Roleplaying Club- Come and Improve Your Skills

[Sploda]

@Twig
Well it would clash with the others.

An RP is like a story, one big story.

Each RPer controls their character's actions in this story.

If everyone is using 3rd Person then to keep the story flowing smoothly so should you.

However if there is a mixture between the two, then you mix them.

If everyone is in 1st Person then you avoid 3rd Person.

As I said it depends on the situation/RP.

[Jake the Sage]

I agree with Creator 100% . . . also it all depends on the person. Take Minnie, the only person I know who uses first person, since she can't do third person without it sounding very off. Me on the other hand I am able to write it like I'm watching it or the actual character.

On a side note Creator, what would you rank Shadow's preformance?

*steps out into training room floor*

[Sploda]

Creator miraculously recovers. "I really like that effect..." Creator said jokingly dismissing his Banweapon.

"The fact that he is this skilled is good but I feel there is definably room for improvement, especially since most of this stuff has been seen before. I would begin him in the Decent Rper area and work with him from there." Creator commented.

[Jake the Sage]

"No no no," I reply shaking my head, "I meant how much do you think he Godmodded any or pulled ass-moves?"

Stepping into the ring I pad Shadow's back while he left, unharmed due to the areas special abilities, and then remove my gloves.

[Sploda]

"Ah well the fact that he was able to instantly trap me in a bubble is kinda pushing it and the fact that he was unharmed by my lanza was definably a warning flag. Also I think that a preset list of abilities would have been good so he couldn't pull something like that." Creator said, fixing his statement. He noticed Jake's actions.

"This is payback for the War RP isn't it." Creator said snidly as he took a battle ready stance and somehow donned his Organization Robes. "All weapons, 2 abilities max. I promise not to Mimic. Also no Banweapons."

[Jake the Sage]

"Heh yeah this [i]is[/i] revenge for the War RP," Jake affirmed with a sly grin, happily reveling in thoughts of vengance, and slammed the chinese hook swords into the ground, "We remain in the forms we had chosen for the War Rp, nothing more nothing less, got it? We will settle this fair and square . . . no holding back or excuses."

"No one else is to interfer either!" he barked at the rest of the group whom remained in the training room. Snapping a finger the walls vanished, the ceiling rose until it became a sky, and the terrain finally reverted to that of the War Rpg had been before its shut down.

[Sploda]

"Alright but I warn you, you'll never see me coming." Creator then multiplied himself using an illusion device and rushed Jake, his gunblade outstretched. This was really a feint as Creator was really on top of a nearby building.

OOC: FYI Proto needs to enter as well since he is part of my fighting style.

[Proto]

The large machine pulled out another card, a green one this time, and activated it. As with before, the card transformed into a large rocket launcher, however this one was on a much more smaller scale then the Moonstone Cannon, it was in a white, smooth shape and it had three revolving hollow holes, used for firing. "I believe that my creator will be requiring my assistance right about now."

With a hefty leap Proto landed right next to his creator, brandishing his rocket launcher. "Any particular proceedures for this battle? Or should be just improvise?"

[Jake the Sage]

lol yeah if he decides to join in . . . sure

Seeing the 'sea' of enemies surrounding him Jake had to think fast, fast enough so he could escape or defeat them easily, and he figured something out. Scowling he clenched his fists together, raising his energy high enough to cause the earth to rumble, and then slamed his fist into the ground. The impact caused a giant explosion which ripped through any illusions and made Jake wabble in place, panting as he looked around, [i]"Left . . . Right . . . Behind me . . . okay so he isn't in the immediate area."[/i] Standing tall he gave a relaxing sigh, the energy quelling down, and moved some hair form his eyes, "I'll admit Creator! That was a lot of illusions! BUT! The same tricks wont work on me twice!"

[Serenity the Candyman]

I always have room to improve, so I'm applying for being a student;

[spoiler=Submission]
Many things concerned Jack that when put into perspective, they didnt amount to anything as much as the real problem that he faced right now. If only he had chosen to bring a weapon of any sorts to face Montezuma. Jack could feel the drops of sweat begin to form as Montezuma drew closer, his claws extended to the point where one scratch would be fatal. Jack continued think of a way to destroy this beast and keep his body from losing soul to the jaws of Death, but nothing was coming to him. Then, as if a god had struck him with a bolt of lightning, the teachings of his Sensei flooded his mind. [i]"You need no weapon to defeat even the largest of beasts. If you have the determination and a clear mind, the sheer force of ones thoughts can move the mightest of foes."[/i] Smiling at this revelation, Jack figured out his battle plan and preceded to attack Montezuma.[/spoiler]

[Shadow Zero]

Shadow begins to stir groggily and eventually forces his eyes open. When he does, he is surprised that he finds himself outside. At least that is what it seems to be, and as he raises himself into a sitting position, he sees Creator and Jake in the forms that they used for the rp war. [i]I get it, this is a grudge match between to warriors.[/i] Shadow grinned at the thought as he made a full recover chip appear. Unfortunately, he could only make them appear outside of battle, but even so, it was still able to at least be used now. Using the Recover Chip and instantly becoming fully healed, Shadow leaped up from the ground in a backwards motion, doing a couple of backwards somersaults as he landed outside of the immediate battle area. [i]Try not to kill each other. I have a match of my own that I wish to relive.[/i]

[Jake the Sage]

[b]I would say a Begining Roleplayer. It has detail but not in the right ways that would make it decent. Grammar also needs work, which subtracts the actual 'readablilty' of the sample[/b]

[CrystalCyae]

Obsidan was surprised to find somebody else in the grand school entrance hall. Her eyes opened wide but, when she realised Andrew was not a threat, she relaxed, but not completely. "[i] After all, in some RPs I've been in, the innocent looking are viscious.[/i]" She thought warily. Upon hearing his suggestion she smiled greatfully. "It'd be great if you could lead me to the training room, thanks."

