Quiksilver Posted October 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 Sorry, Aesir, but like I told Wuu I don't do "updates". The Virtue will have to stay as is. Sorry, but I don't like people changing their app over and over again. If you wish to change a aspect of your character (or ship) just do it in the Rp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 I meant Lars' ship, since it was kinda rushed to begin with. Anyway, does any of your characters have any potential enemies? Because I need the Skreech to go hunt for someone to get him into the action. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted October 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 Well, maybe Akkoro. Might make a sick bounty hunter versus assassin fight. Sorry about that, man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 Lars is now out to kill Akkoro. I don't know why I placed Kerrigan on Temple II. TFF's character better send her some orders or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 Sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 [size='2']>>Milky Way Much?<< [b]Username:[/b] Lrn2Read [b]Name:[/b] Commander Cal'ek [b]Species:[/b] Toride (Own Species) [b]Age:[/b] 62 [b]Job:[/b] Military Leader of Toride Army [b]Specialization:[/b] Tech [b]*Faction:*[/b] N/a [b]Appearance:[/b] He is a dark figure with a jet white hair which macthes the battle suit. His hair is neck length. When he is out of his battle suit he wears a black cape to distiguish his authority over the crew. His coat which he wears under his cape, consist on many pockets and gizmos. A scar runs from his eye down towards his cheek as a mark of the battle of Inron. He also keeps a weapon close by him for sticky encounters. [b]Personality:[/b] He has a light personality when it comes to general life. But when he is in battle, he changes completely. His only intention is the safty of his crew. But he shows no mercy in battle. Some say that he has a dark soul and life in the battle had changed him. He may care for his crew but he dispises anyone or thing that dare challenges him. [b]Bio:[/b] He was brought up on the home planet of the torides in the Choron Galaxy. At the age of 10, he was entered into the ITA (Inter-Stellar Toride Army). At the age of 20 he took part in the Battle of Inron and gained a Place in a Secret project called 'Orion'. But his life was somehow changed by the battle of Inron as he began to punish people for not listening. At the age of 30 he was taken captive by a Rebel Faction and was kept for 20 years before he escaped. At the age of 53 he was presented a Loyalty Award and was put incommand of the most elite Strike Fleet in the Toride Army. Then he was ordered to travel to the far side of the Milky Way and 'Investigate'.... [b]*Ship:*[/b] [spoiler='The Orion'][IMG]http://i972.photobucket.com/albums/ae202/SirKillalotProduction/Orion_Planet.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [b]*Crew:*[/b] He has many people aboard his ship but here is 2 Main Charecters: Tol'eck - Second in Command, also the weapon specialst abord the Orion Shaira - Computer AI System [spoiler='Species App']Name: Toride History: Generations ago the Toride people were a simple civilization. They were similer to Humans and Earth, but they were far more advanced with technology. For many years they have been exploring the Norma Arm with Space probes. The they gained technology which enabled them to create their first batch of ships. Now they have gain more tech and have begun exploring the rest of the Milky Way. Homeworld: Terrana (Norma Rim) Appearance: They are identical to the human race but they are all known to carry the same gene which produces long hair. But their intellegence is much greater. This is what enabled them to envole so fast. Miscellaneous:N/a[/spoiler][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted October 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 Ghost Ryder, no other species know how to transport the vast distances of galaxies except for the World-Eaters. This is a crucial plot-point in the RP that will be explained at a later date. But still, you cannot use a creature from a distance galaxy. You must use one from this galaxy, and furthermore, if you wish to create a species you must fill out a species app. Not accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted October 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2010 Frybread, TFF, why are you guys ignoring Sparks? It's making him sad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Time Psyduck Posted October 2, 2010 Report Share Posted October 2, 2010 Quicksilver, you seem to have misunderstood the layout of the Star Rose. Firstly, it's not actually that big internally - most of the space is taken up by the hold, so the crew spaces are packed in to a relatively small areas, especially at the front, and there isn't extra space for more corridors. The only 'secondary corridors' would be maintenance crawlspace, which would have the same air as the closest sections of the main ship, meaning there's a vacuum between the front of the ship and the deadlocked section. Second, there's only two ways to reach the deadlocked sections, either through the airless cargo hold or through the airless and sectioned corridor - which is behind Tim. (There's also the crawlspaces, but those are under the same conditions as the corridor - sealed into sections and under a vacuum. Third, they're still quite close to the hull door, and there aren't many places for him to vanish to at this point, so I doubt Tim would 'never know' where he went, especially if he's blowing things up inside the ship. