Sploda Posted April 18, 2011 Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 I sense...that it could be one of six people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted April 18, 2011 Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 Creator, PM me your guesses. I'm curious to see how close/far off your intuition is.Gonna get some writing done in a little bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 19, 2011 Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 Speaking of which how close is the new chapter to being done?Out of pure curiosity 83 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted April 19, 2011 Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 I wrote some today, I'll try finishing it tonight or sometime tomorrow.But I'm confident I'll release it before going on vacation, so it's definitely sometime soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 Good news all, 31's out.[spoiler=Read after reading]UGH.I actually hated writing this chapter, I think the writing sucks.Probably because there's so much going on and so many characters experiencing stuff, so forgive me for that v.vOtherwise, I've been dying to debut PROTO the Machine Emperor for ages now, hope it was epic to read.Black, if you end up reading this, this is why I refused to let you control Machine Emperors.PROTO MUST BE THE FIRST MECHA OF THE NEW ERA.Come to think of it, if DEF ever got anime'd, it'd probably be a Mecha anime...Anyways, I'm going to try shedding light on some minor characters through a few glimpses throughout this war. Not going to go into full detail with everyone, but that's what one-shots are for.Anyway, epic battles and stuff are looming ahead, I'm looking forward to it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 Dun... dun... DUN!Nice cliffhanger and overall chapter. “I get first crack at life,” Ninjew stated, cracking his knuckles.You mean Life, right? And I hate to break it to you, the probability of getting this Anime'd is quite low. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 XD Enjoy the X-Gloves Fusion ^_^.... And me and Roxas are fighting his little brother....and someone else "master"....??? This next chapter is gonna be so EFFin' awesome!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 Yeah Sonic, I already stated who Roxas' master is a while back.Remember?And yeah, the X-Gloves are going to come in handy >:3Yeah Cortez, I meant Life. I'll go fix.And it was a joke -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 -face palm- I read the chapter and I completely missed that.....man I need to pay attention more...XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 Sonic, don't worry.I'm the only one who pays attention to this kind of stuff that doesn't review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 I'll get right to reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 I read the end of the chapter again...before me and Roxas was to fight....and I had this song playing. OMG!! THIS WOULD SO GO WITH BEING A FIGHTING SONG!!! (sorry about the caps...but thats what went through my head ^^; ) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UYYbzu5m48M&feature=related Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 Dun... dun... DUN!Nice cliffhanger and overall chapter. “I get first crack at life,” Ninjew stated, cracking his knuckles.You mean Life, right? And I hate to break it to you, the probability of getting this Anime'd is quite low. *Is planning to do a Sprite animation series based off of DEF.* *Is later planning to animate using animations* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 A sprite version of DEF....that sounds like it would awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 Just finished the new chapter. Why do I sound like a cross between Kamina and Lelouch? Because that is F*cking awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 A sprite version of Tatsuma? *Drools.* I'M STRAGHT I SWEAR! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 A sprite version of Tatsuma? *Drools.* I'M STRAGHT I SWEAR! Wow DF....O_o Didn't know you were like that....XD jk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted April 20, 2011 Report Share Posted April 20, 2011 Shush you. Another great chapter Fusion. Still don't get why I haven't killed Bob, The Shiny Anger off yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 Okay new chapter and a new review from Me! and me of crouseYou're going to be a regular . . . aren't you Jesse d*mn right I am. Wait?! Why'd I get censored!? The rules God f*cking d*mn the rules! And on that colorful note, lets begin (--); [spoiler=Review] Everyone has they're own style of doing things in a war I personally would just run through the crowd lopping off heads This is going to be a LONG review if you keep up those comments LOL referance to SS's dream of being an idol. Nice but I think you might get him made with that And then he is going to imagine beating your ass all over the place. But don't worry . . . it is only in his imagination, nothing a swift kick to the groins can't cure, if he actually HAS any. After reading the idea of Life making so a plane couldn't break through it successfully I suddenly got an