DL Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 SJS'? Anyway....there is quite a bit of As You know in chapter 24/25... The convo between Frunk and Aqua, they're basically restating things they both know for the benefit of the audience. And this isn't to give information to the other members, he's just saying what led him to build the Ultima. And the Jake and Umbra convo, in 24. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Ah yeah...kinda see your point..Though Frunk and Aqua was kinda done for the surrounding Banned members.But just wondering, what would have been a better way to handle the Jake/Umbra convo? SJS=Sound Jamming SatelliteRemember way back when Creator recruited El?And there was one other time it was used..They've become standard equipment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Ah, yes, those. And, In my opinion, we could have gone without knowing. An Umbra shrouded in mystery would be much more epic. We would be wondering what it was he did wrong, exactly. Maybe he later could have told someone who DIDN'T know, like Fusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 ...Wow.I'm an idiot >__>You'll know why later...Where you at now btw? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Almost done with 25. But now I want to read faster to see WHY you're an idiot - *shot* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 You don't know why yet, no one does.But you will... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 I'll look forward to it xD Also "The truth is, we’re several, several thousands of feet below the surface." Several isn't that much, only around 4-5, no matter how many times you say it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Eh, I'd agree, but dialogue is a bit different from description, right? I could picture someone saying several twice, even if it's incorrect.Whatever though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 I couldn't, they'd look like an idiot ,-, "WE ARE SEVERAL, SEVERAL YEARS FROM WORLD DESTRUCTION" Also, maan, you should have called the element reponium Get it? REPonium? :3333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 ...I think I got the name from the Latin word for...expand? Grow?I don't even remember .-. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 “That wasn’t so bad, now was it?” Rosa asked her beau. Excuse me...asked her WHAT? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 “That wasn’t so bad, now was it?” Rosa asked her beau. Excuse me...asked her WHAT?It's French, DL, generally used to indicate a deep relationship, when used in English. Beau = Boyfriend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 ...Black's right, but I'm wondering what possessed me to write that..I'm fixing that after dinner =.= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 <.< I assumed it stood for boyfriend, and it sounded French. I was just wondering why the frick you added that xDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 Now JakeFusion probably read that off a fortune cookie @Chase: Dude I really want to be mad at that comment' date=' but it's making me laugh too much so I'll just move on XDDD I'm only in here for my smartness and intelegence @BT: *pats on back* That you are . . . that you are.and to be a human shield when the time arrises 8D And I liked all my parts, personally B | Hey Fusion, if you have the time I got a GREAT idea for myself if you'll allow it 83 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 PM me bro, I'll listen to your ideas.And anyone else's if they want.That's not a guarantee they'll make it through, but there's no harm in trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 @JakeThats what I do best.Make people laugh regardless of their opinion on the comment itself.Fusion can we get an ETA for the next chap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 Here's my schedule:Tomorrow I can probably write in between classes, but after school I have a huge essay to write and a troublesome Spanish quiz to study for...Friday, same thing really, with more free time when I get back. So majority of any possible writing will be done then.Saturday, I have a forensics tournament to go to and work right after, so I'm essentially gone all day.Sunday, I think I might have to work with my friend on this stupid debate for English class... So the only real possible shot for a weekend release depends on how much I get done on Friday night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 UPDATE: Got a lot written during school today. Though I'm still not close to finishing (this will be a long read guys...)I'm logging off to do homework, hope it'll go over quickly, but not sure.When I finish, I'll probably do some more writing. So things are looking moderately decent for a release sometime soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 So I would say somewhere along the lines of possibly Monday or late Sunday? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 Uh..possibly >.>Maybe earlier, like early Sunday.Nothing definite though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted February 25, 2011 Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 Well either way, I am definitely looking forward to the final chapter of this arc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 25, 2011 Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 It's...too huge.Guys, I'm going to split this one in two parts I think.I can picture DL's reply now...Why not just make it into 2 separate chapters z.zBECAUSE DLBecause I don't really see a breaking point and in my defense, some chapter books have chapters longer than others, especially if they're heavy and important chapters. I also feel that all the content belongs in one chapter, not two.And my main trivial reason is that I want each arc to be 9 chapters long :T But I'll split it in 2 parts to make it easier to read.[spoiler=Already thought of chapter title if you want to know it]Chapter 27: Shock Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted February 25, 2011 Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 @New Chapter title, guys expect the unexpected to happen during the split chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 If I hadn't said so in the past, this is absolutely amazing. Excellent job Fusion, and great pointers King...or should I say Thomas. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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