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The Ben is not you, BT. Remember, you are Ben Tennyson, The badass misterious dude is called Ben.

 

oh you gotta be f***ing me... you made a new wierd character with Ben in its name but I'm not in the past 2 chapters and was mentioned once on 3 chapters before! WTF am I!?

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Why did I want Deus's blood.... and who's that cloaked man?

 

 

oh you gotta be f***ing me... you made a new wierd character with Ben in its name but I'm not in the past 2 chapters and was mentioned once on 3 chapters before! WTF am I!?

 

You are a secondary character. Just as Deus in this story.

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@Chase - Lolsurvive-ish XD

 

@Fusion -

 

..................Yuki PWND you.

 

But then you whacked him with a hammer BY ACCIDENT.

 

=_=

 

And WTFclawswut?

 

Aside from that, nice chapters.

 

A bit unrealistic (for a fic that is supposed to be realistic) but otherwise nice.

 

Albeit I doubt the thugs would just stand there holding Aqua as JZ charged at them with swords.

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Roxas took out his gun, “Look, I’ll try to help lighten your sentence in court, but you people have committed murder and adultery. You’re coming downtown with m-” His sentence was cut off, however, as he was shot in the side and fell over. Standing behind him holding the culprit of Roxas’ fatal wound was none other than Donovyn.

“DMG!” yelled El remembering to use codenames on the field. “The hell are you doing?!”

“Relax Ecchi, a man of Roxas’ caliber won’t die from such a wound, I merely sought to incapacitate him. Even if it’s inconvenient for us to let him live, Yugo needs him as a symbol to rally behind in order to stay sane. If a Mod were to perish, then chaos would ensue, so I compromised the situation by letting him live and also letting us escape. Now everyone MOVE!”

Cause no one ever dies from a fatal gunshot amirite?

 

Plus I hate Donovyn now, I mean what the f*** are we even fighting for?

 

We seem to exist just so we can kill random people and call it justice.

 

We have enemies, but who the monsters here.

 

We wreck festivals, we murder, we turn our backs to the very guardians of this world and we kill innocents without a second glance.

 

Yes we are known now, we are known for exactly the same reason the Al Queda were.

 

Woopy fuckin do.

 

Does this mean it's stabby time?

 

Later, let's see if there is reason and rhyme in this slaughter.

 

If not, their blood is fit for one thing.

 

Dousing our steel.

 

>.>

 

(I don't like vilgantes with End justifies means, this is why I don't watch Geass or Death Note, I want them to LOSE)

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@Nexev

At the very least I'm pretty sure I'm going to have some secret objective.

 

That or we both wind up being members of the Organization and we are just acting at the moment.

 

 

I still find the fact that Roxas uses the key to the city as a weapon.

 

And I prefer guns.

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Yes but if Nevin is as much like me as I think then he is about 1 hour from camly flipping the f*** out and killing half of the group, arresting the other half so they can have a fair trial, and capturing Donovyn and having him interogatted by the goverment for acts of high treason, like he has performed as a terroist movement, then have him executed.

 

Painfully, and slowly.

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Yes but if Nevin is as much like me as I think then he is about 1 hour from camly flipping the f*** out and killing half of the group, arresting the other half so they can have a fair trial, and capturing Donovyn and having him interogatted by the goverment for acts of high treason, like he has performed as a terroist movement, then have him executed.

 

Painfully, and slowly.

 

Sounds fun, can I help?

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@Chase - Lolsurvive-ish XD@Fusion - ..................Yuki PWND you. But then you whacked him with a hammer BY ACCIDENT.=_=And WTFclawswut?Aside from that, nice chapters.A bit unrealistic (for a fic that is supposed to be realistic) but otherwise nice.Albeit I doubt the thugs would just stand there holding Aqua as JZ charged at them with swords.

 

I know he did, I wrote it >.>

Unrealistic? Eh, that happens in fan fictions. Cuz, you know, they're fictions.

As for the thugs, JZ moved so flipping fast, they had no time to react. Plus, he kicked up granite and dust in their faces, so any spare moments were stolen by him.

In other words, JZ just pwned them in a superly fast manner.

Cause no one ever dies from a fatal gunshot amirite?

 

Donovyn shot the gun so it would graze his side, he'd bleed profusely, but it wouldn't be fatal since Roxas has been through worse and would know what to do. Probably a minute after they left he mustered the strength to tie his wound up and reconvene with the Mods.

