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I've already decided every character introduced so far will be in the war :/

 

Guys, I made a major goof.

When Umbra and Jake first talked, I said Umbra graduated a few years prior to them and that he was good friends with Rinne.

But how would that be possible if "Umbra" was created when Life blackmailed Tulo?

Simple, it's not.

 

So I went and edited. Now, in chapter 24, it says Umbra graduated from YCM several years prior to Jake and Rinne, and also switched his forged identities around in 27.

 

“Chris, listen to me. My whole life that my daughter knows of is a big, fat lie. I’ve led this double life for as long as I could remember. Ever since Life conned me into working for him, I assumed the identity of Tulo Seijo in order to provide my family with a normal life and to hide my true identity from old friends like Jake and Rinne."

 

I hope that covers it...sorry about that. If you see anything else that's a discrepancy, please tell me >.>

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I like the end of the flash back where we walk out like we are the A-Team or something.

 

Could the impostor be...Pichu?

 

Being related to DMG was unexpected, and funny how my name is still odd compared to the others.

 

Your father is a moron btw.

 

Now...Where is Ultima and I better not come back with Cybernetic implants.

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I know, right? xD

 

The impostor is not Pichu, all 3 of those guys would have recognized him >.>

One hint: it was someone who was briefly referenced AGES ago. It's not overly important to the plot, so that's why I'm playing this guessing game =P

 

Enzax Aito is kind of a cool name I think, and yeah, I was trying to do a twist there x)

 

I know he is -_-

 

Well, you're lying in it bleeding on its cold interior, though you didn't lose any limbs, so no cybernetic implants for you :T

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I know, right? xD

 

The impostor is not Pichu, all 3 of those guys would have recognized him >.>

One hint: it was someone who was briefly referenced AGES ago. It's not overly important to the plot, so that's why I'm playing this guessing game =P

 

Enzax Aito is kind of a cool name I think, and yeah, I was trying to do a twist there x)

 

I know he is -_-

 

Well, you're lying in it bleeding on its cold interior, though you didn't lose any limbs, so no cybernetic implants for you :T

 

I wonder what I left in the Control room? (if I was going there to fly out then you don't know me well enough yet).

 

Cool Name is Cool, but still out there.

 

And are old bios being revamped? If so I'd like to supply the picture for me.

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Bios will probably be revamped at some point, though some like yours will contain spoilers about their character, so I'll put that info in spoilers.

If your pic at least somewhat resembles the one I already have, that's fine.

You were going to get something that will be so amazingly epic at some point in the future.

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If you think about it, it kind of makes since my new appearance. Taking on a more Soldier like appearance, plus I'm cool like that.

 

Colonello-katekyo-hitman-reborn-9326105-411-508.jpg

 

 

And of course I was, if I didn't then I wouldn't be Creator.

 

Although, fyi Enzax prefers CQC.

 

[spoiler=Possible assistance to developing my character]Seeing as how my Character wanted to distance himself from his father, perhaps have Kingijun be an expert CQC (Close-Quaters-Combat) Specialist, driving Creator to not only be an Inventor (Rather than warrior) but also to try and avoid CQC combat by using ranged-weapons. In reality Enzax (Creator) could be an expert with CQC weapons (Specifically a CQC Knife and possibly Hidden blades like off of Assassin's Creed) and now that War has erupted and with new revelations, Enzax begins to embrace his Military training/inherited skills to further his own cause.

 

This would also mean that Enzax (Creator) is a martial Arts expert, thus leading him to be deadly in CQC.

 

 

Just a thought.

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Thought noted my friend.

And Colonello?

...You want me to say you dyed your hair blond?

I'm gonna have Icy dye his blue and straighten it for my own personal convenience (hooray for reversing established appearances for easier pic finding!).

Other than the hair color, I'd say it fits you.

 

Also, I'm torn on something.

I have two really good images for Rui.

[spoiler=I've pictured her as this for most of the time]

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[spoiler=But then I just found this, and it might suit her more as "El's girlfriend"]

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Which do I choose :~:

Or rather, which is more fitting?

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To help out with that, here comes a stream of links from Enzax's days as a member of a debate team:

 

http://www.variety.com/article/VR1117974404?refCatId=14

 

 

http://www.media-awareness.ca/english/issues/violence/effects_media_violence.cfm

 

http://web.mit.edu/comm-forum/papers/jenkins_ct.html

 

And it was an awesome name, it was either that or Dr.Creator which was to meh imo.

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*unseaths Dou and Sei*

 

Life shall truly pay for his crimes!

 

Also cool story bro XD

yay I finally got to say that

 

I'm happy with my screen time considering I expected to appear later. Also Fusion I'm alright with you not going with my suggestions, this is just as good.

I think the next chapter should begin with a sum up of what has happened so everybody can get a recap.

 

And my bio should be finished before the new chapter begins B |

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*unseaths Dou and Sei*

 

Life shall truly pay for his crimes!

 

Also cool story bro XD

yay I finally got to say that

 

I'm happy with my screen time considering I expected to appear later. Also Fusion I'm alright with you not going with my suggestions, this is just as good.

I think the next chapter should begin with a sum up of what has happened so everybody can get a recap.

 

And my bio should be finished before the new chapter begins B |

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

NO RECAPS

Recaps are a mortal sin among series. If you want a fikin recap, read the prvious chapters. Recaps are an excuse to procrastinate writing the real story.

And piss everyone off that they didn't get the chapte they've been waiting for

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