Trio of DEF

[Super Chaos Sonic]

I dunno if that's so much an ending as it is an AMV, bro :T

Plus, you're assuming a lot >.>

Future reference:

Rui-El's girlfriend

Rosa-Chris' dead girlfriend

Rogue-Ninjew's girlfriend

The 3 R's were totally unintentional.

[spoiler=DEF AMV]

Beginning music

View of Yugo City, completely ruined with smoke rising out of it

 

[Chorus]

We are young

Shows the Banned, bandaged and injured severly walking away from the battlefield

But we have heart

A Banned member falls on the ground and everyone helps him up, everyone grinning

Born in this world as it all falls apart

Emma's group crashing their jet into the tower

We are strong

Banned members helping each other to escape the debris

We don't belong

Sora clenching his Keyblade in anger

Born in this world as it all falls apart

Life holding a baby Xazeon

 

Interim 1

Donovyn slowly standing up until he glances to the camera, slashing a Getsuga Tensho

 

I see the children in the rain like the parade before the pain

The Banned marching to the Tower of Any Other in the rain, view is of their feet as it fades out

I see the love,

El and his girlfriend holding hands

I see the hate,

Creator and Donnovyn glaring at each other

I see this world we can make

Ragnarok holding a globe

 

I see the life,

Chris reaching to the sky

I see the sky,

El flying down through the sky

Give it all to see you fly

DL chilling on a helicopter ladder

Yes, we wave this flag of hatred,

Shadowed figure holding a shadowed flag

but you're the ones who made it

Death fading to black

 

Watch the beauty of all our lies passing right before my eyes

Rosa dying

I hear the hate in all your words.

Life laughing

All the wars that make us hurt

Chris trembling

 

We get so sick oh so sick,

Crab holding her hand over her mouth, tears running down her face

we never wanted all this

Her hand tightens

Medication for the kids with no reason to live

Flandre thrashing about in the hospital as doctors try to sedate him

 

So we

Cortez mouthing the lyrics

March to the drums of the damned as we come

The Banned marching against the rising sun

Watch it burn in the sun,

Dranzer firing fire from pistols

we are numb

Zero's head rolling back in a yell

 

[Chorus]

We are young

Atman charging at Chris

But we have heart

JZ grabbing hold of Aqua's hand as she falls

Born in this world as it all falls apart

Pinkie Pie and Rarity butting heads

We are strong

BT killing Kiva

We don't belong

Hito frowning

Born in this world as it all falls apart

Justin and Aa'une frowning, turning their backs

 

As we walk among these shadows, in these streets,

Ninjew and Rogue leaning against a wall in the dark

these fields of battle

Banned members fighting the Inactive, Banned members being killed

Take it up,

Nexev standing over Fenrir

we wear the medal,

Chris grasping something

raise your hands with burning candles

Chase firing his fist up

 

Hear us whisper in the dark,

Jake shooing Lora away as he sneaks inside the Banned's base

in the rain you see the spark

Pikachu walking through Yugo City as it rains, his tazer sparking

Feel the beating of our hearts,

Black holding Caeda

fleeting hope as we depart

Cherry and Clair leaving smoldering remains of Cherry's home

 

All together,

The Banned roster picture

walk alone against all we've ever known

Life holding the world in his palm

All we've ever really wanted was a place to call our home

Memories, shown as pictures, of the various clubs everyone used to be a part of

 

But you take all we are;

The soulless stares of the Inactive

the innocence of our hearts

Thomas using Kingdom's Rage

Made to kneel before the alter as you tear us apart

Umbra kneeling before Life

 

So we

Cortez mouths again, pointing to the screen

March to the drums of the dammed as we come

Mods march in a horizontal line

Watch it burn in the sun,

Blake charging with his mask on

we are numb

Emma gritting her teeth, firing a sniper rifle at the camera

 

[Chorus]

We are young

Mr. Denver hugging Grace

But we have heart

Loren hugging DL

Born in this world as it all falls apart

El's parents watching him leave his home

We are strong

Sonic smiling with a clenched fist

We don't belong

Katie swinging her staff into Jude

Born in this world as it all falls apart

Leo charging up the stairs on Rainbow Dash

 

We will fight

Aqua and J.Z bracing for battle together

or we will fall

Zero lying in a pool of blood, Chase burned extremely badly

Till the angels save us all

Saturn looking up at an image of Ragnarok

 

We will fight

Black, Andx and Jake teaming up

or we will fall

Black, beaten up badly, patting a barely breathing Andx. Jake stuck into a wall, blood dripping from his mouth

Till the angels save us all

Black holding a silver cross around his neck

 

We will fight

Roxas fighting Odin

or we will fall

Sonic looking up at Sora as he raises his Keyblade

Till the angels save us all

Emma grimacing sideways at image of Creator

 

We will fight

Chris, DL and El charging

or we will fall

All three falling

Till the angels save us all

All three opening their eyes

 

[Chorus]

We are young

DL stomping his foot down

But we have heart

El grasping his blade

Born in this world as it all falls apart

Chris gritting his teeth

We are strong

All three yelling

We don't belong

All three swing their weapons

Born in this world as it all falls apart

Close-up on all three faces as they land a hit

 

[Chorus]

We are young

Akatsuki pose

But we have heart

Powerforce pose

Born in this world as it all falls apart

Vongola pose

We are strong

RP. 820 pose

We don't belong

Black Knights pose

Born in this world as it all falls apart

Fake Type Knights pose

 

Ending music

Sun rises on Yugo City

 

 

While these are fun to do, this is the last one I'm doing until the fic ends.

Course, you're welcome to keep making some :3

And/or do what DF said.

P.S.

Loren-DL's sister

She appeared like once >.>

 

This sounds pretty awesome. ^_^

 

I'm Chaos Sonic, Leader of the Vongola HQ, and I approve of this...-shot- ow....

