Sploda Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Is it still considered spam when the links to those videos contain a message that's actually relevant to the conversation? When the conversation isn't about the story, yes. And before you say 'but it is related' no it isn't, It's about Jake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Chapter 28 is out.I think the ending was the closest I've gone towards PG-16 0_oNot a lot of people got screentime this chapter, but this was mainly setting things up for the next chapter/arc. Hope you all enjoy it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Now for bios! XDMaybe 83 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 So... Much... Drama-*head explodes* Great chapter. Now, as Jake said: Bios! (PS I noticed you post pics for new characters. Want me to get one for myself or you'll get one yourself? Or am I totally being narcissistic and won't get a pic? :D ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Nah, you can get a pic if you want. Just try resembling Rosa or Umbra in some way, if possible.And...I just realized I forgot a pic for Jay.Glad you liked it, gotta go find a pic >.>EDIT: I am editing Jay's description for long, blue hair.Because I can.[spoiler=And here she is] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Nah, you can get a pic if you want. Just try resembling Rosa or Umbra in some way, if possible.And...I just realized I forgot a pic for Jay.Glad you liked it, gotta go find a pic >.>O u. K, cuz I had a pic in mind. I'll find/post it tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 My Review of Ch. 28Okay using your own severed finger in battle. THAT is inventive thinking 8OAwe Archwing died . . . "I'm sorry, Mrs. Seijo . . . we have some bad news."My Reaction- OH SNAP! 8O Day and Naishi convo = A catch up "Right . . . are you going to try to finish him [Life] yourself?""If the opportunity arises, I'll bite that b*stard's head off" THAT made me laugh out loud, seriously XDDD Go Creator (^^)bI didn't get screen time, but I got mentioned 8D A pre-recorded message that guesses things right XD funnehGeneral Rule of being a Bad Guy . . . NEVER tell the "good guy" you have a time limit B | it's just common sense. NO! They got El Make TToTT I swear, if this was real, I'd personally torture and kill Lily and Kenta for doing that to a girl[/seeths] But good chapter and, as you said, it was leading up to an even BETTER chapter than my God man! Keep writting.No, no . . . f*ck the bios . . . more chapters please >8DBut I still want the bios XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 I know 2 people who are going to predict EXACTLY what happens next chapter.If you're one of those 2 people, don't spoil it :3Yes, the drama next chapter will be even MORE intense.I'm back in the writing game and soon I shall bang out something like 0>0Always love your feedback Jake, lot of depth behind your reaction x) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 (edited) Well I write it as I am reading it, so it's all "on the spot" And I swear you have to have the in-character Jake follow El so I can1.) Help rescue Rui and El2.) Kill Lily and Kenta3.) Get another hit and run on Life4.) Kill Lily and Kenta5.) Appear once more6.) I forgot what I was going to put here so . . . Kill Lily and Kenta XD EDIT: Oh! What ever happened to Lora? 8 /Is she still in Yugo? Edited March 23, 2011 by Jake the Sage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 You'll be back soon enough.Lora is indeed in Yugo.Need to find that pic of her again, forgot to save it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Ah that figures, I was wondering why my daughter hadn't appeared. Though I DO find it kinda odd you can't have me in ANY story without my most prominant created character in tow X3 And I'll give you a picture right now ^^[spoiler=Lora] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Hawt.I can already think of the comedy relief that will ensue...I won't lose it this time, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 *hits Fusion with a desk* You have no idea how much I am actually attatched to that character[seeths more]But yes comedy relief will be plentiful with her around ^^BTW she is my step-daughter, adopted when she was 8 . . . but still considers me her real father. I actually have an entire family believe it or not 8 | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Aha.To be honest, I don't think I'll have time to develop that beyond Lora unless it's in a one-shot, where I can do pretty much anything.Does Lora have any specialties that I should know about? Like with weapons or stuff? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 (edited) Hmmm . . . actually if we condense everything down to the parameters this novel has already put in place, she is just about the same as me but on a weaker state. Normally she can change into a chinese hook sword with Nicolas, another prominant character always by my side normally, but that cannot be used. Another ability that she wouldn't be allowed, which she normally has, is energy blasts. Lets see *thinks* She'd probably be able to use anything as a weapon regardless due to her training with me. A cloth spear, using a coin like a bullet, pretty much like that if you ask me. EDIT: Also I know you only have time for Lora dn myself, I was just mentioning them. In fact I'm already writting a story that includes all of the "family" ^^ so no worries Edited March 23, 2011 by Jake the Sage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Alright, so she's like Nexev in a way.Duly noted! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Well not as serious as him, she is tomboyish, but can get very embarrassed easily if someone says the right thing at the right time. Oh! And she is forgetful quite often, which lead to her having to learn to use anything as a weapon ^^; I'm not forgetful dad! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 [is secretly reading the convo] Prove it. Name four people that were in YCMRP. EDIT: So that my post isn't total spam: Fusion, I'm having trouble finding Umbra's pic. Can you maybe link? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Overall, I like the chapter.Just one thing... one of Roxas's quotes..."Her loss is the worst thing that could have happened.”Is he supposed to be naive? Cause it seems like he is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 i dun get itHow's that naive? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Red earrings? I thought Thomas had purple earrings...Ah I guess it's no big deal. Also, Lily Noe? xD -Dies from laughter, or because the actual Kokonoe may read this post and kill me because I laughed at the name.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 It was that thing Ragnarok gave you during that interrogation, remember?And yeah...sometimes the names are kinda..You know >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Because said statement implies:Your girlfriend died. Nothing worse can happen. It's not like the world can possibly explode and you're the last survivor or anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 ..you intellectualize a lot, don't you >.>He was extending his sympathies to Chris, since in Chris' mind, it can't get any worse.This is feelings, not logic.And I got a good start on 29, it's flowing nicely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 El Make's gonna be an inactive? although it may be a good point as El's been inactive for a while Oh Puhlease, i'm at least 4 times more Sadistic than Lily and Kenta Combined, I might wonder what would happen if Lily were to Versus against Flandre >=3 I still wonder what will happen to Flandre... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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