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Well I guess I was a bit to leniant then I was judging differently then that. I'm not all the best with grammar myself so that is a major weak point on my part. But I also wasn't judging from a on the spot point of view which in this case makes more sense that Twig would be rated higher. As for the tense part of it I figured that was minor compared to things that could have been worse. Although I did notice the Powerplay and I can admit myself that I've done it myself, I think everyone has but its something that has to be worked on.

I guess since you pointed out what I missed I believe the ranking is correct then.


Edit: Nex, unfournitly I do not know him or as I recall have never seen his rp skills so I was judging from what I saw and I guess I missed what Black pointed out, especially since I'm only decent to moderate on Grammar.
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Assaulte you came here to be judged, now take the ranking and realize its all fair- as I judge everyone without being biased. As for who will be teaching you, Primal you stated you're good at writting in detail- then would you mind teaching him?

All you need do is teach him details and then I can have someone else teach him grammar. Same thing goes for Twig, though either Nervert or Black may teach him.
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[quote name='Tainted Black' timestamp='1285021546' post='4644034']
Dude, Twig's was inventive, on the spot, and more. Swift lacked grammar in places, power played (Technically), and switched tenses. Not to mention he used present tense.
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This came from my latest Fan Fic, so you shouldn't be accusing people of something if the draft I did wasn't from an RP.

[quote name='Nevert' timestamp='1285021685' post='4644042']
And we know twig's a good rper.

He probbaly could have gotten my job if he tried.


Plus, I RP WITH SWIFT, I know his quality damn well thank you very much.
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Thank you! At least somebody knows my writing quality.

[quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1285022889' post='4644095']
Assaulter you came here to be judged, now take the ranking and realize its all fair- as I judge everyone without being biased. As for who will be teaching you, Primal you stated you're good at writting in detail- then would you mind teaching him?

All you need do is teach him details and then I can have someone else teach him grammar. Same thing goes for Twig, though either Nevert or Black may teach him.
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I apologize. I just felt insulted that you would give me such a low ranking.l But still, I'm sorry.

[quote name='PrimalFear' timestamp='1285023028' post='4644101']
I guess thats fine with me Jake!!!
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Well, isn't this a turn of events? I never thought the day would come when I would be taught by someone who's possibly beyond the writing level of Hydra the Legend, aka Blazinghydra. At least it's for details and not for grammar. I feel glad, but I feel like I'm going to regret it. I don't know, maybe I will eventually, but for now, I'm perfect with this.
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... You missed Nex's entire point.

[quote name='The Swift Assaulter' timestamp='1285110284' post='4644733']
[b]This came from my latest Fan Fic, so you shouldn't be accusing people of something if the draft I did wasn't from an RP.[/b]
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... Wat. That was not on the spot, OR for an RP, but from a fic's draft? DENIED. Do it right, or get out.

Guess what? You DID powerplay. I don't care if it's for a fic, it's still powerplaying as this is a RP school, not a Fanfic school.
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Ice just post something, its always better to come with a bad sample then come with nothing. Its not only for ranking but to also see where you lack in your writing skills. Though I'm not the best at Grammar I still did a post and also made teacher.

But I'll leave the decision to Jake as at the moment I'm unsure how I play as accepting denying and giving orders to members :)

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OK will my teachers stop arguing with their students? Try an' show a little "professionalism" please, hmmm?!

Ah oh well at least none of you've burned down the school yet ^^;

Sorry about not getting to you yet Clair. Just finished reading your sample, and believe me with me being sick that was a wrong idea XD

Excellent work, well thought out for being on the spot. Also the detail was amazing, eachand every single thing described in all its gory detail.

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[quote name='Tainted Black' timestamp='1285115789' post='4645048']
Twig, I realize that... but this is an RP School, not a fanfic school. So, he was writing for a fanfic, which was fro ma DRAFT, and not an RP or on the spot.
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Oh...I get it now...

So like...What should we talk about/what's our topic/when do I learn things?
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[quote name='Twig' timestamp='1285116250' post='4645077']
Oh...I get it now...So like...What should we talk about/what's our topic/when do I learn things?
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[quote name='Byakuya Kuchiki' timestamp='1285116495' post='4645094']
I dunno. Since htis is a classroom? Are there any teachers teaching things? *slouches in a desk*
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Umm.... I'm a teacher..... feel free to ask me something and I may get a "lecture" (more like a brief response to something) going?
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Goddamn on the spot samples. >_>

[spoiler=Sample]"Jeez..." A boy complained. He was sitting in a desk that sat in the middle of the classroom with other desks surronding him. He was the only one there. Everyone else had left and he was told that a teacher would arrive shortly to "watch him". He was tapping a Number 2 pencil on his desk next to a completely blank sheet of 3-Hole Paper. "How the hell do they expect me to come up with this stupid crap on the spot? I'm not that creative. Damn school assignments..." He further complained. He was writing something, and coming up with it on the spot wasn't easy for him, obviously. He then put the pencil down and hit his desk in anger. "Damn it! Where is that damn teacher anyway?! I could trick them into doing this for me like the others!"

"Sorry son, but I'm not going to do that." A male voice spoke, walking into the classroom. He placed a stack of papers down on the Teacher's Desk in front of a chalkboard at the front of the classroom. He sat down in his chair and looked over at the irritated delinquent. The young student wore a blue T-Shirt with "Shut Up" written on it in white letters. He also wore blue pants and white shoes to go with it. The teacher had a brown suit with brown pants and a blue neck-tie. "Now, would you like to actually pass? Or would you like to sit here for the next three hours doing nothing?"[/spoiler]

There.
I'm applying to be a student.
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