El Make Posted September 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Yes, and chapter 6 is done.... Not much action, but it's a build up chapter. :3 Posting NAO! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Koji=Dranzer, right? And Tenkai knows water jutsu...interesting. Like Bando from HB xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Tenkai is Lightning/Water element. Saki is Earth/TBD element. I won't spoil anything else, but I will say this: Dra-man.... only knows 1 jutsu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Best.f***ing.Kazekage.ever. And I'm Kojo.Cool stuff. If the 1 jutsu is the Kujaku from the radioactive meteor I would be so happy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Dra-man,,, you could.... sorta say that.... :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLÂ Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Finally read 5 and 6. SO knew Kujo was Dranzer when I read the name Star Village. Also........how can someone have a hole stabbed into their neck......and survive? .... And chapter 5's ending sucked D: Well, at least the format did. You told too much. Should have had them make a convo and then hint through it that it was a genjutsu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 I liked the ending.... D: And this is Naruto DL... they survive their hearts getting literally ripped out. >___> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLÂ Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 The ending was bad writing, but good lead-up >> << Also, still........the guy that got a sword to his throat was only a chuunin.... Seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Ryojo survived one ton of pressure..... >__________> And what are you, the writing police? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 DL, your avi should be Hibari as a policeman, then your title saying, "If your writing sucks, I'll bite you to death." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Fusion, if he actually did that, he would have bitten himself to death before being able to post here.... XD Yes, in case you didn't get that, I insulted his writing.... -____________- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLÂ Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 @El - Ryujo =/= Chuunin Also, I critique writing is all. BTW, you suck >_> @Fusion - ....not bad..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 DL it think it's El's first FF.Don't be so harsh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLÂ Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 No, El's fic is good. El himself sucks >_> And besides, I'm not being harsh, just pointing out what could be improved. With FUSION'S fic, now THAT was harsh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLÂ Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 No, El's fic is good. El himself sucks >_> And besides, I'm not being harsh, just pointing out what could be improved. With FUSION'S fic, now THAT was harsh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLÂ Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 No, El's fic is good. El himself sucks >_> And besides, I'm not being harsh, just pointing out what could be improved. With FUSION'S fic, now THAT was harsh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 And I thought you were a dick before... Anyways where's El.He needs to respond with a RAEG to your posts soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 But Dra-man, I like DL's critisism. It makes me a better writer. D: And still, 1 TON is a lot DL... >____> Side Note: DL... your avi.... is... what I pictured Tenkai to look like.... O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 Is that from gundam or something. Also El please give Dl a wolverine like claws.It would piss him off as hell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 That.... can... be arranged. O.o XDDDDDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 Cool.Because you know Dl always has the "water claw" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 Well, DL will definately be using WATER STYLE!!!! And his name's going to be Daisuke, for the sake of my contempt... XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 Oh god.Atleast name him Link and make him save a princes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 Well... in a way.... he will be.... XDDDDDDD *waits for DL's RAEG* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLÂ Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 >> << First off.... I'm not no goddam Kokori. Second, that's not from mother effin Gundam, it's Shaoran Lee, from Tsubasa Chronicles >:T And third,'wolverine claws.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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