Super Chaos Sonic Posted September 21, 2010 Report Share Posted September 21, 2010 Too bad that you can't add my KHR Organization into it. [since you, Dranzer, and D.L. are in it] Cause if that was the case...the fan fic would probably get KHR fans to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted September 21, 2010 Report Share Posted September 21, 2010 No it must be... BLACKBERRY! Or a PSP works too. now I haz homework. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted September 21, 2010 Report Share Posted September 21, 2010 Haha, awesome. I like my entry. Don't forget I also joined the FTK and CK not long after. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Fusion X. Denver Posted September 21, 2010 Report Share Posted September 21, 2010 About clubs, I'm only having one club per person.Meaning Chris isn't going to be part of the FTK, and FTK members are staying in just the FTK.There may be a couple exceptions to this though regarding a few particular members, but I'm not saying any more.And Chibi Knights is an MMORPG designed by DL in this universe >.>Creator, I'll reference that next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted September 21, 2010 Report Share Posted September 21, 2010 Dl... created an MMO? I create weapons... alright, but I also created everything else. So where is the Ultima? (You could make it an Aircraft Carrier... say I called in a few favors). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Fusion X. Denver Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 All in due time Creator, all in due time..If you want anything specific to appear in the fic, you can PM me and I may or may not make it happen :3Oh yeah, Vongola...maybe.I can't really fit them in with my plan right now, but they can come in later. Like I said in FTK, there may be some differences with members and their counterparts >.>Ultima does sound doable.If you want anything to appear in the fic, you can PM me and I may or may not make it happen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Fusion, it is not that I only refer to them as my sprites >_> It's that you used my description of my sprites to make them, and I refer to them as such >_____________> But aside from that I still love your fic. Will go read new chapter now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Fusion X. Denver Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Can't help the 2nd thing. First thing, why wouldn't I use what you gave me >.>But thanks, and I'm going to try doing chapter 6 as soon as possible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 *kills* You could have made them separate characters >_> Also, I read the new chapter... I'm back to loving this xDDDDDD OMG< that beat-down was so epic, and Ninjew's arrival was so awesome~ *shakes Fusion's hand* In December, I am SO voting for you for Fancic King. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Fusion X. Denver Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 :D*shakes it back*If you think that's good, just wait until you see the final confrontation=epic beyond imagination :3I'm thinking of what to do in Chapter 6...maybe stir up some drama? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Fusion, want my advice? It's what I should have done in the KS fic. Take a chapter for each club, to get El/D.L. and Fusion accustomed with the workings of the FTK and the Akatsuki. It helps a LOT with characterization, and lets you add in some nice character relationships (not necesarily love) to be used later~ Also, Tim was NEVER a part of the FTK. EVER >>;; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Holy cap it ran of the screen He was very annoying...anyways (even though I'm not in high school yet). Where would this story lead. hopefully not to a boring semester of classes. (Which may happen without our supah powers) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Fusion X. Denver Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 He wasn't?Well, he is for now.And hmmm, not a bad idea.I just might run with that.EDIT: Oh you'll see Chase, you'll see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Ireread it..more thoroughly...pretty funny at some parts. I'm also a pyrotechnics expert? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 LOL~ Also, Fusion, of course, this time should be used wisely, as kept entertaining, and good to the story~ If you can impress me with those 2, or maybe even divide 1 chapter for both (I wouldn't), that would be a commendable feat. But hey, it's just a suggestion~ If you think of somethin better, go with it~ PS: I would also take time to reveal more about relationships between characters that have known each other before the two clubs. (such as why D.L calls Kari, Aqua, and Kana his sprites >>;; ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Fusion I hate you.I will f***ing kill you. And seriously we get our ass kicked in the first chapter we apear,but for some reason ninjew is the mentor.Are you f-ing serious.I was kage when he join,how does he get to be the mentor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Dra-man, you shoot guns when you're 12... be THANKING Fuse... And Nin-pimp is a ninja Dra-man, he deserves to be the mentor. And Fusion, I'm guessing those "few exceptions" to being in multiple clubs will be me and DL? >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 ....Truth. You got guns, Dra-man. Everyone else go ninja knives. Speakin of, FUSION You should have made the gangsters say "ninja stars, and little knives." no0t shuriken and kunai knives >>'' Also, I hope so. I wanna be a ninja. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Plus, Fuse could incorperate how you kept trying to get me to join Akatsuki, and then like a gang war is brewing or something and I join... Makes sense to me... :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Fusion X. Denver Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Dra-man, you shoot guns when you're 12... be THANKING Fuse... Yeah seriously :/And why would a bunch of kids know how to take down a gang Dranzer >.>Ninjew is the mentor because he's been the same ever since we met him.Some of Chapter 6 is written, I'll get to it later (got a friend over right now) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 bring up me as a good drawer... I am :D When will my cross and Omnitrix be fixed.... I want transform as goop.... ULTIMATE FORM! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Don't forget, I'm not some idiot with a girl, I'm an honor student... so don't make me look like an idiot. >:T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Dont forget I get pisssed easily Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Don't forget I'm a mad scientist, I mean whiz kid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Don't forget, I am actually a nice guy but come off as a hard ass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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