Roleplaying Club- Come and Improve Your Skills

[Jake the Sage]

[quote name='The Happy Mask Salesman' timestamp='1302831780' post='5139309']
So I shouldn't be in character Jake? From what I remember, RP'ing goes much more smoothly when you feel like you can act like the character. I put myself in my character's shoes. He's had little to no contact with you, and he constantly hears what you say. Why wouldn't he think that about you?
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*hits head*

D*mn it d*mn it d*mn it . . . I completely read that as an OOC, sorry I got so mad ^^;
I was reading it and thought, "WTF is up with Dane?! He's NEVER acting like this too me."

Well that's cleared up, continuing onto actual IC posts

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"Well dad is actually pretty humble if you really know him Creator," Lora stated standing up, swaying a bitr before getting her footing, and steadily walked beside him, "After all he never does brag about his power. Uncle Jesse does, but not dad."

Jake had wandered around the hotel floor for a while before he finally got exhausted, plopping down to take a break, [i]"Oh come on why did there have to be so many floors? How am I supposed to find this green gu-"[/i] Styopping in mid thought his face turned into a frown as it dawned on him the [i]only[/i] green person he knew was Fusion X Denver. Standing up he felt his legs cry out in protest but finally stood, taking out his phone and typing in a simple message to Fusion, "Where are you?"

[Fusion X. Denver]

Fusion's phone suddenly vibrated in his pocket, bringing his attention to it. He reached inside and flipped it open, seeing a text message from an unknown number. "Where are you?" he read aloud. [i]Shoot, I was afraid this would happen. Ever since that fight with that mage, I couldn't remember everyone in my contacts, so I deleted the whole thing...[/i] He showed the phone to Dane. "Hey, do you recognize this number? I don't want to throw this person off by asking who it is. Add your number in there while you're at it, my contacts list got deleted."

[Nexev]

[quote name='Deathly Fiend Of YMC' timestamp='1302832112' post='5139321']
DeathlyFiend finally regains conscientiousness and pants his breathe rapidly. After he[b] stops [/b]the panting, he places his hands on the ground beside him and pushes against it to get on his legs. He pushed and pushed, soon he got enough strength to lift up and get on his legs. While on his legs he takes each step, left and right across the room to the side across from him and back. "Am I finally out of detention, and if I am, could one of the teachers help me with showing or giving time for expression? I do not quite understand what you mean by that," DeathlyFiend [b]requested [/b]in a calm tone with his face in a lonely expression from top to bottom.
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Stuff like this is the problem

Stops is present tense


Requested is past.

[Headmaster Monokuma]

[quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1302832506' post='5139342']
Fusion slowly nodded, beginning to remember the transformation aspect of his comrade. "I kinda remember now. Still a little hazy in some areas, but I get it." He reached into the pocket where he had placed the cake, pulling a slice out. "I'm sure you'll get along fine, with or without those Solara spirits with you. You're pretty strong from what I remember." Fusion broke a piece off, smiling as the spongy texture melted in his mouth. "I actually fought someone on my way over here. I might have gone a little overboard, so I'm just replenishing some of my lost energy." He offered part of the slab of cake to Dane. "If you're feeling hungry, feel free to help yourself. By the way, do you know where the boss of this place is? I figure I should go introduce myself to get off on the right foot with him."
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"If Solara didn't want me here, I wouldn't be here. They have complete control over me and where I'm able to go... Unless I find a flume." Dane took the cake a took a bite, smirking as he did so.

"I just had a thought... You know those people who say eating gold is stupid? I wonder what they would say if they found out I make diamond cake. Aaaanyway, I'm not that strong honestly. This form is probably my strongest physically, and that's only because I have to be in order to make use of the tools I have. What's the point of having a pick if you can't shatter rock, or an axe if the tree is resisting everything you have? I needed strength, so that's what I got... Then I got other fun little things, like the ever classic fishing rod, the nearly unbreakable obsidian, TNT, even WOOL. I can use WOOL as a freaking weapon man."

Dane looked at the number, and barely realized who it was. "That would be Jake, and he's the one in charge, you may want to take that. Anyway, I don't have a number actually. Got rid of my list when I started traveling."
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Jake, it's fine. JUst be more careful when you read. I've made mistakes like that before. If it doesn't make sense, it would be best to reread.

[Fusion X. Denver]

Fusion widened his eyes in amazement. "So the spirits of Solara are that powerful, eh? Sounds rough." He finished the last bit of cake, licking his lips in relish. "But hey, strength isn't everything. Awesome skills like using flipping wool as a weapon is pretty beastly. All I've got is this hammer here." He patted the bottom of the sheathed handle attached to his waist. "Is this really Jake? I never would have thought he'd settle down and run a place; he always seemed like a nomad to me, being a sage and all." His thumbs darted across the keys, quickly replying to the message. "Idk, but I'm with Dane. I think my room's right near wherever your kitchen or front entrance is."