[Limited Edition KING]

It looks like Sonic was hit with *puts on sunglasses* a one-shot.

 

YEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH -shot- mother f*cker!

[Super Chaos Sonic]

-hides the MK47- Whoops...my finger kinda slipped...lol

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

I forgot to say but i'm now at my mom's and am beginning work on my one-shot. I'm starting early in the week this time.

[Super Chaos Sonic]

Finale with a one-shot....sweet ^^

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

It's about Nobuo and Status. Sorry Boss, you're not in it. Well I can always make references to you guys.

[Jake the Sage]

DF I put you in my . . . oh wait I didn't 8 /

 

Well either way I just listen to songs and thought that one was a good ending song for the fourth arch of Trio of DEF

the entire "we are young" going in part with the fact most of the Banned ARE young teenagers.

 

Also, Fusion *thumbs up* Finish that chapter 8D

[Sploda]

is SOOO Creator, it isn't funny.

[spoiler=Found one]If you take a life

Do you know what you'll give?

Odds are you won't like What it Is.

 

When the storm arrives

Would you be seen with me?

By the merciless eyes I've deceived

 

I've seen angels fall from blinding heights

But you yourself are nothing so divine

Just next in line

 

Arm yourself because no one else here will save you

The odds will betray you

And I will replace you

You can't deny the prize it may never fulfill you

It longs to kill you

Are you willing to die?

The coldest blood runs through my veins

You know my name

 

If you come inside

Things will not be the same

When you return to my eyes

 

And if you think you've won

You never saw me change

The game that we have been playing

 

I've seen diamonds cut through harder men

Then you yourself but if you must pretend

You may meet your end

 

 

Arm yourself because no one else here will save you

The odds will betray you

And I will replace you

You can't deny the prize it may never fulfill you

It longs to kill you

Are you willing to die?

The coldest blood runs through my veins

 

Try to hide your hand

Forget how to feel (forget how to feel)

Life is gone

With just a spin of the wheel (spin of the wheel)

 

 

Arm yourself because no one else here will save you

The odds will betray you

And I will replace you

You can't deny the prize it may never fulfill you

It longs to kill you

Are you willing to die?

The coldest blood runs through my veins

You know my name (You Know My Name)

 

 

I've provided the lyrics in case someone wants to mess with them. I just like the song.

[Lt. Colonel Remo]

So...

 

heh heh

 

is the chapter half way completed by any chance?

[Fusion X. Denver]

It's getting there.

School is really lightening up, plus I have a lot of free time tonight and tomorrow, so I should get some more finished.

Honestly, I only have a half day Friday, school Monday and Tuesday, Six Flags on Wednesday, study day Thursday, then one final on Friday and one other on Monday.

So my schedule will be wide open real soon.

[Lt. Colonel Remo]

Tommorrow is my last day

 

English/Chinese exams ;_;

[Fusion X. Denver]

Oh yeah, everyone, Sonic wrote a quick one-shot.

Go check it out at the gallery!

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

Interesting work Boss. Currently my one-shot is going well. I'm thinking of releasing it into parts. I'm at page 9 right now and with everything I'm planning this isn't even half of it.

[Fusion X. Denver]

Sweet, another long one like Jake's.

You can do whatever you like, looking forward to it either way.

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

Obviously I still need to work on it. I feel like my vocabulary and descriptive ability is extremely lacking. Along with my grammar and just well everything. Sigh...Oh well. Hopefully plot will at least get me some credit. Well here it is. My failed attempt at Fall of Status. Please give me as much criticism as possible. I need to know how to improve. Warning: I may have been editing it and some parts are missing, messed up, or make no sense now...and I think I ignored the best advice I've gotten before...I don't need to be too descriptive...

 

[spoiler=Fall of Status Part 1]

A man suddenly flew into the wall of the condemned building. The weak wall broke on impact when the man crashed into it. “How strong can this guy actually be? Is this the end of Status?” The man coughed up dust and debris as he laid on the ground after his crash. “This was a suicide mission.”

 

“Wynn!” Another man cried from his own bloody spot on the concrete of the city’s street. He seemed to be the only conscious member of their group besides Wynn.

 

Wynn looked to his right to see the grenade now settling next to his head. Wynn’s blue eyes bulged. “No!”

 

-20 Hours Earlier-

 

Wynn rubbed his hand through his brown hair as he looked at the letter in his hands. After looking it through for probably the thirteenth time he looked at his comrades who were sitting in the chairs they normally sat in. They were making a bit of a ruckus and talking to each other. Mostly stupid conversations. Wynn had a small grin on his face. Compared to Gin though it looked like a frown.

 

“Listen guys. We have this letter from the one and only Ragnarock.” Status grew silent. “They accepted us as a faction to join the banned!” Everybody began to cheer. “Now listen everybody. Before we start planning a party there’s a few things I want to say.” They grew silent again. “We may not be the strongest, smartest, or fastest faction and currently we don’t have much money or weapons. Hell, Sonny uses bubbles she bought at a gas station.” Most of the male members looked at the girl all googly eyed until Wynn began to talk again. “But none of that is important. We aren’t here to be the best. We haven’t worked so hard for such a selfish goal. We’ve done as much as we have so far so we can be a part of the few who beat Life once and for all!”

 

The members of Status jumped all over energized by what Wynn had just said. Right now they all had their own ways of celebrating. A couple, a girl named Hereh Moa and her boyfriend Genji Ookah, were holding each other close. Gin Level had his usual huge grin and was trying to just sit there trying to act cool but it was obvious he was checking out Sonny even though his girlfriend Andy Mars was sitting next to him. Either Andy didn’t notice or care. Dementuo and Sonaria were cuddling which was weird because they’re siblings but nobody really cared anymore. Raine was talking to Sonny. He was using his knight persona when he did so. Sonny was usually just enjoying being the center of attention with the guys in Status but if anything she was more focused on her boyfriend, Geoffrey Techi. The other three couples had nothing on the French style these two were bringing to the table.

