Roleplaying Club- Come and Improve Your Skills

[Headmaster Monokuma]

Layton smiled when he entered the room and saw the new arrival. "Caeda! I'm glad you found your way here. For a second I was worried you wouldn't come. You know that would have just killed me. How have you been? It's been a few days."

Before getting an answer, Layton ran off to find Broken, and did. Turning towards Broken, Layton started to speak. "So, how about that practice fight? I haven't had any training here yet, and I have a new set of abilities I would like to try out. I tried to use them before, but I never got the chance. It would be great if we could get it started."

[The Warden]

Broken listened to Layton carefully, a large grin spread across his face. 'That sounds like a great idea, I've been working on some Stanzas to use, and I finally reached the number I wanted, thirteen' he declared. 'Of course, i've only used one of them in combat, so that's out. I used another one to be creepy, that's out. The thirteenth is naturally the most powerful, so that's out. See, I'm a nice guy. Ill prove it, by letting you pick my stanza. It's real easy, just select a number that goes from two to twelve' he declared. 'Also, they aren't numbered by power, so choose carefully' he warned.

[Headmaster Monokuma]

A frown spread across Layton's face as he started to think about which number to pick. [i]I hate luck. I have none of it, so that makes this worse...[/i] As he thought he came to the conclusion to not pick a number. "I have the worst luck, so I'm not picking. Instead, I'll do this. Sunflower!" He watched as a counter on his watched dropped by fifty points. [i]Only fifty points left now.[/i]

As he said this, a small seed fell onto the floor far behind Layton and sprouted despite the fact it had no soil. In the matter of seconds, a sunflower half the size of a normal size human was looking towards Layton and Broken. "Layton? What do you want this time?" It talked in a high voice, and could be identified as female if one wished.

"I need you to pick a number. Two through twelve. Also, start sun production please."

The sunflower looked confused, but proceeded to think of a number. "Seven. Very well Layton. I'll start making sun now."

[The Warden]

An enormous grin broke out on Broken's face. he began to leap in the air, punching it at the peak of jump. 'Thanks a lot little miss sun flower. Love the song 'Zombie on your Lawn' by the way, but this is perfect. You've picked one of my best' he declared and raised a hand. 'Stanza Shift: Spirit Revolution' he declared. There was a flash and his outfit....didn't change at all. There was something clasped in his hand though. 'Allow me a quick explanation. This is my Stanza Shift Seven, a power I've taken liberties from being the Leader of the Digimon Tamer Union. Now, I could use all twenty spirits, but that would be no fun. So I instead use my favourite set, now observe' he stated, raising the Digivice in his hand. 'Execute, Spirit Evolution' he shouted, his hand being coated by a ring of code. He scanned it and exploded into light, reappearing as something else.

[spoiler=For lon story short, Mercurymon]
[img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20071102042709/digimon/images/8/8e/Mercurymon_t.jpg[/img][/spoiler]

He bowed curtly. 'In this state, I am Mercurymon, legendary warrior of steel' he said, his voice taking on a light shakespearen tone. He raised his shield defensively. 'Have at thee' he declared.

[Headmaster Monokuma]

"Great... Thanks sunflower." Layton quickly 'grabbed' some of the falling sun from the roof, and jumped behind the sunflower. [i]Seventy-five. More would be nice.[/i] Unsheathing his rapier, he took a stance that would quickly allow him to move as needed. "Sunflower!" He cried, summoning another sunflower right beside the first one. [i]I have no clue what to expect, or how to react.[/i]

"Sorry Layton. Maybe if you had chosen you would have had better luck." Another bunch of sun was being produced as it talked, and within seconds, LAyton grabbed another twenty-five sun.

[i]Okay, fifty sun, I should try to save some. Maybe I could bait him into attacking me instead of the plants.[/i] As he thought this, he moved to look like he was going to charge Mercurymon, but didn't move immediately.

[The Warden]

Mercurymon stood still, carefuly observing Layton and his sunflowers. 'I've played the game before Layton, Sunflowers are the primary source of sun, especially the double ones' he called out. 'But still, Mirror Offeset' he declared. The shield he had raised glew with a green light, which he aimed at the freshly planted sunflower. A blast of green light exploded from the shield and made direct course for the sunflower. 'When to the sessions of sweet, silent thought' he said poetically.

[Headmaster Monokuma]

"Had to try, didn't I?" Layton watched as the green light came rushing towards his sunflower, and acted quickly. "Wall-nut!" As he said this, a giant walnut appeared in-front of his sunflower, and was almost completely shattered by the blast. "I'm glad it can't feel that... Anyway, I suppose you have an idea of the many ways to play the game. So maybe my way could use a little tweaking." As he said this, another sun dropped from the roof, and another from his sunflower, allowing him to plant another sunflower. "Usually I have time to stockpile sun before a fight, but not this time."