[Simping For Hina]

[quote name='Pinkie Pie' timestamp='1302832911' post='5139362']
Stuff like this is the problem

Stops is present tense


Requested is past.
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OoC: Okay, what would be better to right in, past or present tense and also how was the 'requested' in the wrong tense?

[Jake the Sage]

It had been a while since Jake had sent the message to Fusion, so long in fac that he had nearly forgotten he had sent it in the first place. With it out of his mind he had taken to killing time by wandering the grounds and stopping by to chat with a few of the normal people who would come and go. As he walked through a particular hallway he caught some girls, wearing short skirts, and his mind began to wallow in the gutter once more; the thoughts so bad he actually started to get a nose bleed. Following them he watched as their hips swayed with each step and he was getting closer towards them when the phone vibrated in his pocket, causing him to jump and yell in shock. This got him caught and after being beaten up for being a pervert he flipped open to read the message, "Idk, but I'm with Dane. I think my room's right near wherever your kitchen or front entrance is."

[i]"Kitchen? We don't own a kitchen . . . do we?"[/i] he thought to himself, wondering possibly if AL had put one in without his knowledge or if Fusion mistook the resturaunt for a kitchen; the later being highly unlikely. Either way the front entrance was enough to pinpoint Fusion and Dane's location and that was good enough for him. Racing down the hallways he decided to take a more flashy approach to his arrival, shundoing right out of the sixth floor into midair after breaking through the window. Falling the six stories he braced himself for impact and smashed into a Pries that had the unfortunate timing to be parked right under him. Hopping off the totaled car he looked over at spotted the two he was looking for and gave a wave, "Hey Dane! Fusion! So this is where you two are-"

"You gonna pay for that?" a large man, looming a full two heads over Jake, asked pointing back at the ruined vehicle. Laughing nerviously Jake realized he had the unfortunate timing to smash this ogers car.

[Nexev]

Thats a nasty thing to call Anger Level Jake.

Ogre, for shame.

[Jake the Sage]

[quote name='Pinkie Pie' timestamp='1302834888' post='5139458']
Thats a nasty thing to call Anger Level Jake.

Ogre, for shame.
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Pffft XD lol at least I didn't call him what I was truly thinking.

[The Warden]

It seemed everyone was gone, how dissapointing. He walked casually down to the center of the hall and stomped down hard. A shockwave crashed above the floor as he left a small crater where he stamped. 'It's such a pity, too little do I get to jest, but, there will be always times to play' he commented.

[Fusion X. Denver]

Fusion jumped, seeing a man fall down and land on a pries. "Oh man...look at that guy behind him, he's huge." He walked over, awkwardly waving at Jake as he stepped next to him. "Hey man, it's been a while. Are things alright?" He cautiously observed the behemoth behind Jake. "I think you ticked that guy off, mate."

[Jake the Sage]

"Y-Yeah well . . ." Jake stammered before lifting Fusion and running back into the hotel like he normally does, screams included. Once they had lost the giant he let Fusion back down and slide to the ground, panting from exhaustion, "Sorry about . . . that . . . but he was too big . . ."

"So," he continued catching his breath enough to not pant between words. Standing up he wipped the sweat from his brow and looked over at Fusion, "So, what are you doing in the hotel? I thought you were busy writting something and what not . . ."

[Fusion X. Denver]

Fusion dusted his pants, looking back from where they came to see if they were followed. "Man, I hope for your sake that you don't run into him again." He looked up and met Jake's gaze. "Sadly, I haven't written much in a long while. I've been kinda busy fighting for my life these past few months. I even had a bounty placed on my head for a while." He chuckled, rubbing the back of his head. "You don't seem to have changed much, unless I'm forgetting something. I had a run-in with this mage and some of my memory is hazy, so forgive me if I forget something obvious."

[Jake the Sage]

"No not really, haven't changed much," Jake replied with a grin but suddenly remembered something, "And don't let anyone else tell you differently. Times change, I don't."

Mulling over what he just said he gave a frown and retorted his own words, "Okay so I cahnge but not enough you can notice. I only learn new things and what not, it's not like my personality changes or anything. So, a bounty on your head, what for?"

Patting him on the back he began to lead Fusion through the hotel, forgetting about the giant ogre he'd possibly run into in the future.