 

Composer was standing next to Wynn. He was high ranking in Status and some even believed that he would be the next second in command. Either him or Tsukasa, who Halu was trying to convince to join his cult thing. Quite a bit of the members were rooting for Gin to be second in command. Two of those members was Polly Mon and a girl nicknamed Cookie. The two were acting like attention whoring idiots in the back though and weren’t very well liked except by Gin, Tsukasa, and Raine. They weren’t exactly the brightest bulbs in the shack though. And it’s a possibility they wanted to get into their pants even though the girls were so young.

 

A newly joined member was smoking a joint. People stayed away from him because of the smoke and his excessive horniness. Liam was gone. He was believed to have gone into the bathroom with a Maxim magazine. Joey was believed to sneak into the ventilation shafts and head towards the direction of the bathroom. SSD was working on a list of powers he saw in tv shows and games. Anbu was helping him out since SSD would always get the powers wrong or something.

 

Out of all these sort of celebrations going on there was one that was different from the rest. One that was silent but in its own way stood out from the rest. A young woman inspired to do her best and finally confess. Composer walked over to Sonny and Techi to try and settle the two down. She saw this as her chance. Luna Hiiragi’s face was already red as she stood up. She quickly walked over to Wynn whose focus was on the other members. His palm was on his face because of a few of the members but his attention was taken away by Luna when she simply tapped him on the shoulder. “Uh, hey Luna. Is there something you want?”

 

Luna looked away to hide how red she was. “Uhhh….Wynn.” She tossled her brown hair and looked back at him. Her brown eyes matching his blue. “I was wondering if you’d dance with me at the party?”

 

Wynn himself blushed after she asked the question. He looked at the girl for a second. She was a beautiful girl. The redness on his face subsided as he simply smiled. “Of course I will.” Luna smiled and ran off out of the room. “Wait Lu-oh what am I kidding? She’s gone now.”

 

He let out a sigh as he cleared his throat. “Everybody please listen for a second.” The room quieted down for the third time in five minutes. “Now since we’re in the Banned we have been assigned a mission though. I’ll trust that somebody will tell those that are not here what it is. After we do this mission then we party twice as hard!” It was followed by more cheers.

 

-19 Hours and 30 Minutes Later-

 

A young man walked out of the Clopp’s grocery store. He was drinking from a carton of apple juice and in his other hand he was holding a cinnamon roll. He was wearing a black jacket with a blue t-shirt underneath and black pants and belt with a holster attached to both of his sides. On his back rested a metal baseball bat. Although he had these weapons in the open he didn’t have any problems in the store.

 

“Our mission is to either capture or kill a high ranking member of the inactive. His name is Nobuo Beginning. He’s more commonly known by his nickname, Desperado. For whatever reason. It isn’t explained. Actually finding him shouldn’t be a problem The guy has purple hair.”

 

The team assembled from Status, consisting of Wynn, Composer, Gin, SSD, Dementuo, and Raine, watched and followed Nobuo for 20 minutes since he left the Clopp’s grocery store. Nobuo was juust finishing his cinnamon roll while leaning against a streetlight. The group was hiding in a nearby alley. Gin was the first to say anything. “Where are we now?” The group gave him a quick hush.

 

Dementuo spoke next after a quick nod from Wynn. “We’re in the condemned district. Most of these buildings are condemned and there’s barely anybody here other than some hobos.”

 

Wynn seemed to be in thought about it. “Why would he come here? Oh sh*t. I think we fell into a trap.”

 

It was obvious Gin and SSD were getting impatient. The grin grew even wider on Gin’s face. “Hey SSD, let’s show off for everybody else and wrap this mission up quickly. We’ll beat that guy up senseless and everybody will look up to us and maybe start calling me Gin-sama.” SSD nodded and the two jumped out of the alley leaving the rest of their group to facepalm.

 

Nobuo put his empty carton of juice into the bag and tossed it into a random garbage can that like the houses and apartments were long abandoned here to rot away. He didn’t even seem to notice the two that were approaching him. Gin took out a wooden katana from his robe and SSD was carrying a wooden staff with a kitchen knife crudely taped perpendicularly onto it.

 

The two stopped a few yards from Nobuo. “So you’re Desperado?” He let out a small laugh. “This will be no problem. I am super strong after all. The strongest in all of Status. Gin Level!” SSD seemed to be nodding in agreement while the rest in the alley were face palming and shaking their head.

 

SSD was also anxious to introduce himself. “I Made This Scythe Myself! They call me SSD and I make weapons but I’m also a great fighter like my boss here.” SSD was another one that supported Gin’s attempt to be second in command of Status.

 

Nobuo still didn’t even seem to notice the two. Either that or he was just ignoring them. The two were getting annoyed. Gin’s eyes were twitching and SSD’s grip on his scythe increased. “Let’s just kill him already SSD.”

 

SSD nodded and jumped at Nobuo with his scythe held high. Nobuo took a step away from the streetlight as SSD went for the kill. The knife hit the streetlight causing the tape to break apart and the knife to go flying into the same trashcan that Nobuo threw his trash into. “My scy-“ He was cut off by Nobuo’s foot slamming into his face. He fell to the ground unconscious.

 

“SSD was weak anyway. Definitely not as strong as me.” Gin charged at Nobuo who was simply yawning. He wasn’t impressed by their performance. When close enough Gin thrusted his sword at Nobuo using his maximum arm length but to dodge Nobuo went for a simple matrix style dodge. “Got ya!” Gin flipped a switch on his wooden katana causing the outer layer of the sword to extend. Nobuo slammed his forehead against the wooden katana as he straightened back up from his matrix style dodge. The extended part was shattered. “How is that possible?!”