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted October 2, 2010 Report Share Posted October 2, 2010 Sorry for my late post, and sorry because it has a somewhat rash ending to it, but i can't focus myself on it right now ;d Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted October 2, 2010 Report Share Posted October 2, 2010 Hey, guys. I have a game for my iPod Touch. It lets me go anywhere in the Milky Way. So, I decided to share with the the list of names it provides. The Milky way is split into four quadrants. Each quadrant has 25 system. And each system has 5 planets and/or space stations. I'm gonna give you the Quadrant and system names. Upper Left Quadrant=Terdan Quadrant Upper Right Quadrant=Baltone Quadrant Lower Left Quadrant=Vilessk Quadrant Lower Right Quadrant=Solecci Quadrant Terdan=Astere, Naminniu, Ukan, Ngoom, Appleik, Mudiniama, Kutorkoer, Jakal, Tjeya, Numpa, Icarus, Triton, Marbula, Mara, Yarapu, Mangal, Kumeri, Leo, Kum, Lynx, Hera, Voog, Hydra, Mirall, Colon. Baltone:Taurus, Norapungo, Magelian, Hyperion (LOLSTARCRAFT), Chinagi, Kinjeri, Kareyiamu, Ona, Nulwoilu, Yereirnmu, Murnmul, Kutoquial, Helios, Nolerala, Cook, Vespucci, Casiopeia, Kumbego, Murrawain, Unko, Alumeriam, Numongen, Nulu, Ungeikala, Kumerapa. *Phew* 50 more. Vilessk=Monminda, Nulakai, Tjeyk, Oogutoqui, Lupos, Prometheus, Mitiungar, Kutoramin, Namakorow, Murne, Noleromi, Aruma, Mudadinda, Mare, Mitijali, Muri, Peesov, Oogutjeri, Murnmorom, Buriamako (Mako? Schweet.), Toros, Kudijeya, Murrapara, Numbego, Zaiphab. Solecci=Mitiu, Unkoriall, Murraonge, Ouduaraon, Ungbu, Murnminje, Aloi, Kopereya, Num, Inniu, Ngaraiyau, Montorpun, Fury, Nordapare, Numbai, Virgo, Monakora, Nul, Aries, Mingu, Mukallont, Turnminn, Ungarbuka, Mirowa, Nungaya. There you go. I spent a LOT of time copying this down, so could'a copy-paste it to the main page? Its alot more detailed then the one you have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted October 2, 2010 Report Share Posted October 2, 2010 TFF, is Tu'lo on Temple II or Zheng huo? Since I didn't specify which planet Temple II orbits it doesn't really matter for her. Quicksilver, could I apply with a second Skreech as a rival for Lars? (a female this time) EDIT: I'll just pretend I never said Kerrigan went to Temple II. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted October 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2010 Yeah sure, that's pretty cool. I'll copy it down. But first, is that made up or official? And Time Psyduck, what I meant is he somehow accessed a different door and escaped farther into the ship. The ship can't be that small that its too small for Akkoro to get into a second corridor. Also, what I meant by secondary is just that- a second corridor, I did not mean maintinence one or something. And, yes, I kinda was wanting you to make Tim hear the explosion and know where Akkoro was going. But as for getting into the deadlocked place, I understand. I'll change it to Akkoro getting into the airless cargo hold, which he can still get through due to his suit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted October 2, 2010 Report Share Posted October 2, 2010 Name: Cyrostanian History: Little to nothing is known about this recently discovered species, aside from a few things. Their entire species was found in unknown space stations, 8000 members per station, in 30 different stations. Every member was discovered in a Photonics Hibernation, inside blueish tubes. A few weeks ago, every member of the species came out of sleep, all within 1 day of each other. Nothing else is known about them. Homeworld: None Appearance: Humanoid Crystalline entities, they have multiple colors all throughout their bodies. Instead of feet and hands, they have spikes replacing them. They were no clothing, but seem to have natural covers for certain areas. They have a very square bodily figure, and have a thin pyramid for a head. They have no facial features, aside from a glowing blue sphere, which is probably an eye, although not confirmed. Miscellaneous: Although they cannot speak, they are extremely intelligent. They have limited psionic capabilities, allowing them to speak with each others. They keep to themselves, mostly, almost never going out alone. They are good a tech, and as far as we know, good marksmen. We currently do not know how they reproduce, or whether they do at all. How is it? Oh, and it was made up. Although that would be pretty good if made official. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Time Psyduck Posted October 2, 2010 Report Share Posted October 2, 2010 Well, it's more that the crew space at the front of the ship is all rammed into the nose to leave more space for the hold, and then the engine rooms and the majority of the other stuff at the back, near where the engines actually are. The other corridors near the door would be below the main one, accessible by ladders, rather than alongside on the same level. The ship isn't that big though - it's basically an oversized shuttle with a pair of portable engines stuck on it. In short, the bit behind the hold is where most of the space for the crew is. The bit at the front is pretty much the cockpit and a couple of bedrooms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzuxon Posted October 2, 2010 Report Share Posted October 2, 2010 [b]Username:[/b] Zzuxon [b]Name:[/b] Gi'k'k [b]Species:[/b] {For this, either fill out a app for your own species or use one already in the Species box.} [b]Age:[/b] {An approriate age for your job, please.} [b]Job:[/b] [b]Specialization:[/b] {Look to "Weapons" for information on this.} [b]*Faction:*[/b] {List what faction you belong to, or just leave blank if none at all.} [b]Appearance:[/b] {No pics. At least a paragraph.} [b]Personality:[/b] {Same as Appearance. At least a paragraph.} [b]Bio:[/b] {This is where you put down your long and boring life leading up to the present. You may think I don't care about this, but I do. Sort of.} [b]*Ship:*[/b] {This is where you describe your ship, if you have one. If you don't just leave blank. If you do, first list it's name and then either put a paragraph description or a good picture in a spoiler below it. If you want me to make a ship for you, just say "Please make a-" and then briefly describe one that will be good enough for me to find a picture for.} [b]*Crew:*[/b] {This is to go along with the Ship part. This the the crew of your ship. It can inclu I'll finish later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Quiksilver Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 @Aesir: Yeah sure. Go ahead, you can make up to three characters, and you've only made two, so...go ahead. @Mako: Awesome diagram, so I'll add it. And for the Cryostanians, add a bit more to the descriptions, and they're in. Also, are they part of the USF or not? @Time Psyduck: Got it. Will try to make Akkoro's further actions conform with what you're saying. Thank you. @Zzuxon: Alright then...I'll be waiting for you to finish that, my friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 I'll add a bit more description. And they are with nobody. They can hardely speak with other species, let alone forge alliances. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 reserve me a spot, typing up my app, it'll be up ASAIC (As Soon As I Can) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 OK, the app is done. [spoiler=App] [b]Username:[/b] Black Diamond Duelist (If this changes during the RP I'll tell you, because that is likely since I hate this name) [b]Name:[/b] Osanimu Tuygatsik (All this means is "Celestial (Osanimu) Godess (Tuygatsik)) Nickname: Osa [b]Species:[/b] Jikalhu (see the species app below) [b]Age:[/b] 15 (equivalent to a human 150 year old) [b]Job:[/b] (A job? Damn…) Assistant to the Creator of Spaceships in the U.S.F, she occasionally takes over for him and helps design some of the best. [b]Specialization:[/b] Tech [b]*Faction:*[/b] U.S.F [b]Appearance:[/b] Tall and slim, with a medium build. She has short, blue hair with green stripes. She has the trademark long, rabbit-like Jikalhu ears, and the cat-like eyes, of which hers are red. She tends to wear a neck downwards body suit, covered by intricate bullet proof scales. This body suit is a deep night black, but does not cover her feet or hands. She wears orange gloves that cover half her body suit’s forearm. In combat small finger lasers would attached over the top of these gloves. Her shoes are basically just normal sneakers, black ones with white laces. [b]Personality:[/b] Osanimu strives for accuracy, believing all flaws in the spaceships as her fault. She has a personal hatred for the Black Nova Pirates (They killed her family) and the World-Eaters (see the History part of the species app below). Her temper can flare up quick as quantum engine, and simmer down just as quickly. [b]Bio"[/b] Osanimu was born into the World Eater owned Jikalhua, and has spent most of her life training under their rule, as the Jikalhu, as part of the deal, are supposed to follow all orders the World Eaters give them. Osanimu, willingly, obeyed them, under the usumption that they had always been their rulers. Upon learning the true histort to their kind from her grandmother, Osanimu became angry, and formulated a plan of escape.... Later on, at the age of 13, this plan was put into action. Herself and a couple of the best mechanics, managed to convince the World Eaters that they needed a specific item only the small group could make. Even though the World Eaters are terrifying doestn't mean some can't be stupid as all hell. They agreed, and the group made a small set of devices. Due to the deal that was made, a small selection of World Eaters travelled to Jikalhua's Moon, Huytrsew, to test the weapons. After some convincing, they took the group too, after Osanimu told them they would forget the instructions on the way to the moon. Once on the moon, the World Eaters tried to use the device after following the groups instructions, and blew themselves up (Ok, the device was a gun of some descrition, and the instructions they were given told them how to self-destruct these weapons). The moment they were distracted by the exploding guns, the group ran to the World Eaters Space ships and left. Osanimu split from the group, and found herself in U.S.F terriotory, where she was almost mistaken for a World Eaters due to the space ship. After telling of her daring escape, she signed up for a job at the U.S.F SpaceShip Creation Industries, and was accepted.