Raindaa and Rain Tail

[Master White]

Well, these are two random creatures I created from my head, I guess you could call it pokemon, but they are not realistic in anyway, it is my trial of seeing if the sprites are better, thats all.

So are these so darn horrible that you disobey my asking of constuctive criticism or at least somewhat good, I used gimp.

Raindaa
[img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/4981/97064465.png[/img]

Raintail
[img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/5596/raintail.png[/img]


These are my creations and are in which deed are my sprites, or something at least, and so I do not need to give credit to anyone but myself and who view this.


I also know they are a little big, that's what I'm trying to do is slim them down, scale them to the correct size, at least.

I hope you like them.

[Icy]

Can you describe the creature in your head in detail on how it's supposed to look?

[Master White]

Well, not necessary right off the bat, but thats technically how its s'pose to look, except for the colors and where the mouth is located. I'm not good at that, I'm just testing after all, see if the quality to it looks good or if it is still bad?

But the colors and the mouth are offcentered right now, and the whole body needs to be remade, but I'll do that later.

I Have to say thoughm the first picture is pretty much how its s'posed to look, except for its colors, the face needs to be moved to the right like an animal, not a fromt face human, and I have no idea how to do that.

So, I need some help and thats why I asked for some on here, thought it might need some appropiate critiques.