 

“Clearly you two are idiots. I’ll explain the flaws in your attacks since your egos are so bloated to see them yourself.“ Nobuo pointed at SSD. “STD there was using a stick with a knife taped on it. That screams stupid right there.” Next he pointed to the woodchips on the ground. “Your sword is made out of wood. It’s easy to break apart since it’s such a thing layer that extends and it’s hollow.” He walked up to Gin who seemed to be frozen in fear. “Third mistake was having such an ego when you’re pissing your pants after nothing.” He grabbed onto the collar of Gin’s robe. “Now your fourth and final mistake was actually thinking of fighting me.” He punched Gin first in the gut but quickly let go of his collar and with what was then the now free hand gave him an uppercut. Gin’s mouth filled with vomit and blood but the uppercut stopped him from opening his mouth. He fell to the ground choking. Nobuo reached for his bat and in a quick motion brought it down on Gin’s stomach. The blood and vomit exploded out of his mouth which soon covered his face. “So, who’s next?”

 

Wynn clasped his hands together. “Well team it’s as I thought. He knows we’re here and those two decided to go in.”

 

Composer sighed. “Were they the only ones who didn’t know?”

 

Dementuo nodded. “Seems so.”

 

Raine seemed to be the only one not focusing on the idiots but on Nobuo himself. “Uhhh…you know he just beat those two pretty badly and quickly, right?”

 

Dementuo shrugged. “Well, they went in one at a time with pretty simple attacks. Not that hard to counter. If we just all go in he can’t really take us all on right?”

 

“Just you three will go in then. Make sure to be careful when approaching but make it quick too. I’ll stay back and analyze him a bit further.” The other three nodded and rushed out of the alley towards Nobuo.

 

Composer was holding his signature flute, Dementuo had a katana, and Raine was dragging a claymore along. Not the mine but the sword. Nobuo sighed. They were still attacking him. “A flute? Really?”

 

Composer wasn’t in the mood. He was feeling a bit sick since all that crap came out of Gin’s mouth. “Shut up!” He played a note on his flute and a small blade came out of the other side.

 

“Combining a flute with a stiletto? Clever. But unfortunately for you…” He pulled his bat off of Gin but oddly the barrel of the bat didn’t come with the handle. A blade did. “…my hidden blade is bigger than yours.”

 

Composers eyes widened at the sight of the thin blade but a smirk soon grew across his face. Raine had managed to sneak up behind Nobuo. “If you’re smirking because of him I already knew he was there.” Raine was holding the claymore above his head and just as quickly he got behind Nobuo he brought the sword down on him.

 

Without moving an inch Nobuo blocked the claymore with his own sword. Although his large sword was so easily blocked Raine smiled. “You think it’d be that simple Desperado?”

 

Nobuo rolled his eyes. “Of course not. I can see them still coming at me. Obviously you’re a decoy.” It was true. Composer and Dementuo went in for the kill. Composer was going for a simple stab in the stomach and Dementuo with a slash across his side. Nobuo crouched down and Raine’s sword came down with him. The flute knife and katana collided with Raine’s claymore. All three of the blades shattered. “You think it’d be that simple?” Nobuo did a quick 360 spin cutting all of them with his sword while sending the shards of their blades at them too.

 

As the three fell Nobuo stood and said to himself, “Where’s an easy button when you need it?” He looked down at the three. “They seemed to have fainted from pain, blood loss, or maybe a mixture of both.”

 

Composer coughed up some blood. “You bastard…”

 

Nobuo crouched down again but this time to . “So you’re still alive, huh? You stepped back a bit the moment your flutteto came in contact with that other guy’s claymore and managed to avoid a bit of the damage. Am I right?” Before Composer gave his answer a knife flew between the two.

 

“Damn, I missed.” Wynn scowled as he took more knives out of his sleeve.

 

Nobuo yawned as he stood up. “Nah. I saw you coming. Even if you had the guts to kill me I was ready.”

 

Wynn smiled. “You’re able to sense my killing intent? Are you smart or something.”

 

Nobuo kicked up the barrel and sheathed his sword. “No. I’m just not a complete idiot.”

 

Wynn laughed. “Well then. I guess I’m not a complete idiot either. But I still can’t let you get away with beating my teammates senseless. I’m not as weak as them you know. I know what I’m using and how to use it.”

 

Nobuo sighed. “Well that wouldn’t make you a very good leader if you didn’t. “ He put his bat back onto his back. “Maybe I’ll actually step it up a notch.” He pulled out his revolvers from his holsters. “But just because I’m using these don’t think I’ve gotten serious yet.”

 

“Guns? Eh. Knives are more useful. They have multiple purposes.” Wynn charged at Nobuo.

 

“And you think I give a f*ck, why exactly?” Nobuo charged as well. Wynn started off with throwing a knife but Nobuo simply shot at it sending it flying out of the battlefield. Now that they were close Wynn went for a stab with the knife in his left hand but Nobuo simply blocked it with his right hand revolver. Nobuo then pushed Wynn’s hand aside and pointed the gun at Wynn’s head. He pulled the trigger but Wynn deflected the bullet with a knife in his other hand. Nobuo then went for a pistol whip with his left hand revolver. Wynn simply crouched down to dodge the attack but Nobuo was a step ahead. When his revolver was above Wynn’s head he aimed down and took another shot. Wynn jumped back and threw a knife.

 

“This guy is tough. I’m putting my all into it and he says he hasn’t even gotten serious yet.” Nobuo blocked with his right revolver and the dropped the other revolver he had just shot with. “What the…? Nobuo kicked the revolver right at Wynn’s face. The following minute was a bit of a dizzy blur of confusion and pain for Wynn. When he finally regained his senses Nobuo was holding his revolver like a tonfa and punching him in the face. He went flying into the wall of one of the nearby condemned buildings. The weak wall broke on impact when the man crashed into it. “How strong can this guy actually be? Is this the end of Status?” The man coughed up dust and debris as he laid on the ground after his crash. “This was a suicide mission.”

