Yu Gi Oh: The story after...

[gman22]

Here's basically an alternate ending fic to what happened in the final episode of Yu-Gi-Oh!

Summary: What if instead of winning the duel against his closest friend, Atem Yugi instead lost? Read to see!

"Yugi I know you tried everything in your power to set me free but unfortunately this duel will conclude with my victory." Atem a tall ruby-eyed man stated to his partner Yugi.

"I activate this, the magic card Monster Reborn. Now I shall resurrect Slifer The Sky Dragon!" Atem shouted as a long red snake-like dragon with 2 mouths with dozens of sharp teeth that could crush even a Giant Soldier of Stone arose from his graveyard.

Yugi gasped in horror. In reality deep down the small duelist was rejoicing as losing the duel would keep Atem with him for good.

"As you know Slifer's attack points are determined by the number of cards in my hand and I'm holding 4 cards." Atem stated calmly as Slifer roared, his attack strength surging to 4000.

The brown haired man with blue eyes, known as Seto Kaiba gasped in shock. "No way.. if this works, Yugi loses!" He exclaimed softly.

His younger brother Mokuba turned to him. "But if Yugi loses-"

"Den da Pharaoh stays, Mokuba." The Brooklyn-accented boy named Joey Wheeler stated.

"Yes.. thank goodness." The azure-eyed brunette Tea Gardener stated.

"Slifer, attack his Silent Magician now!" Atem shouted as Slifer launched a bolt of lightning, zapping the mage and dropping Yugi's life points to 0.

"He.. He lost.." Seto said, shocked beyond belief that the duelist who had defeated all 3 Egyptian God cards in one turn, had lost.

"I'm as shocked as you are, rich-boy." Joey teased.

"Yugi you fought bravely but by losing it means our spirits are not yet meant to separate." Atem told him gently.

"That's correct, Atem. So your spirit will stay in our world for another 5,000 years."

To everyone's surprise, Atem smiled.

"To be honest Ishizu I am glad I will remain here, for I truly did not want to leave my aibou." He said hugging Yugi affectionately.

"I'm glad you get to stay also Pharaoh." Yugi said returning the hug.

"Yugi since the result ended with the Pharaoh's victory I will ask you to reclaim the 7 Millennium Items."

Yugi nodded taking the 7 gold items, the Puzzle last as he put the puzzle back around his neck.

Little did the group know their newest adventure was just beginning..

To be continued…

[gman22]

here is chapter 2:

As the group left the resting place of the Millennium Stone, Yugi was smiling as was Atem.

"I don't understand something Yugi." Marik began.

"What is it, Marik?" Yugi asked.

"What was the card you placed inside your Gold Sarcophagus?" He asked.

"Monster Reborn." Yugi replied.

"But Yugi, if that was your card why didn't you stop my Monster Reborn?" Atem asked, curious.

"Because.. I never wanted to win."

Atem gasped, happy tears filling his eyes. "You mean you gave up the duel so I could stay with you?" He asked.

"Yes, Yami. I never wanted you to go." Yugi replied, wiping his partner's tears.

Tea smiled lightly at the exchange going on around her.

Yugi saw this and smirked a little.

Atem smirked back knowing exactly what the smaller boy was thinking.

"Tea.." Yugi called slyly.

"Yeah, Yugi?" She asked softly.

"Atem has something to tell you, right aibou?"

Atem blushed, nodding.

Tea blushed as well walking over.

Yugi watched curiously.

"What is it Pharaoh?" Tea asked.

"Well Tea for the longest time, I… I've lik- loved you.." Atem admitted blushing like mad.

Tea looked deep in thought.

"Pharaoh.. that's sweet of you.. but I just don't know who I love anymore. I hope you understand.

Atem tried to avoid choking up.

"I understand Tea. Please take your time." He replied walking back to Yugi's side.

Yugi put his arm around Atem. "Don't worry aibou. I'm sure deep down she loves you."

"But Yugi.. don't you love her?" Atem asked gently.

"Yeah." Yugi admitted, blushing.

"Maybe she's having a hard time deciding between us?" Atem suggested.

"Perhaps. I just don't know." Yugi replied looking down at the stone of Orichalcos he had attached to his puzzle.

"It will be fine." Atem replied.

After a while they returned to the boat that had led them there Tea's words still burning in Atem's mind.

"Hey Pharaoh you ok bud?" Asked their friend, Tristan Taylor.

"I've been better." Atem replied.

"What's wrong, man?" Tristan asked.

"I told Tea I loved her."

"All right, way to go dude!" Tristan cheered slapping him on the back playfully.

"Wait, there's more." Atem said.

"Well, what is it?" Tristan asked.

"She told me she doesn't know who she loves." Atem replied.

"Oh man.. well what are you gonna do man?" Tristan asked, softly.

"I'm not sure."

"Well, don't worry man I'm always here for ya dude." Tristan replied, patting his back.

"Thank you Tristan." Atem replied.

Tristan nodded before heading back to his room.

Atem walked back to the room he and Yugi shared, letting out a soft sigh.

"Are you ok Pharaoh?" Yugi asked laying on his bed.

"I have felt better, Yugi." He replied.

"Still worried about Tea?" Yugi asked gently.

"Yes, Yugi." Atem replied, looking glum.

"Don't worry everything will turn out fine."

"That I don't know Yugi." He said leaving the room, closing the door lost in the swirl of his own thoughts.

Yugi looked at his partner as he left, starting to grow a little worried,

"Hopefully, everything will be alright with aibou. But I wonder, when has he ever loved Tea.."

Tea sat in her room, looking sorrowful. "All you had to do was tell Atem that you loved Yugi but no you had to screw that up!" She told herself, angrily.

Atem stood out in the middle of the boat, looking up at the star-filled sky. "What is this feeling called love?" He asked aloud.

"Hey Pharaoh dere you are." Joey replied.

"Hello Joey."

"Tristan told me the whole ding, man."

"Yes, Joey.. I love her but I think she loves aibou more."

Joey rested a hand on his shoulder. "Don't worry man you can do dis." He replied before leaving.

Atem forced a smile, before sighing. Had she truly loved Yugi all along?

Yugi looked down at his Orichalcos stone with a wistful smile.

Although when he was controlled by it, he was evil, he somehow felt stronger.

Not that he needed it now, because all it did was give it's user evil ideas.

He clutched it as it began to faintly glow.

Back in Tea's room it seemed she was still in in-decision. But she felt her body shiver upon feeling an evil force. "Can.. it be? The Orichalcos?" She asked herself.

Yugi groaned softly as he felt the Orichalcos' magic surge into him.

He closed his eyes momentarily before opening them, they now were glowing red as the Orichalcos Symbol appeared on Yugi's forehead.

He looked stunned before letting out a horrible, wicked laugh.

Atem's eyes widened upon hearing this. "No Yugi!" He called as he ran as fast as he could to Yugi's room.

Yugi chuckled evilly before a new figure showed up. It was a shadowy image of himself dressed all in white. "You are the one.." The figure said before disappearing.

"The one what.." Yugi wondered before his thoughts were twisted with evil once more by the Orichalcos..

To be continued…

[Weather Report - Stand]

... You need to work on your grammar and description. I read the first few sentences and found it hard to carry on. It felt clunky, you didn't adequately describe where they all were, and the dialogue doesn't sound exactly realistic to me. You need more punctuation and the like. I'd say you're still not exactly ready to write. You have a sound if not simple idea, it's just the execution. Maybe you can try working with somebody to make this thing? Y'know, like you have authors and illustrators?