Fusion X. Denver Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 Okay.THAT was hysterical xDDDI read the start and chuckled, somehow knowing you were going to torture Creator with Emma in this.Then I raised an eyebrow at Chris, then shook my head chuckling during the whole prank (think you said "Fuse said" at one point, small mistake).Rosa's entrance was a little too sudden with no transition for me, but I still loled at the end.Except it's highly unlikely they did it since they only kissed for the first time when she died .-.I simply died when Andex brought the panties back out.Going straight to the gallery!Also, nice A Series of Unfortunate Events narrative, though what was supposed to be tragic >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 I pictured it to be more tragic and horrible, tbh. But in the end it turned out it was just...weird nonsensical comedy xD Amazingly, pervy stuff DIDN'T happen to Creator. It was hard for me to resist have him get spotted. I the end it all worked out though. And they didn't do it, nor did Chris ever say anything about he and Rosa doing it to El and D.L., D.L. was just joking xD And you're right. Rosa's appearance lacked transition. Tho it was belieavable since El called her there. I suddenly feel like making a one-shot called Creator Note... "I am Lich Creator....the god of the new world....and you, Emma, are going to be the goddess alongside me..." Inb4Obvious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 Comedy is good. Nothing wrong with tragedy either, but comedy works better for me xDI'd be fine with a Creator Note if you at least finished the NEW KS FIRST >:T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 XDD I'll get to that before time ends. Trying to finish the first chapter of my YGO fic. And yeah, I can be comedic too. KS just doesn't show it often xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 ...wutYou're making a YU-GI-OH fic?!YOU? You freaking would =.= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 Well he's also supposed to be helping with the next chapter in the "Vongola" fic....but nice one shot anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 DL, I think you're handling too many fan fic projects.I would just stick to KS and RV, finishing KS and finding a comfortable pacing with RV and then doing your YGO fic.That's just my input though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 UhShould I be afraid?Hide your future kids, hide your house, hide your mind, and take your eyes out and lock them in a safe.If he DOES what he didWhich he has not yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 If I do what I used to Fusion will be scarred. Creator will need to kill someone again. Black will be very dissapoint. And Fuse...you may be right. But I suddenly got inspiration @_@ besides I once wrote 5 fics at once, don'tcha know? ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 Meh, I've had those random bursts of inspiration, like with the prologue.Others, I'm probably holding off until after DEF.I'll be scarred?I have to admit I'm a tad curious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 No, you are not. And unless you give me permission to go all out while writing a one-shot (which you will regret) I will restrain myself. Except for Creator Note, that one will be fr srs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 Smash that curiosity NOWYou do NOT want to read that cursed crap.I get chills thinking about it.STAY AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 You...don't really need my permission.But...why would I regret it?Crack pairings?Male characters made much more feminine?...yaoi? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 [spoiler=One shot]Chapter Lost - An Evening Such as This, a Morning Such as That, but it all Means the Same in the Eyes of the one you Love. If you paid for this chapter, you are being ripped off. If you are reading this at all, you are being ripped off. If you were expecting a happy story, or a story about a brave boy who finds his destiny, then you are looking in the wrong place. For this particular story has very few happy moments, and even then, they are usually sandwiched between misery and agony. So if you are not a fan of misery and agony, and I can’t imagine why you would, lest you were a masochistic sadist, then I suggest you close the webpage right now to prevent your eyes from reading these terrible happenings. You have been warned. One dark, lonely evening, Creator was sitting in his study, looking over several dozen blueprints and papers. “Hmm….yes, that’s it…” he muttered. “I can do it…if only Emma could see this now…” The door opened, and he quickly turned around to see Emma standing in the hallway. “What the heck are you doing in here? And what kind of dirty thoughts are going through your mind anyway? “If only Emma could see this now”, I didn’t think you were so perverted!” she exclaimed. “N-no, that’s not it…” Creator said. “I was just working on the Ultim-” “I don’t want to hear about any of your sick fantasies, god,” she said, and left the room. Creator sighed. “Dammit, I should try and explain before this gets out of hand.” He left the room, locking it with a special key, and went after her. As he was walking though the hallway, Chris ran by him, almost colliding with him. Chris turned around a bit. “Sorry, but I’m in a hurry! D.L. and El have…” he said, then stopped when he heard laughter coming from down the hall. He began running full speed, until he reached the room the sound was coming from. He turned the knob, but it was locked, so he pounded his fist on the door. “Hey, let me in!” Chris exclaimed. “This isn’t funny!” “Yes it is! And it’s totally like you, too!” El said, laughing from the other said. Chris clenched his teeth and grabbed his hammer. He stepped back a bit, then charged at the door. He swung at it with the hammer, but before it hit, the door swung open. The momentum from the swing made Chris stumble into the room. He looked over at El, who was sitting on a chair in front of a computer, having a fit of laughter, as D.L. appeared from behind the door with his fingers in a peace sign. “It’s all good, bro.” he said, grinning from ear to ear. “No it’s not, what gives you the right to tell Clair I like her when first off, I don’t, and second of all, I have Rosa?” Chris asked, exasperated. “It’s not even funny enough for a joke!” “Oh, oh my god, Fuse!” El said, still cracking up. “She said she appreciates your feelings, and while