 

“I’ll slaughter you.” Nobuo put his revolvers back in their respective holsters. He then took a grenade out of his jacket and tossed it into the building’s newly added hole.

 

“Wynn!” Composer cried out from his own bloody spot on the concrete of the city’s street. Everybody else was unconscious.

 

Wynn looked to his right to see the grenade now settling next to his head. Wynn’s eyes seemed to bulge out of their sockets at the sight. “No! I never even got to dance with Luna!”

 

A few moments passed and Nobuo started laughing. He was laughing so hard he fell to the ground. The other two were confused. “You actually fell for that?” Nobuo stood back up but was struggling from the massive amount of laughing and his now hurting side.

 

Wynn laughed a bit too. “For a so called cold, heartless, and soulless Inactive member who’s killed seven factions by himself you really did a lousy job finishing us off.”

 

Nobuo walked into the newly formed hole. “You really aren’t a complete idiot.” Nobuo picked up the grenade that still had the pin in it and put it back into his jacket. Then he helped Wynn up.

 

“It was pretty obvious. You didn’t kill any of them even though you had a million chances to do so.” The two got out of the building just as it collapsed and back into the street. “You mind explaining to me exactly why we’re not all dead?”

 

Nobuo cleared his throat and coughed twice. “Well it started two days ago. I don’t know why exactly but I came to my senses. Maybe it was puberty. Who knows? But for whatever reason the control that the Inactive had on me was gone. Too be honest I’d like to figure out how but obviously it’s only been two days and I’ve been wandering around. Ahem. Well I was in an inactive base at the time so I killed all the inactive members their and escaped. I also blew up the place but I’m not as stupid to just leave precious information there for my own use.” He reached into his jacket and pulled out four eight gigabyte jump drives. “And before you ask, no, it’s not porn. I needed three more jump drives and another hour. And another thing you’re probably thinking is information on the inactive. Only half of one of these jump drives does. The rest is filled with blueprints of inventions of mine. Mostly cool weapons. I may not seem too much like it but I’m one of the Inactive’s scientists. I made the weapons I have on me, myself.”

 

Wynn was listening to every word but still seemed to be in deep thought. “Well I apologize for the idiocy we have displayed today. Now I see that you were merely defending yourself. The information we got may have been a bit too late. Now that that’s behind us it seems like it’d be very beneficial for both of us if you join us in Status. We could really use you. Anbu!”

 

After being called Anbu walked out of another of the nearby alleys. “I already contacted the rest of Status. A while ago after what happened to those guys. I had to contact them again to not be ready to kill him when they got here. We’ll be picked up in about five minutes.”

 

“I guess I joined Status that day. The bastard even made me second in command. It’s not like I had many other options though. The Inactive would come after me again with higher numbers and bigger guns. But…why do I fight again? Do I even have a reason to? I haven’t had a memory of events since before a year ago from that day. Is Nobuo even my real name? Why the hell do I even care so much? And Why The Hell Am I Getting So Cliche?!”

 

 

 

[spoiler=Bonus]And I don't know if Techi was already in DEF somewhere but I put him in here. For some reason I think of that guy Cortez fought when I think Techi and DEF.

And here's pictures of characters not yet in DEF or that would look different.

[spoiler=Wynn Something beginning with a C]

 

 

[spoiler=Luna Hiiragi]

 

 

[spoiler=Hereh Moa]

 

 

[spoiler=Genji Ookah]

 

 

[spoiler=Noob]

 

 

[spoiler=Geoffery Techi]

 

 

[spoiler=Polly Mon]

 

 

[spoiler=Andy Mars]

 

 

Edit: I missed some people. >_>

 

 

[Shadow Zero]

*wills the title to say Chapter 34 is up*

[Lt. Colonel Remo]

Fuse needs to post it

 

leik nao

[Big Bad Pennar]

-holds Laevatienn at Bradley's neck- Give Fusion more time....

[Shadow Zero]

*uses lightning strike on said sea creature*

It's Super Effective!

[Sploda]

*uses lightning strike on said sea creature*

It's Super Effective!

 

*Summons Odin*

 

ZANTESUKEN!

 

*Slices Shadow in half for insta-victory*

 

Odin is a valid summon, dwi.

[Fusion X. Denver]

Obviously I still need to work on it. I feel like my vocabulary and descriptive ability is extremely lacking. Along with my grammar and just well everything. Sigh...Oh well. Hopefully plot will at least get me some credit. Well here it is. My failed attempt at Fall of Status. Please give me as much criticism as possible. I need to know how to improve. Warning: I may have been editing it and some parts are missing, messed up, or make no sense now...and I think I ignored the best advice I've gotten before...I don't need to be too descriptive...

 

[spoiler=Fall of Status Part 1]

A man suddenly flew into the wall of the condemned building. The weak wall broke on impact when the man crashed into it. “How strong can this guy actually be? Is this the end of Status?” The man coughed up dust and debris as he laid on the ground after his crash. “This was a suicide mission.”

 

“Wynn!” Another man cried from his own bloody spot on the concrete of the city’s street. He seemed to be the only conscious member of their group besides Wynn.

 

Wynn looked to his right to see the grenade now settling next to his head. Wynn’s blue eyes bulged. “No!”

 

-20 Hours Earlier-

 

Wynn rubbed his hand through his brown hair as he looked at the letter in his hands. After looking it through for probably the thirteenth time he looked at his comrades who were sitting in the chairs they normally sat in. They were making a bit of a ruckus and talking to each other. Mostly stupid conversations. Wynn had a small grin on his face. Compared to Gin though it looked like a frown.

 

“Listen guys. We have this letter from the one and only Ragnarock.” Status grew silent. “They accepted us as a faction to join the banned!” Everybody began to cheer. “Now listen everybody. Before we start planning a party there’s a few things I want to say.” They grew silent again. “We may not be the strongest, smartest, or fastest faction and currently we don’t have much money or weapons. Hell, Sonny uses bubbles she bought at a gas station.” Most of the male members looked at the girl all googly eyed until Wynn began to talk again. “But none of that is important. We aren’t here to be the best. We haven’t worked so hard for such a selfish goal. We’ve done as much as we have so far so we can be a part of the few who beat Life once and for all!”

