around the spider web, studying it carefully and intently. After a while, bored and tired, i lean against a tree, and start throwing rocks at the web. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 21, 2010 Report Share Posted October 21, 2010 OOC: Ok, I'm back so can someone unfreeze my adventure? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted October 21, 2010 Report Share Posted October 21, 2010 @Phantom: Apparently, I don't exist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mythcaptor Posted October 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2010 lol sorry for infrequant posting. School gets a lot heavier after september, so I cant promise that its gonna get better than this, but Ill try to update as often as I can. @pac, OOC: he is in the entrance. Remember, there is a large web across the entrance of the cave that leads to you. Thats where he is @Inuyasha boy, If he goes into the spider cave, Im gonna have to take over until he leaves, Underground Arachnid is my boss. Sorry for butting in on your story @pac, IC: [color=red]arachnid roars, but stands her ground. She seems to want to stay on the web, where she has the advantage[/color] [color=orange] Sasuke: 1800 attack, 4000 hp Underground Arachnid: 2400 attack, 4800 hp [/color] New Text Colour System! Hurray! [color=green]green is major story post. This is not all IC posts, just ones that further the story[/color] [color=blue] blue is minor story post, little one line thinks to keep the story going[/color] [color=red]red is combat post, any post while combat is happening is red[/color] [color=orange] orange is stats, like “Underground Arachnid: 2400 atk, 4800 hp[/color] OOC remains black I will be using this system from now on, but I will not go back and edit all my previous posts. I think it just makes things prettier Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 OOC:Shouldn't Gift of the Martyr still affect me? Or is that gone since I changed to Sasuke? IC:"Hmph...you aren't safe, beast, even on your own territory. I can't stand on webbing...but I can stand on you!" I leap up, and flip over the spiders head, landing squarely on its back. I whirl, and stab one of my knives in to it's back. I pull it out, and grab on to the spider. "Giddyup!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krillin! Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 @Mythcaptor Ok... I'll keep them away from the cave then Can you unfreeze Lex's storyline.... I don't know what he's doing xD @Phantom and Kevin A [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/Jirai_Gumo]Spider [/url] appears on the web. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING ON MY WEB! I OUGHTA- Huh?" He looks at your coin. "An Insect Monster Token... That can only be obtained from a fight with the Insect Queen and her minions... I'm so sorry for snapping at you. My name is Jirai Gumo. Her Highness the Insect Queen began using her minions and turning them into coins so that she could summon them to take hits, sacrifice, sell, or even experiment on. I am the leader of the Rebellion against her.... Please.... You must help me fight her! I'll make it worth your while..." OOC: I have an idea...Each team should have a Limit Card! A Magic card that they both could use simultaneously as a desprate final attack! They could only use it once in a while. What do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 OOC:Sounds interesting... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 [quote name='Phantom M.C.' timestamp='1287677293' post='4722934'] "must.....drink......water...." i pant heavily, tired after an entire day of walking. I drop to the ground, taking a seat beside the enormous spider web, and start gulping down my bottle of water greedily. Satisfied, I walk around the spider web, studying it carefully and intently. After a while, bored and tired, i lean against a tree, and start throwing rocks at the web. [/quote]I say that you shoudn't do that because somthing might attack us Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 OOC: k, kevin. aren't you going to continue the story? its no fun when i'm always continuing the story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mythcaptor Posted October 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 Yeah, ok, gift still works Pac: [color=red] Your blades pierce arachnid’s flesh[color=orange]{2000 damage}[/color], and arachnid lets out a mighty roar. The human corpse embedded in his back lurches, and twist 180 degrees from its waste. Its eyes are glowing red now, and little spiders flow in a thick stream out of its mouth. You feel suddenly sick as you realize that the human corpse on Arachnid’s back was serving as food for its larvae. If you let Arachnid kill you, you have no doubt that you will be the next meal for his eggs. The Arachnid’s Larvae look poisonous, and they are crawling quickly towards you. [/color][color=orange] Sasuke 2800 attack 4000 hp Arachnid 2400 attack 2800 hp [/color] @Inyuasha I imagine your sick as hell of my lectures on proper storytelling by now Inuyasha, what with all my talk of Story Synergy and crap in our PMs but Im gonna do It again. Sorry. The drive of roll playing games is character improvement. This is the core goal. If a player cant improve a character in some way over the corse of the game, its boring, not fun to play. Despite what they try and tell you, a player doesn't want everything