Trio of DEF

[DL]

Before I forget

 

The second to last line "They had won the war"

 

was unneeded.

 

The final "They had won"

 

was epic enough.

 

 

Other few unneeded lines. Like after Chris' speech, "your philosophy totally differs from mine" or whatever, could have been left out.

 

 

 

Now

 

On to the good stuff

 

Maaaan

 

 

That was the SHIZ

 

Like

 

off the heezy.

 

Deustodo was badass till the end. "Tonight, we dine in Hell!"

 

 

Ninjew's last line was badass, about Death.

 

I overall liked the last part. There was tell, but it didn't matter, because that was also the good kind of tell. it definitely wasn't bad. Because honestly, you told in a GOOD way.

 

 

You've become a great writer, young Padawan :3

 

 

And BTW, died at the band-aid bit.

 

XDDD

 

 

BTW, Banhammer FTFW

 

And, I know I've said it...but your planning ahead as to the guy Deus spotted who killed all the Inactive members....was epic >:3

[Fusion X. Denver]

Yup, I've always intended for Ninjew to play his part.

Glad you liked the finale despite its faults :3

That was a good quote from Ninjew...especially considering it was something he actually said in his bio.

And now you know why your one-shots aren't canon.

Deustodo is dead ;___;

I'm sad he and Ninjew died, but they went out with a bang.

 

Honestly, at the end of it all, I think these are my favorite characters:

1. Ninjew

2. Chris

3. Creator

4. Deustodo

5. D.L/El (I still can't choose between you two .-.)

Although, 4 and 5 are honestly interchangeable. I'm probably leaning towards Deus right now since he had a defining moment as he died.

And Donovyn comes in as a close 6 with Cortez right behind him as 7.

 

I guess you guys don't have to answer this, but I'm very curious.

What are your favorite characters .-.

[Jake the Sage]

I have no clue. Each one is interesting in their own right and I can only really pick and choose a moment where I truly liked them over the other.

[Blake]

1. Caeda

2. Ninjew

3. Deus

4. Life (>>

5. Thomas

[Jake the Sage]

Now honestly, there were parts where I thought Life was a bit too cliche for his own good. He had a background and all but he had NO personality really above "megalomaniac"

At least Creator, in all of his ingenious psycopathy, had a personality.

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

I'm pretty much with Jake on this. I just can't choose.

[DL]

I have no clue. Each one is interesting in their own right and I can only really pick and choose a moment where I truly liked them over the other.

Xactly

 

Tho if I HAD to pick....

 

 

1. DL

2. Deus

3. El

4. Chris

5. Creator

 

I think

 

 

And

 

I REMEMBER NOW

 

 

I LOVE YOU

 

YOU INCORPORATED CAINE.

[Fusion X. Denver]

But Caeda's bare-

Ah it's fine, there'll be plenty of one-shots.

I'm surprised anyone could like Life .-.

Like Jake said, dude was the epitome of megalomania. I don't think I've ever provided an opportunity for readers to feel even one bit of sympathy for him in his past or something.

Though sometimes, people are just dicks for no reason.

And Life...was the biggest dick of them all.

...

FUG.

EL SHOULD HAVE GIVEN HIM THE DICK OF THE YEAR AWARD.

DAMN MISSED OPPORTUNITIES.

EDIT: Not the end of him either.

As I've said before...over and over.

One-shots.

[Blake]

But I like Life for being so perfectly... Dickish.

 

It was like Aizen done right.

[---------------]

I liked my family and Roxas. Also liked Ninjew, Deus, and Creator.

[Jake the Sage]

Yeah . . . "one-shots"

*cough*

 

And Life was just bland, honestly I think you could have given him a bit more of a personality. I also would have been REALLY happy if his "I never miss" line was thrown back at him.

[Kazooie]

But Caeda's bare-

Ah it's fine, there'll be plenty of one-shots.

I'm surprised anyone could like Life .-.

Like Jake said, dude was the epitome of megalomania. I don't think I've ever provided an opportunity for readers to feel even one bit of sympathy for him in his past or something.

Though sometimes, people are just dicks for no reason.

And Life...was the biggest dick of them all.

 

i was plot love interest :'DDDDD

 

i felt sorry for him

 

Only because he was smart about his take over. It's a big let down he didn't at least get to blow the city up after everything he DID do well. D:

[Fusion X. Denver]

Ninjew, Deus and Creator were probably the most epic of my characters. Donovyn too.

There are plenty more, but those 3 come to mind in particular when I think of the end of it all.

 

Roxas, I wish I knew him better so I'd be able to use him more. Definitely my favorite amongst the Banned higher-ups.

Rosa, I liked her purity. She was a perfect complement for Chris too...

Atman, I liked him for his tragic situation and how he wasn't really evil. The fight with him and Chris also spawned one of my favorite catchphrases ever.

Umbra, if I actually planned ahead, I'd make him an even bigger part of the plot. I'm glad I was able to somehow incorporate him into kickstarting the whole Banned revolution, but I feel his lack of screentime did him injustice. When DEF is novelized, I'll certainly envelop his role further so he can mature as a character.

 

As for Life being a dick, well, considering I gave him no other positive qualities, how could he not be the perfect dick?