 

The members of Status jumped all over energized by what Wynn had just said. Right now they all had their own ways of celebrating. A couple, a girl named Hereh Moa and her boyfriend Genji Ookah, were holding each other close. Gin Level had his usual huge grin and was trying to just sit there trying to act cool but it was obvious he was checking out Sonny even though his girlfriend Andy Mars was sitting next to him. Either Andy didn’t notice or care. Dementuo and Sonaria were cuddling which was weird because they’re siblings but nobody really cared anymore. Raine was talking to Sonny. He was using his knight persona when he did so. Sonny was usually just enjoying being the center of attention with the guys in Status but if anything she was more focused on her boyfriend, Geoffrey Techi. The other three couples had nothing on the French style these two were bringing to the table.

 

Composer was standing next to Wynn. He was high ranking in Status and some even believed that he would be the next second in command. Either him or Tsukasa, who Halu was trying to convince to join his cult thing. Quite a bit of the members were rooting for Gin to be second in command. Two of those members was Polly Mon and a girl nicknamed Cookie. The two were acting like attention whoring idiots in the back though and weren’t very well liked except by Gin, Tsukasa, and Raine. They weren’t exactly the brightest bulbs in the shack though. And it’s a possibility they wanted to get into their pants even though the girls were so young.

 

A newly joined member was smoking a joint. People stayed away from him because of the smoke and his excessive horniness. Liam was gone. He was believed to have gone into the bathroom with a Maxim magazine. Joey was believed to sneak into the ventilation shafts and head towards the direction of the bathroom. SSD was working on a list of powers he saw in tv shows and games. Anbu was helping him out since SSD would always get the powers wrong or something.

 

Out of all these sort of celebrations going on there was one that was different from the rest. One that was silent but in its own way stood out from the rest. A young woman inspired to do her best and finally confess. Composer walked over to Sonny and Techi to try and settle the two down. She saw this as her chance. Luna Hiiragi’s face was already red as she stood up. She quickly walked over to Wynn whose focus was on the other members. His palm was on his face because of a few of the members but his attention was taken away by Luna when she simply tapped him on the shoulder. “Uh, hey Luna. Is there something you want?”

 

Luna looked away to hide how red she was. “Uhhh….Wynn.” She tossled her brown hair and looked back at him. Her brown eyes matching his blue. “I was wondering if you’d dance with me at the party?”

 

Wynn himself blushed after she asked the question. He looked at the girl for a second. She was a beautiful girl. The redness on his face subsided as he simply smiled. “Of course I will.” Luna smiled and ran off out of the room. “Wait Lu-oh what am I kidding? She’s gone now.”

 

He let out a sigh as he cleared his throat. “Everybody please listen for a second.” The room quieted down for the third time in five minutes. “Now since we’re in the Banned we have been assigned a mission though. I’ll trust that somebody will tell those that are not here what it is. After we do this mission then we party twice as hard!” It was followed by more cheers.

 

-19 Hours and 30 Minutes Later-

 

A young man walked out of the Clopp’s grocery store. He was drinking from a carton of apple juice and in his other hand he was holding a cinnamon roll. He was wearing a black jacket with a blue t-shirt underneath and black pants and belt with a holster attached to both of his sides. On his back rested a metal baseball bat. Although he had these weapons in the open he didn’t have any problems in the store.

 

“Our mission is to either capture or kill a high ranking member of the inactive. His name is Nobuo Beginning. He’s more commonly known by his nickname, Desperado. For whatever reason. It isn’t explained. Actually finding him shouldn’t be a problem The guy has purple hair.”

 

The team assembled from Status, consisting of Wynn, Composer, Gin, SSD, Dementuo, and Raine, watched and followed Nobuo for 20 minutes since he left the Clopp’s grocery store. Nobuo was juust finishing his cinnamon roll while leaning against a streetlight. The group was hiding in a nearby alley. Gin was the first to say anything. “Where are we now?” The group gave him a quick hush.

 

Dementuo spoke next after a quick nod from Wynn. “We’re in the condemned district. Most of these buildings are condemned and there’s barely anybody here other than some hobos.”

 

Wynn seemed to be in thought about it. “Why would he come here? Oh sh*t. I think we fell into a trap.”

 

It was obvious Gin and SSD were getting impatient. The grin grew even wider on Gin’s face. “Hey SSD, let’s show off for everybody else and wrap this mission up quickly. We’ll beat that guy up senseless and everybody will look up to us and maybe start calling me Gin-sama.” SSD nodded and the two jumped out of the alley leaving the rest of their group to facepalm.

 

Nobuo put his empty carton of juice into the bag and tossed it into a random garbage can that like the houses and apartments were long abandoned here to rot away. He didn’t even seem to notice the two that were approaching him. Gin took out a wooden katana from his robe and SSD was carrying a wooden staff with a kitchen knife crudely taped perpendicularly onto it.

 

The two stopped a few yards from Nobuo. “So you’re Desperado?” He let out a small laugh. “This will be no problem. I am super strong after all. The strongest in all of Status. Gin Level!” SSD seemed to be nodding in agreement while the rest in the alley were face palming and shaking their head.

 

SSD was also anxious to introduce himself. “I Made This Scythe Myself! They call me SSD and I make weapons but I’m also a great fighter like my boss here.” SSD was another one that supported Gin’s attempt to be second in command of Status.

 

Nobuo still didn’t even seem to notice the two. Either that or he was just ignoring them. The two were getting annoyed. Gin’s eyes were twitching and SSD’s grip on his scythe increased. “Let’s just kill him already SSD.”

