Trio of DEF

[Fusion X. Denver]

Oh, you mean the coloring differences?

I don't know, see if they do coloring or picture editing.

If not, I think BT or even Ninjew could help you there (Ninjew did something like that for Cortez once).

[Spirit of DMG]

Alright, Super Mario Store, right? I'll check there. If they don't offer it, I guess I'll talk to Ninjew...

[Fusion X. Denver]

Yup.

Guys, I finished the chapter.

You know what.

I'm such a swell guy.

I'll put it up now for you guys to read in the morning.

Don't wait up though, get some shut-eye and come back in the morning ;)

[Sploda]

He says this then logs off.

 

Curse you Fusion.

[Fusion X. Denver]

No?

It's up .__.

[Spirit of DMG]

IT'S THE DIAMOND SHOTGUN! YOU EARN +1 REP! Though, I have to wonder who this "Mr. X" is gonna turn out to be....At least I'm getting mentioned...I'm looking forward to the Waist Coat...

[Limited Edition KING]

I loled at the double date set up Els reactions were just priceless. x3

Also whats with Dranzer saying 'damn inactive stealing my moves'? I could understand how Daisuke knew Thomas as they could be friends but is Thomas in the inactive now or did he steal those weapons from the inactive or what?

[Super Chaos Sonic]

Aww, Bel is unconscious....oh well. A price to pay when saving most of the city...and to kick his butt for betraying. Anyway, another awesome Chapter Fusion, can't wait for the next one.

[Shadow Zero]

*starts reading the chapter as I eat breakfast*

 

*finishes reading chapter* Well that was interesting. I wonder if the next chapter will have more info on the escape of the CP members?

[Fusion X. Denver]

Perhaps Shadow, perhaps.

Thanks DMG xP

King, I don't think someone read the end of Chapter 19 closely enough >.>

[Sploda]

*Is waiting for the inevitable coup*

 

We all know that my Ambition would be to great, no doubt right before we defeat the Inactive I'll lead a coup and try and take over.

 

Ambition>Saving the World

 

>_>

...

 

Yes I know my priorities are screwed up.

[Limited Edition KING]

King, I don't think someone read the end of Chapter 19 closely enough >.>

*Re-reads the end of the chapter*

I think I know who Mr.X is. But I'll wait and let you tell everyone in story who he is.

[Fusion X. Denver]

You do?

PM me what you think, I want to know if you got it or not.

But I'm not going to reply whether you're right or wrong, I'm just curious.

And Creator, keep reading ;)

[BlackSkullCortez]

I liked the new chapter.

It's just... I saw the Club Pikachu riot thing coming ever since you mentioned the "second chance" in chapter 19. I think it would have been better and more shocking if you said the ending of chapter 19 as a flashback in chapter 21 as an explanation... but that's just my style. If you prefer the way you did it, that's fine.

[Jake the Sage]

Just finished reading the new chapter.

 

While I wont admit I saw a prision riot happening because of the Club Pickachu, I did see them coming back in obviously since you mentioned a second chance- more or less them being freed or anything along those lines.

 

What I am interested in is this "Mr. X" who you brought back into the series . . . "an incredibly powerful man" as it could be summed up since Ben "only wanted blood from the strongest person"

 

Makes me wonder who this man's identity really is . . .

[Sploda]

@Jake

We all know your hoping it is you.

 

:P

[Jake the Sage]

D*mn right I'm hoping it's me! XDDD

 

But that is more or less to stroke my ego, as I've said before I don't care if I never make an actual appearance or not. I got mentioned, that is good enough. At least that way I never get disappointed ^^ not that I'd get disappointed in anything you'd write Fusion

 

But honestly I am curious who it is, all joking aside.

[Sploda]

We all are, but we don't know who it is yet so we will have to wait, read, and find out.

[Jake the Sage]

*sits down impatiently, shaking in my chair*

 

Come on fusion hurry up and write the next couple chapters X3

[Fusion X. Denver]

Well the thing about Mr. X is:

His identity won't be revealed for quite a while :3

Glad to see you liked it though, and the next chapter should hopefully come soon.

Jake, you'll like the Christmas special x3

[Jake the Sage]

Oh yeah you mentioned the Christmas Special . . . kinda thought it'd come out on Christmas <_< XDDD

 

Also I liked the spiderman web shooters you had your guy use, nice way of stating you had them without going against the copywritting *thumbs up*

 

and darn identity not coming out soon (>_<) But YAY new chapter coming out soon ^^

[Big Bad Pennar]

Yay, I'm mentioned aga-

 

"Dang Deus, Creator was making it sound like this was something hard or whatever, but all I'm feeling is an easy breeze."

 

I Lol'd

 

That was a very good chapter, pretty funny too.....

[Fusion X. Denver]

I liked El's inner turmoil, thought that was pretty funny xP

I think I could have done a better job with wrapping up the Inactive problem, but ah well.

I already started on the next chapter you guys, I think it'll be good.

[Lt. Colonel Remo]

askaban all over again >.>

 

so wait, you get to be Light Yagami and i am still just some surfer dood? XD

[Fusion X. Denver]

You kinda look like L don't you .__.

And your personality is a surfer dude, not your appearance >.>

You have a funny scene next chapter by the way.