Desu the Blue Nerd Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 Thanks boss. ^_^ I apologize DF, I remember seeing you posted a 1-shot, got distracted, and somehow lost the mental note telling me to go back and read it.Just finished, I like it so far.Though the thing with naming:Gin Level-->Gin AngerOh sorry. I thought it was Level since in I thought you were using the anger part of his name for that abillity of his.Cookie-Connie, although Cookie could have been a nickname.I couldn't remember her name but I thought in it with her it said her nickname was cookie. Thanks though.And I'm not sure if you remembered, but Nobuo basically has cybernetic arms that turn into giant pistols containing his signature "6 Shot". Your one-shot doesn't contradict that, just making sure you knew.Of course I know. Well I didn't know what kinds of guns since you did say machine guns but then only one bullet from each and then turning into three confused me. I was going to ask later. And Nobuo's bat is wooden in yours too. In here it's metal. Don't worry. I have a plan to fit these things all in.And you think of Cortez with Techi? No. I remember Cortez fighting somebodt with a lot of guns. I didn't remember who it was but for some reason keep thinking Techi.I loled.His character resembles him I guess, though his IRL personality is a far cry from him.Who? Techi? Actually, from what I have of him so far it's about the same as when him and bubble girl were still together. Anyways, great one-shot, looking forward to the second part.I'm not the best at criticism, but I'd say give the characters more description, even if only a couple adjectives and a sentence. Otherwise, nothing bad jumped out at me, maybe someone else would be more astute.Sorry, I've been told that I need to cut down on the description before so I didn't go into that great of detail. I was also a tad bit worried about the size of my paragraphs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 Lol I'm not gonna let Fuse necro bump w/ chapter for glory Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 Wow it really has been two days since no one posted in here 8OWe need something "Trio of DEF"-sy to talk about or get the new chapter in or else this'll die!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 It won't die, I'd update the thread with the new chapter and everyone would receive a notification and read.Duh.Sorry it's been ages, but I'll try to do some writing tomorrow, things have calmed down around here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 Okay Fusion . . .*begisn wondering where the Sprite animation is in getting finished* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 NEW CHAPTER PLEASECliffhanger is slowly ripping my skin offAnd then stuffing me in a bag of my own skin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 Man This has as many pages/posts as an average club :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 Yeah, I guess so. Fuse, my patience may be infinite, but my tolerance is starting to wear thing. Where is mah new chaptah! D:< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 Sorry, life's been busy and school's wrapping up, but I'll try to get back to it.I WILL finish DEF, so if anyone had thoughts of it dying off, not a chance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 With the YMB, End of school Testing and stuff cut Fusion some slack. He does almost as much as a Fourm Moderator does for all this stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 With the YMB, End of school Testing and stuff cut Fusion some slack. He does almost as much as a Fourm Moderator does for all this stuff. Too true . . . too true Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 I already told you all that Jake. <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted June 8, 2011 Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 How am I JUST now seeing this? O.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted June 8, 2011 Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 How am I JUST now seeing this? O.O Um.I dunno.Did...you didn't read all 33 chapters yet, right?How'd you find out about DEF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted June 8, 2011 Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 Um.I dunno.Did...you didn't read all 33 chapters yet, right?How'd you find out about DEF I said DEF in the thread. Didn't think he would go searching for it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted June 8, 2011 Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 I said DEF in the thread. Didn't think he would go searching for it though.Seeing as it was always on the front page and in Fuses sig It wouldn't be that hard to find in the first place Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 Um.I dunno.Did...you didn't read all 33 chapters yet, right?How'd you find out about DEF Well...I saw it mentioned in the thread...so I decided I would take a quick gander at it while checking my own Fan-Fic thread... Congratulations. Reading 33 chapters has now been added to my massive list of things to do. The list is based on how interesting it is to me...and this is like...second or third. Ugh, I need more time during the day. <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 ...I am amazed by how much was posted here. @Creator - 1. I can do a hell load of voices for your DEF sprite animation. (I haz amazing voice variety)2. I might just write that one-shot of a day in the Ultima ;DDDDDD @Fuse - Dude I will so totally write the most epic one0shot this thread has ever been blessed with. It'll be like the Hangover, in that it'll have basically everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Dude I will so totally write the most epic one0shot this thread has ever been blessed with.It'll be like the Hangover, in that it'll have basically everything. I'd like to see that >BDI stopped myself from writting too much and you can see how much I had Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 When I say everything I mean EVERYTHING. Action, comedy, DL-FILLER-STYLE STUFF (doesn't fall under any genre), perverted stuff, drama, horror, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Then Do it XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 *is eating popcorn* I like this. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 I shall. oh yeah Read 33 Hoenstly, Fuse I feel you still tell unecessarily. Like when Jake thought "I really don't wanna use this, because it'll break my sword...but I got no choice" (paraphrase) I mean....doesn't it seem better (and cooler) to just say "I really don't wanna use this...but I guess I got no choice...." It adds to the suspense and tension Because we know if he said that there's something that is bad in that equation But outright telling us what it is takes away that tension .~. Otherwise, good fights as always (tho unbelieavable, I suppose the setting we discussed wil make it belieavable.) And Creator At least this isn't the FTK fic Where every other chapter that wasn't a DL-filler ended in a cliffhanger xD and Chase in a coma Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 ...I am amazed by how much was posted here. @Creator - 1. I can do a hell load of voices for your DEF sprite animation. (I haz amazing voice variety)2. I might just write that one-shot of a day in the Ultima ;DDDDDD @Fuse - Dude I will so totally write the most epic one0shot this thread has ever been blessed with. It'll be like the Hangover, in that it'll have basically everything.I'm caling BS on that first thng.Except for like, one Sasuke voice, they all sound the same (from the four or five I've heard).I may just be being stupid, but thats what I think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 @DLI watched your Yugioh fandub. Dude you have one voice. All of them sounded like 12 year olds who's balls hadn't dropped. Seriously. No voices. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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