[The Warden]

Broken snickered to himself as he vanished and reappeared behind Shadow, watching the battle unfold. 'Ku ku ku, this will be fun. Sir Trash-a-lot vs the dean, the big cheese, the cheese whip, the cool whip, the whip, the cat-o-ninetails, the guillotine, the phantom of the opera.....I forget where I was going with that. But let us hope Jake makes for a better stand against him than you did' Broken laughed loudly. From his pocket he pulled out a pair of opera glasses and a pepsi. He brought the glasses to his eyes in front of his own specs whilst he took a swig of the soft drink.

Yo Jake, mind if I take the maggots in to class for some battle theory?

[Sploda]

"PROTO, engage battle protocol Alpha-9." Creator said with a grin as he watched Jake eliminate his Illusions. He conjured a few more, this time of PROTO and Jake himself. He sent these rushing at Jake while pulling out his sniper rifle and activating a hover capability in his shoes. He then began to fire on Jake while moving around the arena firing from different directions. [i]I can't use the ship illusion again, and it's to early to use the real thing so for now I'll have to play it safe.[/i]

[Jake the Sage]

[b]Broken go ahead and begin teaching[/b]

Jake closed his eyes, feeling the energy around him, and then kicked his swords up into the air. He could sense what was there and what wasn't within a certain range . . . a handy trick learned while he was training with Kenichi Shirahama. [i]"Next time I visit I'll be sure to thank the elder,"[/i] he thought as the illusions passed through and around him, he knew they couldn't harm him. However when he felt something physical break through his shikuken he instantly leaned to the right, avoiding even the bullet, and righted himself, "Shooting Creator . . . really?!"

[hr]

Andrew smiled and lead Obsidian all the way through the winding corridours. Each passage way was different, and not different as in a change of wallpaper, but instead completely different scenary. Keeping Obsidain beside him Andrew soon had them half way through before he asked her, "So why are you interested in learning from Jake?"

[Enrise]

As a old RPer of YCM who just returned recently, I would like to join as a Teacher who would like to help young RPers become better in their RPing skills, etc.

So, need an RP post from this old timer?

[Jake the Sage]

LOL welcome back Enrise, and yes you'd still need to send in a sample post

[Enrise]

[quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1289513013' post='4777454']
LOL welcome back Enrise, and yes you'd still need to send in a sample post
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PM or here? Either way I just hope that I clean up my RP skills. Then again, I have been doing some RP relative self-events for myself.

[Jake the Sage]

here, we don't do the entire PM thing anymore

[Enrise]

On the spot? Great.

I'll just start a scenario for my self:

In the cold trenches of the winters, the bodies lay in the crimson snow, while the radiations continue to flow in the air, and the survivors of this event, all hoped to forget that the bomb was ever dropped on them.

[b]5 hours earlier[/b]

Governor Helic Recepta paced continuous throughout the office, afraid of the air raid that kept returning to to scare them off. His monotone walking worried the staff that camped in the office with him, passing hushed messages to each other.
"You think he's going to evacuate the city"
"Doubt it. I think he's too scared."
"That, or he's going to suicide into the enemy."
"Too scared, I think he's going to die of fright."
They only guessed what the governor would do, and only guessed that he would die of fright. Regardless, he continued to walk around, and eventually, looked out the window. He saw all the people outside have a wonderful time, without a care, ignorant of the raid that continued to chase them.
The governer turned around to face the staff, and stated in the monotonously state of his, "We will do nothing."

[b]4 hours and 59 minutes later[/b]
The sky continued to emit the bright blue happiness that everyone looked up to, and all sighed in it's perfection. They skipped and hopped to their jobs, friends, homes, and everything else, and were unaware of the bomb that would come.
However, the bomb, falling to it's victory, quickly reacted inside, making incredible amounts of energy waiting to be released. That's when everyone looked up, and saw the giant tombstoned sentence that everyone was given, and all wished they were never there. And then, it was the end.

I love my English class for the things they taught me.
Can you guess what incident this is relative to?

[Jake the Sage]

No idea . . . but *round of applause* very well done- teacher spot granted

[Shadow Zero]

I think it's a reference to WWII and the Nagasaki and Hiroshima bombings?

[Enrise]

[quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1289517852' post='4777707']
No idea . . . but *round of applause* very well done- teacher spot granted
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I am well-honored to have this spot.

[quote name='Shadow Zero' timestamp='1289517906' post='4777710']
I think it's a reference to WWII and the Nagasaki and Hiroshima bombings?
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Good guess good sir, you have passed. I applaud you.

As of current, I am working on an RP with an old friend of mine Fading Black. If you wish to take this opportunity to help us, I will mention it to him to see if he thinks yes or no, personally I say yes, but this is a collaboration, and etc.

Good sirs, I bid you a thank you for the spot.

[The Warden]

Yay

Broken clapped his hands and a megaphone appeared in it, hammerspace is fun. He pressed his mouth to it, and naturally shouted. 'OKAY STUDENTS, LISTEN UP. I SHALT BE HOLDING MINETH CLASS IN CLASSROOM TWO! I WILL EXPECT ALL STUDENTS THERE FOR SOME BATTLE THEORY. ANYONE WHO IS NOT THERE.....WILL BE PUNISHED BY THE FULL EXTENT OF A MONKEY UP THE YOU KNOW WHERE!' he souted through the megaphone. 'PS, THE AUDIENCE IS NOW DEAF!' he shouted even louder. He then casually tossed away the megaphone and vanished, to classroom, two. *Silence*