Fusion X. Denver Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 Well, glad you're hooked FTW, I'll show some good stuff coming up :)Cortez, you mean Black? Indeed, what a coincidence >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 Still wanna know why my hotel wasn't made before I got to Japan <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 All the more reason to get psyched for 24. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 31, 2011 Report Share Posted January 31, 2011 LOL yeah I guess XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 All the more reason to get psyched for 24.Why wouldn't we be psyched for 24? -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 I'd be psyched if I were even more surreal XP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 Well, the new chapter was pretty interesting. Poor Jake and King sleeping outside in the cold. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 [spoiler=I saw this on Facebook and immediately thought of here.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 @FTWLulzHey fusionWas all of vongola supposed to go to japanOr all of the FTKI think I missed the flight if the answer is yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 All the people who went are/were Chibi Knights. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted February 1, 2011 Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 And with all them gone, I will be free to enact my nefarious plans. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 I forgot, am I a Chibi knight now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 I forgot I am Chibi Captain Nao =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 SO AM I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 Oh wait, I lied.It's Akatsuki and Chibi Knights.Though most members are in both clubs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 But I'm in Chibi Knights too 8| Guess this was BEFORE then, hu ^^ Still ain't got why mah hotel was never made though XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 You're in Japan, aren't you -__0And you'll get your explanation soon enough, yeesh >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 I'm just bugging you about it XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 Well, while I was away in Macaracas, I read BOTH chapters. ...You're still telling too much. Fusion, you have the skill necessary to show emotion instead of telling it. Stop using things like "he said, belated" (example) and move on to SHOWING us what the character does when he/she is belated, even a smile will do. Well, all writing issues aside, there ARE the realism issues. You can't catch a swordfish with a web for the simple fact they only live DEEP in the water >_> But I must say, I like the way D.L. still sticks to his old goal of recovering Kari and Kana from the Inactive. And <333 Black Knights Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 It's a part of his character, he won't give up ;)And do they really?Eh, so the swordfish was retarded and got lost >.>And gotcha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 Well I could disect your work too Fusion ^^; But since I like it enough to OVERLOOK that I wont . . .When is 24 coming out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 Do what you will, just know I kinda prioritize the story over the actual writing...24 is coming out...Idk.If I have an ice day tomorrow, I could work on it and get a lot done.Or I can work sporadically throughout the school day and only get some done :/And I can't remember what I'm doing Friday night...(probably nothing -_-)It's all up in the air, but I've been in a groove for writing since that long break after 21, so I doubt any of you will be waiting painfully. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 Better writing means more enjoyment coming from your story. Heck, it's EASIER to tell your story if you know how to write well >.>;; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 And...lolinane xDDD I was looking over the first page and saw this.Believe it or not, when El first applied in Akatsuki (Page 140something) he listed Inane as an option to call him.If you don't believe me, go check (it was the 1st post on whatever page it was). Oh yeah, I added a shitload of bios you guys.And I'm gonna keep going.And I alphabetized them.Just finished Black's as well as a bunch of others, doing Wham and Nexev next. With what?If you mean the Inactive, the plot doesn't get too caught up in it >.> Lmao, this xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted February 2, 2011 Report Share Posted February 2, 2011 Do what you will, just know I kinda prioritize the story over the actual writing...24 is coming out...Idk.If I have an ice day tomorrow, I could work on it and get a lot done.Or I can work sporadically throughout the school day and only get some done :/And I can't remember what I'm doing Friday night...(probably nothing -_-)It's all up in the air, but I've been in a groove for writing since that long break after 21, so I doubt any of you will be waiting painfully.YAYZ No pain I leik that ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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