Limited Edition KING Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 *Screams like a fangirl.*Gonna go read it now. Also Fusion, Black chapter 7 of my fanfic is posted to if you guys wanna read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 *finishes reading chapter* Hoyl crap, the Pika brothers are about to join the banned in their fight against the inactive! And my character looks like a cross between Human Shadow and Grown Shimon, and yells like Shimon too! I LOVE IT! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 wait... Did I die!? WTF! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 Ah so you did decide to go with the 'Rescue Pikachu' plot I told you. I'm hoping next chapter will be more about the rescue than anything else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 No BT. Another died to save your stinking arse. At least, that's the impression that I got. Oh, and I forgot to mention that I am a Vongola Guardian in this! AWESOME!Hey, hey! Which Guardian am I, anyway? Is it Storm, or something else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 i'm wondering.... WHERE THE HAYL AM I!? [/expectsananswer] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 Vongola Guardians are the only members of the Vongola so far, when the group eventually expands, then their positions will mean something.@Shadow-Eh, just picture your bio pic with red streaks like Shadow, and that's you. What's Za Warudo or whatever by the way?@King-We'll see bro.BT you're alive for now Madara saved your life.Glad you guys liked it though.EDIT: I dunno Flandre. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 from the fact that Deus wasn't mentioned as well, i'm guessing that he and I are asleep... I hope i wake up soon XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 A lot of people weren't mentioned.I only focused the chapter on the Vongola, a few of the Banned, Xazeon's group, ElxRui, and King/Pika bros.There's a lot of ground to cover .___. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 BT you're alive for now Madara saved your life. He died to save me... and I thought I was stupid (JK) lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 Fusion, Za Warudo is japanese for The world, which just happens to be the opening theme for the first season of Death Note. You used the T.V. version, and I shall not stand for such blasphemy!http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FcI8M8o3UBIUSE EET!!! NAO!!! I COMMAND IT!!! ESPECIALLY SINCE I HAD TO GO TO THE TROUBLE OF MAKING THE DAMNED THING!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 I thought I used the japanese opening? I'll check when I get home since I'm at school.I don't know what you just made either so hang tight until then.By the way guys, for any character that made an appearance this chapter, I updated their bios with what they did over the past year, go check. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 It's the full version of what you have as the season three theme, and I demand request that it be made the official season three theme instead. Edit: More wild and ruthless? o.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 After hours of reading and catching up i must say this is a great story. though your chapters as so freaking long.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 Well doi, it's like reading an actuall book! ^_^ Speaking of, it would be awesome to see this as a REAL novel. Just saying. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 All he needs is an editor and publisher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 I hadz teh kiss <3 Anyways, yay for Amaterasu hate! >:3~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And God not Pikachu again. .___. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 Something tells me that Fusion has something in mind for trying to redeem Pikachu or something. Either that or Pikachu is given a chance to redeem himself and fails, dying as a result. Something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 Not as many internal monolouges as youd expect from a dark gritty whatever but it's still cool. But my symbol is this: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 So tell me DEF readers, what's your symbol? The Gemini Zodiac Symbol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 My symbol would have to be a pair of swords crossing in an X. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 My symbol should be a sword with a light blue blade overlapping a staff with white bandages wrapped around the bottom part. Also [spoiler=Time for Fan Fix-tion]It was a quiet, wintry night in the suburban neighborhoods of Yugo City. One such area was completely empty save for the snow resting on its surface like a blanket, growing bigger by the night as the snow peacefully descended. All of a sudden, a figure could be seen walking through the white landscape onto the sidewalk. He wore a black, leather jacket with a red cloud on the back and the symbol of a crossed fist and hammer implanted in the middle. When he approached the doorstep of his humble abode, he slipped inside to the welcoming warmth and stripped himself of his extra layers. He slowly paced over into the bathroom to wash his face to lessen the drying of his skin. It was then he noticed the mirror above the sink and became entranced in his reflection. Wait so the figure appeared out of freakin nowhere? And...extra layers can mean a lot of things. Considering the natural is to be clotheless. Also, I'd like to point out that unless he's lived without a mirror for a good while, he wouldn't be entranced in his own reflection (unless it was some creepy magical crap) A boy of seventeen years was looking back at him, his facial features were a tad sharpened since the previous year where everything was right and peaceful. His blue eyes were as bright as ever, though his short brown hair had become longer in times where one didn’t care so much about their hair length. He sighed and walked out to plump himself onto the couch. It kind of sucked that he couldn’t join his family on a vacation to the Bahamas, but he had work to do. I wonder how far the Bahamas are from Yugo. The man was ready to practice some guitar when his cell phone rang. He picked it up, “Hey D.L, you need something?” I doubt that's how most people greet their friends who call in such hard times. I suppose someone who's lived without a mirror for a year also has lived without talking with people? “Yeah, Sonic wants to hold another meeting, and as a Vongola Guardian, you need to show up. Mind coming now?” He sighed at the slightly irritating news that he would have to go back out, but replied, “Thanks D.L, I’ll be down in a bit.” He decided to at least shower before going back out again. He stripped off his torn clothing and was left alone with his thoughts as the water ran over him. It’s been a whole year and despite all the progress we made, nothing’s brought up our morale. I can’t even get myself together, let alone my team… When he finished, he suited up into a new set of clothes and went back outside. Wow, it's like he knows they'll arrive as soon as he walks downstairs and out the door. Suddenly, a black car pulled up in front of his house and lowered a window. J.Z popped his head out, “Hey there Fusion, need a lift?” Telepathy is good. Chris smiled, “Hey J.Z, sure. I’m guessing D.L’s with you?” I wonder why he'd think that at all. Lemme guess, telepathy? “And Aqua!” D.L exclaimed as he popped his head out the back window. Chris laughed and got into the car with the three of them as they sped off. J.Z’s hair had gotten a little longer over the past year in contrast to Aqua who had cut her hair short since its length proved inconvenient with all she’s been doing. D.L remained the same, though like Chris, had gotten slightly more built physically. D.L sounds overly enthuastic about being in the same car as Aqua. “Don’t tell me you guys joined the Vongola too?” Chris asked. Aqua turned back, “What, you’d have a problem with that? So hurtful!” Chris thought she was serious and was about to apologize, but she cut him off, “We’re just dropping you off on our way to pick up the engagement ring.” “Oh that’s right, you two are getting married!” Chris said hitting his upward palm with his fist. “Sucks it has to be during a time like this though…” I wonder how threatening THAT motion looked. “As long as I’m with Aqua, nothing else matters,” J.Z said matter-of-factly. “Even if the world were to end on our wedding day, nothing will stop me from marrying this woman.” She giggled and kissed him on the cheek out of affection. I'd have guessed she giggled and kissed him on the cheek out of spite. D.L sighed and slumped in his seat, “Seems like none of us are in luck with love, eh Fusion?” So apparently J.Z is too much of a minor character to count. Chris sighed, “How’s El doing anyway?” “Talk about depressed,” D.L replied. “Ever since Rui hooked up with that Amatero guy, he’s been wallowing in jealousy and anger.” Chris’ thoughts drifted a bit, thinking of the future as he often did nowadays. El’s depressed, D.L’s true love is with the Inactive, and I’m just me. Sucks how it’s like this…though I can’t stop and worry about romance. There are bigger things going on, Rui must have been really special to distract someone like El who understands this perfectly… Wait then he's not thinking about the future, he's thinking about the present... J.Z interrupted Chris’ thoughts, “So you two, how’s that band coming along?” D.L faltered, “Chibi Bacon’s been doing alright, but…Rui is our keyboard player and co-singer, so practices have been a little tense with El acting how he is.” “I see…” J.Z commented. “Fuse, have you joined in yet or-” Chris laughed, “J.Z, you may be one of the best teachers around, but I’m still not good enough for a band. I’ll just keep managing CB for now and if the need arises, I’ll fill in for our guitarist.” Yeah, those guitar lessons over the whole year didn't really help. “Cortez’s really good though Fusion, I don’t know if you’d be a good replacement,” D.L remarked, puffing his cheeks. “And would you be able to properly sync with El’s vocals and my bass? Hell, you’ll have a tough time with Dranzer’s insane drumming too…” “Alright, alright, enough,” Chris waved his hand, trying to shake off the topic. “It sucks that I haven’t had much time to grab a gig for you guys though, it’s just been so-” Way to shake the topic off of Chibi Bacon. “Busy, I know,” D.L interrupted. “Being in multiple factions is tough to pull off, even for someone like me. We haven’t even had a practice in a week.” And the fact the world is being threatened by a bomb doesn't help either. “Well hey, just don’t forget about Akatsuki,” J.Z cut in. “While Powerforce and the Vongola are great groups, Akatsuki is the best, am I right?” Chris smiled, “Yeah, we really need to keep ourselves together, us three. El, D.L and I are in a weird relationship, sharing the leadership of a faction as the Sannin.” Now I know that's what really happened but how did Akatsuki newcomers like El and D.L get priority to lead over Dranzer and Ninjew and such? D.L smiled sadly, “It’s been hard though, losing Madara like that after Justin and Aa’une…” Chris’ expression drooped, “Remo’s still recovering from that trauma, but Madara died a hero’s death. There’s nothing nobler than sacrificing yourself for a comrade.” Aqua spoke up, “It was that little boy B.T right? The Petatrix user?” How kind of her to take the trouble to memorize the name of his watch. “Yeah…” Chris lowly answered. “A lot of us have been scarred by Life,” he said placing his hand over his left hip. “I just can’t think of a way we can win though. Do the Banned stand any chance against the Inactive? Just what does Ragnarok plan on accomplishing by warring with the ones holding the fuse for the world’s biggest bomb?” Um...stopping them from blowing said bomb up? I don't know, seems like a good bet. J.Z countered, “Well, in all honesty there’s as many Banned as there are Inactive members, so your fighting forces can be considered even. But as long as Yugo City exists, we can never win unless we kill ourselves off along with the world.” Not much of a win. Aqua added, “The sad thing is that Life knows this and recognizes our hesitation, so he won’t bother with blowing up the Earth as long as he isn’t cornered.” I'm pretty sure that was obvious, they must be laughing in their minds at her pointing it out. “Leaving out assassination attempts since it’s likely he or someone close to him will be holding the switch or whatever sets it off.” D.L lamented. But why do we even bother fighting if nothing good will come from it?” Wow, D.L made a remark I'd expect from someone whose intelligence actually is a part of their character. Before anyone answered, they saw that they had arrived at their destination. Chris and D.L thanked the couple as they exited the car and faced the building. Wut. So not only does Chris have the power of telepathy, he also can fly alongside cars? When did he get in the car?! It was an ordinary city building that had been vacant and boarded up for quite some time, or so the common folk thought. D.L and Chris navigated their way through the window in the side alley and the twisting, dark hallways inside. Soon, they found a door with an X surrounded by a faded flame pattern around it. The two walked in and met with the rest of their fellow Guardians. The five individuals watched them all come in while sitting at a semi-circular table. From left to right was: Zero Ranmyaku, whose black hair now had red streaks dyed through it with ridiculous x-shaped shades matching in color, Katie Kyosuke, who remained relatively unchanged since the past year, Sonic, who had grown some stubble but looked the same otherwise, Belphagor, whose yellow hair had grown long enough to completely obscure his eyes and ears from vision, and Dranzer, who looked mad at Chris and D.L for once again being late in attending a meeting or practice. Wasn't Fusion the one usually late? Actually, wasn't he just absent very often? “You’re rubbing off on D.L, Fusion,” Dranzer said grumpily. “It’d be bad if you two made El actually look punctual in