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Species - Jikalhu]Name: Jikalhu History: This race evolved from a weird hybrid, only found on their planet. This hybrid is a mixture of a rabbit and a cat, and is known as a Rab-At or a Cat-Bit, or simply as a cat-rabbit. Some of these unique hybrids walk on all fours, but some began to walk on two feet to allow them to make tools. Eventually, they evolved into the humanoid cat-rabbits, known as the Jikalhu. Their life can span hundreds of years, occasionally reaching short distances into the thousands. 1 year for the Jikalhu is equivalent to 10 human years Homeworld: The homeworld of the Jikalhu is known as Jikalhua, or “Heaven” in the language of the Jikalhu (don’t ask me what the name of the species means, I haven’t thought of that yet). This planet is one of the first planets to have cities in the sky, after the creation of the Tyrahul (The Sky City) After that, many of the Jikalhu lived in the sky, which led to common “accidents” (you should all know what these accidents were). In 2500, Jikalhua was attacked by the feared World-Eaters. In order to stop the destruction of the planet, a deal was made, and the Jikalhu became the servants of the World Eaters. (Just because of this doesn’t mean ALL of them know what they look like. Also, because Jikalhua is located in Wild Space and is too far away for anyone to pay any attention to it.) Appearance: The Jikalhu still posess traits from the cat-rabbits, having their long, silky rabbit-like ears, and their cat-like eyes. The Jikalhu’s bodies are also covered in fine, soft fur that can’t be noticed from a distance. The Jikalhu are by far one of the largest species in the Milky Way (height wise, not population), standing a colossal 10 foot for grown men, and 9’1 for grown women. The hair colors are often crazy, such as blue, or pink, or (in some cases) rainbow. Miscellaneous: They have no known official allies, and only the World Eaters are known as their enemies, since they have enslaved the Jikalhu. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Ship] [b] Ship [/b]: Her ship’s name is called the Midnight Star. It is a small, single person jet, with one of the best quantum engines. It can be equipped with many space ship guns, such as lunar missiles and such, and can also be attached to the underside of any spaceship. It has long wings that fold when ship is not airborne, and windshields that auto clean. The buttons inside that control it are very advanced, having several buttons just to start the thing, meaning you have to be very skilled to take it over and not crash into a nearby asteroid. It has a high tech radar that can see even through invisibility screens. [b]Crew[/b]: Just her [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Third app! [b]Username:[/b] TheFinalFan [b]Name:[/b] Jenny Mary-Sue Zis [b]Species:[/b] Gallifreyan [b]Age:[/b] Over 1300, but appears to be 20. [b]Job:[/b] Multidimensional Traveler, Troubleshooter, Engineer, and Field Medic [b]Specialization:[/b] Assault/Tech [b]*Faction:*[/b] None Currently. Open For Recruitment. [b]Appearance:[/b] Jenny is in her 20's, with blond hair tied into a ponytail, brown eyes, a tank top, fatigues, a pair of welding goggles around her neck, and a pair of gloves on her hands. She has a brown satchel around her waist, and a futuristic gun on her back. Her satchel is dimensionally transcendental, and her gun is a powerful projectile weapon from another universe in the year 40,965 AD. [spoiler=Once Again, the Optional Pic, Just In Case] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/11aa3y8.jpg[/IMG] [/spoiler] [b]Personality:[/b] Jenny is very similar to Vash from Trigun. She seems happy-go-lucky, and loves to wisecrack, but she has a hidden side. This side is much more serious and grave, possibly attributing to her past. [b]Bio:[/b] Jenny is the cloned daughter of the Doctor, the last of the Gallifreyans, a species of time-travelers from another dimension. Jenny built her own timeship, which was thrown out of her universe on its maiden voyage. She has been hopping from universe to universe, trying to either find a way through the time-lock around her home universe, or a proper power source for her engines. She has stopped in this universe to potentially find some technology she can use, but is having a bit of difficulty in doing so. She would be willing to help out any faction that assists her in finding a suitable power source. [b]Ship:[/b] The [i]Awful Lot of Running[/i] The [i]Running[/i] has