El Make Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 So you're saying you want me to have a flashback with you raping Kato's sister? ._____. I can do that.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 NEW CHAPTER ADDED. >:3 Bios for Kato and Daisuke will be added soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 Damn, DL godmodded his way into victory >___> Nice Kyoja Fusion reference though, makes me wonder if Chisoku will come up xP Out of all fanfic fights I've read though, this was one of the most entertaining. Even if I got confused at some parts. And yes, a bio! Don't make me look like Fuuta though >__> Good job El. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 Bios added. :3 For all of you that will, don't ask about DL's rank. It will be expanded on later. :3 And glad to entertain Fusion. ;D Yes, your speed demon form is around. Oh, and you thought DL godmodded NOW? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 Chapter 29 added. THIS DRUG IS AWESOME. Anyways, I think I used some internet speak in this one by accident..... lol...... .-. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 [quote name='El Make' timestamp='1285532891' post='4658461'] “Wind Style: Tiger Claw” Daisuke made a handsign, and three blasts of air knocked [b]Fusion[/b] away from the docks, “Hmph, mission accomplished,” [/quote] You should fix that. And Chisoku makes it appearance, GOOD. I'm a little confused as to what the Raikegan looks like now, but it was a good chapter. But one thing: Tenkai seems to know Daisuke's name despite never learning it? Did the Sand know Daisuke was the enemy, or was that just a mistake on your part? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 You know, how it looked back in the Hebi fight but completed, not just splotched. And Fusion said he was Daisuke, so Tenkai knows it that way. And fixed. Next chapter will be bishin'. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 Alright, another chapter had been added. After this, they will be put on the next post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 Good stuff. Tenkai and Kato seemed to make a good team. I just don't get how Kato and Daisuke could still be going after their previous battle, you'd think they'd both be wiped at the start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 Fusion, did you see Kato use any powerful jutsus? Any real strenuous fighting? If you think about it, Tenkai was doing most of the fighting. As for Daisuke, he released a new form and used the mask. :3 Also, I have a question. Now what do you think of Tenkai's "power", now that Daisuke knows it as well? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 Oh, I thought that was just you hogging all the action as the main character. Guess that makes sense then. And true, I neglected to remember DL godmodding his way out of losing to me. I have no idea what to make of it, but I can't help but feel it's inspired from Bleach. Not saying I think you and DL have a "Hollow" inside you or whatever, but I have a feeling you got the idea from there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 Nope, there was actually a reason behind Tenkai doing most of the fighting. :3 Plus, if Kato has been at full power, the fight would have ended quicker. And in truth, Bleach inspired the whole "mask" part of it. And there is some sense of a hollow to the power, but its different. And it's still too early to reveal what it is. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 Aha, so I was right in that it inspired that trait. And the reason for Tenkai fighting was because Kato was exhausted, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 Yes, if Kato hadn't used all his chakra on a [s]Chidori[/s] Piercing Thunderhand, he would have fought more. BUT, he just had to go and get angry. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 I don't get how he overcomes the weakness of no Sharingan though. Is it that the Thunderhand doesn't need speed to provide power unlike the Chidori? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 Correct, it doesn't require the insane speed at which you can't counter the opponent's movement without the Sharingan. Plus how he can transfer power from one hand to another and create a trap like he did with Diasuke helps. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 ....BISH 2 on 1 against Daisuke! And he was WINNING at one point! HELL YEAH! The mask thing is cool, I must admit, altho the fact they can be punched/kicked off is...wtf And... Tenkai fought many ice soldiers. Kato fought Daisuke. They were both severely wounded. So he was able to fight more ONLY cause of the...evil...power..thing? Also, I'm cheering for the Mist Village in this, BTW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 Later you find out what the evil power thing is actually used for, and why this was so. :3 But for now, let's go with the fact that the mask is bitchin' and it makes people go DBZ.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted December 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 Chapter 31, bishes. Kato and Tenkai are on the road to [s]Viridian City[/s] the Sand. *shot* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 1, 2010 Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 I honestly thought you put Kaori in your fic for a second. And then it came to me as I read. Yukiko's her name? Kinda hard to say fast...I woulda picked something less awkward-sounding, but whatever. And man, what a b*tch >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted December 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 Dude, that's exactly the word I was using to describe her to DL...... :3 And they have other ways of saying her name, don't worry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted December 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2010 Chapter 32 added, and so Arc 2 comes to a dramatic close..... Btw, added openings. And no, they aren't Japanese. I use English, bish! >:3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 3, 2010 Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 Dude you listen to Breaking Benjamin? Nice. I dunno if they work as openings, but they're both good songs. As for the chapter, it's true, I completely forgot about the scroll too. Kudos to bringing up something from chapter 1 and connecting it to the present. Kato will pwn in the battle...I know it. Owait, El's the author. Damn. I think Oson is the Raikegan bad guy, but I could be wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted December 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 Actually, DL's the one who told me about it. Yes, we talk about our FFs. :3 And they were picked as teh openings for special reasons. <3 And Kato will do pretty good, but who knows who's gonna win. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 3, 2010 Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 I found out about them on itunes after I bought a Linkin Park song. "If you like Linkin Park, you may also like..." And it was there with 2 other bands. Who'da thunk it? And looking forward to that conflict there. You making endings or no? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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