 

SSD nodded and jumped at Nobuo with his scythe held high. Nobuo took a step away from the streetlight as SSD went for the kill. The knife hit the streetlight causing the tape to break apart and the knife to go flying into the same trashcan that Nobuo threw his trash into. “My scy-“ He was cut off by Nobuo’s foot slamming into his face. He fell to the ground unconscious.

 

“SSD was weak anyway. Definitely not as strong as me.” Gin charged at Nobuo who was simply yawning. He wasn’t impressed by their performance. When close enough Gin thrusted his sword at Nobuo using his maximum arm length but to dodge Nobuo went for a simple matrix style dodge. “Got ya!” Gin flipped a switch on his wooden katana causing the outer layer of the sword to extend. Nobuo slammed his forehead against the wooden katana as he straightened back up from his matrix style dodge. The extended part was shattered. “How is that possible?!”

 

“Clearly you two are idiots. I’ll explain the flaws in your attacks since your egos are so bloated to see them yourself.“ Nobuo pointed at SSD. “STD there was using a stick with a knife taped on it. That screams stupid right there.” Next he pointed to the woodchips on the ground. “Your sword is made out of wood. It’s easy to break apart since it’s such a thing layer that extends and it’s hollow.” He walked up to Gin who seemed to be frozen in fear. “Third mistake was having such an ego when you’re pissing your pants after nothing.” He grabbed onto the collar of Gin’s robe. “Now your fourth and final mistake was actually thinking of fighting me.” He punched Gin first in the gut but quickly let go of his collar and with what was then the now free hand gave him an uppercut. Gin’s mouth filled with vomit and blood but the uppercut stopped him from opening his mouth. He fell to the ground choking. Nobuo reached for his bat and in a quick motion brought it down on Gin’s stomach. The blood and vomit exploded out of his mouth which soon covered his face. “So, who’s next?”

 

Wynn clasped his hands together. “Well team it’s as I thought. He knows we’re here and those two decided to go in.”

 

Composer sighed. “Were they the only ones who didn’t know?”

 

Dementuo nodded. “Seems so.”

 

Raine seemed to be the only one not focusing on the idiots but on Nobuo himself. “Uhhh…you know he just beat those two pretty badly and quickly, right?”

 

Dementuo shrugged. “Well, they went in one at a time with pretty simple attacks. Not that hard to counter. If we just all go in he can’t really take us all on right?”

 

“Just you three will go in then. Make sure to be careful when approaching but make it quick too. I’ll stay back and analyze him a bit further.” The other three nodded and rushed out of the alley towards Nobuo.

 

Composer was holding his signature flute, Dementuo had a katana, and Raine was dragging a claymore along. Not the mine but the sword. Nobuo sighed. They were still attacking him. “A flute? Really?”

 

Composer wasn’t in the mood. He was feeling a bit sick since all that crap came out of Gin’s mouth. “Shut up!” He played a note on his flute and a small blade came out of the other side.

 

“Combining a flute with a stiletto? Clever. But unfortunately for you…” He pulled his bat off of Gin but oddly the barrel of the bat didn’t come with the handle. A blade did. “…my hidden blade is bigger than yours.”

 

Composers eyes widened at the sight of the thin blade but a smirk soon grew across his face. Raine had managed to sneak up behind Nobuo. “If you’re smirking because of him I already knew he was there.” Raine was holding the claymore above his head and just as quickly he got behind Nobuo he brought the sword down on him.

 

Without moving an inch Nobuo blocked the claymore with his own sword. Although his large sword was so easily blocked Raine smiled. “You think it’d be that simple Desperado?”

 

Nobuo rolled his eyes. “Of course not. I can see them still coming at me. Obviously you’re a decoy.” It was true. Composer and Dementuo went in for the kill. Composer was going for a simple stab in the stomach and Dementuo with a slash across his side. Nobuo crouched down and Raine’s sword came down with him. The flute knife and katana collided with Raine’s claymore. All three of the blades shattered. “You think it’d be that simple?” Nobuo did a quick 360 spin cutting all of them with his sword while sending the shards of their blades at them too.

 

As the three fell Nobuo stood and said to himself, “Where’s an easy button when you need it?” He looked down at the three. “They seemed to have fainted from pain, blood loss, or maybe a mixture of both.”

 

Composer coughed up some blood. “You bastard…”

 

Nobuo crouched down again but this time to . “So you’re still alive, huh? You stepped back a bit the moment your flutteto came in contact with that other guy’s claymore and managed to avoid a bit of the damage. Am I right?” Before Composer gave his answer a knife flew between the two.

 

“Damn, I missed.” Wynn scowled as he took more knives out of his sleeve.

 

Nobuo yawned as he stood up. “Nah. I saw you coming. Even if you had the guts to kill me I was ready.”

 

Wynn smiled. “You’re able to sense my killing intent? Are you smart or something.”

 

Nobuo kicked up the barrel and sheathed his sword. “No. I’m just not a complete idiot.”

 

Wynn laughed. “Well then. I guess I’m not a complete idiot either. But I still can’t let you get away with beating my teammates senseless. I’m not as weak as them you know. I know what I’m using and how to use it.”

 

Nobuo sighed. “Well that wouldn’t make you a very good leader if you didn’t. “ He put his bat back onto his back. “Maybe I’ll actually step it up a notch.” He pulled out his revolvers from his holsters. “But just because I’m using these don’t think I’ve gotten serious yet.”

 

“Guns? Eh. Knives are more useful. They have multiple purposes.” Wynn charged at Nobuo.

 

“And you think I give a f*ck, why exactly?” Nobuo charged as well. Wynn started off with throwing a knife but Nobuo simply shot at it sending it flying out of the battlefield. Now that they were close Wynn went for a stab with the knife in his left hand but Nobuo simply blocked it with his right hand revolver. Nobuo then pushed Wynn’s hand aside and pointed the gun at Wynn’s head. He pulled the trigger but Wynn deflected the bullet with a knife in his other hand. Nobuo then went for a pistol whip with his left hand revolver. Wynn simply crouched down to dodge the attack but Nobuo was a step ahead. When his revolver was above Wynn’s head he aimed down and took another shot. Wynn jumped back and threw a knife.