handed to them either. If their is no work involved in character improvement, its just as bad as not having character improvement at all. Where Im getting with this is that by giving players a easy way out of tight spots is an example of handing something to a player. When they had to work for everything else, giving them a “Free extra ability” is a storytelling mistake, and one that many, if not all, new DMs make. Its free character improvement, and ALL character improvement must be earned in a good Role Play. The player didn't work for this spell, yet they can use it to escape an otherwise potentially fatal situation. A spell like that is fine, but really, you have to earn it. [color=green]@ Lex: You quickly scramble up the tree, and the turtle roars again. It cant reach you. You take a minute to catch your breath.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krillin! Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 OOC:@Mythcaptor I understand... but I already know that. I planned on making them work for it (give them a powerful ability for free?! Even I'm not that nice xD), and giving it limits so that it's not an instakill every time the battle starts. I would limit its power and usage amount. I already made a list of cards that wouldn't be really spammable. However, with big desicions like these, I wouldn't do them without your consent, since you are an expert DM. So... what's the call? BTW... I'm not sick of your lectures... I'm glad I get them so I can learn from them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 [quote name='InuYasha boy707' timestamp='1287707506' post='4724463'] @Phantom and Kevin A [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/Jirai_Gumo]Spider [/url] appears on the web. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING ON MY WEB! I OUGHTA- Huh?" He looks at your coin. "An Insect Monster Token... That can only be obtained from a fight with the Insect Queen and her minions... I'm so sorry for snapping at you. My name is Jirai Gumo. Her Highness the Insect Queen began using her minions and turning them into coins so that she could summon them to take hits, sacrifice, sell, or even experiment on. I am the leader of the Rebellion against her.... Please.... You must help me fight her! I'll make it worth your while..." OOC: I have an idea...Each team should have a Limit Card! A Magic card that they both could use simultaneously as a desprate final attack! They could only use it once in a while. What do you guys think? [/quote] I say shure as long as we get a share of money or items equal to what we have deafeted or were you thinking? OOC:good idea what does OOC mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 Am I being ignored here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 @Lex:Yup. IC:"...You suck." I leap up off the spider, slicing one of the small spiders in half. However, another one manages to nick my arm with its fangs. "Crap!" I land safely back on the rocks. "And now we're back where we started...except I'm probably poisoned. You [i]really[/i] suck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mythcaptor Posted October 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 @Lex, no your not. Look at the bottom of my last post on page 17, it starts your story up again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 OOC: @mythcaptor: Oh, I didn't see that, thanks. IC: Phhew! That was close. I must use this moment to rethink my strategy. "I said while panting" Mhhh, perhaps I am doing everything wrong. "I thought to myself" Perhaps his weak point was visible all the time. But I think I shall rest a bit before I'll try to do something else. "And with these words I laid down on a big branch and try to a bit." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted October 24, 2010 Report Share Posted October 24, 2010 hi I wantto know what happens to everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mythcaptor Posted October 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2010 thats nice kevin. You do know that the way people react to the story changes it, and so even if I wanted to, I couldn't tell you what happens Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted October 24, 2010 Report Share Posted October 24, 2010 howsh bout me/us Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krillin! Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 I JUST GOT BACK FROM A TRIP WIITH MY DAD! NOW THAT I AM BACK! I WILL UPDATE THE STORYLINES! (When I'm done reading what happened) xDOK! @Kev and Phantom Jirai nods. "Yes, there is a hefty prize for this task... You not only will receive this gleaming treasure chest *pulls out gleaming treasure chest* but also will be our welcomed guests forever. Are you ready for battle?" OOC @ Myth: Well.... Did you read my second post about limit cards? What's the call? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 I say shure show us the way but if you betray us you will face certain punishment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 Aah, that really was refreshing. I feel as strong as ever. Mhh, that turtle still seems to trieng to get me. Lets help him a bit. "With these words I jump onto the turtle's head and hold onto his eyebrows." Mhh, lets try if I can direct you. "I try and pull its head to the right." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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