Sploda Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 @NexevI eat breakfast at school... But yeah character development would be nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 Like Dai said, Fusion, taking a chapter of for that would be best~ Also... read the chapter...... O.o You stole the name Zeru.... oh and... I doubt El would trade his gf for me and you....and BT.... >> << I like the ending though. But D.L didn't appear. And I AM hoping you end up explaining WHY El's ex wanted a date with you AFTER she called you and D.L nerdy........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Fusion X. Denver Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 Character development, probably my main focus for the next few chaps.Chapter 8 I think will develop 2 in particularAnd in case some didn't know, Black is making a fanfic parallel to mine. Since I know nothing of R.P.820, Powerforce, the Orgy, and others, he'll write on those.Of course elements from both stories will cross over.When he gets to writing it >.>Ninjew is important, he'll be developed.D.L, Dranzer's taken to using Zeru as a nickname, so :IAs for El's GF, if you haven't noticed the hints from earlier chapters, he's been having troubles with her, so when she said to dump his friends for her, he said f*ck it and cut it off. But now he's hating irony for having Fusion date her.Akatsuki doesn't wear masks to hide their shame, it'd be a problem if the Inactive knew who they were >.>I forgot to say they wore masks in the festival fight though, I'll address that error in chapter 8 xPWhich I'll get to writing when I go pick up my sister from practice >.>Back in a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 I doubt El would trade his gf for me and you....and BT.... What do you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 @BT - I meant he wouldn't trade his girlfriend for us, is it that hard to understand >> @Fusion - He still wouldn't dump HER for US. And besides, they didn't SEEM like they had troubles *glares* They seemed perfectly happy, except for the ex-boyfriend-mentioning... And that STILL doesn't explain why she dated someone she called a nerd who would shoot up a school *glares again* It would make sense if she dated ME if she secretly liked Japanese stuff, and it would make sense if she dated YOU if she liked...uh...nerds? Which would make no sense cause El wasn't one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 Dude, obviously the girl is dating Fuse to try and spite me... duh. Anyways, I wouldn't trade Fuse and DL for a GF that's a total prick. I have a row of girls lined up if that ever happens........ XDDDD I am teh pimp! >:T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 But she's not a total prick. She's just snobbish. Also, Fusion, I better either get a pairing or be a womanizer with my sprites/every other girl/some guys >:T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 24, 2010 Report Share Posted September 24, 2010 DL, you'll find a nice girl named Thales.... XDDDDDDDD Anyways, this sorta resembles my rl situation with my old GF. She kinda went prickish and we cut it off, then I found the one I have now... and bang every weekend.... >.> So yeah, you're gonna have to hook me up again. >:T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 @El - ....... ..... .......you don't have to be so blunt about it =_= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 I feel like laughing, but I won't as it would be rude..............also...........Womanizer D.L.? Meh, if it's for the story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 I'm kinda getting impatient JZ, it's not really limited to the story in links case Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 when it comes to the sprites yes, but other girls, I do give him his props for that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 @Chase - >> << ...... I...... can;t deny that, actually... @JZ - ....Props for being a womanizer.....huh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 Which is why I said so.let's see FTK fan fik. A few RPs the old clubsAh good times in that first FTK. Spamhole my ass. We posted about the same stuff everyone posts today. But only we were blamed for spamming etc.I could go on forever how our thread was locked gayly 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 So true. They were just mad WE were cool :T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 I'm Kidding Dai-chan, would you expect ME to give you props for that? 'm the one that smacked it out of you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 That is true. Altho the womanizer topic is a bad one for both of us, hmmm? >> Also, Fusion, for reference, only me and Yuki are fighters. Me: Try unpredictable, creative attacks, very off-book, but with basis in the martial arts I studied. (so your 'discipline' theory is busted)Yuki: Full-on attack, with tactical moves, and using his head to win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 Noted DL.Chapter 8's gonna be TOO long...So I'm going to release 8 and 9 when I finish :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 YAY! You finally made a smart decision >:D Also, Fusion, when are ya gonna bring the banhammer down, and introduce the mods? XDDDDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 YAY! You finally made a smart decision >:D Also, Fusion, when are ya gonna bring the banhammer down, and introduce the mods? XDDDDD YAY! You finally made a smart decision >:D Also, Fusion, when are ya gonna bring the banhammer down, and introduce the mods? XDDDDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 Pfft, you think I'd be able to characterize them well?Eh maybe, but the mods might be more central in Black's fic than mine (people like Roxas, Ice, Crab, or whoever, who knows)But we'll be collaborating at times, so people from this fic will appear in his and vice-versa. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 Fusion, you will NOT incorperate mods. You'll mess them up, I know you will... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 Just said Black would be handling them -__-And I know, the only one I really know is Ice, and even then I don't know him too well :I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 Is DEF=Deisuke-El-Fusion? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 Is DEF=Deisuke-El-Fusion? *claps enthusiastically*Look you guys, he got it!All joking aside, yes.I feel bad though because DL isn't being focused on too much >.>And he doesn't like what's been done with his past so far :/I'll try to rectify that after the next set of chapters though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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