a squat, rectangular body with a spherical cockpit attached to the front via a long neck, engines on the back, stubby wings on the sides, a heavy turret on the top, a bay door on the bottom, and an extendable ramp on the front-bottom edge. The cockpit has all sorts of stuff attached onto it, but the neck isn't long enough for anyone to even crawl through, and the body isn't big enough to house the engines, the base for the turret, and the quarters. it turns out the inside is dimensionally transcendental, meaning the inside is much, MUCH bigger inside. The ship can easily travel through space and time, and its drive isn't quantum, meaning it defies several laws of physics and metaphysics to travel around. However, it's currently resorting to sublight thrusters, meaning it needs to hitch a ride with another ship. Crew: The [i]Running[/i] is run by its onboard AI, ARoR, and has a incredibly variable crew, but currently that crew is nonexistent, leaving only Jenny and her AI. Name: Gallifreyans History: Jenny, the only Gallifreyan in this universe, and only for a short time, doesn't know the history of her universe, except that their world is inaccessible from her timeship. Interestingly, the coordinates of Gallifrey in every universe Jenny has visited have nothing there. Homeworld: Gallifrey (Doesn't exist in this universe.) Appearance: Gallifreyans appear exactly the same as humans on the outside, but their internal biology is much different. The most noticable is the fact that they have two hearts. Miscellaneous: Jenny is the only example of this species. Period. This article is only appearing because it has to. If anyone makes another Gallifreyan, I will quit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 @Black You have a slight problem with you species app. It looks good in every way, except for the fact that 100 years equals 1 human year. In you app, you said she was 150, which was equal to 15 human years. But according to your species app, if she is 150 years old, she is only 1.5 human years old. Try and fix. Make 10 years equal to 1 human year and it will make sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 [b]Username:[/b] Aesir [b]Name:[/b] Jessica "Jessi" [b]Species:[/b] Skreech [b]Age:[/b] 24 [b]Job:[/b] Bounty Hunter/Assassin [b]Specialization:[/b] Psionic-Tech [b]*Faction:*[/b] Whoever pays the most [b]Appearance:[/b] The only thing known about her true appearance is that she has long, black hair, and that her skin is very pale (this is the Skreech natural skin color, but not many know this since they usually hide in their SuSu) Her SuSu is very special, because it only covers few parts of her body, including the torso and the face. The faceplate is white with two glinting eyeholes with markings underneath them resembling tears. Her torso is covered by a plate of the same kind, and the rest of her lower body is covered by a loose, black shroud attached to the SuSu. Like Lars', her SuSu has an equipped guitar and also works as an amplifier for both her sound-tech and her psionic powers. [b]Personality:[/b] Jessi has a despisable nature, and she dislikes a lot of people. She's quite the talker, and when she begins she can go on for a long time. It's just so sad that most of her speeches is about drowning in sorrow, taming the tainted item that is your soul and spreading despair across the galaxy. She's also a bit of a seductress, and a very manipulative such. [b]Bio:[/b] You can't blame Jessi for having the personality she does. She was born on Discord, the only planet, beside their homeworld, Symphony, to be inhabitable by Skreech outside their SuSus. Unfortunately for her, Discord happened to be located a wee-bit to close to a dying sun. Yea. Tough luck. This was discovered too late, and Jessi is one of the very few survivors. Jessi ended up on Earth, where she grew up in the Orphanage of non-Earthian Orphans. Except for the natural slaughter that occured in her homelands, she didn't mind living on Earth, home of the Song Gods. She quickly picked up the guitar, like many Skreech before her, and became very skilled with it. She then became a galactic assassin. [b]*Ship:*[/b] Doesn't have one, except if Quicksilver can find a picture of one that would fit her. [b]*Crew:*[/b] N/A NOTE: Jessi plays death and goth metal. Lars plays classic and power. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 @Black: Very good app, but you've forgotten two things. 1. What Mako said. 2. You've forgotten the bio part of the person app. Add that, please. Species accepted, and once you change the character app, that's accepted too. @Mako: Cryostanians accepted. Also, please don't do my job. @TFF: NO MEANS NO. I told you over PM you can't have a Doctor Who character. How many times do I have to say it? @Aesir: Accepted. Will look for ship, but don't hold your breath. Jessi seems to have a very...original...personality. @Frybread: Talan is now accepted. But first, tell me if the ship is okay or not. Also, I doubt a Ambassador would be in the Army, let alone only a Private First Class. Please elaborate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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