Fusion X. Denver Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Nope, didn't even know you read the fic. But great to hear, thanks xDUpdate: Chapter 27's 28 pages long at the moment...still got some more to go.Sorry, got nothing done today since I was gone all day, and I'll probably be buried in homework tomorrow :/I'll give daily updates so you guys are up to speed, I'll try getting it out before the week ends (Friday night deadline?) I'll try my best. You all might find this funny or not, but today this kid on my forensics team asked me if it was true I was writing a novel.Note to self: Less sloppy, more tactful when writing DEF in class :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Nope, didn't even know you read the fic. But great to hear, thanks xDUpdate: Chapter 27's 28 pages long at the moment...still got some more to go.Sorry, got nothing done today since I was gone all day, and I'll probably be buried in homework tomorrow :/I'll give daily updates so you guys are up to speed, I'll try getting it out before the week ends (Friday night deadline?) I'll try my best. You all might find this funny or not, but today this kid on my forensics team asked me if it was true I was writing a novel.Note to self: Less sloppy, more tactful when writing DEF in class :/Note to Fusion: Be truthful and tell them to mind their own business. Also get a cookie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 *hands Fusion a cookie* Yeah I say that sometimes when people ask me what I want to do, write a novel of course, but I generally get met with cracks from my family. I can honestly say the Family Guy bit between Stewie and Brian about Brian's book HAS been used on me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Lol that's funny Jake xDOn another note, I finished writing chapter 27.54 pages.54.It's staggering.I'm adding it now, but the editing will take a while...I'll edit in my commentary on the chapter and the official update when I finish. But just letting you guys know, it's a daunting read. 54 pages is like...a good, long while.So keep that in mind before you start, might want to make sure you have an hour to spare >.>Or just read Part 1, then take a break before Part 2.I dunno, do whatever the hell you please.Just know this...it's epic.SO epic.I think.You'll be blown away...and I don't think anyone would think I'd write the ending I wrote.Or maybe they did, I dunno.I'm rambling, this chapter was the one that got me into the story the most. I love love love it.Get psyched.Also, I decided to change the title name, it's not Shock anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Sweet . . . when I get home tomorrow I am going to read it 83 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Cool!Yeah, it's getting late...damn.I'll still post it, but I'm gonna run low on sleep :/Ah well.By the way, I'm gonna take a little break after this...focus on my school work and crack a few bios in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 No one would blame you ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Ii an honestly say I dislike Family Guy to the point I want to track down the producers and shoot them in the balls. Unless they also make something I like, then it kind of balances out.I can also say it'll take a while to read that new chapter, Fusion... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 It might DMG, it might..You'll like it though.So, when you get the chance, go read the newly released chapter! @Everyone[spoiler=Read after you're done with the chapter]OK, so...who expected Rosa would die?Anyone?Cuz I know Cortez didn't, he thought we'd be married by the end of the fic ;__;I hope I wrote that death scene well, I tried my hardest to make it heart-wrenching. And to develop Chris some more, I felt like he hadn't had his character explored for a while.Screentime...did my best to give everyone some. If you're one of the few I've neglected, I'M SORRY T__Tinb4KingsaysNOTGOODENOUGHDEATHCANNONinb4Smeshsayswatimnotinitscrewyouinb4J-Maxobjectstonothingbecausehe'sunawareofthisfic'sexistenceYou all must be wondering what happened to Status...I'll address what happened as the intro to the 4th arc xDAnd for when DL reads this, here is why I'm an idiot.That whole convo between Jake and Umbra could have fit in the scene between Chris and Umbra! AGH.One of those rare instances where a story that writes itself comes up short.Speaking of, I never planned for Creator and DMG to be brothers until I thought of Donovyn's back story and saw potential behind his "assassinated" parents, and to Creator's, whose father turned out to be famous, but his past wasn't clear. So, since I planned for the two of them to have an encounter, I made them brothers :lol:*shot*Oh yeah, Jake. Sorry dude, tried to think of a way for you to stay behind or something, but came up short. You're better off as a good guy anyway x3And Broken, finally found an opportunity to bring you back into the fic. Sorry it took a while xP And finally...Who do you guys think the Icy impersonator is?He's someone I've mentioned before...and for a few of you, someone you knew..First person to guess it gets a rep. So...what's the general consensus?Good stuff? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 The end....?NOOO!I hate when awesome things endAlso,RAEG phone call Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 This isn't the last chapter Though it's true there's only 1 more arc left :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Bro that was truly awesome writing. I nearly shed tears near the end.I tip my crown off to you. lolandyouexpectedmetorageaboutThomasnotgettinganyscreentimethischapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 But it's the end of Life.Kinda,Well all the people are gone, so there's no pressure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Not yet Chase. Life can still win this...by defeating the Banned.Now it's just a war to defeat the Banned for the Inactive and for the Banned to defeat Life.And other mean people like Xazeon and Icy.And King, that's great to hear man. Really glad you enjoyed that chapter :DI didn't cry, but my heart beat really fast as I typed .-. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Rosa died....that isn't good at all!!! DX DX I was hoping that Sonic got into the fight, but I'm glad I got some screen time ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 "How’d you jam my helmet’s functioning?"inb42footradius But yeah, nice chapter.Hehehe, I knew the girlfriend wouldn't last lo-*shot*Teeheehee...The song was a nice effect, though.But you so should have so used a Clint Barton line at the end of the chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 I would have if I could Sonic, but hey, there's plenty he'll be facing soon enough..Cortez, who's Clint Barton?What kind of line would that be .-. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Well, having battles in the future chapters that I'll be in...I'll be alright then ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 ... Hawkeye?Ronin?You know, secret invasion? "THIS DOESN'T END TILL EVERY LAST ONE OF THEM DIES! YOU HEAR ME?! EVERY @#$%ING LAST ONE OF THEM!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 AHA.That woulda been better for Shadow, but I get what you mean xPChris isn't pissed so much as completely lost in his own despair...so sad :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Your loss, not mine. *comedy drum beat*And there's one thing this thing is missing, especially for me: pop culture references.You need me making this one at least once.And it's actually, "D'oh, I missed." Just FYI. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 [spoiler=I see no inb4Black]... How did Machine Imperial Soldier (Or "Meklord Army Of") monsters become Inti and Quilla?Since when does Quilla breathe water?YAY! SCREENTIME! =D R.P.820 is back? =D Ending made me tear up ;_; Overall, I liked it, despite mior discrepancies. Very good finale for the arc, and you need to take that furlough. Also, it only took me half an hour to read it. All. BTW, as soon as I read about your dad blowing smoke, Isshin came to mind xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Oh yeah, one thing I have to say about Rosa's death.CONTINUITY! *shot* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Yay, Screentime! The Flandre+Deus Vs. Death (Metal) fight: [spoiler=I can speculate the thoughts and the looks on Deus's face on that part:] -the Scene where Flandre activates his wands-: O_o What The!? -Fair share line-: O_O What in the hell did he do? -The fight continues-: I think this just got more interesting Also: I Lol'd at "I always wondered what it’d be like fighting a Jedi.” I almost forgot: I cried at Rosa's Death Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Alright, got some tear-jerks with the ending, I like that :lol:...does that sound sadistic? @Cortez-...broDMG-Aizen with Ichigo powersBlack and Clair-Duel DisksPROTO-ProtomanCK War-1 Giant Pop Culture frenzyVongola-Various Reborn references...could probably go onBut what'd you mean by continuity?@Black-Ah sorry, I didn't go back to read the PM, I just went ahead with the Duel Disk idea and picked those 2 monsters :TAnd it breathes water because...I forgot what it breathed in 5Ds? Wasn't aiming for accuracy with those >.>But if you remember any discrepancies, let me know.@Flandre-In his head maybe xDAnd yeah see Cortez, I used another reference there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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