Akatsuki.” Sonic cut in, “Anyway, it’s good you two came, we’re going on a mission tonight. It’s a little risky, but I think we’ll be able to handle it.” Because every other mission went so well for them. Chris sat next to Zero while D.L sat besides Dranzer as Sonic continued, “Belphagor was out gathering information and found something concerning Xazeon.” Chris unconsciously stiffened at the name, “You mean regarding his whereabouts?” “Yup,” Belphagor stood up and laid out a map. “This is a map of Yugo detailing all of its districts and burrows. We’re here in Main Forum,” he said while pointing at a big island on the map. “Sources tell me that Xazeon is over here in Showcase,” he then pointed to a spot in Graphora Forum, another of Yugo’s burrows. “Maybe weapon transactions or whatever, but I’ve taken the liberty of passing this info to Ragnarok and gained clearance to go for intercepting it. You guys think we should go? They’ll be there in about an hour.” ...And....why do they care? I mean, it's not like he's LIFE. Chris immediately replied, “Yes, we should head out immediately if that’s the case.” Totally, regardless of the fact it could be a set-up. D.L and Dranzer both glanced at one another as Chris answered Belphagor and said, “I’m for it too.” ...High schoolers these days... Sonic knew it’d be unanimous, “So it’s settled. Let’s get to the chopper.” Katie sighed and donned her piloting gloves and cap, ready to fly the crazy team into yet another crazy situation. She was psyched. So she sighed...cause she was psyched? Huh.__________Elfman Make had nothing to do on that wintry night and was strolling through Yugo City to be alone with his thoughts. It was quiet and serene, setting a perfect mood for El to sulk to himself. Stupid Amatero and his f*cking jackass attitude…I ought to walk up to him on Monday and punch him in the face! But then Rui would hate me, since she’s practically in love with the guy. Just what the hell am I doing? Maybe I should just move on if she- Suddenly his cell phone rang, interrupting his thoughts. He saw it was Remo and answered, “Hello?” “Dude,” Remo said, pausing for a second to ensure El would listen. “I just heard, Amatero and Rui broke up.” Most people don't pause. El’s eyes widened as he nearly dropped the phone, “What? What happened?” “It was bad news bro…he was caught cheating with that hoe Danni Perks. He just dumped her right after his secret leaked out.” I'd have thought SHE would dump HIM. Guess he was too quick for her. El’s blood boiled as he planned on ways to make Amatero suffer greatly for what he had done. “AGAIN? When did this happen Remo?” It's happened before? “About an hour ago at the Semi-Formal dance at YCM High. She ran out and no one’s seen her.” He got over the trauma pretty quickly, I suppose, since he was able to make it to a Semi-Formal dance. El hissed, “Thanks Remo, I’ll call you later.” He snapped the phone shut and took off running. Rui…I will find you! Just wait for me! Now where in the world could a young girl be at night, when the world is currently under bomb threat and no one leaves their homes much?__________A man was pacing in a makeshift base that was hastily constructed two hours ago. As the leader of the major opposing force to the Inactive, he had to constantly be on the move and change set locations at random times and frequencies so the Inactive wouldn’t catch them. He ruffled his pointy, dirty blond hair with his fingerless glove in minor frustration. We haven’t gotten anything done in a while, it’s been quiet for too long. I need to get morale up here or we’ll succumb in no time. He felt a tug on his blue leather jacket and turned to see a woman with purple hair and a bedazzling aura around her. “Saturn, what do you need?” he asked her. “Rag, did you approve a mission for the Vongola to head to a port in Showcase? They seem to be under the impression that Xazeon and some of his men will be there for weapon transactions or something of the sort.” Ragnarok’s eyes narrowed, “I haven’t even heard from Sonic in ages, what are they thinking?” “They’re thinking they’re on an official mission approved by you is what I’m saying,” Saturn replied. “Sonic sent the confirmation form by email, meaning he received your approval and was going to act upon it.” Thought Bel sent it? “But no one ever sent me the request!” Ragnarok whipped his hand back. It suddenly came to him. “The Vongola’s in trouble!” In other words, several mildly well-armed teens with superhero complexes are in trouble.