Fusion X. Denver Posted July 22, 2011 Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 Not really . . . because then everyone just becomes space travelers and what not.So how far are you on completing the newest chapter? I answered that in post 3390. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aviv: D's Knight Posted July 22, 2011 Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 You could make a spin off seiries, like Yu-gi-oh! DMX. Seriously, I'd write trio of LIX (Life, Icy, and Life's son, what's his face). It would be from the point of view of the villains. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted July 22, 2011 Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 Obviously Fusion will just write Two Epilogues. One where DEF beats life and saves the world. The other where Life defeats DEF and the world becomes his. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 22, 2011 Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 Actually, when I write chapter 36 and the epilogue, I'm not leaving DEF.I plan on writing one-shots about...pretty much anything in the DEF universe.If you go to the front page and check out the Gallery, you'll get a better idea. Other people have written DEF one-shots, pretty much all of them are great reads.So doing a one-shot from a villain's POV is a great idea.And of course, you're welcome to write a one-shot if you want. It'd go right in the Gallery.Btw, Life's son is Xazeon.EDIT: Toooo lazy :TThe epilogue is teh epilogue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 22, 2011 Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 Note: Fusion can be an ass when coming out with these XDSeriously did not get his "message" at all, but figured I should check the front page anyways. So lets get to the review already dad! Fine, here we go [spoiler=Order and Chaos]". . . worst flight ever!" What about the one where you get PUSHED out without a parachute? THAT was my worse flight XD Good ol' Cortez and his rambling . . . makes reading this pass by much more quickly.Also note how they are having a convertsationin midair, with one of the speakers flailing in the wind.Good point. So Cortez is fighitng with a giant . . . credit cards? WTF?! Soul?SOUL . . .< _ <> _ >There is no joke here Also this is like watching Spiderman vs Venom LOL I am suprised we haven't seen a "pantsing" moment until now XDDD Don't let funny man Cortez die~! Dude the fight between Creator and Deus was awesome. Each move had another move and that move lead to another string of events. Plus Deus was a good smack talker XD And then we see Mr. X . . .Who is Death?That doesn't make senseBut then Flandre comes in and calls him Aluruis . . . WHO!? Well stay tuned for Part 2DUN DUN *shot* All in all, a short first part, but it was good none the less Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted July 22, 2011 Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 Wait, what? Damnit. *Goes to read part 1 of 35.* FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUuuuuuuuu....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Edit:I finished reading part 1. Before anybody asks why that took 50 minutes when it was pretty short is because I'm easily distracted and check some other stuff on YCM. Anyway...A good part 1. Now to wait for part 2... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 22, 2011 Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 Wait, what? Damnit. *Goes to read part 1 of 35.* FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUuuuuuuuu....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HA, SO YOU DIDN'T GET THE MESSAGE. @Jake-To answer those questions regarding Death/Mr. X, refer to the plane ride on the way to Japan and the convo between him and Donovyn after the sh*t at the warehouse with you and King.Soul was Cortez's idea actually. I used it because honestly, it's hard to expect a teenager be able to take down a giant strong guy like Brow. He'd need some kind of boost. The only thing I changed from his original idea was shortening the usage from 5 times an hour to 4 times an hour (ended up only using it 4 times .-.)The Swiss Credit Card thing was also his idea. Those actually exist IRL, his is just a larger version.My only regret with Creator and Deustodo was I thought it was kinda short >_>But the actual fighting, I think I did okay with. Even if there wasn't many hits exchanged, I'd like to think each one did tons of damage and that's why the fight was shortened.And pssh, Cortez would totally keep his cool in mid-air.>.><.<BY THE WAYAt the moment, I'll be releasing Part 2/3 on Sunday.But there's a way to have it come out earlier...[spoiler=Current DEF Reader List (as far as I know of)]HorusJakeCreatorBlackDLChaseDMGSonicDesuAtmanShadowItachiKingFlandreCaeda Scratched off people are the ones who've made comments already.3/15 basically.SOIF YOU WANT PART 2 OUT:I NEED 7 MORE PEOPLE TO COMMENT ON TEH CHAPTAH. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted July 22, 2011 Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 Nope. :3 I had edited my last post though. :/ But yeah. I liked both of the battles. Unlike Jake I'm not realy too big of a fan of Cotez's jokes. They're okay I guess. I did find the pantsing funny though. Whitie-tighties. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted July 22, 2011 Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 Didn't know part one was up ^^; Anyway, interesting first part Fuse. Anticipating part 2.