DL Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 ......... My eyes actually teared up when Chris found Danny cheating on him. (yeah, it was emotional, so fuckin what? >:T) Also the fight was....well, I would have prefered the lyrics NOT to be there, but meh, andds a nice effect I suppose. And the awesome contrast was that in the next scene, between Kari and Kana, something light-hearted, and about a possible love, happens xD Altho Kari called me Link, then Daisuke, then Link. pick one >> As for the meh... Well, come on man, don't tell us Sonic decided never to blah blah blah.... let the story tell his mindset FOR us, not the narative, it ruins the dream. I seriously, no seriously, thought he was going to walk toward the sunset, and it would be over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 ......... My eyes actually teared up when Chris found Danny cheating on him. (yeah, it was emotional, so fuckin what? >:T) Also the fight was....well, I would have prefered the lyrics NOT to be there, but meh, andds a nice effect I suppose. And the awesome contrast was that in the next scene, between Kari and Kana, something light-hearted, and about a possible love, happens xD Altho Kari called me Link, then Daisuke, then Link. pick one >> As for the meh... Well, come on man, don't tell us Sonic decided never to blah blah blah.... let the story tell his mindset FOR us, not the narative, it ruins the dream. I seriously, no seriously, thought he was going to walk toward the sunset, and it would be over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 Chapters 8-10....very awesome. Beginning of 8 made me a little bit interested. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 My hair may appear brown for no reason at times? =.=I'm 6'1", not 5'11"!=,= Yeah you're right, I'll take that out.As far as heights go, El, this takes place one year ago. You and DL are juniors right now and I'm a sophy >.>So when the fic goes into the next year, you will be as you are now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 So when is Chapter 10 coming and my bio???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Your bio, probably tomorrow.Chapter 10, hopefully tomorrow.I'm gonna do bios by order of appearance (not cameos) so that should give you guys a good idea as to when to expect yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Fine fine, chapter 10 better be good then if your making me wait for my bio. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 *looks at bios* WHAT ZE FAUK?! Who IS that in my bio.............? Also, Fusion, I wear glasses almost every second of my life, except to go to sleep, and take baths now. Before, yeah, I only used them during school :3 And...BTW....>> Yuki...he never made any agreement with me to behave. He just does things on a whim, whatever they are, such as hurting people, causing people sadness, or just simply having fun (refer to numbers 1 and 2) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Nin-pimp, you're such a needy person for god sakes.... >____> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Yuki doesn't show up because I'm here, not out of a deal or bargain though. He simply knows what will happen, actually he doesn't but he has a good enough idea. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 DL, it's Daisuke Link.And Daisuke switches from glasses to contacts depending >.>I never said he made an agreement with him...just that Deus is trying to help him with the personas.I haven't gone into detail with that yet, patience. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Look over the Deus and Creator talk about that...I'm pretty sure he said agreement. Also...I don't weak contacts... BTW.......choose one. Because a character should either call a character one name or the other, trust me. Kari calling me Link, then Daisuke, then Link, makes it seem like your mistake. @Nex - O,o xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Kari: Refers to DL as Link, but in some tender/nice moments, will refer to him as Daisuke.Yuki: I said YOU were willing to compromise with them, not the other way around (that's the problem really)As for you not wearing contacts, it's a habit you're forced into by Donovyn as glasses can break and impair you on missions.I'll work that in.I don't know if I can do chapter 10 tonight...but I definitely can during school tomorrow.In the mean time, I'll concoct some bios. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Eh, if no chapter tonight...at least I can read some of the bios. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Oh goody, I get to see my High School Bio gone Internet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 ...I'll believe the contacts >> And also, yeah, that was it, about the personalities... But... .... Kari calls me LINKY in those moments, and Link/Dai anywhere else =_='' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 Oh, well then her switching between calling you Daisuke and Link is normal then, and she'd call you Linky when you're there with her for those moments, so it's fine.Sorry I haven't made any bios, my English assignment is due tomorrow and I have a test I forgot about >__> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 Fine, I'll accept, only cause I know you're too lazy to edit >_> But yeah, she better call me Linky. Which brings me to DM's line... "Link...you prefer that to Linky, right?" COme on man >_> Lame... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 Fine, I'll accept, only cause I know you're too lazy to edit >_> But yeah, she better call me Linky. Which brings me to DM's line... "Link...you prefer that to Linky, right?" COme on man >_> Lame... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 wow... when the new chapter... when will my cross be fixed! o(;o;)o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 Fusion for the love of god post chapter 20 awredy >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 Dont you mean 10 Dranzer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 its probably a typo.... FUSION MAKE SUMMARIES!!! I HAVE READING XP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 No >.>Sorry I've been keeping you guys waiting, my whole morning was wasted between stupid school procedures for sick dismissal and napping for 5 hours, and picking up my sister from school, it's been hectic.I'll get working on chapter 10 as soon as I can.Also, check out this cool banner BT made for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 ok...BTW thnx for the credit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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