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Makο Newbie

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I am glad that you edited you app, Black. I liked it. In fact, it gave me the resolve to make an RP character of myself in 2 years.

[b]Username:[/b] Derpderp, its me, derpderp.

[b]Name:[/b] Brandon Alindo

[b]Species:[/b] Human

[b]Age:[/b] 15 (Not trying to copy Black, but this just seemed more appropriate)

[b]Job:[/b] Crew member of The Torchlight, Assault Troop.

[b]Specialization:[/b] Assault

[b]*Faction:*[/b] None.

[b]Appearance:[/b] Tall, about 6'2", with broad shoulders. He was brown hair, with hazel eyes. Keeps his hair short, cause he hates to deal with it. Wheres a Standard Military uniform that, despite his age, fits him perfectly. Favors an Assault Rifle, which he carries around with him, just for looks, although it could kill anyone at any moment. (That height is probably how tall I will be in two years^^I just basically described myself.)

[b]Personality:[/b] Loyal, assertive, capable of following any and all commands without question. Has no second thoughts about his actions, which will get him into trouble.

[b]Bio:[/b] He was raised in the Nulakai System. He grew up under the impression that the entire universe was at war, due to the fact that at least once every day, he could hear explosions and gunfire nearby. That is because Nulakai is a major mining planet, and wars are constantly fought over the vast amount of resources that are imbedded into the planets surface. And since his parents refused to tell him the truth, he had to go on what he thought. So he spent most of his childhood preparing for the fight. He honed himself to many weapons, and was deadly accurate. Once 13, he snuck out in a stolen ship when his drunken and abusive parents refused to let him go. After about 1 week with no conflict, he was told the truth by a bartender in the Tjeyk system. After learning the truth, he was sent into a spiral of depression, battling hunger, pirates, and other threats just to stay alive. After 2 years of hardship, He received favor from Fara'Gok when they ran into each other in that same bar where he learned the truth. Thrilled by the fact that Fara' see's conflict on a daily basis, he accepted Fara's offer to travel with him. He is currently a Security Guard and Ground Assault Troop. He frequents the shooting range of The Torchlight.

[b]*Ship:*[/b] None.

[b]*Crew:*[/b] He IS part of the crew.

How is it?
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@Mako: Good app, good app. Except, there are a couple of grammatical errors, like where instead of wear and various capitalization errors. (Assault rifle doesn't need to be capitalized.) I also have one question. Why would a kid be raised under the impression that the whole galaxy was at war, and how didn't he find out about it until he left his planet? It is some sort of war-like, communist planet that doesn't allow people to know the truth about the outside universe? Seems a little far-fetched to me.

@Black: You're accepted now. Welcome aboard.
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Well, at least once every day, he could hear explosions and gunfire nearby. That is because Nulakai is a major mining planet, and wars are constantly fought over the vast amount of resources that are imbedded into the planets surface. And since his parents refused to tell him the truth, he had to go on what he thought.
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