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[color=#474747][font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2][size=2]Name: Daniel Warren[/size][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#474747][font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2][size=2]Gender: Male[/size][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#474747][font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2][size=2]Age: 16[/size][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#474747][font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2][size=2]Appearance:[/size][/size][/font][/color]
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[/size][/size][/font][/color][color=#474747][font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2][size=2]Personality: Daniel is a bit of a know it all. He believes he knows anything and isn't one to cross, which is easily accomplished. He will tear through you in a second with his short temper, which is surprisingly met with his romantic side and his lust for romance. He believes no one should be alone but he feels so alone currently. In his quest for good he strives to find the love of his life. [/size][/size][/font][/color]
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[/size][size=2]Bio: When Daniel was born his mother contracted a deadly disease and when she died she held Daniels hand. She prayed some prayer and passed away. Her body slowly fading away she entered Daniel's body. She has been with him ever since, giving him powers of their ancestors. She runs magic through his veins and fuels him to keep going on in life. When he was very young he mastered close combat. Many criminal groups have asked him to be a hit-man but he always refused. He knew his life wasnt meant to be spent killing mindlessly, it was meant to help the ones who needed it.[/size][/size][/font][/color]
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[color=#474747][font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2][size=2]Weapons: Blade Crafted from his mother before his birth. It is said to be enchanted by the spirits of their ancestors.[/size][/size][/font][/color]
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[color=#474747][font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2][size=2][/size][/size][/font][/color]1) Swift: Increase Speed (amount of increase chosen by the moderator each time)
[font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2]3) Ignition: Engulfs the blade with fire for extra elemental damage[/size][/font]
[font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2][/size][/font][font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2]4) Freeze: Covers the blade in ice for extra elemental damage[/size][/font]
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[color=#474747][font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2][size=2]Techniques:[/size][/size][/font][/color]
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[color=#474747][font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2][size=2]Romantic (can seduce women easily)[/size][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#474747][font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2][size=2]Extreme Speed[/size][/size][/font][/color]
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[/size][size=2]Other: his biggest weakness is becoming tired, which happens often[/size][/size][/font][/color][font="tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif"][size="2"][color="#474747"] [/color][/size][/font]
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Apologize for the delay; RL issues and stuff have been getting in the way. (It's been happening way too often recently...)

I'll have a post up in a bit, after I get some sleep and can think coherently.

Anyway as for dtwrules and your character Daniel:

Everything is good, except for your powers and whatnot. First, I never thought I'd have to say this, but no mind-altering powers. At all. Not even minor ones that affect NPCs. Basically, strange mental screwups are pivotal to the plot, and it's important that only certain people can access such ability.

Second, I'll need some clarifications on your speed-related spells and powers. Just more description and clarification is fine; as it stands, for example, I think anyone using the light-speed power, even for a fraction of a second, to even move anywhere, would cause said person to end up in a wall with their clothes burnt off. Basically, it's not something simple and straightforward, and can be such an important factor in fights that it needs to be clarified.


Alright. Off to bed, then I'll make a post when I awake in 6-10 hours. Goodnight!
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