[Fusion X. Denver]

Fusion's expression darkened. "You see, I tried a hand at bounty hunting for a little bit. I think I was running low on money, but I can't remember clearly. Anyway, I found this evil guy named Tenkai Kurayami and tracked him down in this place called Karamana Town. The dude was pretty strong, I had to use a lot of my strength to defeat him. But our battle kinda attracted attention and all people saw were two guys causing destruction." He placed his hands in his pockets, turning toward Jake. "We ended up fighting again and he got even stronger. I managed to draw with him, but I almost died. He's dead now, but he taught me I have to constantly improve myself or I won't always make it out of every sticky situation. I need to learn more about fighting and hone my skills."

[Jake the Sage]

"Well I could've told you that," Jake said bringing him to the movie theater which was begining to play 'Rio', acting like a life or death situation wasn't all that big a deal. It dawned on him that Fusion had been serious in his tone of voice and that his lighthearted approach might come off as rude or uncaring so he had to change tactics. Looking back at him he gave a warm grin and a thumbs up, a lame gesture, "Trust me I've been in many of those situations. I have to train almost 24/7 to keep the spot I've earned even if it is by unconvintional means. I mean, hey yeah I can travel through the multiverse and everything, but that doesn't help if I can't find someone to train against or a new technique to bring into battle."

[Fusion X. Denver]

Fusion raised an eyebrow. "What's this about the Multiverse? I've probably forgotten about it considering the name's at least somewhat familiar." He clasped his hands behind his head, grinning back. "Believe me, I know how much trouble most of you guys have gone through. I've only ever felt really bothered by it recently though." He recalled his desperate struggle against the legendary dragon ninja, Kisune Kaguya. He had actually lost his life in that battle, only able to come back by collaborating with the devil himself in Hell, winning his life and newfound power as his prize. However, his new powers had disappeared after that fateful, final battle, leaving him as he was before. [i]I can't die again, there won't be a second chance next time.[/i]

[Jake the Sage]

Clasping his hands over his mouth Jake cussed loudly into them, though muffled to anyone else who could hear him, and had completely forgotten he wasn't supposed to reveal he could go just about anywhere at his discression. But the cat was out of the bag now, so the need for him to cover it up was useless and it wouldn't do any good to attempt it; Andrew and Katie'd kill him for this, but maybe having others know wouldn't be a bad thing? Standing back up he explained that by using an ability he didn't quite understand himself, even though he had had the power for years, he could open portals to any dimension he could possibly think of as long as he knew a decent ammount of information about it. Deciding to give an example he dug into his backpack, a possession he was hardly without, and pulled out what looked like a mixture between a walkie-talkie and a handheld DVD player; the only notable logo on it was a colorful KP insignia on it. Handing it over to Fusion Jake let him examine it, "Know where that is from?"

[Fusion X. Denver]

Fusion could hardly believe what Jake had told him. [i]There are other dimensions? I never thought something like that existed outside of movies...[/i] Fusion grabbed the strange device, examining it. "No, I have no idea what this is supposed to be. Should I be familiar with this?" He anxiously awaited an answer, wanting to know more behind the concept of other dimensions.

[Jake the Sage]

[quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1302838591' post='5139575']
Fusion could hardly believe what Jake had told him. [i]There are other dimensions? I never thought something like that existed outside of movies...[/i] Fusion grabbed the strange device, examining it. "No, I have no idea what this is supposed to be. Should I be familiar with this?" He anxiously awaited an answer, wanting to know more behind the concept of other dimensions.
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Laughing as Fusion got floored by the concept of other dimensions it happily reminded him that not everyone knew about it. Letting him examine the device he listened to him asking questions about what it was supposed to be and if he should recognize it. The last part actually made him get a bit nervious revealing it's origin dimension, but he had shown it so there was no choice but to tell, and as he took it back he gave a cough, "Well . . . if you have a niece or a little sister you'd possibly recognize it. In this dimension it is from a TV show that was on Disney."

"It's supposed to be a world wide enabled communicator," he explained it's funciton, dancing around where it came from, and got a look of nostalgia as he clicked the power button so it's jingle sounded off. Sighing he turned back to Fusion, "This is actually called a Kimunicator, you know . . . from Kim Possible. And before you say something like 'it's a girls show' or 'you serious' I'll have you know Kim is actually a nice girl. In fact most people I've meet through my travels have been interesting and unique to meet."

Putting the Kimunicator away he pulled out a picture of the famous Negi Springfield and class with him in it. Showing Fusion it had a signature from everyone in the class and, in the picture, it was obvious Evangeline was trying to beat the sh*t out of him, "Again . . . as long as I know the place and got enough information I can go there. But there's places I've never been to also, like the Final Fantasy dimension."

