Sploda Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Ahem, “It’s a long story involving this hot L cosplayer…” ... What the hell? o-oFirstly, I don't watch Death Note so I don't see why a character based off me would, maybe make it so it's Blair from Soul Eater instead? She does have purple hair and would make more sense as I watch Soul Eater. Besides isn't saturn in this story female? That would make further sense. Also, only one ear gets pierced? Wouldn't the inactive find having one earring suspicious? Also that would completely throw off Thomas' symmetry. Anyways it was a great chapter fuse with a few parts that made me roll on the floor and laughed my a** off.1. Most men wear 1 earring.2. If he is like Death the Kid, he would obviously just buy a seconding earring that matches this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 @Nex-Life is half OC/half YCM member. Not Gary Oak/Evangelion 2 though.@King-Someone doesn't remember the TeamFourStar AWA Special ;DAnd you haven't seen the end of that scenario yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Fusion this is [spoiler=Lora] And is it bad when I clicked to view this page my music player suddenly put on a song that'd fit a movie trailer 8| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 OMFG I finished reading it. Besides the story of how Life came to be . . . I LOVE MY PART XDD small thought it maybe I can't help loving the whole "sneaking to Japan" bit. Also *claps hands* nice job on getting my attitude down more, though Lora isn't as winny as you made her out to be- more tomboyish and, in that situation, she'd try to come along even if I said not to. chain of hotels ...>u<... NEED MORE CHAPTERS d(^^)b Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 d(^^)bOh you made it look like the smiley has two thumbs up. I see what you did there, very clever of you Jake. :3 Fusion: You could be right about me forgetting about the AWA special as I don't even know what "AWA" means... Could you maybe tell me so it will refresh my memory? EDIT: Nevermind, I just watched it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Glad to hear it Jake, I'll keep them coming xDAnd there you go King, surprised you haven't seen that one before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 And there you go King, surprised you haven't seen that one before.Actually I think I have seen it before, just forgot about it. I mean it was made like 2-3 years ago and I don't really remember videos they make for anime conventions. I focus more on the episodes then those videos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 No! Red-Eyes! Ah well, I have 2 of them, anyway. >.> I would have laughed more if it was Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon.Except... I don't leave my windows open... *gets hit by a pillow* But I seriously think you guys will freaking kill me before the final battle... But yeah, I liked the chapter. The flashbacks actually worked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Oh you made it look like the smiley has two thumbs up. I see what you did there, very clever of you Jake. :3 Fusion: You could be right about me forgetting about the AWA special as I don't even know what "AWA" means... Could you maybe tell me so it will refresh my memory? EDIT: Nevermind, I just watched it. I hope there is a movie on this flight *holds up popcorn* Want some? X3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 So tell me Fusion, is that the whole chapter, or only part of it? Also, not that I expect this to reflect on my character in any way, but I recently joined the Organization. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 @Cortez-Well, you probably would have gone outside to get it >.>And we were at my house .-.But thanks xD@Shadow-Honestly, it doesn't matter much since all the factions really mean (story wise) is having the characters work with other people, but noted.And yeah that was the whole chapter. Why, did it seem short to you? Also, I only have math homework tonight, so I'll write more on 23 that I already started at school. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Sweet ^^ And yeah the chapter did kinda seem short after the long wait. But thats just a general misconception that, the longer it takes to post it, the longer the read will be. Not that the entire thing was comprised of a flashback had anything to do with it XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 That was short to you guys?I thought it was extensively long .__.Or maybe it just seemed that way since I labored over it .-.Ah well, hopefully I'm back on rhythm with this one.And general question: Anyone know the girl from PikaPerson01's sig? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 I think that is just a random anime girl tbh 8| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 @ FusionThis is a direct quotation. >.> Chris was at Cortez’s place, playing a quiet game of Duel Monsters after having helped his friend pack for the flight. “How long do you think we’ll be gone for?” Also, I've been traveling more than you have. Pure logic states that I know how to pack. >.> Ta-da. I know your writing better than you do. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 XD lolpurelogiconYCM And I know who the cosplaying L character is REMO And don't strain on 23 bro That was a frigin 22 page chap according to word lolpun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 L Cosplayer would obviously be Starrk... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 L Cosplayer would obviously be Starrk... Or worse... Anyway, on the slight chance that YCM suffers horribly and Fusion's Comp crashes, I've been saving the Story to my Word Documents. O.o Big File size is Big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Or worse... Anyway, on the slight chance that YCM suffers horribly and Fusion's Comp crashes, I've been saving the Story to my Word Documents. O.o Big File size is Big. This! Ladies and Gentlemen . . . is what you called a dedicated fanboy XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Seriously Creator?Thanks bro!And Itachi, over 30 for me .__.Mine's actually very spaced between paragraphs or when people speak, maybe that's why.And Black, Stark looks like Near in this fic actually >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Seriously Creator?Thanks bro!And Itachi, over 30 for me .__.Mine's actually very spaced between paragraphs or when people speak, maybe that's why.And Black, Stark looks like Near in this fic actually >.>So I win? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 So do you know what you're doing for the next chapter Fusion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 (edited) @Shadow-Yes actually. I don't know if it'll go on long enough though, so I might add more on to what I've got.[spoiler=Don't look if you don't want hinting spoilers (just hints though)]Plane ride has shenanigans.There will be a fight at some point.We will have difficulties once we land.I will introduce something you've all probably seen coming. Edited January 25, 2011 by Fusion X. Denver Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 You forgot to add a word on line four of your spoiler Fusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 *ties myself to a chair so I don't look at the spoilers* NO! NEVER!! I WILL NOT LOOK!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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