...if I keep saying dick, something naughty will come to my mind...

 

EDIT: It's okay Caeda, he practically ruined the lives of millions of people to make up for it :lol:

And eh, Kari ending up alive was kinda throwing it in his face.

Should have made him have a reaction though.

[Jake the Sage]

LOL BD

 

And I think some of the deaths were awesome too, as well as the fights when you really worked them out.

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

I heard d*ck. Nobuo vs. Life. it needs to be done. Why? The perfect d*ck vs. a huge a**shole. Wait. I should rephrase that. :/

[Kazooie]

EDIT: It's okay Caeda, he practically ruined the lives of millions of people to make up for it :lol:

And eh, Kari ending up alive was kinda throwing it in his face.

Should have made him have a reaction though.

 

...he should have blown up the moon

 

yes, i am serious

 

LIFE SHOULD HAVE BLOWN UP THE MOON. HE DOESN'T WANT YOUR MOON. HE'S GONNA BURN YOUR CITY DOWN. WITH THE MOON.

[Jake the Sage]

I heard d*ck. Nobuo vs. Life. it needs to be done. Why? The perfect d*ck vs. a huge a**shole. Wait. I should rephrase that. :/

 

Yaoi Yaoi NobouXLife Ya{gets thrown out the window}

 

No Jackie!!! NO!!!

<_<

>_>

 

Oh shut up everyone I can throw my sister out've a window if I want!

[waves to Aunt Jackie as she falls]

[Fusion X. Denver]

...

Actually, I was pl-

No.

I shall say nothing.

BUT YEAH, BLOWING UP THE MOON WOULD HAVE BEEN EPIC.

HELL, THE FINAL FIGHT SHOULD HAVE BEEN ON THE DAMN MOON.

 

@Jake-Ninjew and Life's death gets top props.

Then Deustodo.

And then that human shish-kebob Creator made from those Pikachu nerds.

 

@Desu-Oh god...

Damn the visualization...

DAMN IT.

[Kazooie]

...

Actually, I was pl-

No.

I shall say nothing.

BUT YEAH, BLOWING UP THE MOON WOULD HAVE BEEN EPIC.

HELL, THE FINAL FIGHT SHOULD HAVE BEEN ON THE DAMN MOON.

 

...WHY DIDN'T YOU DO THAT. SO MANY ONE LINERS YOU COULD HAVE MADE ON THE MOON, AND YOU THREW IT ALL AWAY.

 

YOU BETTER WRITE A ONE SHOT WHERE LIFE BLOWS UP THE MOON. THEN FIGHTS ON THE EXPLODED REMAINS. OF THE MOON HE BLEW UP. D<

[Jake the Sage]

Honestly Fusion I think Deustodo's death was more epic than Ninjew/Life. They were hit with the ban hammer . . . and pierced by swords.

 

Deustodo actually f*cking JUMPED into Lava after saying one of the best lines I have heard this entire story.

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

Yaoi Yaoi NobouXLife Ya{gets thrown out the window}

 

No Jackie!!! NO!!!

<_<

>_>

 

Oh shut up everyone I can throw my sister out've a window if I want!

[waves to Aunt Jackie as she falls]

 

I blame you for this yaoi curse. Ever since that one day I've been put in so many yaoi pairings. <_<

[Limited Edition KING]

lolGir

Dude where's my car reference

And I swear Life could have made a scooby doo reference.

Finally the evil b*stard is dead but I have an odd feeling he'll be back in chapter 36 and everyone else will get their shot at him. :I

[Fusion X. Denver]

Honestly Fusion I think Deustodo's death was more epic than Ninjew/Life. They were hit with the ban hammer . . . and pierced by swords.

 

Deustodo actually f*cking JUMPED into Lava after saying one of the best lines I have heard this entire story.

 

Hey, I can respect that viewpoint.

I might feel particular attachment to Ninjew's death since it was the one thing I actually planned from the beginning, but the two are pretty close.

@Caeda-YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW DUMB I FEEL RIGHT NOW.

MAN, CORTEZ WOULD HAVE HAD A FIELD DAY.

Chris: I won't let him get away! I'll chase him around the whole damn moon if I have to!

Cortez: I guess you could say you'll attempt a lunar eclipse.

OR

Black: Caeda, you look beautiful.

Cortez: I guess you could say Caeda looks positively ilLUMInating tonight.

 

@Desu-That curse sucks.

*erases NobuoxWynn one-shot out of pity*

 

EDIT: If Life could tank like 15 swords being plunged in his gut, Black would raeg over him outdoing Aizen .-.

[Jake the Sage]

DF I have no idea what you are talking about 8 /

[Kazooie]

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW DUMB I FEEL RIGHT NOW.

MAN, CORTEZ WOULD HAVE HAD A FIELD DAY.

Chris: I won't let him get away! I'll chase him around the whole damn moon if I have to!

Cortez: I guess you could say you'll attempt a lunar eclipse.

OR

Black: Caeda, you look beautiful.

Cortez: I guess you could say Caeda looks positively ilLUMInating tonight.

 

FUSE. I AM ASHAMED OF YOU. IT COULD HAVE BEEN AMAZING CORNY.

 

D<