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[quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1328806030' post='5806175']
Instead of that:
Is it weird if I sometimes think of Tsuna as Sora and Squallo as Sephiroth?
[/quote]Duuude.

I called him Sephiroth ages ago.

Remember when I called Squallo vs Yamamoto as Ichiro Suzuki vs Sephiroth?

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Gokudera: Sure Sora
Tsuna: What?
Gokudera: Oh, nothing.
Tsuna: Oh, really? That's funny I should have swore you called me-
Yamamoto: Sora, how's it going?
Tsuna: Wait, what?
Yamamoto: What?
Tsuna: What?
Gokudera: Yes.
Yamamoto: Which?
Tsuna: Who?
Gokudera: Bananas
Yamamoto: and Baseball.
Gokudera: Shaddup, Ichiro.
Yamamoto: Wazzat?

I just realized that I'd never actually reviewed the abridged Reborn.

1. For some reason I feel like your need to fill up any extra space has made you miss some stuff. Like how at the start when the two men were talking, you didn't do anything, you just left it at some random back talk when you could've gotten in something stupid like say the reason for the scar one man mentioned was completely and totally absurd. You have time, you don't need to make the story be exactly like the original, you can do whatever the hell you want with it. Make the dying will bullet become the "reborn as a pervert bullet" or something. Use your imagination.

2. Going off of that, you CAN cut stuff out, I'm not sure how much you did, but the part where he says that Tsuna is a pussy... cudda just stopped there. Just as an example.

3. There are times when using music is funny: Example 1: Pacman. Excellent, I laughed my ass off. Example 2: When he was shot: Wasn't funny, not one bit.

4. I hate to say this but you need to look at every single scene and see if you, in some way, can pull off some random reference, obscure or obvious, to whatever you can think of. One of the things that makes LK and Team 4Star so good is that they can make half of their jokes by making fun of something else. Example: Let's just go with the YGOBBT abridged. The Dragon keeps yelling Atreyu, referencing the movie "The Neverending Story" and also makes a comment about the speed limit referencing "Back to the Future". It's not that hard to do, and filling the episode with them is in no way overdoing it.

5. Last thing: Hopefully this is better in Episode 2, but it sounds, and this is probably fact, that you have to muffle your voice. Maybe it's because of the microphone, maybe it's because your family is sleeping. Either way it doesn't make for a good impression, so if you can, get in some loud emotion (just not directly into the mic)

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[quote name='Sploosh' timestamp='1328882009' post='5808324']
Admittedly that would be entertaining

But we can do that with Squalo
[/quote]WAIT... is there ever a point where there's just Squallo, Gokudera and Tsuna...? Or maybe we replace Yama with Squallo and Goku with Yama.

Also, when the Gola Mosca shows up (if you EVER get that far, seeing the pace you're moving at), play this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZlWaTAZUxUQ

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[quote name='Sploosh' timestamp='1328882602' post='5808333']
I'd try to even SEE that, but my internet is absolute crap right now


And I doubt we'll get that far regardless


Plus, what do you mean, replace?
[/quote]In the scenario I wrote, so it'd be:


[quote name='Wraith' timestamp='1328853647' post='5808015']
Yamamoto: Sure Sora
Tsuna: What?
Yamamoto: Oh, nothing.
Tsuna: Oh, really? That's funny I could have swore you called me-
Squallo: Sora, how's it going?
Tsuna: Wait, what?
Squallo: What?
Tsuna: What?
Yamamoto: Yes.
Squallo: Which?
Tsuna: Who?
Yamamoto: Baseball.
Squallo: Swords.
Yamamoto: Zip it, Sephiroth.
Squallo: What was that?
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[quote name='Sploosh' timestamp='1328882917' post='5808343']
As much as I would like to call Tsuna Sora

And believe me I would

I feel that would be overdoing it with theFF/KH references

..it's funny cuz Kingdom Hearts just needs a K and it can be KHR
[/quote]I believe I told you that no references are too much. The best thing you can do is just pile a sh*tload of references into a scene at once. You may kill one or two of your viewers because of laughing, but it would be so totally worth it.

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[quote name='Sploosh' timestamp='1328883541' post='5808362']
"no references are too much"

Because we obviously can't come up with our own comedy >>
[/quote]Who said that coming up with references wasn't your own comedy? Making connections and poking fun at them isn't anyone else's doing, is it?

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