But Nev, Donovyn only shot Roxas so the FTK wouldn't be arrested. Not to mention Club Pikachu attacked them first :/

Everything else, that's your opinion which I can respect you for.

 

So guys, wanna play a guessing game?

I gave a few random members cameos in this chapter. If you can name them, I'll rep you for each correct guess xD

But you only get to guess once.

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He's perfectly willing to kill you cause you saw him.

 

And I still have no idea why the FTK were founded in this rp and we both know that we would have gotten pardoned after a trial.

 

We left a few Pikachu menbers alive but incapacitated, Donovyn f***ed up either way.

 

Everyone knows who we are and now by hitting a mod we have everybody worth any ounce of respect against us.

 

Cherry

Ice

Clair

Saint Dane

 

and allot more like Roxas ALLOT more than Donovyn.

 

Hell, I like Roxas more than Donovyn.

 

I would gladly kill the Knights right now as there isn't any reason to sympathize with him.

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I was only explaining his reasoning, I didn't deny he was a sadistic b*stard.

But trust me, the few Pikachu members alive will be killed :/

Or so it may seem~

The FTK, the known missions they've done so far:

1. Sending El to fight Hito to determine a possible connection between Life and the Inactive.

2. Wrecking the Pop Park festival and the park itself to teach the people about loss and to not take things for granted. Plus they totally stole the space Donovyn was going to use for Lolicon '10.

3. Repairing El's friendship with Chris.

4. Meeting up to address the situation with Aqua, which turned into an unexpected brawl against the Rebellion and Club Pikachu.

 

So FTK should get mixed perspectives on their actions

1. Ruining the CP will infuriate nerds

2. Being able to take down such a large force lets people know they're skilled

3. People will recognize them as vigilantes and question their methods

4. And Roxas and Flame were there, they know Club Pikachu started the conflict and were more antagonistic than FTK was. Roxas only tried arresting them as procedure, and he was gonna try defending them to the extent where their sentence would be lightened.

 

I kinda don't get what you were saying about the 4 people you mentioned, but they'll probably show up at some point. Ice made a cameo in chapter 1 actually.

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All people know is that they slaughtered many nerds and that they attack an officer.

 

Roxas is incapacitated and no one is alive to defend them.

 

They have no publicity that isn't negative

 

Publicity is everything the masses are who you protect who everyone is either protecting or controlling.

 

If you can't keep them in the blind or positive your going to lose moral, lives, resources, and the entire reason for your existence.

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Roxas is incapacitated, but it's not like he's gonna be in a coma.

And he doesn't know who any of them are, only their faces and the first names of Aqua and her sisters. (For those of you who want to know, when he was called about the Aqua incident, he practically skimmed her file and then her sisters', but only bothered to memorize their first names so he would be able to help her friends cope. If you say why didn't Roxas bother to read into them more thoroughly or bother to memorize their last names too, then it's because he was in a rush to the hospital and figured he'd have time to completely analyze the case later).

Plus, Creator hacked into the database where their information is kept and destroyed everyone's files. Including the physical ones like what Roxas handed to Flame in Chapter 11 by Kana.

When the FTK makes a bumble, they fix it as much as possible.

They will learn from this endeavor and, well, Roxas will half praise and half incriminate them.

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I don't hack, I control.

 

Anyway I agree with Nexev, instead of being a fun-loving, random group of people like we are your making us out to be Terrorists. I wouldn't mind killing off the group right now either.

 

Honestly you and DL have the same problem, you can't get the image right. DL makes us to goofy, you make us to serious and evil.

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Hey, we're a bunch of random, fun-loving people that love messing around, but when times get serious, so do we.

 

Check the old FTK thread for proof.

 

And if you don't count the fillers, I got us right on the mark >:I

 

Seriosuly, tho. Skim through some of the later pages in the old FTK thread >>

 

@Fusion - I doubt Roxas would be very nice to them after they shot him with a fatal non-fatal wound.

 

And besides, from the time you took to describe JZ's actions, it didn't seem like he was going fast.

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nah, half of us just kept tiying to kill one another.

Ok I'm tired of wondering. I may sound like an idiot who should never read again but will, anyways, what's a cameo?

 

Cameo = A hidden appearance by another character that will probably return at a later time if not killed off.

 

AKA a hidden Mickey.

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