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[quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1308328347' post='5290179']
Can't believe I kissed her >.>
YOU AND CAEDA, YOU KEEP CRACKING ME UP.
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As Naruto would say
BELIEVE IT.

Anyway, at least it wasn't some half-assed reason [size="1"]yes it was[/size]

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I liked "YOU LIE" and "OH, I get it!" those were cleverly done.
Otherwise, it was pretty good for your first episode. But Ryoma needs a more pronounced voice, his presence is lacking when his voice is too mellow, especially considering he's a main character.
The other thing is you need to find something to fill in those few second gaps when there's no audio. You don't really find silences in "professional" abridged episodes unless it's done for comedic effect.
Good one though DL, hope episode 2's even better.
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Yeah, I'll probably crop out the unnecesary ones, and fill the rest with sfx. ;P

Ryoma's voice KILLED me o_o


It's really hard to do a voice that soft, but I was trying for it (suicide?)

I'll prbably try to make it more like when he asked Sakuno "Do you EVER stop talking? No, I mean, seriously!"


And yeah, I hope episode 2 is better as well XD Rackin up experience is teh way to go.


I do like how I turned from the original "Ryoma tells off Sasabe in a cool way about tennis grips" to "Ryoma tells off Sasabe in a cool way about the fact he thinks it's baseball"


And I do find it hilarious EVERYONE (Kaito, DF, and you so far xD) seems to like the "You got served!" *silence* "OH, I get it!"
XD
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[quote name='Desperado Finale' timestamp='1308396021' post='5292135']
I liked how it seemed especially longer than normal.
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I was surprised it was over 9 minutes o__o


I might have to shorten the script some in the future >>



@Chase - My Prince of Tennis Abridged (episode 1) :3
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