Fusion X. Denver Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 @Jake-If your will to live is strong, your chances will favor you.@Creator-Gotcha broski x) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 @Jake-If your will to live is strong, your chances will favor you.@Creator-Gotcha broski x)*Shoots Fusion* Enough of that now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 @Jake-If your will to live is strong, your chances will favor you.@Creator-Gotcha broski x) I WILL LIVE >8D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Now JakeFusion probably read that off a fortune cookie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Still catching up, but... Why did Velma Crab change to Veronica Crab? And what's with "there are two possible reasons as to why Ragnarok hasn’t attacked us yet. It could be one, or both, or neither" if there are two possible reasons, it's either one or the other. z.z And this > his shoes squeaking against the wet floor. was pointless. “Our friend Niashi came down with a bug last night, so he’s the only one not coming. But you and him have the same hair color! So-” Ohman, next time I find someone with my hair color I'll definitely impersonate them, regardless of any other factors such as eye color, hair color, skin color, facial shape, age, etc >:U Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 "there are two possible reasons as to why Ragnarok hasn’t attacked us yet. It could be one, or both, or neither" if there are two possible reasons, it's either one or the other. z.z And this > his shoes squeaking against the wet floor. was pointless. 1: Actually it can be both. Maybe Rag was asleep/kidnapped. That can be both. Crappy example but I'm too lazy to actually think of a realistic one. 2: It's called describing the scenario. Crappy criticism. ALSO PLBPLBPLBPLBPLBPLBPLBPLBPLB. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Where'd I mention the shoes?And...sh*t, I think I did switch it from Veronica to Velma.It's supposed to be Velma, where's it say Veronica >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 1: Actually it can be both. Maybe Rag was asleep/kidnapped. That can be both. Crappy example but I'm too lazy to actually think of a realistic one. It can be both, but not neither. 2: It's called describing the scenario. Crappy criticism. I understand describing the scenario, but there is also such a thing as pointless description. Describing things that hold no meaning to the current part are pointless. He was about to start an explanation, we don't really need to see the floor was wet right before that. ALSO PLBPLBPLBPLBPLBPLBPLBPLBPLB. EDIT: Hold on a sec. EDIT 2: “Where’s everyone else? Isn’t Crab there?” Roxas asked. “Everyone else is off doing business, but I have no idea where Veronica Crab or Luna Moon are,” Suddenly, a beeping sound could be heard from Ragnarok’s computer. “Oh, this is Crab now! Crab, where the hell did you go?” It could be one, or both, or neither, but we need to address it now,” he began pacing back and forth, his shoes squeaking against the wet floor. “One is that they don’t have adequate forces to handle us. I doubt that, considering we were only a mere fraction of the Banned, though it’s hard organizing an army to face one faction. By the way, beginning of chapter 25 “Are you sure you don’t want to? A lot of us miss you, you know...” “Thanks, but no thanks, Claie. Such a pointless split made me realize factions aren’t all it’s clammed up to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Aha, I'll go change that.And...I don't know about pointless, but I guess it's not needed.Just thought adding squeaky shoes would...idk, convey the quirkiness of the Joker through Wynn? Add to the dampness and less than lovely setting that is the sewer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 His quirkyness is shown through actions, not squeaky shoes. Squeaky shoes reminds me of those huge Mickey Mouse shoes. Also, see my edit. You mispelled Clair :3 How could you, Fusion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 How'd I miss that typo =.=Well, fixed.And if you're there, then you're about to stumble on something upsetting.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 .... I read it. ... ;_; It didn't help (it did help the mood however) that I was listening to this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 It's sad, right ='(To make it worse, there's more to come in the future.But for right now, 26 is action-packed and 25 will blow your mind away.Possibly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Aaand the mood was ruined. WTF "Ohsup Dark, wanna be teh leadah of the Banned""Ohshure! Wai?""Cause u cool and stuff and we need leadar!" Come on, Fusion. Making a random guy that's not even a high-ranking member of the Banned the LEADER of the Banned? Wtf... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 He's not the NEW leader, he's filling in.Normally it'd be Saturn, but she's indisposed too, so she picked Dark who was available and had all the necessary qualities to handle the job until they got back.You seriously doubt Dark >__> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 I know he's filling in, but is Ragnarok so unprepared as a leader that he did not organize this AT ALL for an occurance? No world goverment would be like "YO. KID. YOU SEEM TO HAVE TEH NECESSARY QUALITIES. WANNA BE PRESIDENT 4 A BIT?" if the president is beaten up and the vice president is away. And Saturn could lead the Banned from Japan. I just cannot accept that any organization with common sense would do that. I don't care how skilled and prepared he is, they would NOT entrust the Banned to some high school kid, there HAS to be measures for this kind of stuff. I'd even accept Creator as a temporary leader. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Creator=some high schoo kid.We all are(well technically irl I'm one year behind that)but no matter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Pfft, silly DL. Nexev was the co-leader of the Orgy.You're right though, when abiding by common sense, that makes no sense. Actually, I think I conveyed the original message wrong...Dark's just leading the Banned in Yugo, not the whole world.So...does that make more sense .-. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Creator is a high school kid WITH A POSITION in the Banned. And, Fusion....it makes more sense. But I STILL think there should be an alternative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 I'm only in here for my smartness and intelegence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 The trio walked in silence for a while, until they found a bench and sat down. Saturn took out a silver device and pressed a button. After a few seconds, she pocketed it and reported, “No spyware or anything like that in the vicinity. We can talk here.” "Yeah, no spyware or any- OMFG THAT GUY BEHIND THE TREE WAS SPYING GET HIM" Isn't spyware something related to computers? And even assuming that there was no "spyware" detected, WHY would they talk in public? What, the Japanese are deaf? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 @DL1. Spyware is either a hostile computer program OR spy equipment. 2. I'm bust atm so I can't lead nor would I want to. 3. Since when does resistance against a guy with a DOOMSDAY BUTTON IN HIS CHEST make sense? 4. 85% of Japanese in this fic can't understand English. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Isn't spyware something related to computers? That and technology, or at least that's how it is in DEF. And even assuming that there was no "spyware" detected, WHY would they talk in public? What, the Japanese are deaf? No, but they don't speak English either :/ EDIT: Ninja'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 The spyware thing aside: There could be...you know...Inactive members lurking around because you know...they were said to be in Japan. I'm just sayin. o.- I'd go somewhere more private. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Dude, SJS's.The Banned know what they're doing, even if it doesn't seem like it, trust me >.>Though to be fair, I probably should have mentioned their usage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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