Trio of DEF

[Blake]

Fuse, update D=

 

I need a distraction.

[Fusion X. Denver]

Done deal.

Guys, got another content too long message. I moved the 4th arc to post 11, just two under the rest of Part 2.

I think a lot of you will go 0>0

Hopefully.

Though I really want to see what DL and El will think :D

[BT]

THIS IS THE FINAL ARC AND I'M HANGIN AROUND IN SOMEONE ELSE'S ROOM >>>>>>>:UUUUUUU

[Fusion X. Denver]

Bro, I've established the groundwork towards building your friendship with Hito.

Tis a good thing.

[BT]

.................................................... yeah

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

Chapter 14 finished...I'm moving to slowly but baby I've got more in me. Bring it on! *Starts reading chapter 15.*

[Big Bad Pennar]

Damn, i thought Flandre and Deus would win..... owait...

 

That kinda fits in my fear of how strong i am against an anethsetic, but then again, sleeping pills do not affect me a lot either

 

lolexistenceoffusesballs

 

well well, this chapter may as well seal the fact that there is another Spy in the inactive, cause who in the hell knows what Creator may have put in El between chapters

[Fusion X. Denver]

Damn, i thought Flandre and Deus would win..... owait...

 

It's not that you two were weak or anything, he was just insanely strong. Insanely.

You'll see what I mean later on.

But wait, are you saying El's a spy?

Idk about that considering he was blackmailed unbeknown to everyone else .-.

[Sploda]

>Implying that Creator didn't secretly plant homing/spying devices in people.

 

Oh you.

 

This Chapter was straight out of a frikin Anime, Starts raining when DL falls, yeah my left ball sack.

 

Try to be more original, plz.

 

jkjk

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

Well I'm beginning to burn out. That's it for tonight. It doesn't even seem like I was able to finish chapter 17 but don't worry. When I'm back I'll have new motivation although my rate of reading will most likely be significantly lowered. Well we'll see then.

[Super Chaos Sonic]

O_O

 

I was about to kill Hito??? Wow...but still, I would've loved to see the outcome of that battle, if they did fight.

 

Anyway, awesome second chapter to the Final Arc, Fusion ^^

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

Okay. I finally finished what's on the first post that I'm assuming is part 1.

 

Edit: And part 2. :/

[Fusion X. Denver]

You mean up to 18?

Yeah, that's part 1. Part 2's on post 9 in case you couldn't find it (probably did though).

Didja see that twist in 18 coming or what?

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

No I did not. I was seriously mindf*cked and usually I can just nullify those kinds of things with my "don't give a sh*t" attitude but woah.

[Fusion X. Denver]

Kind of a dramatic genre switch now that I think about it >.>

Now that I think about 30...since I'm going away next weekend, I'll try getting it out before then, but no guarantees.

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

It was really just all the Crab stuff that blew me away.

 

I'm trying to sneak in some reading while my friend is playing Lost Planet. <_<

[Fusion X. Denver]

Oddly enough, Dane said that too...

Is it really a big deal to traumatize Crab like that >.>

Ah well, it is what it is.

[Shadow Zero]

*finishes reading chapter 29* Interesting.

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

*Eye twitch.* Okay, I recognized that picture of the girl right away and now there's this scene. I'm on chapter 19 and El is making his moves on Rui at the pole. Yeah, I watched that same video man. :/

 

I don't want to be offensive or anything and I don't know if this was already mentioned but I got the reference. :3

[Jake the Sage]

Alright Ladies and Gentlemen!

Another 'Trio of DEF' chapter, another wonderfully funny review by yours truly ^^

 

Dad I think you're getting too ahead of yourself to think you're even funny at all <_<

 

Meh, well lets gets going!

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"Flandre looked down and yelped, discovering that he had no limbs."

 

I'm pretty sure if I looked down and noticed I didn't have any limbs, I wouldn't be yelping and then carrying on a conversation so quietly. I'd go like this.

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Jake felt something odd and looked down, seeing that he was completely devoid of any limbs. For a minute he was silent before exploding into a fit, "Where The F*ck Are My ARMS! I MEAN . . . I CAN ALWAYS GET MECHANICAL LEGS . . . BUT I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT MY ARMS! AHHHH!!!"