__________The Vongola had landed on a nearby rooftop and were lying in wait in nearby alleyways to observe any ships coming in. They were a little confused as to why there were none coming however. “I don’t get it,” Zero said over their walkie-talkies. “No one’s coming, are you sure the info was legit Bel?” Belphagor replied haughtily, “Don’t take me that lightly Zero, they’ll be here.” Chris was with Dranzer and D.L at the nearest vantage point toward the docks. Xazeon…after this year of fighting you, there’s one thing I’ve garnered about you. You’re pretty smart, and doing things out in the open isn’t your style. I trusted Bel to be positive of his info, but it looks like my instincts were right in predicting Xazeon isn’t here, despite wanting you to come. Or maybe… Sounds like someone has a bit of an obsession. “D.L, Dranzer, you guys are ready for a fight, right?” I sure am! It’s been ages Daisuke, how about letting me out? You can just shut the f*ck up Yuki, I’m done letting you do your thing. “Well duh Fusion, it’s why Dranzer has his twin guns and I have my claws out.” "...I wish I had guns. Why do I get stuck with the medieval meele weapons...?" is what D.L must be thinking. “Good, because we’ve been betrayed,” Chris said whipping around. Dranzer and D.L did the same and noticed someone standing there. His yellow eyes never ceased to pierce straight through Chris’ gaze, seeking blood. “Hey there Xaz, here for weapons or something?” “I’m here to kill you and your teammates,” he replied. “Eliminating one of the smallest and most naïve factions of the Banned should be child’s play.” Wait they're banned? Interesting how the plot didn't mention that earlier... Dranzer took out his walkie talkie, “Sonic, Xazeon is here with my group, what about you guys?” “Not good at all Dranzer…” Sonic responded as he and the other three Vongola members were surrounded by a dozens of Inactive members, all shrouded in black cloaks with hazy yellow eyes and lethal weaponry. “They expected us to be coming here…” These guys are freakin ninjas yo “You did good work Agent Pi,” one of the cloaked members said. “Thanks to you, the Vongola of YCM will die tonight.” Suddenly, Belphagor smiled and threw dozens of knives at Katie. She immediately whipped out her cane and deflected them all, spinning it in the process so the hidden wires attached to the knives would wrap around it and prevent her from becoming ensnared in his trap. Spinning canes doesn't work with real life physics, fraid to say, no one would be able to spin it fast enough...oh, and not to mention the knifes would pierce it. “I never did like that obnoxious smirk of yours,” she said staring at her former comrade. Bel smiled, “It’s been fun deceiving you all for the past year, but it’s high time you’ve been eliminated. At this rate, you’ll either join us or die.” They wanted them to join? Fr srs? Zero had strapped on his diamond gloves and unsheathed the Burai Blade strapped to his back, “You say that to us of all people Bel. Even if you had the intention to betray us the entire time, you should know by now that giving up isn’t our style.” With that, he jumped in front of Bel at a high speed, sword held high. “JUST WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK WE ARE?” Anime nerds who spout character cathphrases. “Dead men,” Bel smiled as he countered with his knife. Right after, all of the Inactive swooped onto the group with the intent to kill. “Get ready to die!” “This time you won’t escape from this alive, Fusion X. Denver.” Xazeon stated. Implying Chris has been in this exact situation before. Also implying Xazeon is using his penname, instead of Chris. Chris briefly fingered his hip before taking out his hammer and pointing it to Xazeon, “You may think you’re hot sh*t Xaz, but you won’t kill off the Vongola so easily. You’re going down.” Well yeah, he's outnumbered 3 to 1, and one of them has guns.__________El had been running around all night in search of Rui. She wasn’t at Karnon Kills, or in Organi Square, which was pegged as the main hangout for teenagers. Damn it Rui! She even has her cell turned off! At this rate- Suddenly, he looked up and saw her, an elegant figure dressed in warm, brown winter clothing. She was leaning on a pole on the sidewalk, which seemed eerily empty aside from her presence there. People had stopped strolling around at night ever since Life took over the city. So why would she be at Organi Square? He walked over to her, and noticed her tongue was stuck to the pole. “Uh, Rui? Why is your tongue stuck to that?” Plot development Rui took out her cell phone and texted him, “Sulking, tongue kinda slipped out -__-” I've never seen such fail from someone. How does that even HAPPEN? BTW, most people wouldn't text, they'd try to speak through the frozen tongue, just sayin. El tried lightly tugging her, but her tongue was stuck and wouldn’t budge. He thought of going somewhere for hot water, but saw that no store would be open at this hour. El was ready to