[The Warden]

Mercurymon shurgged. 'It all depends I suppose, not as if using your peashooters would help. But there is one little issue, you keep stocking sunflowers, but wall-nuts have annoyingly long cool down times. You can't produce another one to save your next sunflower' he commented and moved across to face another sunflower. He took careful aim with his shield and the lips reflected in the face mirror smirked. 'Mirror Offset' he declared, firing the green blast again.

[Headmaster Monokuma]

"I know. Because of things like that, you have to learn to improvise. Luckily, I know of something that makes a fine shield, if a short lasting one that is." As he said this, he raised his hand and pointed at the spot right in-front of the sunflower the shot was aimed at. "Puffshroom!" He said a small mushroom spawned. It appeared to be asleep, but it didn't last long. As soon as it appeared, the blast destroyed it without it having a chance. "It's a shame, but it had to be done." Just as he said this, all three of his sunflowers produced some sun, bumping him up to seventy-five sun. [i]Okay, that's good. Now, if I can get some more, that would be great.[/i]

[The Warden]

Mercurymon pouted, but it didn't affect him too much. Unlike the stupid chepa game, he had every plant at this disposal, the lucky bastard. 'You know what, go for it, I'll wait' he declared and sat down, waiting for more sunlight to drop. 'I want a decent challenge, so save up your sunlight and plant me some real challenges, not as if it matter mind, but I may as well have a bit of fun, since this is what this fight is about anyways' he added.

[Headmaster Monokuma]

"You actually want me to save up the sun? Well, I can do that one of two ways. One, we can wait for my sunflowers to produce it, or two, I can head back into my room and mess around with my Zen Garden to do it. I managed to snag two sunflowers for it, and they produce sun like no tomorrow. Sadly I can't really take them into battles, it's hard to transport them around." With this, he stood up and went through the school until he reached his room, and opened the door. The room was small, with tons of shelves with plenty of books, and a door on the other end. Opening it, he walked outside and into his Zen Garden. The garden itself was twice the size of his room, and he like it that way. At the far end was two giant sunflowers, far larger then any human being and close to the size of many giant robots. "Now... where is the fertilizer? Ah, here it is!" He said as he grabbed two large bags, and carried them over to the sunflowers. Once he spread the fertilizer around, watered them, and made sure they were free from bugs, he had well around three thousand sun. "As much sun they produce, it takes so much cash to be able to afford everything for them..." Hurrying back to the room where Broken was waiting, he prepared to continue.

"Ready now?"

[The Warden]

I can't be arsed right now to post about titting about, so just add that you came back to the room.

[NeoDemonX]

[spoiler=Example] Keiga is walking though the forests of Kasser Vallan, going too village to village. Then he sees an opening half a mile away and sees a lake their too. As he got closer he saw animals that he can hunt to eat but he already has food in his backpack. When he got to the opening it was two miles wide with random trees and rocks and their was a half mile wide lake in the middle of the opening. So he set up camp by two near by trees with three big rocks. So he set up his tent and his sleeping bag that he got on his travels. [color="#FF0000"][i]I think I am going to stay here for a few days.[/i][/color] Then he sat down on a log that he found near by. [color="#FF0000"][i]Hmmmm, its getting dark soon, I should get some wood for the fire[/i].[/color] So he got up and start to walk to the forest, as he did, he notice that the animals are acting strangely. 30 mins later he pick up a lot of wood and now heading but to his campbut now he senses a ninja around but he don't know where. When he gets to the opening he drop the wood at the camp and then he just sit down then a needle went by him. Then a Royal Japanese ANBU Soldier came out of the forest holding a sword. "So you finally found me, will then come and try too kill me" Keiga said as he got his sword from his back. Then he ran at the ANBU Soldier with rage. The Soldier was doing the same thing and they finally meet and clash with a thunder of metal and steel. They did this several time before Keiga finally got though the soldier's defences and slash the soldier's right arm. Because of the slash, he drop his sword in pain and then Keiga want for the final slash. As he did he heard the soldier cry in fear but it to late because Keiga already slash that killed the soldier. "Ha, you were to easy to beat but I guess I go and make my fire now".[/spoiler]

I don't what I am as a roleplayer but this can tell you.

[The Warden]

It was nice to see the occasional sentence that didn't start with 'adverb he'. You also have a little bit of trouble with tenses as well, as I saw you constantly shuffle between past and present. Also, to make it seem like you're a better RPer, you actually write numbers using their full grammatical form, not numbers.