 

Jake fainted a minute after when someone hit him, very hard, with a desk upside the head.

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[holding desk]

 

It was a joke Lora

 

Awe . . .

 

 

Okay, never mind, getting clobbered over the head with your own chopped off limb is DEFINATELY worse than what I came up with.

 

"Deustodo strapped on a glove, "Right now."

I'd be rolling my limbless ass off the table and down the halls if I saw Deustodo put on a single glove and claim he was going to preform surgery on me 8O

 

 

D*mn it took a long time for Flandre to pass out with the gas.

Deustodo should've hit him with a desk [holds desk] that always works.

Yes it does, yes it does *nods head* But it was a good joke none-the-less ^^

 

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*watches as Fusion has a fit over his lost girlfriend and scowls*

 

Dude

 

*he continues until I smack him upside the head*

 

No seriously Fuse, the entire drama about loosing the girl was moving, but dwelling on it makes your guy truly look pathetic. About this time I'd expect him to be simmering with hate over the entire ordeal, planning every possible way to get revenge on Life for taking her away

 

 

Yeah and Black's entire speech about faith just irked me to no end.

 

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"I don't believe you"

 

*pops in*

 

And I don't believe it's not butte*shot*

 

[reloads gun] Moving on . . .

 

 

"If he's with his girl, he's probably getting it in."

 

Gittity

 

Who else but Quagmire 8D

DAD!!!

Couldn't help it 83

 

 

I have a question!

Go ahead Lora . . .

If this Blake Hollow guy just appeared, and DL doesn't know for a fact he is actually a Fake Type Knight other than the guy's own word, why is he being so open to him?

Good point 8 /

 

 

". . . I wont let anyone feel down so long as I'm around!"

thinking to self, "Oh God, you're one of those guys who, everytime something bad happens even if it is something small, you just gotto hug it out don't'cha?"

 

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Rember folks, these guys have had years of unsupervised physical training to be able to escape a hospital in a full body cast and STILL run atop roofs without being noticed

The more you know d(^u<(d

 

 

Okay remember that entire spill I gave about revenge for people being killed, Sonic is showing exactly what Chris should be doing

 

 

I love BT's question at the end XD It's something I honestly think he'd ask.

 

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SHORT PART 8D

 

*falls down*

OMFG 8O

 

And baby makes . . . however many we have, I don't count XD

Secret Agent Ninja BABY!!!

 

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Fluttershy Farm . . . like how you included the name changes of people into the novel too

 

". . . and a hoe in his hands."

 

8O

Not the kind you're thinking of Dad

B-Bu-But! It would FINALLY make this a higher rating that PG-16 XO

Deal with it

TT~TT

 

 

"The man fingered the hoe's *gets hit with a desK*

I'm not even letting you FINISH that sentance Dad

XD

 

 

LOL It's horrible that Nexev is so diobalical he calls up the ONE person who knows to pay for something he wants XD

 

Also, am I the ONLY one who sees the good guys ridding these pink magical ponies into the final fight with 'Through the Fire and Flames" by Dragonforce blarring as a theme song . . .and yet it is STILL kick ass?

*sees the many raised hands*

Thought so XD

 

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'NOTHER SHORT PART 8D

 

 

*falls on the ground and can't breath*

 

Dad (=_=) I KNOW you're a pervert and all, but isn't this a bit too much?

 

Poor Max-dono XDDD

 

 

BEST F*CKING PART IN THE ENTIRE CHAPTER!!!

 

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Pillow- Hollow . . . I get it now 83

 

 

I think you should've had it a bit more secretive of why El joined the Inactive instead of having him just blurt it out like that. It'd be kinda cool if, to protect his lover/girlfriend, he'd just calmly and cooly answer, "Yes."

It'd also add a bit more suspense to the plot with them not knowing why El betrayed them, or not having a good answer.

 

Naruto referance FTW.

 

I agree with Yuki on this one.

Is it just because she is a girl and possibly hot?

That is beside the point <_< A man fighting for friendship, or any other abstract reason, will ALWAYS loose to a man fighting with/for everything he has; likewhise for a man who has nothing left too lose but his own life.