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazooie Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 BY THE WAYAt the moment, I'll be releasing Part 2/3 on Sunday.But there's a way to have it come out earlier...[spoiler=Current DEF Reader List (as far as I know of)]HorusJakeCreatorBlackDLChaseDMGSonicDesuAtmanShadowItachiKingFlandreCaeda Scratched off people are the ones who've made comments already.3/15 basically.SOIF YOU WANT PART 2 OUT:I NEED 7 MORE PEOPLE TO COMMENT ON TEH CHAPTAH. Fuse, if you want me to comment all you have to do is ask. :'D Also, Black isn't going to be able to comment. He's gone until next Tuesday at the earliest. the part was short and that made me sad cause i want to know what happens D: Also, I like both the fights, but Creator and Dues entire fight left me wanting something. I don't know, I think I got used to flashy everything fights. :'O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 IF YOU WANT PART 2 OUT:I NEED 7 MORE PEOPLE TO COMMENT ON TEH CHAPTAH.TEH CHAPTAH.TEH CHAPTAH.TEH CHAPTAH.TEH CHAPTAH.TEH CHAPTAH.TEH CHAPTAH.TEH CHAPTAH.TEH CHAPTAH.AM I DOIN DIS RITE? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 And DL is off at the maracas this weekend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 Huh...Didn't know they were gong away .-.But thanks for the comments everybody. ONLY THREE MORE LEFT.WHOZIT GONNA BE? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 BY THE WAYAt the moment, I'll be releasing Part 2/3 on Sunday.But there's a way to have it come out earlier...[spoiler=Current DEF Reader List (as far as I know of)]HorusJakeCreatorBlackDLChaseDMGSonicDesuAtmanShadowItachiKingFlandreCaeda Scratched off people are the ones who've made comments already.3/15 basically.SOIF YOU WANT PART 2 OUT:I NEED 7 MORE PEOPLE TO COMMENT ON TEH CHAPTAH.This is pretty much all that I pictured while reading this comment. Fusion: Anyway chapter 35 part 2 is complete, however since so many of you have been asking and asking about it I think I'll hold onto it for a little whileThomas: That's right he's got it riiiight here, hey Fusion read that part where someone dies.Fusion: AHAHA THAT IS SO EPIC I THINK I JUST PEE'D A LITTLE. Oh what's that YCM? You want to read it too? Oh okay here you go- OH PSYCHE! Ah-ha oh you should see the look on your faces.Thomas: Yeah right on their faces, they were like yay I'm going to read it and then they were like NOOO YOU TRICKED ME. Right Fusion?Fusion: Yes Thomas that's right, have a cookie.Thomas: *cookie shows up* YAY OM-NOM-NOM-NOMFusion: Anyway if anyone wants to see the next episode, 7 PEOPLE HAVE TO COMMENT ON THE CURRENT ONE. +1 cookie for anyone who gets the reference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 So uh...did you read it .-.Was it good?Whatever the answer, only 2 left then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 I loved Cortez's battle, Creator's possible loss, and the subtile hints to Madara's death As for the possible epilouge Remo = General Cross broke, gambler, womanizer WHERES TEH CHAPTAH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 So uh...did you read it .-.Was it good?Whatever the answer, only 2 left then.... I skimmed it like Matthew Patels email :IAlso I had no idea it was up because the thread title was still chapter 34 :II've read Cortez's battle though, it was pretty brutal. -goes to read the whole chapter- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 ... I skimmed it like Matthew Patels email :IAlso I had no idea it was up because the thread title was still chapter 34 :II've read Cortez's battle though, it was pretty brutal. -goes to read the whole chapter- The other battle is good too I think, when it comes to the actual fighting styles.I think you'll like it.I left the thread title to see how many people would get the reference I made, but it didn't work >>@Itachi-ONE MORE BUDDEH. By the way, once Part 2 is released, I'll offer the same deal.10 comments for Part 3 or wait for two days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 Das cruel fuse ;_; two days if 10 people don't post? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 ... Yeah I forgot to tell you putting restrictions on before a new chapter is released isn't a good idea I've done that before with one of my fanfics and that makes nobody comment :IYou're better off just setting release dates and posting them on the dates :I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 Das cruel fuse ;_; two days if 10 people don't post? For Part 3, yes.For Part 2, just 1 more. EDIT: So wait, you're saying I should wait two more days before putting out Part 2?Well alright, if King thinks so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 NOHELL NOI WILL PERSONALLY COME OVER TO NEW JERSEY AND POST IT FROM YOUR COMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 I'll go with him and break your legs. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aviv: D's Knight Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 Wow, you have no humanity left, that's what youd'e expect from the guy who wrote LifeXD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 Well it's Sunday and I have yet to see part 2. Come on Brad. We're going to New jersey. My buddy, baseball "leg breaker" bat, will be coming with us. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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