El Make Posted October 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 Yeah, I had a sore throat, runny nose, and MONSTER headache..... :/ And who are you, DL? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 5, 2010 Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 No, but it stood out to me compared to the rest of the chapter, I just felt like pointing it out since it caught my notice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 I really just wasn't in it for that last part.... lol. But anyways, yes, back to the Sand! But what of Koji is the question!? O>O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 5, 2010 Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 He'll most likely be left fatally wounded, have a long recovery, then come back to the game at some crucial moment. Amirite? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 Maybe..... I honestly have no idea........ XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 Daven.Daven?Jesus Christ do these people have 50 healing potions or something.I thought he got his body crumbled.How is he able to fight? And yeah cool new chap,but why does killing people seem normal for a 2 teenagers? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 Daven, if you had read closely, was beaten up by Saki... like... 3 days ago. :/ And well, they like to... finish the job... >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 How can that heal for only 3 days.It should take months. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 This is not the real world Dra-man, this is Naruto. You know, where they have ninja that make bones heal by turning their hand blue.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 Hmmm *Remembers Rock Lee* You have a point,but still seems a little too soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 *points to team of medical ninja with glowing blue hands* Suck it..... XD But don't worry, it's not like he has ALL of his strength or chakra, just the amounts he recovered over the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 CHAPTER 14 ADDED AT LAST! >:333333333333333333 XD Sorry for teh wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Go Kazekage kill Daven once and for all.Also was the star village under attack fake? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Dra-man, do you not realize what I have done? Let us flashback to the chat Koji had with his mom.... .............................................................................................................. Nope, the attack was not fake. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 Snap. Hope Star Village makes it out aight. Nice chap El, looking forward to Naoto vs Daven. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 We'll see what happens to the Star Village....... *cough*nuke*cough* XD And Daven vs Naoto shall be teh epic! >:T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 Noeez. Also alsong as no Gaara no Jutsu I'll look forward to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 Gaara no Jutsu? Idk? :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 I meant the Sand Control.Every Sand Village FF character seems to have it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 Nope, no Sand control here. That's just rip-off. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2010 Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuudes. Sorry about the wait, but Chapter 15 is up. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 16, 2010 Report Share Posted October 16, 2010 Yes.X-Burner Kage Version... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2010 XD Wait till you see what his mutation can do...... O>O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 18, 2010 Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 Thought you said Daven wasn't worthy of his mutation? Either way, good chapter. I kinda want to know what Daven looks like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted October 18, 2010 Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 Crap... This could get interesting. 1 thing.. So Tenkai gets his @$$ kicked, and the Kazekage starts kicking the @$$ kicker's @$$? I like that idea. But I have an awkard feeling that Naoto is going to start losing. I had a similar feeling when Daven crossed paths with Koji, because it looked like Koji was going to kick @$$, but he didn't. Anyway, can't wait for Chapter 16! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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