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Actually, when I write chapter 36 and the epilogue, I'm not leaving DEF.

I plan on writing one-shots about...pretty much anything in the DEF universe.

If you go to the front page and check out the Gallery, you'll get a better idea. Other people have written DEF one-shots, pretty much all of them are great reads.

So doing a one-shot from a villain's POV is a great idea.

And of course, you're welcome to write a one-shot if you want. It'd go right in the Gallery.

Btw, Life's son is Xazeon.

EDIT: Toooo lazy :T

The epilogue is teh epilogue.

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Note: Fusion can be an ass when coming out with these XD

Seriously did not get his "message" at all, but figured I should check the front page anyways.

 

So lets get to the review already dad!

 

Fine, here we go

 

[spoiler=Order and Chaos]

". . . worst flight ever!"

 

What about the one where you get PUSHED out without a parachute? THAT was my worse flight XD

 

Good ol' Cortez and his rambling . . . makes reading this pass by much more quickly.

Also note how they are having a convertsationin midair, with one of the speakers flailing in the wind.

Good point.

 

So Cortez is fighitng with a giant . . . credit cards? WTF?!

 

Soul?

SOUL . . .

< _ <

> _ >

There is no joke here

 

Also this is like watching Spiderman vs Venom

 

LOL I am suprised we haven't seen a "pantsing" moment until now XDDD

 

Don't let funny man Cortez die~!

 


 

Dude the fight between Creator and Deus was awesome. Each move had another move and that move lead to another string of events. Plus Deus was a good smack talker XD

 

And then we see Mr. X . . .

Who is Death?

That doesn't make sense

But then Flandre comes in and calls him Aluruis . . .

 

WHO!?

 

Well stay tuned for Part 2

DUN DUN *shot*

 

 

 

All in all, a short first part, but it was good none the less

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Wait, what? Damnit. *Goes to read part 1 of 35.* FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUuuuuuuuu....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Edit:

I finished reading part 1. Before anybody asks why that took 50 minutes when it was pretty short is because I'm easily distracted and check some other stuff on YCM.

 

Anyway...

A good part 1. Now to wait for part 2...

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Wait, what? Damnit. *Goes to read part 1 of 35.* FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUuuuuuuuu....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

HA, SO YOU DIDN'T GET THE MESSAGE.

 

@Jake-To answer those questions regarding Death/Mr. X, refer to the plane ride on the way to Japan and the convo between him and Donovyn after the sh*t at the warehouse with you and King.

Soul was Cortez's idea actually. I used it because honestly, it's hard to expect a teenager be able to take down a giant strong guy like Brow. He'd need some kind of boost. The only thing I changed from his original idea was shortening the usage from 5 times an hour to 4 times an hour (ended up only using it 4 times .-.)

The Swiss Credit Card thing was also his idea. Those actually exist IRL, his is just a larger version.

My only regret with Creator and Deustodo was I thought it was kinda short >_>

But the actual fighting, I think I did okay with. Even if there wasn't many hits exchanged, I'd like to think each one did tons of damage and that's why the fight was shortened.

And pssh, Cortez would totally keep his cool in mid-air.

>.>

<.<

BY THE WAY

At the moment, I'll be releasing Part 2/3 on Sunday.

But there's a way to have it come out earlier...

[spoiler=Current DEF Reader List (as far as I know of)]

Horus

Jake

Creator

Black

DL

Chase

DMG

Sonic

Desu

Atman

Shadow

Itachi

King

Flandre

Caeda

 

Scratched off people are the ones who've made comments already.

3/15 basically.

SO

IF YOU WANT PART 2 OUT:

I NEED 7 MORE PEOPLE TO COMMENT ON TEH CHAPTAH.

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BY THE WAY

At the moment, I'll be releasing Part 2/3 on Sunday.

But there's a way to have it come out earlier...

[spoiler=Current DEF Reader List (as far as I know of)]HorusJakeCreatorBlackDLChaseDMGSonicDesuAtmanShadowItachiKingFlandreCaeda

 

Scratched off people are the ones who've made comments already.3/15 basically.

SO

IF YOU WANT PART 2 OUT:

I NEED 7 MORE PEOPLE TO COMMENT ON TEH CHAPTAH.

 

Fuse, if you want me to comment all you have to do is ask. :'D

 

Also, Black isn't going to be able to comment. He's gone until next Tuesday at the earliest.

 

the part was short and that made me sad cause i want to know what happens D:

 

Also, I like both the fights, but Creator and Dues entire fight left me wanting something. I don't know, I think I got used to flashy everything fights. :'O

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BY THE WAY

At the moment, I'll be releasing Part 2/3 on Sunday.

But there's a way to have it come out earlier...

[spoiler=Current DEF Reader List (as far as I know of)]

Horus

Jake

Creator

Black

DL

Chase

DMG

Sonic

Desu

Atman

Shadow

Itachi

King

Flandre

Caeda

 

Scratched off people are the ones who've made comments already.

3/15 basically.

SO

IF YOU WANT PART 2 OUT:

I NEED 7 MORE PEOPLE TO COMMENT ON TEH CHAPTAH.

This is pretty much all that I pictured while reading this comment.

 

Fusion: Anyway chapter 35 part 2 is complete, however since so many of you have been asking and asking about it I think I'll hold onto it for a little while

Thomas: That's right he's got it riiiight here, hey Fusion read that part where someone dies.

Fusion: AHAHA THAT IS SO EPIC I THINK I JUST PEE'D A LITTLE. Oh what's that YCM? You want to read it too? Oh okay here you go- OH PSYCHE! Ah-ha oh you should see the look on your faces.

Thomas: Yeah right on their faces, they were like yay I'm going to read it and then they were like NOOO YOU TRICKED ME. Right Fusion?

Fusion: Yes Thomas that's right, have a cookie.

Thomas: *cookie shows up* YAY OM-NOM-NOM-NOM

Fusion: Anyway if anyone wants to see the next episode, 7 PEOPLE HAVE TO COMMENT ON THE CURRENT ONE.

 

+1 cookie for anyone who gets the reference.

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... I skimmed it like Matthew Patels email :I

Also I had no idea it was up because the thread title was still chapter 34 :I

I've read Cortez's battle though, it was pretty brutal. -goes to read the whole chapter-

 

The other battle is good too I think, when it comes to the actual fighting styles.

I think you'll like it.

I left the thread title to see how many people would get the reference I made, but it didn't work >>

@Itachi-ONE MORE BUDDEH.

 

By the way, once Part 2 is released, I'll offer the same deal.

10 comments for Part 3 or wait for two days.

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