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Name:Kevin of Dorshojrakaw(aka-Kevin the dork)
Age:16
Sex:male
Element:wind
Appearance:wears a green shirt with a blue swirl that looks hypnotizing and a pair of normal jeans.
on special occasions he will wear a green shirt and blue shorts.
Elemental Spirit:Jorshow a 3 headed bird that can fly at speeds up to 500 mph.
Bio:Discovered his power When he was peacefully sitting on his front porch
when hand reached for him from the heavens and brought him into
the clouds after a long battle wrestling Kevin beat the thing battling
him when Kevin accedentilly used his signutare spell hypnotyzing tornado.
he then fell out of the sky and in front Magic Academy and began training.
Personality:Mostly quit and mysterious but can be fun to be around once he get's to know you.
Spells: signature
hypnotizing tornado:A tornado that spins in such a way that it will hypnotize the opponent before slamming into them.
others
dust devil:Sends a a small dust devil at a opponent that slams sand into their face.Hard.
heaven wind arm:A move that will form a arm of wind and the opponent into the sky.
[spoiler=rule 10]magical starsing[/spoiler]close eneugh
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Let's see. Bio without unnecessary returns:

Discovered his power When he was peacefully sitting on his front porch when hand reached for him from the heavens and brought him into the clouds after a long battle wrestling Kevin beat the thing battling him when Kevin accedentilly used his signutare spell hypnotyzing tornado. he then fell out of the sky and in front Magic Academy and began training.

Really bad grammar as well. Not accepted.
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[quote name='SleepingKirby' timestamp='1286122736' post='4676168']



Really bad grammar as well. Not accepted.
[/quote]I can't help my grammar besides you ask people to join but then they try to you correct them on every single thing when they submit their app!
Whats your problem?
What do you mean by Bio without unnecessary returns?
Besides I did everything asked!
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[quote name='kevin7653' timestamp='1286123270' post='4676204']
I can't help my grammar
[b]Yes you can. Or ask a teacher. [/b]
besides you ask people to join but then they try to you correct them on every single thing when they submit their app!
[b]No, only if they did something wrong, or if it would interfere greatly with the plot.[/b]
Whats your problem?
[b]Not a thing. Yours?[/b]
What do you mean by Bio without unnecessary returns?
[b]Pressing "enter" to meet the line requirement. Starting a new paragraph where it isn't necessary.[/b]
Besides I did everything asked!
[b]You didn't even spell the words right. Also see above. Bio must be 5+ lines.[/b]
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