[Jake the Sage]

Neo Demon X- Decent Roleplayer

It had been a while since Jake sat in his dean chair, since e was generally out trying to teach someone or having to travel, hell sometimes he was just having to manage the large number of things he actually had under his command. Sighing as he slumped his head down into his palm he rested while looking down at the blinking computer screen, his reading glasses lowering down a bit, [i]"I wonder what else I need to do now?"[/i] he thought to himself. A sudden rasp on the door caught his attention as he called for whomever it was to come in. The door openeed and closed as the winter princess from the Heartfall Rpg, Noelle, walked into the room quietly. Perking up after seeing her Jake sat straight up. Normally whenever he discontinued an rpg or stopped endorsing it the characters he created just upped and vanished without a trace, a bad habit created to manage the enormous data he had coming and going at all time, but there she stood.

"Yes?"

"I would like to . . . thank you for . . . sending me to the . . . Superpowered High . . . School," she said with a bow. He hadn't thought about it when sighning the papers, but indirectly he had saved her. The lead villain needed someone to come in so he could lay out the plan, but he coulnd't have thought of anybody within the rpg. Noelle's name just popped in.

[The Warden]

Mercurymon looked up, he had been reading a magazine titled 'Digimon Gone Wild'. It was currently open to the flip out section, but he hastily folded it and threw the magazine away, it magically vanished. 'Sorry bout that, I was just caught up in, a little light reading' he apologized and craked his fingers. He did a few stretches and grunted until he felt the very satisfying crack. 'Now then Professor Layton, let us continue. Hit me with your best shot' Mecurymon taunted.

[Fake]

I'd like to join; I've never role-played before so I suppose this is where I should start.
For the sample I just came up with a random scenario and characters. I won't mention any characters either since I haven't named them. The scenario is supposed to be war.
[Spoiler=Sample]
This is actually my second time writing a sample since I deleted the other by mistake but I hope this is enough.

At first he didn't understand anything, the other second he had entered the empty house and in the next it was as the world dissolved in pain and darkness. Everything had ceased to exist. He could feel how he flew through the air and bounced down on the hard floor with a bang. He felt an explosive feeling from his head where he had been hit. Cold air flowed into the room and something hot and sticky, along with his cheek told him that him that he was bleeding profusely. All the sound seemed to be gone from the world except his movements which seemed to be even louder. He opened his closed eyes, everything was blurred. He could see a blurred contour approach him through the shimmer. In desperation he reached for his knife but it had detached when he fell. He begun to crawl back in fear, the contour was even closer now. He looked around him terrified, and there it was, the knife! The knife lay next to him only a meter away, he reached for it but it was already too late, the contour had stamped down his hand. He let out a small cry however, he was not sure if anyone could hear him in his current state. He knew this was a bad idea at first, entering a derelict house without his squad. All he could do now was to wait for a miracle. The person prepared a following strike but this time with his right hand. Like a flash the enemy had been thrown aside, a new contour had entered the room and attacked the enemy. He could see the two men wrestle on the floor, but the only thing in his mind right now was to survive. He reached for the knife once again and took a firm grip on it. He gathered all his strength and stood up on shaky legs. It felt like he had received an electric shock and he could feel how his whole body trembled. He had to lean against a table that stood nearby to prevent from collapsing. As he recovered slightly he began to walk towards the fighting contours. The ally had been stroked down on the floor, the enemy handed out blow after blow and he could hear the ally groan in pain. As he was close enough he withdrew the last of his strength and drilled down the knife into the enemy’s throat. In a split second he thought he heard the enemy scream, a terrible scream. Everything started to turn black and he felt his entire body weight fall to the floor unconscious. [/Spoiler]

[Jake the Sage]

Fake= Begining Roleplayer

Broken you still need to get the "Speech Rule" down

[Fake]

You mean new roleplayer right ?
Anywayz who's my teacher ?

[Jake the Sage]

your teacher is whomever you decide.

[Fake]

Since I need the most help with the basics, who has most patience ?

[Jake the Sage]

That is a very hard question to answer, most actualyl have a decent ammont of patience. I would say letting Black or possibly Nervex teaching your first.

[Fake]

Okay black it is, I'll talk to him when he's online.

[Lust the Lascivious]

jake-sama said I could use this for a test

[---------------]

Okay, so I only need to show you an example of my Rping to join?

[spoiler=Tbqh, I copypasta'd this from a post on mine in Final Fantasy: Cellulite Chronicles]"Freya! 13! I need help" Faris yelled, turning into a Red Mage holding a Rapier. She rushed at Umbriel, but Umbriel casted a Ruinga, effectively knocking Faris back. Freya ran towards Umbriel, aiming her lance at her chest. With a glowing hand, Umbriel grabbed the lance and broke it. Freya quickly ran to the section labeled IX, but couldnt find any more lances. She quickly ran to section IV. As Faris dodged a few Thunders from Umbriel, Umbriel's arm was slashed by a flying lance. The lance was dark purple in color, with gold tips and a dark red lining. The lance suddenly rematerialized in Freya's hands, and she charged....[/spoiler]