they’re a bit sudden, she’ll consider it! Oh wow!” Fuse smacked his forehead with his palm. “This couldn’t get any worse…” “Well…”D.L. said, gesturing behind Chris. “El kind of…got the smart idea to just tell Rosa now how you’re with another girl.” Rosa tapped her foot. “You’re cheating on me?” Chris froze, shooting a death glare at El. He gulped, and turned around to see Rosa standing there with her arms crossed. “No, no, you’ve got it all wrong! It was all just a joke!” “So you go with another girl behind my back, and call it a joke?” she asked. D.L. snickered. “I bet he’s done all sorts of stuff with her.” “Yeah, you know, play yu-gi-oh, go to the movies, and with Powerforce behind them too. Wow, you guys fell for it!” El said, almost falling from the chair in laughter. D.L. wiped a tear from his eye, laughing. “Let me explain, Rosa. Powerforce, Chris included, went to a yu-gi-oh tournament yesterday, and they won, so they went to the movies. And before you say anything about us lying, note we said he was with another girl, which he was, since Clair was there, and he did all sorts of stuff with her. So basically you guys just got…” “Pranked! Oh my god, my sides hurt! Fusion, you loser, you believed it when I told you I told Clair you liked her! Wow!” El said, rolling on the floor laughing. Chris sighed. “You two are so immature…come on, Rosa, let’s go somewhere where we can talk to people that can hold a mature conversation.” “Oh, and by the way,” D.L. called, when Rosa and Chris turned to leave. “Fuse told me about all the stuff you guys did last night. Congrats Rosa, hope Fuse didn’t forget to wear protection.” “…Chris…what is he talking about?” Rosa asked. “Just…never mind,” he said with a sigh, then slammed the door shut. I must now interrupt this story to warn those of you who have come this far for some unimaginable reason. This warning, simply put, is to let you know that, if you thought this particular tale would get better, you thought wrong. For only despair awaits the end, and everything between this warning and then is full of nothing but sorrow. Don’t say I have not warned you. Creator could hear a bunch of shouting from the direction Chris had gone. Trying to make out what it was, he was only slightly focused on his path. He opened the door he was sure he saw Emma go inside. He didn’t recognize this room, which was odd since he had examined the blueprints of the building the Banned had given the Fake Type Knights as a secondary base. He walked along it, and reached another doorway, except with no door. Instead, there was a veil covering the entrance. He pushed it aside, and entered the foggy room. He could hardly see anything, but he could hear running water. “Could this be some sort of spring…?” he muttered to himself. “Who’s there?” A female voice exclaimed. Creator gulped, and hid behind a large rock. He peeked over and saw an actual hot springs with several girls there. He noticed Rui, Emma, and Rogue, and they were all somewhat agitated. He squinted, and could make out a young boy, as well as a teenager on the other side. They all began yelling, but he couldn’t make out who was saying what. “Eek, it’s BT and Remo!” “What are they doing here?” “Pervs!” Creator took this chance to sneak out of the hot springs before anyone could notice him. He reached the door when he ran into Black. Black raised an eyebrow. “Dude, you know that’s the girl’s hot springs, right? Why are you in there?” “None of your business. But you’re heading this way too. Suddenly feel perverted?” Creator asked, smirking slightly. “N-not at all, I was just looking for Andex!” Black said. Suddenly, Andex ran out of the hot springs, carrying a pair of panties with its teeth. It dropped it at Black’s feet and sat, smiling, as if he had accomplished some great feat. “Why did he…” Creator began. “Don’t ask.” “Did you ask him to…” “No.” “My panties! They’re gone!” a girl screamed from within the hot springs. “…It’s your dog.” Creator said, walking away whistling. Surprised? I held back as much as I could. So do I need to like make my own one shot now making the little bit at the end there all dramatic and such? :Olol, jk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 AaAand. more ...The tramua Oh the tramua Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 I need permission cause you might not want your thread to be home to the....insanity. Loltrauma. @Andx - xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 @Andx - xDHey with the right writing style, could blow it out of proportion and make it seem like an epic quest.xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 ...I am now tempted to make a One Shot called "Andex's Panty Adventure" explaining the whole scenario of him stealing those panties. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 When you say tempted are you one of those people who means it as in they say this just for lulz, one who says it because they're now doing it, or honestly just toying with the idea as the word would suggest?lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 It means I have plans for making just such an adventure. As Stewie would say Not now...but soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 It means I have plans for making just such an adventure. As Stewie would say Not now...but soon!Sounds lulzy. Just make sure it's all somehow indirectly Black's fault. ;D *Shot* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 @DLThat was... Surprisingly okay. Except for the beginning. *Breaks DL's Leg* Also I swear if you make Creator Note you leave me no choice but to create "My Little Ninja" (MLP ripoff) starring you, EL, and Itachi. @FusionPlease don't give him permission, it is for the best. @AndxI agree with your panty adventure 100%. Granted they wouldn't mind you being there since your a dog and not a person. !IDEA! One-Shot where Andx and Black trade places for a day (BODY SWAP!). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 XD That is actually a good idea. Anyone wanna give it a go? And silly Creator, you can't have DL Filler without Cretor being misunderstood in some way. At least it doesn't involve a naked, tied-up fairy this time. Fusion, don't ask. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 @DL*Breaks Both Arms* That one was just soooo wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 Can tell there are many lulz to be had with all these one shot ideas. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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