PrimalFear Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 No it was directed towards Swift who for some reason edited his post before I posted that. Thats fine with me either one you want is fine. If you think it be better to go with Here then I will but be warned I work during the day so I'm ussually on after 5:00 eastern time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Ive always wanted to start roleplaying, because im told to be a good writer, just never found the time. [spoiler=Meh] It was a dark and cold stormy night. The wind blew against the wooden shelter i had made, creeping through the cracks between the twigs and caressing my face with full force, and no mercy. It was so cold it burned. I thought to myself, 'Why the hell did i accept to this? What am i to gain from proving my father right, besides a slight morale boost?' My father had called me a pansy. He told me i would never survive out in the real world. It had all started when the late papers started flooding in. He said i had a lack of responsibilty, which to myself, i will admit. Although im extremely arrogant and denied. I said to him "I can survive on my own. I dont need your damn help. I can make good enough grades to make double the amount of money you make. And i wouldnt have to live in this hellhole of a house." He replied with anger "Oh really? You think you can survive without me? Without the person who has helped you all your life? You think you can handle the world. Look you smartass kid. The world is a cruel place. If you think you can handle being on your own, so be it. For one week, i want you to stay in the motel nearby. You cant come back unless it is completely neccessary. If you come back, you are proven wrong, and you will follow all of my rules, do everything i tell you, with no rebellion" "Fine. Ill leave tommorow. I'd be happy to prove your dumb ass wrong." He stared at me with anger, but I could also see the heartbrokeness in his eyes. He knew i was smart, and could handle adult matters, and he knew at some age, i wouldnt need him anymore, that i would revolt. He left the room with watery eyes. "Pack your s***"[/spoiler] Thought up on the spot. And no, this in no way relates to me. Also, of course its not finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 [quote name='PrimalFear' timestamp='1285198007' post='4646681'] No it was directed towards Swift who for some reason edited his post before I posted that. Thats fine with me either one you want is fine. If you think it be better to go with Here then I will but be warned I work during the day so I'm ussually on after 5:00 eastern time. [/quote] That would be 8 here, so it's all good. Yeah, whatever you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 @Jake Alright here is my new app. -------- A figure ran through the dimly lit streets. The only thing visible was her flowing blue hair that escaped from her hood. All she heard were footsteps, pounding, they were her footsteps. There was an occasional splashing sound as she ran through the wet roads. Her lean figure looked as if it were about to collapse at any minute but she continued. Behind this figure were men dressed in all black, covering their eyes with odd devices. They extended from ear to ear and covered they eye area with a thin red light. They raced down the streets, following this girl, their muscular bodies allowing them to easily catch up to the girl. They were upon her in mere minutes. She spun around and brought up her arm. On the girl’s arm was an assault weapon, this weapon was affixed to her body making her an assault unit. Two .304 caliber barrels extended from the unit and fired. She hit her marks square in the torso, but they kept coming. [i]Droids.[/i] She thought to herself. She turned around and continued to run with renewed vigor. The Chase continued until they reached the edge of town, which sat upon a cliff. She looked down for a moment before turning to her pursuers. They slowed from a run to a jog and eventually were walking towards her. The one on the left stated in a monotone voice, “Unit one-seven-eight-eight-seven-nine, you will accompany us back to the facility.” “My name is Jaaniai.” She stated as she lept from the cliff. The Droids ran to the edge only to watch her be whisked away by a helicopter like vehicle. As Jaaniai sat down, she turned to who appeared to be in charge. “Had you been any later this would have ended badly for me.” She said with a slight giggle. “Since when have I missed a deadline?” The man replied with a deep chuckle. “You have a point there, Enzax.” She said. The vehicle flew away, towards a rising sun and a new dawn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Okay, now I'm confused. Who's talking to whom again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 [quote name='Ice' timestamp='1285197821' post='4646675'] ...Was this directed to me? Because I wasn't being sarcastic. [/quote] Ice is never sarcastic. EVER. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 [quote name='Nevert' timestamp='1285201268' post='4646851'] Ice is never sarcastic. EVER. [/quote] I since a high level of sarcasm in this statement... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDude Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 It was a stormy night. The knight walked up to, what seemed to be, the center. "Face me now!" He roard "This time I am ready!" there was a flash of light and a man appeared. "Isaic! I'ts been a while hasn't it..." "You will pay, Lightning!" Isaic then ran at him and slashed; but it was meerly deflected by one of his blades. Then Lightning swung one of his swords, only to be blocked by Isaic's shield. Isaic saw an opening and stabed Lightning in the heart. As he died he whisperd, "I was orderd to do it..." My spelling might not be the best because I am still at school. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iCherry Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 Wait, we can redo our apps? Because if we can, I'm about to go and grab my sample from the RP Club. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted September 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 ~Cherry~ it has to be on the spot- no drafts or anything . . . CDude= New Roleplayer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 was i forgotten? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted September 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 Oh sorry iSmesh I hadn't noticed yours ^^ After reading it I'll have to say Decent Roleplayer And Creator, after reading your new on the spot sample, I'd have to say a Moderate Roleplayer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 Good for a first try ^^ And i know i shouldve capitalized some stuff, but the shift key is too far away from my pinky D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted September 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 Yeah I know you coulda done better ^^ Also there was a bit of descrepency about how you decribed things and the spacing of paragraphs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 Alright then, I'll take a TA position until I can get a Teacher. Who do I get to help out Jake? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iCherry Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 [quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1285277439' post='4648888'] ~Cherry~ it has to be on the spot- no drafts or anything . . . [/quote] But on the front page, it says that for teachers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 I think we should make an RP for RPG School. What's a better way to learn to roleplay than actually roleplaying? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 [quote name='Twig' timestamp='1285280758' post='4649055'] I think we should make an RP for RPG School. What's a better way to learn to roleplay than actually roleplaying? [/quote] I'm liking the idea but what would it be about? Or are you just throwing the idea out there? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 I like the idea as well. We could just make it a typical High School style RP with combat and underground wars thrown in. Yep Typical High School. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 Perfect! I would probably make the RP a crossover with all original characters. It's perfect. I can post it on my Wiki Page! Yes, I made a Wiki Page, for fan-made crossovers only, though. It's not full of stories yet, or so I know, but it will be, by other Wikia users, soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 I'm just throwing out the idea. Super Power High School? Sounds...cliche... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 [quote name='Twig' timestamp='1285283200' post='4649253'] I'm just throwing out the idea. Super Power High School? [b]Sounds...cliche...[/b] [/quote] If we get Jake in on it, it won't be. Not to mention Creator for ideas and Nex for plots no one else can really begin to think up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 [quote name='Twig' timestamp='1285283200' post='4649253'] I'm just throwing out the idea. Super Power High School? Sounds...cliche... [/quote] There's actually one already made. xD At least, I think it's still going, but I'm not sure. All I know is that I probably would phase out of it after a few posts... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 [quote name='Andx' timestamp='1285283368' post='4649260'] If we get Jake in on it, it won't be. Not to mention Creator for ideas and Nex for plots no one else can really begin to think up. [/quote] Thanks for the confidence! (no sarcasm) Throw in Andx for a deep stroyline and Black to go bat-s*** insane and you have an awesome High School RP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 And Ice for the douche factor. Each high school needs a douche. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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