Lt. Colonel Remo Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 >.> What's the point of have PG-16 Rps if they're gonna rant about teh cursing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 I say ramp up the ratings and make this REALLY PG-16 XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 XDDDD I wanna see some action too Remo can be the Charlie Harper of the fan-fic every chaptah he's got a new woman B) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 .... Alll in favor of killing Itachi for that? Make him ALAN Harper, not Charlie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Itachi, that's not you, that's-*shot*Then again, most of you should be able to guess .__.New chapter's progressing well, just thought of a cool sub-plot which will work well with the 3rd arc as a whole :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Sweet 8D When shall we be expecting this new chapter of yours filled with interesting sub plots and juicy . . . okay now I'm hungry XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Uh...I could give you a date, but I'd probably be lying...again...I'll just say soon, which I'm pretty sure will be right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 LOL soon works for me XDDD Sooner or later . . . Hey you said it'd be soon! OR later 8D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Itachi, that's not you, that's-*shot*Then again, most of you should be able to guess .__.New chapter's progressing well, just thought of a cool sub-plot which will work well with the 3rd arc as a whole :3Why would you tell us that? Nao we need that chapter and my Charlie Harper self B) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 *Dies by laughing up a lung* OH MY GOD! xD ECCHI WITH RAINBOW DRAGON! *Read PROTO-frac* *Dies of laughter* DL, better not be... This is so accurate, I don't know whether to laugh or not. Facewalling fits me, as do the other comical things that happened with me =3 Overall a good chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 Chapter 23 with no announcement? What is this...I don't even? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 @Black-I really did like writing those bits xD@Creator-I stayed up really late last night writing and posting it, apparently the servers slow down extremely around 4 in the morning.Couldn't connect to post, so I was like f*ck it and went to sleep.So yes, chapter 23's up, hope you guys will like it and there's more epic shizz on the way xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 ...Now your question about the motel makes sense... xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD I +repped that. It fits me perfectly. and Banweapon: MoonStone Cannon FTW! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 ..."'the Black King!'"... that doesn't sound racist or anything. Cortez tapped the side of his helmet, “This is a motion detector, I can detect the movement of anyone within two feet of me. For example-” He pointed at the bathroom, which was opened by a yawning Smesh as he flushed the toilet. I lol'd. And I finally got to kick a** and chew bubblegum. Without the gum.But yeah, I forgot that you're making me an SM. I would personally love it if you had me say, "Sorry, nerves," after somebody comments on me talking along.And that was an awesome chapter, even without me kicking butt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 *sees Creator laughing*Did I win?Cortez, I was hoping you liked that chapter, I've been aiming on developing your character more and he's worked his way into my top 5 faves xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 Of course I like the chapter.Obviously, I don't see myself as your Cortez at all (due to being the only real Comic Relief Character), but I don't really care about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 I'm pretty much comic relief that gets exasperated, Cortez =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 I'm the obvious one. I'm pretty much the SM of the group. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 New Chapter WHAT 8O *runs to read* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 <implying being SM is a bad thingI wasn't even trying to be funny until the closet scene though, so this is a nice surprise.I'll get going on 24 tomorrow I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 It's not bad, it's just that I'm trying to prove myself as comic relief.And check your channel comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 Room goes silent, only to be interrupted by resounded facepalms XDDDD okay killing cometothedarksidewehavecookies was actually funny as hell XD making FTW the villain was unexpected though "I'm getting me a Typhlosion rental car!" OMG I want one too 8. the cloest commentary was hilarious . . . I can't stop laughing *ROFLMFAO* need to breath!!!! My Scene = EPIC X3 Though seriously if I was going to Japan I'd make sure my hotel was made <_< I kinda expected me to appear stating the hotel wasn't open, but everybody could stay still. That! Or . . . King and I were stuck in the plane still ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 You made me sound like an overprotective mexican......which I totally am. Though it comes to mind that we were expecting to go to a nice Hotel...and Aqua was wearing lingerie......aaaahhhhhhhhh yyyyeaaaaaahhhh.....wai what?... oh yeah, good chapter, loved the closet scene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 I think the cloest scene was the best one of that entire chapter, making up for the flashbacks of the last one 83 Also I am still having difficulty believing I wouldn't have actually made the hotel before going <_< I'm not THAT absent minded am I gu-Ooooh! Shiny 8D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 i had to go insane sometime.... Closet Scene is FTFW!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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