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My new app...Don't worry i'm not going to have him kill...Lol

 

[spoiler=App]Name: Jack Torque (A.K.A. Out-Reach)

Age: 14

Gender:Male

Appearance: He is 5 and a half feet tall and weighs 110 pounds. He has multiple scars and permanent bruises all across his body. The most notifiable scar is one that starts at the end of each finger(Nail side), goes down to his hands, connects, then runs down across his arms to his back where the connect and then split one going down and splitting again to the legs all the way down to the top of the feet. The other one goes up to the neck splits, having both go up to the cheek, curve down and goes to the lower lip. This scar was put there by his own parents with a knife. There is a tattoo on his back that says "Out-Reach". He wears shirts that are way to big for him and normal everyday jeans.

 

Personality: He is very cold to anyone and only cares about himself. If anyone should touch him without his permission he will beat them to bloody hell regardless of if it was an accident or not.

 

Bio: He started getting beat up at the age of three....by his own parents. Then he went to school and he got beat up there as well. By the age of 7 he had only made one friend and that friend to would get beaten up with him. Not to long after this his parents left that cruel scar. Even after this he thought his life would get better. In a way it did cause by the age of 10 he learned of his power but by this point he was basically broken. There was only one person that he cared for and that was the friend he made when he was seven. In those two years before he would snap he in secret learned to use his power but not to a great extant. Then finally at the age of 12 he snapped. It was an ordinary day both he and his friend were getting beat up, when one of the guys got it in his head to leave his own mark on Jack. As soon as that blade touched his skin he snapped and used the full extant of his power at the time(During this point he could only go 10x his size). There were ten kids beating him and his friend up, only one lived after this and that kid died later on due to his injuries. He had killed 9 of the kids and was about to finish off the last when he noticed his friend starring at him in fear. His friend ran away screaming and then got hit by a bus dieing instantly. Jack let go of the kid and walked home blood all over him. His eyes were just blank and when his parents sall him they decided to hurt him to. He killed them his eyes still blank. A few days later the police came noticed the mess and took him away. he was sent to juvy and he finally came to, so to speak. There he vowed he would never care about anyone but himself ever again. A year passed and during that time he worked harder on his powers and the other inmates there gave him a name "Out-Reach" because however got to close would be lifted in the air and used as a weight. Jack liked the name but he never said anything about it. Near a year after this a 17 year old came, this kid knew how to make tattoos. So a few days later Jack grabbed the kid and forced him to put the tattoo "Out-Reach" on his back. The kid did so and then Jack ripped the kids head off literally. After this he was sent to the "Town" where he now lives in an abandoned home. And so we begin.....

 

Super Power: He can lift 125 pounds using just one arm with ease.He can create a Force-Field like invisible barrier of himself around himself. he can create it in 2 ways. One: Were he only makes a part of of his body like one of his arms or Two: Make his entire body. At will he can adjust the size of the barrier and the max he can do is 20x his own size(He'll later be able to do 3x that size). This barrier is immune to all non-solid attacks. So things like fire and lightning do nothing to it unless they become solid. His barrier body is x strong(X=barrier bodies size times normal bodies strength. So say his normal body can lift 100 pounds with one arm and his barrier body arm is 20x the size, that means that arm can lift 2000 pounds) Another thing is that if he uses his barrier body to exercise he his physical body wont change but will still gain the training though it will be converted down using the reverse formula stated. Three more things, when he creates his barrier bodies legs he rises in the air, if he forms his barrier bodies chest the air inside will be trapped so he won't suffocate, finally it takes him only a second to create any part of his barrier body. One last thing the damage his physical body takes is converted to his normal body.

 

 

Umm read the bold, I'm going by the proper power....So don't say stuff like its more OPed then the original app. (took me forever to find this app)

also check page 66 thats where the original app is

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