panic and get help, when he thought of an idea. He stooped down right next to her face and exhaled hot, humid breath on her tongue. The ice holding her tongue quickly melted and she slowly pulled her tongue off the pole. She has a throat, why didn't she do it herself?...or right, plot. “I’m glad you’re okay Rui! Listen, I heard about Amatero, and, well, I’m so sorry he did that to you. It really wasn’t cool and you deserve better than him anyway.” He saw that she was paying attention, but still seemed sad and silent, so he continued, “Rui…I love you.” Her eyes widened and she looked straight at El, unbelieving of what she had just heard. “Ever since I met you, I wanted to get to know you and be beside you. And after this past year, with all the crazy sh*t that’s happened, I didn’t think you’d want a boyfriend during all this. But then you got with Amatero, and I stood there feeling like an idiot for not asking you out earlier. The truth is, I always hated Amatero for hooking up with Danni after cheating on Fuse, and here he was dating the girl I loved. I wanted to say something, but…all that mattered to me was that you were happy.” Which would explain all his apparent sadness and anger from before. He went on, “I heard what happened at Semi and searched all night for you. I don’t know how you feel Rui, but just know that I’m here for you.” He stepped forward, closing the distance between them, “And I always will be, no matter what.” I'd think he would, considering he used to go out with Danni. El didn’t know what to expect, but the last thing he thought would happen was Rui immediately standing on her toes to kiss El on his lips. His eyes were wide with shock at the pleasant surprise, and welcomed her into the joyous moment, until he felt something odd. Rui noticed too, and separated her mouth for a second. Apparently, the tip of her tongue had frozen together with El’s, trapping the two of them together. She only smiled and went back to kissing him, wanting nothing else but to stay in that perfect moment, forever. ...As their tongues were frozen...huh.__________A teenager with spiky, brown hair was walking through Yugo Prison. Even though it was normally impossible to penetrate its iron walls, he had kept up his status as a high-ranking member of the Inactive so he would be able to gain access to all its secrets and facilities. He flashed his badge to the security offices and proceeded into the cells holding the most dangerous of criminals. Here, each cell held one criminal behind a tightly secured door guarded with state-of-the-art security. He entered in all the necessary codes so he could enter the cell for visitation purposes. In front of him stood a cell within the confined room, holding three ratty-looking individuals. These prisoners were an exception to the one criminal rule since they were brothers and had enough friends to ensure they would be imprisoned together. They looked up at the new arrival, with one of them piping up, “If it ain’t the king himself! What are you doing here?” I'd sure be more surprised than that The brother next to him piped in, “Yeah, what gives Tom? You haven’t visited your dear old friend Pikachu and his brothers for a whole year and you show up now?” Thomas had suddenly whipped out a gun, aiming it at the cell. The three brothers jumped backward in fear, but soon realized Thomas only sought to disintegrate the cell bars with his trusty laser guns. And no guards came “I’m giving you your second chance, Pikachu. But be wary, one slip-up here and we’re all in for it.” No, you are Thomas, for busting out 3 criminals. Unless they also do bad stuff. But look at wittle Pikachu, he wouldn't do bad stuff, would he?.....oh right, Club Pikachu war...right... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 *bonks DL* DON'T BE TELLING HIM HOW TO WRITE HIS BOOK! D:< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 *bonks DL* DON'T BE TELLING HIM HOW TO WRITE HIS BOOK! D:< You're a bigger idiot than I thought.... =____= Anyways, we need symbols? -.- Fine, mine's obvious.... White arm and hand holding a heart shaped grenade (red) with the hand bleeding. Green Day >___> XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 I didn't expect you to get it Shadow. To be frank, at all. I am merely setting up advice. Criticizing what needs to be criticized. (except for the ending part, that was just me being tired) but at no point in time did I actually tell him to follow what I said, these are just suggestions. how he interprets them and if he decides to follow them, if at all, are all decisions up to him. But of course I would not expect your mindtype to get that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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