 

 

Oh! DL got called by his first name! First time in a long time you get reminded his name is Daisuke

Why is it when I'm reading the conversation between DL and Yuki I think Naruto/Kyubi relationship here? 8 /

 

 

*hits the ground*

Ouch that had to be insulting about the balls thing, even if you wrote it, Fusion XD

 

 

AAaaaandd . . . Phantasm El gives the finger, nice.

 

 

Why does it rain everytime someone dies or gets seriously hurt on a rooftop?

*floating above the city, zipping my pants up*

Rain?

8 O

Oooooooooooooohhhh! Yeah . . it's rai*gets hit with a desk*

 

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To sum it all up . . . I wasn't even mentioned DX

 

Dad!

 

Okay, okay, seriously this actually wasn't my favorite chapter after reading it all. I dunno . . . kinda seemed too random and "all over the place".

 

In the end it was just a few real important things happening, like the fact DL and El have been forced to join the Inactive, leaving only Fusion to lead the group, and a bunch of other stuff that could've been omitted.

 

From what I read, and expect, the REAL fighting/war is going to begin next Chapter when we get back to Yugo City

 

And I finally make another appearance [thumbs up]

 

A~hem . . . also I'd like to state an idea I've figured out to prevent the chips in Inactive member's bodies from going, well, BOOM.

 

An EMP, electromagnetic pulse, that fries the chip leaving it completely useless. I like this idea because it not only saves those who need to be saved but makes it where we can recruit other Inactive into the Banned for the final war- kinda like how one zombie bits a human that human becomes a zombie . . . yeah we're the zombies. ZOMBIES FTW 8D

 

BTW Fusion, just a remark that I remembered when you had the entire Yuki/Daisuke fight, most of my actual power comes from "the dark side" if you will. I use evil to kill evil while all the while being a good guy

 

Who just happens to be a pervert

 

I'm complicated X3

[Fusion X. Denver]

1. The reason Flandre didn't freak out was because he never had actual limbs in the first place. So losing his fake limbs wasn't as OSH*T as losing his real ones were.

2. Chris is sad because he loves Rosa more than he hates Life.

3. Wait, who's in the full body cast?

4. Magical f*cking ponies are f*cking kickass.

5. I could have had El be secretive, but D.L is the only one who knows everything...and he's gone .-.

Plus, wanted to do some character development between El and D.L...no homo.

 

I know you weren't mentioned, didn't mention Stark or Smesh either :/

I was trying to develop minor plot points surrounding characters for most of the chapter before leading up to El vs DL, needed to do a lot of scattered stuff to do it. But I see what you mean :T

 

Life has thought of that for the chips, or he wouldn't have lasted this long. And they're not the only method he's using to control them.

Chapter 30 is when the war starts.

...should I have put that part in a spoiler?

[Jake the Sage]

Wasn't Thomas in a full bhody cast or . . . I know you said he had SOME kind of injuries 8 /

 

But either way I just didn't like the entire randomness of it. You can explain away everything else, but that just made it flop for me. BTW don't mind not being mentioned

 

 

And no, you shouldn't've put it in a spoiler

[Fusion X. Denver]

No no, Thomas just had his chest wrapped in bandages and stuff, not a full body cast.

Was it really that random though?

1. Character development for Flandre

2. Character development for Black...and Fusion

3. Introduced a new character that will hopefully make everyone's super special awesome list

4. Character development for Hito and Sonic

5. Aqua's preggers

6. I will not deny that Nexev buying a pink magical f*cking pony was random

7. Nor will I deny J-Max getting played was random...but funny

8. El vs DL was the point of the whole chapter

I dunno, maybe it's cuz I'm the author that I don't see it being random. I can see where you're coming from, I just disagree personally.

 

EDIT: Just remembered NB's post.

Yeah, that guy's videos are kinda funny xP

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

*Smacks self.* That's what I get for quickly looking through things. Major spoiler alert. Learn to spoil please. I'm as curious as a cat sometimes.

[Jake the Sage]

Well I think if it had more of a "flow" to it the chapter wouldn't be so "choppy"

Like Black says something that links it to the next jump off point in the story.

 

I'll just chalk this up to the calm before the storm *nods head*

 

He's just saying that so you can get to writting the next chapter or bios

 

LIES!!!