"I should also note I can bring people with me," he added in as an after thought.

[Fusion X. Denver]

"Kim Possible...I remember that show." Fusion muttered. "Ron Stoppable was a funny dude." He examined the photo of the class containing the famed wizard, Negi Springfield. "That's funny, I just picked up the first volume of this manga a week ago, seemed alright to me. Though I heard all the action comes in later." He shifted his gaze back to Jake. "And you can really bring people back, eh? What about the reverse?" [i]Here's where he'll probably say no...but it'd be cool to travel through the borders of fiction. I could learn the Shadow Clone Jutsu from Naruto, eat a Devil Fruit, learn how to wield a sword from Ichigo.[/i] Fusion gulped, trembling with excitement. [i]It's like a dream that you have when you're a little kid, wanting to meet the people you see on TV. But...how's he gonna answer?[/i]

[Jake the Sage]

Standing up Jake seemed to know, possibly from the starry eyed look Fusion was giving him, that he wanted to go along and visit some of the other dimensions if it was possible. Sighing he scratched the back of his head and gave a nod, wordlessly stating that he indeed could bring people too the dimensions as well as bring the people here as well. in fact he told Fusion that bringin back into the dimension was much more common than having a main character being pulled out. Feeling the urge to explain he did so, "You see Fusion, most worlds are centered around a singal individual. For Naruto it is, well, Naruto for Bleach it is Ichigo and so on and so on. If I was to pull them from their home dimension I run the risk of collapsing that dimension and causing all kinds of mayhem I'd get in trouble for. But adding someone like you . . ."

As he said this he pointed at Fusion, "If I were to put you into that dimension it wouldn't be a major problem, since you would most likely fall into the roll of a random nameless character. But before you go on getting the idea that you can travel the multiverse and learn techniques like I do, it isn't as easy as it sounds."

Forming the Shadow Clone Jutsu hand signs he released the tecnhique as a cloud of smoke appeared beside him, disappearing to show another Jake in perfect detail. High fiving each other they spoke simultaniously, "For instance to learn this I had to spend years as a f*cking Academy Student to learn chakra and hand signs until they were memorized. Then came learning the actual technique."

Releasing the jutsu the seocnd Jake vanished, "And you HAVE to stay there the entire time when it comes to Naruto. That is a 'Developing World' where new information comes in all the time. You leave and new information comes in, all your work . . . and even your presense there, will be erased. You have [i]no[/i] idea how long it took me to figure that out."

Sighing bad memories of being called a stalker and a pervert, before he actually was one, rushed back into his mind when people he had met would have their memopries erased of any information about him.

[Fusion X. Denver]

At first, Fusion's eyes sparkled with delight, but crushing disappointment soon filled him as Jake continued his explanation. [i]I know I want to get stronger, but do I really need to spend years in different training just for a couple new techniques? And people won't even remember me after I'm gone...[/i] Fusion sighed, shrugging his shoulders. "I guess I'm better off training here than in other dimensions. Do you know anyone who can give me a good workout?"

[The Warden]

Broken was idly flicking playing cards into the air, where they exploded loudly. 'Five of diamonds' he said, flicking the card and it exploded. 'King of hearts, queen of diamonds, three of hearts, four of clubs' he continued, throwing each card and they exploded. He finally got tired and threw the rest of the deck away, which landed on the floor and exploded loudly, leaving a large scorch mark. 'BOOOOOO-OOOORRREEEDDD' he yawned.

[Jake the Sage]

[quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1302841490' post='5139646']
At first, Fusion's eyes sparkled with delight, but crushing disappointment soon filled him as Jake continued his explanation. [i]I know I want to get stronger, but do I really need to spend years in different training just for a couple new techniques? And people won't even remember me after I'm gone...[/i] Fusion sighed, shrugging his shoulders. "I guess I'm better off training here than in other dimensions. Do you know anyone who can give me a good workout?"
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"Well now you CAN go to certain dimensions which are completely developed," Jake explained and brought back up the Kimunicator, "For instance Kim Possible has no new information coming in so you'd be able to go there and not be forgotten. Also the original Naruto, before the time skip, you could go to and learn stuff. You see there is ways around this rule but generally you just have to keep coming back and learning the process over and over again, even if you are momentarily forgotten. In all honesty . . ."

"Most of the interdimensional friends I've made have forgotten me at one point or another. Negi in fact has forgotten me a couple times, but since information for his world comes in so slowly he is able to remember," Jake stopped and thought about something before asking Fusion a question, "Do you know how often a new chapter of Naruto Shippuden comes out? Or One Piece and Bleach for that matter? Because if they're slow enough we can get in and out with a few items for you . . . possibly a power or two."