 

“This guy is tough. I’m putting my all into it and he says he hasn’t even gotten serious yet.” Nobuo blocked with his right revolver and the dropped the other revolver he had just shot with. “What the…? Nobuo kicked the revolver right at Wynn’s face. The following minute was a bit of a dizzy blur of confusion and pain for Wynn. When he finally regained his senses Nobuo was holding his revolver like a tonfa and punching him in the face. He went flying into the wall of one of the nearby condemned buildings. The weak wall broke on impact when the man crashed into it. “How strong can this guy actually be? Is this the end of Status?” The man coughed up dust and debris as he laid on the ground after his crash. “This was a suicide mission.”

 

“I’ll slaughter you.” Nobuo put his revolvers back in their respective holsters. He then took a grenade out of his jacket and tossed it into the building’s newly added hole.

 

“Wynn!” Composer cried out from his own bloody spot on the concrete of the city’s street. Everybody else was unconscious.

 

Wynn looked to his right to see the grenade now settling next to his head. Wynn’s eyes seemed to bulge out of their sockets at the sight. “No! I never even got to dance with Luna!”

 

A few moments passed and Nobuo started laughing. He was laughing so hard he fell to the ground. The other two were confused. “You actually fell for that?” Nobuo stood back up but was struggling from the massive amount of laughing and his now hurting side.

 

Wynn laughed a bit too. “For a so called cold, heartless, and soulless Inactive member who’s killed seven factions by himself you really did a lousy job finishing us off.”

 

Nobuo walked into the newly formed hole. “You really aren’t a complete idiot.” Nobuo picked up the grenade that still had the pin in it and put it back into his jacket. Then he helped Wynn up.

 

“It was pretty obvious. You didn’t kill any of them even though you had a million chances to do so.” The two got out of the building just as it collapsed and back into the street. “You mind explaining to me exactly why we’re not all dead?”

 

Nobuo cleared his throat and coughed twice. “Well it started two days ago. I don’t know why exactly but I came to my senses. Maybe it was puberty. Who knows? But for whatever reason the control that the Inactive had on me was gone. Too be honest I’d like to figure out how but obviously it’s only been two days and I’ve been wandering around. Ahem. Well I was in an inactive base at the time so I killed all the inactive members their and escaped. I also blew up the place but I’m not as stupid to just leave precious information there for my own use.” He reached into his jacket and pulled out four eight gigabyte jump drives. “And before you ask, no, it’s not porn. I needed three more jump drives and another hour. And another thing you’re probably thinking is information on the inactive. Only half of one of these jump drives does. The rest is filled with blueprints of inventions of mine. Mostly cool weapons. I may not seem too much like it but I’m one of the Inactive’s scientists. I made the weapons I have on me, myself.”

 

Wynn was listening to every word but still seemed to be in deep thought. “Well I apologize for the idiocy we have displayed today. Now I see that you were merely defending yourself. The information we got may have been a bit too late. Now that that’s behind us it seems like it’d be very beneficial for both of us if you join us in Status. We could really use you. Anbu!”

 

After being called Anbu walked out of another of the nearby alleys. “I already contacted the rest of Status. A while ago after what happened to those guys. I had to contact them again to not be ready to kill him when they got here. We’ll be picked up in about five minutes.”

 

“I guess I joined Status that day. The bastard even made me second in command. It’s not like I had many other options though. The Inactive would come after me again with higher numbers and bigger guns. But…why do I fight again? Do I even have a reason to? I haven’t had a memory of events since before a year ago from that day. Is Nobuo even my real name? Why the hell do I even care so much? And Why The Hell Am I Getting So Cliche?!”

 

 

 

[spoiler=Bonus]And I don't know if Techi was already in DEF somewhere but I put him in here. For some reason I think of that guy Cortez fought when I think Techi and DEF.

And here's pictures of characters not yet in DEF or that would look different.

[spoiler=Wynn Something beginning with a C]

 

 

[spoiler=Luna Hiiragi]

 

 

[spoiler=Hereh Moa]

 

 

[spoiler=Genji Ookah]

 

 

[spoiler=Noob]

 

 

[spoiler=Geoffery Techi]

 

 

[spoiler=Polly Mon]

 

 

[spoiler=Andy Mars]

 

 

Edit: I missed some people. >_>

 

 

 

I apologize DF, I remember seeing you posted a 1-shot, got distracted, and somehow lost the mental note telling me to go back and read it.

Just finished, I like it so far.

Though the thing with naming:

Gin Level-->Gin Anger

Cookie-Connie, although Cookie could have been a nickname.

And I'm not sure if you remembered, but Nobuo basically has cybernetic arms that turn into giant pistols containing his signature "6 Shot". Your one-shot doesn't contradict that, just making sure you knew.

And you think of Cortez with Techi?

I loled.

His character resembles him I guess, though his IRL personality is a far cry from him.

 

Anyways, great one-shot, looking forward to the second part.

I'm not the best at criticism, but I'd say give the characters more description, even if only a couple adjectives and a sentence. Otherwise, nothing bad jumped out at me, maybe someone else would be more astute.

[Big Bad Pennar]

Also Shadow, Laevatienn is a Sword/Wand, not a Sea Serpent....

[Shadow Zero]

So...the lightning jumps from it to you electrocuting you then?

[Lt. Colonel Remo]

*stumbles around whilest slightly drunk*

 

Something about a lightning sea creature wand/sword?

[Super Chaos Sonic]

Nice one-shot Finale. ^-^

 

And to those wondering what my whole oneshot was about...was kinda giving a small backstory on how Sonic got the gloves he gave Chris. That and have him and Thomas promise that they'd make Yugo City better...