El Make Posted October 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 [quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1287363387' post='4713839'] Thought you said Daven wasn't worthy of his mutation? Either way, good chapter. I kinda want to know what Daven looks like. [/quote] What abnout mutation wut? :/ Dark green hair, ninja suit, rock headband..... will make a bio soon though. [quote name='Black Diamond Duelist' timestamp='1287387388' post='4714671'] Crap... This could get interesting. 1 thing.. So Tenkai gets his @$$ kicked, and the Kazekage starts kicking the @$$ kicker's @$$? I like that idea. But I have an awkard feeling that Naoto is going to start losing. I had a similar feeling when Daven crossed paths with Koji, because it looked like Koji was going to kick @$$, but he didn't. Anyway, can't wait for Chapter 16! [/quote] Yes, Tenkai got his @$$ kicked, and Naoto comes to kick his @$$ kicker's @$$........ XD And we'll see....... :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 Chapter 16 twas added~ :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 The fight's picking up, that's good. What's Jaaku Koro mean anyway? Looking forward to the end of the fight, and if the Tsuchikage is that strong then...geez. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 Jaaku Koro is a warped japanese phrase I created. It comes from part "Evil" and part.... um... I believe it was "power". The point to that was it's the anti-matter of his clan, so it should be an "evil power" to them. If I had gone with the full phrase, it would have just..... been weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 Long wait is long. At last, a bio and chapter are released! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 26, 2010 Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 Bio friggin ruined the ending.. But good chapter bro, I guess Daven was this story's Zabuza. And now...DL has arrived >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 DL? What the...... no.......... >.> DL has NOT been introduced yet.... Anyways, it didn't notify me that you posted...... O.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 27, 2010 Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 Weird.. Well, I didn't mean a direct appearance, but Mist ninja definitely means his evil plan is beginning to happen.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted October 27, 2010 Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 Wow.....that was awesome..... When did the paper bombs get there? OMG Mass Masacre!!!!!!!!!! I have a feeling that creepy guy can revive dead people or use them like zombies. That would be scary as all hell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 Duelist, the paper bombs were there since Naoto entered the carvern. :/ And still no notification people have posted here...... >___> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Double release bishes! >:333333333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Is the spiky blue hair dude someone we know? Both chapters were good, and I'm glad the Leaf Village is coming into the story But man, you and your Curse Marks >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 :3 But, it is not the Curse Mark. It is something...... much more important to the story than a tatoo.... It is...... deeper......... :333333333333333 And spiky blue hair =/= YCM member BUT spiky blue hair = semi-important plot character. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Ah alright, looking forward to 20 then. But the CM and the Raikegan curse is basically the same thing >.> O I get it. This is where the "Mask" will come in.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Raikegan curse? Nonononononooooooo. This is more than that. Trust me, you'll find out what it is later in the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted November 4, 2010 Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 So does the Pedobear seal of approval mean your fic is plentiful of little children and/or content pleasing toward pedophiles? Cuz that was the impression I gained from that >___> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2010 Fusion, it means my FF is more epicz than yours. Cuz I got teh seal. :33333333333333333333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted November 5, 2010 Report Share Posted November 5, 2010 [color="#00FF00"][b]Actually, that seal means one of two things. A. Pedobear used your... professional service, and liked it B. You give him little lolis, and the male counterparts. It means nothing good, Ms. Ecchi. Though, the story is not too shabby, it is nothing compared to MY Writings.[/b][/color] >_< Do not take anything I say in green seriously... well, the part about writing, I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2010 Black-kun, you need to stop this stupid personae thing, its getting annoying. >.< Especially when I've waited so long for you to comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted November 5, 2010 Report Share Posted November 5, 2010 [color="#00FF00"][b]*Puts on a Monocle* Come now, old chap! It's only temporary! I'll bugger off soon enough like that ol' hag. Medusa was it?[/b][/color] Oh, it reappeared in my content =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2010 =.= On one note, I'm YAAAAAAAAY! On another, I want to shoot you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted November 5, 2010 Report Share Posted November 5, 2010 [quote name='El Make' timestamp='1288917090' post='4762230'] Fusion, it means my FF is more epicz than yours. Cuz I got teh seal. :33333333333333333333 [/quote] Define epicz. Because last time I checked, my fic had more readers than yours :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2010 [quote name='Wiseman Fusion' timestamp='1288920552' post='4762430'] Define epicz. Because last time I checked, my fic had more readers than yours [b]only because they're in it[/b] [/quote] :3 And epic =/= readers And you're only acting this way cuz you didn't think of it first. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted November 6, 2010 Report Share Posted November 6, 2010 [quote name='El Make' timestamp='1288981947' post='4763611'] :3 And epic =/= readers And you're only acting this way cuz you didn't think of it first. :3 [/quote] Still haven't given me a definition of epic. And you have YCM members in your fic too. And I don't care about pedobear signs of approvals >___> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLÂ Posted November 6, 2010 Report Share Posted November 6, 2010 I do. Anyway, yay, miracle, I'm fully caught up. I caught some spelling errors along the way. But I won't bother pointing them out. Koji is epic Tho not as epic as Daven. Daven will forever be the greatest character. AND HOW DID HE GET THE PAPER BOMBS THERE? YOU'RE TELLING ME HE USED DEUS EX MACHINA TO BEAT THE MOST PIMP CHARACTER? THAT IS JUST NOT RIGHT. BTW, DavenxSaki will forever live on BTW2, That Raikegan thing is copyright infrigement >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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