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Jake the Sage

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[quote name='TheCreator94' timestamp='1285284311' post='4649307']
@Ice
But that was supposed to be me!

Wait we can be the douche duo.
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Douche and douchey-er.

I like it.

[quote name='Saint Dane' timestamp='1285284421' post='4649310']
That's nice Ice.

You can be a douche all you want.
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You can go be the little nice sane kid with no friends in the corner of your fapping chamber.

Sanity's overrated, broski.

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[spoiler= I can haz be student?]
JOURNAL 37
KIZAKON





Hey Mark. Courtney. I guess I should have known this would happen. After it's all over, another territory; one that was unknown; reaches a turning point. Saint Dane is alive. It's the tension in this place that fueled him. Kizakon. Discovered by an old European tribe, about 48,000 years ago, in Second Earth time. Why is this place at a turning point? The answer is one word: magic. Kizakonians were very religious in there Earth time. They actually figured out how to use magic. And I don't mean "alakazoo, alakazam, turn my teacher into a ham!" type magic, I mean real. Deadly. Magic. You think a gun is deadly? Imagine this: You put on a special glove. It has ten clear orbs, the size of marbles at the wrist. You can use these orbs to hold the elements, then release them from the glove hand. It's actually pretty fun to do.
But imagine if one of these got in the wrong hands, or, should I say, on the wrong hands. Or hand. Whatever. well, they have. This entire Territory is run by magic. But in the early development stages of this town, Saint Dane tinkered with the magic; he invented very powerful dark magic. I mean, this stuff can blow up a continent. I've seen it in work. He buried it somewhere in the Territory. And he's taken the form of an excavation leader. The scary thing? I don't know where they're buried. There's apparently seven scrolls in all, and I witnessed the power of one of them.
So, when I got here, the first thing I noticed was..........
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[quote name='Bobby Pendragon' timestamp='1285875943' post='4669093']
[spoiler= I can haz be student?]
JOURNAL 37
KIZAKON





Hey Mark. Courtney. I guess I should have known this would happen. After it's all over, another territory; one that was unknown; reaches a turning point. Saint Dane is alive. It's the tension in this place that fueled him. Kizakon. Discovered by an old European tribe, about 48,000 years ago, in Second Earth time. Why is this place at a turning point? The answer is one word: magic. Kizakonians were very religious in there Earth time. They actually figured out how to use magic. And I don't mean "alakazoo, alakazam, turn my teacher into a ham!" type magic, I mean real. Deadly. Magic. You think a gun is deadly? Imagine this: You put on a special glove. It has ten clear orbs, the size of marbles at the wrist. You can use these orbs to hold the elements, then release them from the glove hand. It's actually pretty fun to do.
But imagine if one of these got in the wrong hands, or, should I say, on the wrong hands. Or hand. Whatever. well, they have. This entire Territory is run by magic. But in the early development stages of this town, Saint Dane tinkered with the magic; he invented very powerful dark magic. I mean, this stuff can blow up a continent. I've seen it in work. He buried it somewhere in the Territory. And he's taken the form of an excavation leader. The scary thing? I don't know where they're buried. There's apparently seven scrolls in all, and I witnessed the power of one of them.
So, when I got here, the first thing I noticed was..........
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Yes you can be a student and your rank, after reading, is New Roleplayer
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Well honestly yours was incredibly difficult to read. So that was pretty much the deciding factor in your ranking.

You just need work on how to reword your sentances and other grammar to improve greatly.

Until we get more teachers then you will have to wait unfortunately.

However you can ask a teacher if they would be willing to take you on as well as their other student- after all it never hurts to ask.
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Can I be a student? I feel I'm a decent Roleplayer, but has room for improvement.

[spoiler=Sample Work]
[b]"Dartz! I want out of this deal. I'm tired of putting helpless civilians at risk for saving a few people. I know there's another way to get my family back and I'll do it."[/b] Deion stated to Dartz in an angry manner.

[i]"Sorry little Deion, but a deal's a deal. You signed the Forbidden Contract of the Orichalcos. You're now either a life-long server, or until you do as you stated."[/i] Dartz said with a little smirk.

[b]"And what if I don't do as I'm told?[/b]

[i]"Well then the Orichalcos claims your soul![/i]

[b]"Ugh...Damnit Dartz! There has to be another way out of this! A back door! Something!"[/b]

As Dartz looked down with his eyes closed he drew a smile, [i]"Well, there is one way I could let you slide...[/i] He looks up at Deion, [i]"DUEL ME!"[/i]

[b]"I refuse, even though I'm sure I can beat you and I hate your guts rigtht now...I'm not risking another person's soul and life just to save myself. It's not worth it!"[/b]

Dartz turns around, [i]"There's rumors of a tournament starting up soon, win that and I'll free you of your contract. BUT, you must use the Orichalcos to help you win!"[/i]

Deion gets angered to the point of wanting to lay out Dartz. He starts throwing stuff, flipping tables, just blantly destroying his apartment in anger.

[b]"Dartz that's it! I've had just about enough of you!"[/b] Deion's Orichalcos stone glows immensily. [b]"You want a duel? FINE, you got yourself one!"[/b] The symbol of the Orichalcos appears on his head, Dartz watches as he smiles and thinks [i]That's it Deion, show your anger. Bring out the REAL Deion![/i] [b]"Get yourself ready Dartz! This duel will be taken place right..."[/b] Deion lets out a scream as the Orichalcos surrounds him and his eyes begin to turn white. Dartz knew what was happening. Deion was releasing his anger, powering up the Orichalcos and revealing his dark half. A half he swore never to show. As the room darkens and Deion is shown just standing there in front of Dartz, he states.

[i]"Yes Deion, this is your true power! Now! Serve the Orichalcos and bring forth the perfect humanity!"[/i]

Deion looks up with the Orichalcos symbol on his forehead. Smirks, and says, [b]"Yes master, the world shall be perfect once again."[/b] There is a tiny devilish echo in his voice. The symbol goes away from his head and he raises his hood. Him and Dartz let out an evil laugh that is heard throughout the apartment building. As well as...

[i]HAHAHAHAHAHA, the world will be perfect...once again![/i]
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[quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1287760162' post='4725694']
Ah sorry I hadn't noticed at all XD D*mn spoilers lookin' lkike they belong in da sig :rolleyes: Well I looked at it a bit and decided you'd be a Begining Roleplayer.

As for your teacher I'll personally do the teaching- here of course.
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I would love some pointers if there is any.

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Is this still going?
Because I am interested to know what I could do to improve my rank, and what rank I would be in amongst other Rpers/Students.
[spoiler=RP Sample On the Spot]
Rai shook her head fearfully as she realized she was next. A cry caught in her throat, and she struggled to keep it down. She remembered the lessons she had been taught. “Do not cry, do not shout, do not struggle or suffer death.” On purposely, she tried to relax, keeping her straight posture, thinking calm, soothing thoughts about her homeland. It did the trick, and she was calm when a call came from the tunnel. “SEND IN THE NEXT ONE!!” Automatically, her calm thoughts were vanquished, replaced by indescribable fear, fear of death. She was practically wrestling her scared cries for control. They wanted to scream, she didn’t. She marched quickly into the cave, still fighting her cries. When she neared the end of the cave, a small, incomprehensible cry emerged silently from her lips, so silently none could hear it. She clamped her lips tight closed fearfully to avoid any more cries escaping, and slowly she opened the door.[/spoiler]
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