urge to make a 9/11 joke Dear God, No Jesse! NO!!! ALA AKBAR! (crashes a paper airplane into a Jenga Tower) That'll curb the urge ... for now (*looks at picture*) yeah he actually looks more like an evil boss nowAgreed So Creator cannot be defined?that is our job! She totally is in love with Creatorbow-chika-wow-wowO~oooooooooooooookay . . . Even now Creator is being his normal mysterious self. Blonde hair originally? I doubt even then he is telling the truth though you have to admit, the idea of contacts and short hair does make sense in a war setting Too true, too true. "Dude, we're like terrorists" 9/11 JOKE! 9/11 JOKE!!! I can't believe you got beaten to the punch this time Jesse and I am completely pissed off about it, though it is funny . . . and Black ruins it "I think I'm safe" So am I *showing the chip dried in blood* *falls over* did he really just bring back the green wisdom and springtime of youth sh*t again? Yeah I think that kinda ruined the moment for me, but it's part of his character so it does fit fits like a bullet in the hea(gets hit) Thanks Lora No problem "I get first crack at Life" Yeah you wear him down so I can kill him later in the battle Dad now you're acting like Uncle Not my fault I wanna be the one to kill him Wow did Black just really . . . read from the bible?*shivers*Ehehehe . . . *jumps in the tower to see it's an empty office* Well this wasn't what I was expecting at all *hundreds of Inactive minions begin pouring out of everywhere* Oh wait there we go XDDD "Moonstone Cannon, FIRE!"I knew it CX Sad though it can only be used once. Think we should strap Yaming in and begin firing the Apocolypse Cannon? That'd be cool if we could ^^ Tower vs Spacecraft = Epic 8D Yes! Proto is back . . . though he never technically left if you count the proto-fracsAll the same Creator has some nice dialogue here, a very rousing speech Don't stroke your ego in public Creator, that's just nasty XDDD Street Fighter reference FTW Jake . . .Dude I don't even get a last name XDDD ROFL You included that really Fusion? My grumbling made it into the actual book? Sweet Hey where am I?! At home tied to a chair so you don't interrupt adult-oriented fun That can be taken the wrong way Jesse I know, meant it that way ". . . so if any of you plans to make it to the top, have something sharp." I ALWAYS have a knife on me at least, even IRL BD OMFG The Anti-Mods! I get to kill ONE!!! *waves swords around frantically* "I take it you're Hioco. I hope the rumors behind your 21 guns were false . . . " Okay that seriosuly made me laugh out loud XD And Hioco is no longer inactive, but for the purposes of this story I guess it doesn't matter And even Phantom Roxas' old mentor has returned! All in all I don't know what it was about this chapter . . . maybe it was the fact it began the war or just knowing after it the true epic combat WILL begin . . . but I simply loved it. Everything clicked and even if there was some slight "choppy water" parts it didn't ruin the overall likablness of what I read. Funny jokes, good combat and unexpected twists- Just what I have come to expect from Trio of DEF I really want to run in and help dad Get out of the chair we strapped you to and sure, why not. <_< Why'd I bring you two along with me? Dad that so isn't nice! Be glad your sister isn't here *shivers*Good points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 Just one issue: If I gave a Mecha super AI...why would I need to sit in a cockpit? It makes no sense to drive something that drives itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 Because you want to be close to the action? Seriously Creator I don't ever see you being in the actual fray physically putting your body at risk, so piloting a super mecha seems to be something you are HIGHLY likely to do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 What I WOULD do: Sit in the captain's chair on the motherflippin bridge of my awesome, motherflippin ship watching shiz get real. Thats what I would do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 Voice activated lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 Simple Creator.It's fun as Hell.Thanks Jake, glad you loved the chapter.And I'll just say that the focus won't be entirely on what's inside the tower.Also, I loved writing that dialogue Creator. I'm already devising more to come for you and other characters.Tomorrow, since my flight's gonna be 8 hours, I'll see what I can do about finishing 32. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted April 21, 2011 Report Share Posted April 21, 2011 Simple Creator.It's fun as Hell.Thanks Jake, glad you loved the chapter.And I'll just say that the focus won't be entirely on what's inside the tower.Also, I loved writing that dialogue Creator. I'm already devising more to come for you and other characters.Tomorrow, since my flight's gonna be 8 hours, I'll see what I can do about finishing 32. That is the ONLY reason I would pilot a mecha of any sort. Seriously, around people I'm talking like Kamina. In private I'm like Lelouch. I'm either Kamlouch or Lelmina. Either way I'm 100% Creator, and I'M AWESOME! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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